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1、中考英语写作专题训练50题含答案一、读写综合A回答问题请阅读下面这篇文章，根据所提供的信息，回答5个问题，要求所写答案语法正确、 语义完整，并把答案写在答题卡指定的位置。Giving flowers to others is a way of showing feelings to them. Although its one of the oldest traditions, it has never lost its charm （魅7j） and never will. Ws a simple way that speaks much fbr givers, much more than
2、 the most expensive gift can. A red rose carries a message of love, and a bunch of flowers can show warmth and carry a message of love. Flowers can be used in many occasions （场合），like at parties and at festivals.The choice of flowers fbr different occasions changes. It depends on the thoughts or fee
3、lings you want to show. Sunflowers are often used on Fathers Day, while some female flowers such as white or red carnations （康乃馨）are often given on Mothers Day. The language of flowers conveys much more than the spoken language does. Flowers are perfect gifts fbr all occasions. They carry love, chee
4、r and warm feelings. So its important to choose right flowers on right occasions. Keep the following rules in mind, please.Choosing flowers colors which are suitable for the occasions.Knowing about what your friends or family like most can make your choice easy.Giving flowers properly, which is the
5、key to conveying your message. For instance, giving to the roses to girls is better than giving sunflowers to them.The bunch of flowers should be full of colors.1. What is a way of showing feelings to others?2. What flower carries a message of love?3. Where can flowers be used?4. Whats the main reas
6、on of the choice of flowers?5. . When are white or red carnations often given?请阅读下面这篇文章，根据所提供的信息，回答5个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、 语义完整，并把答案写在横线上。When I was seven years old, my family made me an ant farm. First, we put clean sand in a thin glass box. Then we waited for the ants to arrive.After the ants were in the
7、 glass farm, they started to make tunnels （地道）. I was amazed that each one knew exactly what to do. Each had its own job.On the fifth day a tragedy （悲居lj） happened. I put my face so close to the glass farm thatI knocked it over. All the tunnels fell down. Although the ants remained alive after the e
8、arthquake, one by one they began to die. I was scared as I watched them give up building their tunnels to carry bodies to a comer of the farm.My mother said that the ants were dying of sadness. They simply could not understand why their tunnels were gone.Although much time has passed, I still think
9、of that ant farm. Mom had hoped it would teach me about the natural world, but it taught me much more.Over the years, I came to realize the importance of teamwork. Working together, the ants were able to make an amazing world for themselves. I also learned that they should be admired fbr their hard
10、work.But there was an even larger lesson that I did not realize until recently: Adversity （逆境） is a natural part of life, and must be accepted. Unlike the ants, we cannot give up when we are sad. We have to realize that if a tunnel is gone, we must build another.Giving up, I say, is not a good choic
11、e.31. How old was the writer when he had the ant farm?32. When did the tunnels fall down?33. Why did the ants die?34. What did the writers mother want him to learn about?【分析】本篇为话题作文，要求按照提示完成一篇短文，讲述自己的一次旅行经历。要求 短文要包含题干所有的提示信息，适当发挥，语言连贯，逻辑清晰。【详解】1 .题干解读：本篇材料作文要求用第一人称讲述自己的一次旅行经历。讲述发生 过的事情，用一般过去时；文中包含什么
12、时候去哪儿、做了什么、觉得这次旅行怎么样； 书写时要注意文句通顺，内容完整。2 .例文点评：本例文结构严谨，层次分明。开篇紧扣主题，介绍自己旅行的时间和地点， 接下来介绍自己和父母在上海的行程，最后评价自己的这次旅行，文章布局合理，内容完 整连贯。3 .高分亮点：本篇例文短语丰富、句式多样。用短语go on a trip to Shanghai with aChinese traditional building； enjoy various kinds of delicious food from all over China； have a long walk on the bund of
13、 Shanghai； have a history of hundreds of years； enjoy the beautiful scenery of Shanghai描述这次的行程；文句简短，行文流畅。【点睛】本篇是话题作文，书写前要认真他阅读题干，了解题干的要求，确定用第一人 称、一般过去时书写，描述上海的景点特色用一般现在时；书写时要围绕题干的三个问题 展开：什么时候去哪儿、做了什么、觉得这次旅行怎么样；短文要层次分明，逻辑清晰。170. Its not necessary to be the same. I hope my friends are different from m
14、e. Pm shy and quiet,so I have few friends. But my friend Linda likes to make friends and she is more outgoing than me. She likes sports and music very much. She is athletic,so she always wins in the sports competition. But Pm better at math and Chinese than her.However,in some ways we are the same.
