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1、押全卷(乙卷)第71题短文改错命题规律命题规律解题技法题目体裁短文改错的体裁以记叙文和说明 文为主，时常会选用书信形式的 文章。解题 原那么改动以最少为原那么， 虚词以添加或删除为原那么， 实词以改变词性为原那么， 以保持句子原意为原那么。题目题材语言材料来自考生熟悉的话题， 多涉及他们身边发生的事情。题目难度文章篇幅不长，110词左右，一般 不超过10个句子。其难易程度符 合考生的实际英语写作水平。解题 三核 对核对错项时注意要符合 1 ： 1 ： 8比例，即多词1个， 缺词1个，错词8个。核对改正的语法工程是否有 重复，一般不会出现重复的现 象。核对答题符号的使用是否规 范，位置是否准确。
2、解题考前须知要注意以下几点：(1)注意动词的形态变化;4 .2021 成都七中热身考试They watched him with interest, laughedloudly.5. 2021 宿州市质量检测As far as Im concerned, the activity gets us to know about the university and inspiring us to work hard.6. 2021 焦作市三模When I opened the door, my mother seemed to feel a little embarrassing.7. 2021
3、哈尔滨市第三中学第四次模拟Felt extremely guilty, I really hope you will accept my sincere apology.8. 2021 江西省高三教学质量监测They find out the causes so that they will avoid made the same mistake.9. 2021 ,焦作市第四次模拟I had a ticket to a show I couldnt attend any longer. I was trying to sell it, but I was having a hard time
4、find someone who would pay the full price.10. 2021 贵州省适应性测试I think work for a newspaper and reporting from all over the world are really exciting.考点5典例 1 2021 全国卷乙Whats more, doing housework can be a form of mentally relaxation from study.自主解答：典例 2 2020全国卷 H Im surely youll have a good time.自主解答：【过关
5、检测】1. 2021 安徽“五校联盟”第二次联考When she had finished, she proud put her cake into the oven to cook.2. 12021 南昌二模It provides me with knowledge, and convinces me entire that being alone is not lonely.3. 2021 广西4月模拟Now Pve changed a lot. I have become an energy and positive girl.4. 2021 江西省质量监测Whats worse, so
6、me even lose heart and no longer study as harder as before.5. 2019全国卷HOne was that I was amazed at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor.6. 2021 焦作市三模The other day, I went home so lately that my mother couldnt afford to wait me any longer.7. 2021 高三“五校联盟”第二次联考
7、About ten minutes late, we smelt something burning.8. 2021 马鞍山市第三次质量监测Its a famous park in Ma!anshan. Therefore, some of its visitors leave garbage behind.二、句法类错误考点探究技法提升根据句子缺少何种成分和句意是否完整确三大从句 引导词的一 误用三大从句 引导词的一 误用定定语从句关系词和名词性从句引导词掌握定语从句关系词和名词性句法错误主谓一致先确定句子主语再根据主语的数确定渭语的单复数从句引导词的句法功能 牢记虚拟语气中的句型规那么、虚
8、拟语气-考点1主谓一致的误用典例 1 2021全国乙卷And hopes this can inspire more thinking on the topic!考场思维：(1)语境含义：并希望这能激发更多关于这个话题的思考！(2)瞻前顾后析时态：根据从句中can inspire可知主句为一般现在时。(3)辨清主谓：此句为省略句，省略了主语we,故谓语动词应该使用复数。自主解答：典例 2 2020全国卷HIMy dad dont like the soup and I dont enjoy apples.考场思维：(1)语境含义：我爸爸不喜欢汤，我不喜欢吃苹果。(2)瞻前顾后析时态：根据连词a
9、nd后的“doHt enjoy”可知时态为一般现在时。(3)辨清主谓：主语“my dad”是第三人称，故谓语应该用第三人称单数。自主解答：【过关检测】1. 2021 江西省重点中学协作体第二次联考As a matter of fact, Beijing Opera with a history of nearly 200 years are a form of traditional Chinese theatre play.2. 2021江西上饶市三模There were no electricity or water and even no textbooks either!3. 2021
10、 兰州一中高三月考Each student learn a foreign language, mostly English, from Day One of their compulsory education.4. 2021 陕西省西安中学第九次模拟Recently, one of my friends have sent me a short message, saying that true friends are one soul in two bodies, which moves me very much and makes me think what true friendsh
