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1、读后续写一一幸福邻里情（2023.4嘉兴二模）阅读材料阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇 完整的短文Im not going to say storms are good, because I know what they*ve stolen from people. But my story is of astorm that gave me more than id thought to ask for.The tornado（龙卷风）blew through on a Sunday. We were visiting grandparents in Ralei
2、gh then. Unawarethat seventy miles away the big tree in our front yard was tearing through our roof and destroying the kitchen.When we returned, we saw Rosicas father and brothers in our yard, gathering debris（体 ）and using achain saw to cut the thickest branches of the fallen tree, though we barely
3、knew them then. They were coveredin sweat and dirt.My mom didnt seem to notice how happy they were to help us because the first thing she said was HOhyou don*t need to be doing all that work!* Mr. Flores laughed Claro! Of course, we dont. But more importantlyyou cannot sleep in that house tonight. C
4、ome and speak to my wife. Shell help you figure out what to do. Mymom doesnt usually let people tell her what to do, but she sigheddeeply as she took in the sight of ourhome in the failing light reached for my hand and followed our neighbor to their house.The Flores family lived across the street. T
5、heir home was the same size as ours but housed threegenerations. Rosica was my age. I knew her name and face, but since she was new to our school and had adifferent teacher than I did we had never spoken. It was she who answered the door, Mama is changing thesheets on the bed for you, and there*s so
6、me lemon cheesecake on the table.Please don*t trouble yourself. I think Id call a hotel and see about a room”, my mom said more uneasythan usual. Mrs. Flores came down the stairs and smiled at us warmly, Your room is ready. I know its moreencouraged to give than receive, but allow yourself to receiv
7、e a place to stay, and allow us the chance to giveyou something you need!” 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右：Para 1: Our two-week stay at Floress home started.Para 2: Following our stay in their home a beautiful tradition began.【故事梗概】一场龙卷风，将我家的院子的一棵大树刮倒，大树又砸坏了屋顶，毁坏了 厨房，一片狼藉。等远在200公里外看望外婆的我们赶回家，印入眼帘的 是对街的Rosica的爸爸和哥哥
8、(The Flores )在帮我们移开断树、打扫整理 院子。我妈妈很过意不去，但是他们不仅帮我们继续打扫，还主动提出在 我们修缮房子期间让我们住进他们的家。虽然妈妈再三推脱，但是热情的 Flore 一家坚持让我们住下来了。para 1:于是,为期两周的住家生活开始了。para 2:紧接着我们在他们家的寄宿，一个“美好的传统”开始了。情节走向Para 1:1. What the function of the first paragraph? Lead in my story2. What did the storm steal from us and what did the storm gi
9、ve to us?Para2:What damage did the tornado cause to our family?No roof to shelter and no kitchen to cook in.We need a place to stay in.We need a kitchen to cook in 人物性格Mom/11. unwilling to bother others.the Flores1. willing to help others.2. very generous/ helpful/ hospitable.considerate/ understand
10、ing 主题question reflection:What did the storm steal from us ?1) It stole our house, making my momand me homeless/ no room to stay in.suffer great losses financially.What did the storm give to us?2) It taught us how to open our heartto reap a good relationship.-learn to “take” as well as give”.情节发展Par
11、a 1: Our two-week stay atFlores!s home started.1 .妈妈的亏欠心理：3 .我们两家的关系越来越亲密(大人/我们小孩)；4 .两周过去修缮完毕。Para 2: Following our stay in theirhome a beautiful tradition began. ccbeautifultradition,5 .具体做什么(tradition)6 .我们两家在这个tradition中的give & take.7 .文章主旨:台风的得与失建构语 言可子一sentence construction1.妈妈的亏欠心理；第一个晚上见证了妈妈
12、在The Flores家的辗转反侧，她在早餐的时候再次提出了 住酒店，却最终还是让步于Mrs Flores的真诚话语.(无灵主语) 见证：witness让步：give way tol辗转反侧：toss and turn真诚的话语:earnest wordThe first night witnessed my mom tossingand turning in the Flores, and sheinitiated again the plan to live in the hotelbut once again gave way toMrsFlores1同意让妈妈一起做饭；让妈妈宽慰的是，
13、妈妈终于被允许可以和Mrs Flores 一起做早餐给Rosica的爸爸 和哥哥，他们帮我们清理院子。（主从/表从/定从）让妈妈宽慰的是.： what comforted mom was that.清理:clean up 被允许做某事：be allowed to do sthWhat comforted mom was that she was allowedto give a hand to Mrs Flores in preparingbreakfastfor Rosicas father and brother.who helped us clean up our yard. 文章主旨:
14、台风的得与失（人生一课）一场台风，毁坏了我们的家，却架起了两家心的桥梁。每当我透过窗户看马路对 面的Flores的房子，我内心涌动着感恩与幸福：感谢你们不仅帮助我们走出台风 的阴影，而且还走进我们的生活，让我顿悟什么是真正的“给予”和“接受”。（状 从）The tornadoruined our house , but bridged our hearts betweentwo families . Every time I gazed at the Flores1 house across thestreet through the window, my heart was overflow
15、ing withgratitude and happiness . My thanks should go to the Floresnot only for their help us out of trouble , but also forenlighteningme on the true meaning of “give” and “take”.范文：Our two-week stay at Floress home started. With hesitation and unease, but it quickly turned into a time of comfort an
16、d familiarity. Their home was filled with laughter and love, and we were welcomed with open arms. Rosica and I became fast friends, spending hours playing games and chatting about our lives. The Flores family cooked delicious meals every night, and we all sat down at their big dining table to eat to
17、gether. It was a time of bonding and sharing, and we were grateful for their generosity.Following our stay in their home, a beautiful tradition began. Every year, on the anniversary of the tornado, our families gather together for a meal. We share stories of that fateful day and how it brought us to
18、gether. We celebrate the strength and resilience of our community, and we give thanks for the kindness and compassion that was shown to us. The Flores family became more than just neighbors, they became our dear friends. They taught us the true meaning of generosity and selflessness, and we will always cherish the memories of our time spent in their home. The storm may have taken away our home, but it also gave us something priceless: lifelong friendship.