15、We both like red clothes and reading interesting stories,so we enjoy reading books together. We both like doing the same things and listening to pop songs. Although we have some differences,we are still good friends.【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目要求包含提示里内容，写出朋友是否应该相似或者不同，写 出自己的观点。可以分两段，提示内容可以放一段，后面自己的观点写一段。2.例文点评：例
16、文通过写出朋友是否应该相似或者不同，写出自己的观点等一一一讲述。语 句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用灵活。3,高分亮点：Its +形容词+to do； different from；比较级；be good at； in some ways； the same 等。【点睛】作者在开篇使用了一个固定句式：It isadj.-rto do sth.,动词不定式作真正的主语，使本句表达显得与众不同；宾语从句的使用丰富了文章的句式，是文章的亮点之一，且灵活运用本单元所学短语be different from,表达得十分到位； 连词so, but和and的大量使用增加了文章的条理性和连贯性；mor
17、e outgoing, better等形容词的比较级的正确运用，将人物性格等方面的差异性描写得 淋漓尽致； 高级词汇athletic的使用让人眼前一亮；However起过渡作用，表示转折，使上下文的信息形成对比，增加了行文的逻辑性； 方式状语in some ways用得别致、出彩；该让步状语从句用得好，为文章档次的提升起到了很大的作用。此外，作者用这样一个 句子收尾，很自然地表明了自己的观点。171 .例文：Doing something good to others can make me happy. Jerry is my good friend. Hes very thin. Last
18、 winter, he got ill. He had to go to hospital once a week. He took lots of medicine. I hoped he would be as strong as me. So every weekend, I asked him to practice playing basketball with me. I taught him how to play it. Now he is much stronger and healthier.I feel very happy to have done a good thi
19、ng for my friend. I also realize a true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart!【详解】1 .题干解读：这是一篇话题作文；该题要求以“Doing a Good Thing Made Me H叩py”为题，谈谈你做过的最快乐的一件好事。2.写作指导：写作时，因为叙述的是自己做过的好事，所以人称以第一人称为主，时态用 一般过去时叙述；做完好事后在描述自己的感受时，可以用一般现在时。写作过程中注意 将事件的前因后果描述清楚，语句要通顺，逻辑要合理。完成后要保证文中无单词和语法 上的错误。172.例
20、文My friends and IBefore I went to school. I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the campus life.Now I have been in middle school, after seven years study, I feel bitter and happy. The bitter isthat there are always exams, and sometimes I cant do well. Every time I get the low mark. I wil
21、lbe afraid of disappointing my parents. The happy thing is that I make many friends here. We play答案第38页，共49页and study together. They are just like the brothers and sisters to me. This is the process of growing up, which mix pain and happiness. I am so lucky to have these friends in my life, they mea
22、n so much to me.【详解】1.题目解读：本文要求介绍自己和他人、社会或自然之间的故事，并谈谈自己的 体验或感受。首先确定分享内容，动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用 正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给 出的要点。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。2.写作指导：根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，时态使用一般过去时和一般现在 时，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的 正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。173 例文Changes in Mr. Zhangs familyGreat chan
23、ges have taken place in Mr. Zhangs family over the past twenty years.They used to live in a small and old house. But now they have moved into a big and new apartment.Mr. Zhang used to write letters to his friends, but now he uses a telephone or a mobile phone. Mr. Zhang has his own car and its easie
24、r for his family to travel. But they used to walk or ride bikes somewhere.Mr. Zhangs life used to be poor but quiet. But now things are different. He lives a rich but busy life.【详解】1 .题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“张先生家的变化”为题，介绍张先生家二 十年来的变化。2.写作指导：本文采用第三人称，描述过去的情况用一般过去时，描述现在的情况用一般 现在时。从房子，通讯方式，交通方式，生活这四个方面介绍。注意保持
25、主谓一致，逻辑 性要强，句子要通顺。174 .例文：I Thank My TeacherI have been studied in middle school fbr three years. In a few days, I will graduate. My favorite teacher is my English teacher. I thank her very much.My English teacher is a beautiful woman. She is kind but strict. She is also humorous. She is popular wit
26、h us. Her class is very interesting and active. My spoken English was poor, and I failed an exam. She did not blame me. She helped me with my English after class. It helped a lot. My English became better and better. Shes always patient when I asked her some questions. I felt so moved and became mor