11、ip is.5. 2021 长春外国语学校第二次质量检测You are the most considerate person who know exactly what I need in our class.【技法点拨】1 .判断主谓语是关键可数名词单数或不可数名词作主语时谓语动词用单数。动词ing形式、不定式或名词性从句作主语时，谓语动词一般用单数。就近原贝I常见的有：either.or., neither.nor., not only.but also., there be等。就远原那么常见的有：together with, as well as, but, except 等。在倒装句
12、中要找出句子的主语从而判断谓语动词的单复数。定语从句中的谓语动词要与定语从句所修饰的先行词保持一致。2 .附加成分是难点对于分隔现象，可利用“减一减”原那么：先从整体上把握主干，再去掉句子中 的插入语、附加成分等分隔干扰局部，使结构简化。第二讲句法类错误考点2从句或固定句型误用典例 1 2021 全国乙卷I also water the flowers in the yard and tidy up my own bedroom whatever necessary.自主解答:典例 2 2020全国卷IIIUnderstanding her good intentions, I eat all
13、 the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.自主解答：【过关检测】1 . 2020-全国卷 II Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy.22020全国卷 II Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together every day.3. 2019全国卷HIIn the cafe, customers will enjoy themselves in the h
14、istorical environment what is created for them.4. 2021 江西省重点中学盟校第二次联考From them , we students can always seek support and advice , from that we can benefit a lot.5. 2021 九江市二模The elders and distinguished guests are often seated in the special seats, what shows great respect for them.6. 2021 黑龙江省佳木斯市第
15、三次模拟After that, you can go to your host family that you can experience the Chinese way of life.7. 2021 安徽“五校联盟第二次联考I consider myself a competent cook so I usually dont consult a recipe book. I just remember which I did last time.三逻辑类错误技法探究 素养提升看到人名，要从上下文分清男女 人称、性别、单复数要一致代词的误用检杳人称代词的主格与宾格是否误用、检查反身代词是
16、否一致检杳many和much是否混用句中无连词,增加连词。假设两个句子之间没有句号、 分号，乂没有连接词时.需增加连词逻辑错误并列 连的误用句间多连词，删除连词。 一些受汉语影响的错误.nalthough/though. but.,because/since/as. so.等, 一般删除后面的连词but或8。遇到并列连词应考虑是否误用 常见的右and、bul、so、or等连接性 副词而一 误用根据句意，确定连接性副日 however x therefore s instead 等考点1连接词的误用典例 1 2020全国卷IIIIn order to make sure all of us ar
17、e in good health, and she makes specific plans for us.考场思维：(1)语境含义：为了确保我们所有人的健康，她为我们制定了专门的计划。(2)结构分析：逗号前为目的状语，逗号后为主句，两者之间不用连词连接。自主解答：典例 22019全国卷When I studied chemistry in high school, Ireconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor.考场思维：(1)语境含义：在高中学化学时，我重新考虑了我的目标并决定当一名医生。(2)结构分析：reconsidered和decide
18、d这两个动作是顺承关系。自主解答：【过关检测】1 . Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in ourarea.2. 2021 哈尔滨市第六中学 5 月模拟He offered to help me and soon my bike was repaired. I thanked him but asked how to reward him.3. 2021 江西联盟 3 月联考At night, we usually sit around a campfire, either chatting and just keeping
19、 silent.4. 2021 河南安阳市三模Work hard but I really hope you can get a good score in the tests.5. 2021 ,焦作市第四次模拟He was such grateful that he thanked me again and again.6. 2021 宿州市教学质量检测The instant when we arrived at the USTC, we headed for the teaching zone, which was fairly quiet compared with that of ou
20、r school.7. 2021 ,西安中学高三第九次模拟In my opinion, true friendship doesnt mean that where you need your friends* help, youll treat them to dinner.8. 2021 全国甲卷In my opinion, where in trouble, we should seek help from those we trust most.【技法点拨】1 .多余：because/since与so连用时删除so;though/although/as 与 but 连用时，删除 but