27、e interested in English.I would like to thank her for all the help she gave me. I hope that she will be better and better. I want to say “Thank you, my dear teacher, and I will never forget you.”【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以“I Thank My”为题写一篇短文，叙述你想感谢的人，表 达对他/她的感谢。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主；文章 可分为三段式：第
28、一段指出你想表达感谢的人；第二段说明感激的原因；最后一段抒发你 的感激之情。在叙述内容时，保证提示内容叙述完整，条理清晰，无语法和拼写错误。175 .例文A happy moment in my lifeAfter the New Years Eve dinner with my family, we began to sit down in front of the TV, and enjoyed 2018 CCTV Spring Festival gala. At about ten oclock, the black sky was lightened by lots of firewo
29、rks with colorful light and happy sound. We stopped watching the Spring Festival gala, and began to climb up to the balcony to see the beautiful fireworks9 view, and my father took some fireworks up, then we also began to play fireworks. What a beautiful night! Later, my cell phone was ringing all t
30、he time. I received lots of short messages from my friends and classmates. They all wished me a happy New Year. I gave the same wishes to them by sending back the happy words. At almost 12 p.m., I made a wish in New Year, and went to sleep. This is my happy moment of the year.【详解】1 .题干解读：本题要求以“A/An
31、moment in my life”为题写一篇至少60词的短文。这是一个半开放性的作文题，写作前，需补全题目，如：A happy /pleasant /moving /unhappymoment in my life o短文还需包含以下要点：那个时刻发生了什么？你有怎么的感受？2 .例文点评：例文用一般过去时第一人称口吻写作，时态正确，用词贴切，事件描述清 楚，个人感受表达准确。3 .高分亮点：短语：climb up to.爬到，all the time一直、总是。句型:the black sky was lightened by lots of fireworks被动语态What a bea
32、utiful night!感叹句 They all wished me a happy New Year. 176 .例文：Im glad to receive your e-mail. Welcome to China! Now I want to tell you something about Chinese table manners.In China the host or hostess wont eat any dish until the guests and the elders begin. You cant tap bowls with the chopsticks. I
33、fs impolite to do so. You shouldnt reach across the table to get something to eat. You cant start to eat until everyone is at the table. Also, you should make a toast to longevity, good health or success of the host or hostess.Im looking forward to meeting you.Yours,Li Hua【详解】1 .题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件。向朋友To
34、m介绍中国的餐桌礼仪。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍中国 的餐桌礼仪；第三段表达期待。写作时要注意保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 177 .例文：Dear Andrea,Im sorry to hear that you are quarantined at home because of the pandemic and have to take online courses. Please make sure that you are in good condition and dont feel lonely.In 2020, my
35、fomily and I were also kept in quarantine. I also had to have online courses and couldnt go to school. I missed the time when teachers and classmates were together. Although I couldnt experience the happiness of having face-to-face classes, I developed a good habit of sel discipline and independence
36、. I learned to take classes by myself and check my homework. Besides, although I couldnt enjoy the fresh air outside, I had a better understanding of my parents. During the quarantine, we talked as often as possible and knew each other very well.I hope you should bravely face the situation. You can
37、exercise regularly to keep healthy. And you can talk with your teachers or classmates by phone or Internet. Dont lose heart. I believe you will see your friends soon.Yours,Li Ming【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求给Andrea写封电子邮件；要求包含所有提示内容。2.写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，采用第一人称和第二人称口 吻；可采用3段落格式：第一段：问候对方，表达关切之情；第二段：分享自己的经历和 得
38、失；第三段：提出自己的建议并鼓励对方。178 .例文:My Favorite Chinese FestivalAs we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. Among them, I like the Spring Festival best.It comes in January or February. It is a time for family members to get together. On the eve of the Spring Festival, all family members en
39、joy different kinds of food, such as dumplings and fish. We also watch the Spring Festival Gala and stay up late, hoping to have a new start in the following year.The Spring Festival can not only make us feel love and happiness, but also the importance of home and family.【详解】总体分析匚题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
40、时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥，确保语句通顺。写作步骤第一步，介绍你最喜欢的传统节日名称及时间；第二步，具体阐述该节日有哪些主要庆祝方式食物及活动；第三步，谈谈你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。亮点词汇匚get together聚在一起 such as 比如not only.but also 不但而且高分句型We also watch the Spring Festival Gala and stay up late, hoping to have a new start in the following year, （and连接两个并列结构；
41、现在分词作伴随状语）179. It was a happy day this Sunday. Wang Bing went to the park with his parents. After they got to the park, they saw many people there. Wang Bings parents took a walk near the river. They looked very happy. Wang Bing began to run with children. They looked tired soon, but they had a good
42、 time. After that, they chatted and sang. Finally Wang Bings parents took him to have a delicious supper. Wang Bing enjoyed himself that day.【详解】本文属于材料作文，描述王冰周日开心的事情。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运 用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习 惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，with, take a walk, begin to do
43、, have a good time, enjoy oneself ,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确，句子 通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符 合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给 出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中 心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确 性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意
44、 使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还 要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词 数是否符合要求等。180. One possible version:President Xi Jinping once said, “Lucid waters and lush mountains are invaluable assets.” Environmental protection is a widely-discussed topic. As students we should try
45、 our best to keep our environment clean and safe.For one thing, we should never take out the rubbish everywhere. We should sort our rubbish before throwing it away. Besides, if we have pets, we should make sure that they dont make noises to influence our neighbors. Finally, we should also try to pro
46、tect public resources and make 答案第43页，共49页sure that they can be used fbr a long time.If we do all these things, our earth will look more beautiful.【详解】1 .题干解读：题目要求根据所给的要点提示，写一篇英语短文探讨应该如何保护 环境。2.写作指导：本文主要以第一人称写作，时态主要为一般现在时。写作时要认真审题，根 据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写 作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；
47、语言的表述要符合语法的 结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。181 .例文I keep doing so at schoolAs students, its our duty to keep our school clean and tidy, so I keep protecting the school environment every day.First, I never draw pictures on the desk at school. Besides, when I see the litter on the ground, I always pick
48、it up and throw it into the garbage can, and I do some cleaning if necessary.Moreover, I stop students from picking up flowers or walking on grass. The reason why I keep doing so is that its necessary to study in clean environment.The things that I do have a good influence on the students around me. Now, we are taking measures to make our school more beautiful together.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇材料作文，围绕题目展开；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；匚提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括题目中提出的逐一要求都要描写清 楚。写作步骤第一步，总体指出要保持校园的干净整洁；第二步，具体介绍自己在保护学校环境方面的举措；第三步，最后是叙述自己的行为带来的影响。亮点词汇二 keep doing sth 一直做某事pick up捡起 stop sb from doi