21、。2 .误用：几个常见的连词误用：or与and的误用；and与but的误用；so与but的误用；before与after的误用；(5)before/after 与 when/while 的误用。3 .固定句式要记清：and; both.and.； not only. but (also).; neithej.nor等表示顺承或递进关系。but; yet; while等表示比照或转折关系。or; either.ornot.but表示选择关系。 so/ such.that.It won*t be long before.not.until.三逻辑类错误考点2代词的误用典例 1 2020.全国卷HI
22、I tell my mom that if we*re forced to eat things, we may become ill. But he insists on us eating healthy food.自主解答：典例 2 2019全国卷the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment that is created for them.自主解答：【过关检测】1. 2021 吉林市第四次调研If you want to prove you, please sign up by this
23、Thursday afternoon.2. 2021 ,江西省重点中学盟校第二次联考As a high school student, it is necessary that we build a good relationship with our teachers, for it is the teachers who show love and concern for our students in study and life and they are good listeners.3. 2021 南宁市第一次适应性测试My mother and me planned to go t
24、o Chengdu by high-speed train last Saturday morning.4. 2021 西安中学第八次模才以You neednt always compare you with others and just make your efforts towards your goal.5. 2021 西安中学第五次模拟Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too many pressure.6. 2021 .马鞍山市第三次质量监测Both of u
25、s were a bit tired, but we felthappy to clean up the park. The greatest pleasure is that we have made it more beautiful.7. 2021 全国卷 H 高考压轴卷Every time we get on a plane, were asked to neither turn off our phones or change it to flight mode its for security reasons . 8. 12021 焦作市三模I clearly remembered
26、 that my mother had taught me not to cause any trouble to other at any time.参考答案考点1典例 1 答案：dishdishes典例 2 答案：vacationsvacation过关检测1. ideasidea2.familiesfamily3. city一cities4.Fridays一Friday5. the一a6.an一a7. 第个 a一an/one8.enjoy 后力口 the考点2典例1 答案：benefit后加from/ by典例2答案：come后加to过关检测1 .去掉 into 2.waiting 后加
27、for3.在 high 前面加 in/at 4.fduwith5. on一in 6.under一with7 . eighteen一eighteenth8.eighty一eightieth考点3典例1答案：去掉are典例 2 答案：start-started过关检测1. buysbought2.forgetforgot3 . reduce一reduces4. suffer一suffered has一have5 . keep一kept6.dividing一divided7. would一will8.has一have考点4典例 1 答案：talk-talking典例2答案：eat前加to过关检测1.
28、 take 前加 to2.去掉 know 前 to3. reading一read4.laughed一laughing5 . inspiring一inspires6.embarrassing一embarrassed7 . Felt一Feeling8.made一making9 . find一finding10.work一working考点5典例 1 答案：mentally-mental典例 2 答案：surely-sure过关检测1. proud一proudly 2.entire一entirely3. energy一energetic 4.harder一hard5.去掉 more 6.1ately
29、late7. late一later 8.ThereforeHowever二句法类错误考点1典例1 答案：hopes一hope（2）注意人称代词的一致性和关联词的正确性；（3）虚词以增删为原那么：历年高考短文改错中增删的（4）以保持句子原意不变为原那么：改错时不能改变句中的功能来确定词性，要做到换词不改意，加词不增意，删词不减意。（5）以语法工程不重复为原那么：短文改错覆盖的语法面很广，一般不会出现重 复考查某个语法点的现象。（6）注意全文的时态、指代及逻辑是否一致。解题步骤1 .细读全文，了解全篇首先要细读全文，弄懂全篇的主旨，背景和素材。记住必须做到一句一句地 读，在读的过程中可以把初步确定
30、的错误标出来。2 .分句阅读，逐句纠错在此过程中，考生一定要细心，要根据上表中的考点方向去发现错误，可以 先易后难。3 .重读文章，仔细推敲最后要将改正后的短文再仔细阅读一遍，看词法、句法及行文逻辑是否合理 恰当，如有不适及时纠正。一、词法类错误典例2 答案：第一个dontdoesnt过关检测1. areis2.were一was3 . learn一learns4.have一has5 . know一knows考点2典例 1 答案：whateverwhenever典例2 答案：what-that过关检测1.1.what 一 which2.such 一 so3.what - that/which4.
31、that 一 which5.what 一 which6.第二个 that一where7.which 一 what三逻辑类错误三逻辑类错误考点3典例1答案：去掉and典例2答案：or-and过关检测1.1.去掉but2 .but 一 and3.and 一 or4.but 一 and5.such 一 so6.去掉when7 . wherewhen8.where一when考点2典例1 答案：he-she典例 2 答案：yourselvesthemselves过关检测1. 第二个 you一yourself2,第二个 our一us3. me一I4第二个 youyourself5. manymuch6.B
32、oth一All7 . neithereither8.other一othersPassage 1 (2021 全国乙卷第71题)I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals.I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some housework. First
33、ly, doing housework was helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship. Whats most, doing housework can be a form of mentally relaxation from study. Thats our view on housework. And hopes this can inspi
34、re more thinking on the topic!I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish (dishes) after meals. I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying(tidy) up my own bedroom whatever (whenever) necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot A from doing some housework. Firs
35、tly, doing housework was(is )helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents more time to do what they afe like and it improves the family relationship. Whats most (more), doing housework can be a form of mentally (mental) relaxation from study. Thats our (my) view on housework
36、. And hopes (hope) this can inspire more thinking on the topic!dish改为dishes 名词单复数误用。短语do the dishes意为“洗 碗”。，tidying改为tidy谓语动词误用。根据并列连词and可知，此处与water 并列作谓语,故应用tidy。,whatever改为whenever连词误用。根据语境可知， 此处意为“每次，每当“，故应用whenever引导时间状语从句，且从句中省略了“it is”。，doing前加from 介词漏用。benefit from doing为固定用法，意为“得益 于”。，was改为i
37、s时态误用。本文通篇采用一般现在时，本句描述的是 客观情况，也应用一般现在时。，删除are谓语动词误用。分析句子结构可知， what引导宾语从句，句中的like作动词，意为“喜欢”，故are多余。，most改 为more固定搭配误用。短语whafs more意为“而且。，mentally改为mental 形容词和副词混用。此处应用形容词mental作定语修饰名词relaxation 9our 改为my代词误用。上文是作者对做家务的观点，代词应用“my”。，hopes改 为hope。谓语动词误用。此处为省略句，省略了主语I,故用hope。Passage 2 (2021 全国甲卷第71题)Last
38、 week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire. One of the questions are: Who will you go in times of trouble? Here are the results. Many students say they will talk to their friend or classmates because theyre of the same age and can understand each other. Some will turn out to their parents
39、 or teachers for help. Only a little choose to deal with the problems on our own. Their answers also show that they dislike talk to others. They kept very much to themselves. In my opinion, where in trouble, we should seek help from those we trust mostly.答案：，Last week our teacher asked us to fill in
40、 a questionnaire. One of the questions are(is): Who will you go A (+to) in times of trouble? Here are the results. Many students say they will talk to their friend (friends) or classmates because they*re of the same age and can understand each other. Some will turn etrt to their parents or teachers
41、for help. Only a little (few )choose to deal with the problems on our (their) own. Their answers also show that they dislike talk (talking )to others. They kept(keep) very much to themselves. In my opinion, where (9)(when/whenever) in trouble, we should seek help from those we trust mostly (most).ar
42、e-is考查主谓一致。“one of the+可数名词复数形式”为固定搭配，意为 “之一”，中心词是one,提示主语是“其中的一个问题“，be动词应用第三人 称单数。，g。后加t。考查介词。got。意为“求助于，故在go后加to。，firiendfriends 考查名词的数。此处的friend通过连词or与classmates 并列，提示这里指的“朋友”不止一个。故把friend改为friends。，删掉out考 查固定搭配。turn to sb. for help为固定搭配,意为“向某人寻求帮助”。，littlefew 考查代词。本句主语代指的“学生”(students)为可数名词，a li
43、ttle用于指代不可数 名词。故把little改为few。，ourTheir考查代词。本句主语指代students,根 据逻辑关系可知，此处表示的应该是“靠他们自己”(on their own)。故把our改为 their。，talk-talking 考查非谓语动词。dislike doing sth.为固定搭配，意为“不 喜欢做某事”。，kept-keep考查时态。本文的主体时态为一般现在时，因此 本句也应该用一般现在时。故把kept改为keep。，where一when/whenever考 查连词。分析本句结构可知，此处是省略了主语和谓语时间状语从句。故把where 改为when或whene
44、ver。，mostly-most考查副词。mostly意为“主要地，一 般地”，而most意为(程度上)最大，最高”。根据语境可知，此处是说“我们最相 信的那些人”。故把mostly改为most。Passage 3 （2020 全国卷口 第 71 题）Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. Im glad to know thatyouve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. Im surely youll have a good time. Actu
45、ally, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China
46、. See you sooner.答案： Thank you for your letter, what (which) really made me happy. Im glad to know that youve come A (+to) China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. Im surely(sure )youll have a good time. Actually, I start (started) to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for (but/yet )1 have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations (vacation). Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such(so )that we can practice