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1、邻居好，赛金宝（2023届浙江嘉兴二模）我们续写的教学思路是：1 .带学生梳理情节2 .根据情节提问学生几个关键性问题3 .梳理续写两段的微情节4 .从词汇、短语和句式，手把手带学生完成教师下水文的写作一.读后续写原题目：Im not going to say storms are good, because I know what theyve stolen from people. But my story is of a storm that gave me more than Id thought to ask for.The tornado blew through on a Sun
2、day. We were visiting grandparents in Raleigh then, unaware that seventy miles away the big tree in our front yard was tearing through our roof and destroying the kitchen.When we returned, we saw Rosicas father and brothers in our yard, gathering debris（碎片）and using a chain saw to cut the thickest b
3、ranches of the fallen tree, though we barely knew them then. They were covered in sweat and dirt.My mom didnt seem to notice how happy they were to help us because the first thing she said was Oh, you dont need to be doing all that work!” Mr. Flores laughed “Claro! Of course, vve dont. But more impo
4、rtantly, you cannot sleep in that house tonight. Come and speak to my wife. Shell help you figure out what to do. My mom doesnt usually let people tell her what to do, but she sighed deeply as she took in the sight of our home in the failing light reached for my hand and followed our neighbor to the
5、ir house.The Flores family lived across the street. Their home was the same size as ours but housed three generations. Rosica was my age. I knew her name and face, but since she was new to our school and had a different teacher than I did, we had never spoken. It was she who answered the door. Mama
6、is changing the sheets on the bed fbr you, and thcrc*s some lemon chccsccakc on the table.”“Please dont trouble yourself. I think Id call a hotel and see about a room,“ my mom said more uneasy than usual. Mrs. Flores came down the stairs and smiled at us warmly, t4Your room is ready. I know ifs more
7、 encouraged to give than receive, but allow yourself to receive a place to stay, and allow us the chance to give you something you need!”Para 1: Our two-week stay at Floress home started.Para2: Following our stay in their home, a beautiful tradition began.二.审题思考(1)我们一家人刚住进Elore家后会如何表现？局促不安，担心自己会给Flo
8、re 一家带来负担，第一天晚上睡不着觉， (2)我的妈妈是个什么样的人？ 更喜欢give而不是receive的人。(3) “ a beatiful tradition ”指的是什么？哪一天？我们一家人邀请他们来 我家。就是龙卷风的那一天。(4)思考一下续写的两段什么是相反的？角色调换，第二段我们负责give,而他们负责take三、微情节设计Para 1: Our two-wcck stay at Floress home started(1)不适应，想帮忙被拒绝(2)逐渐适应(3)我们的房子修好了Para2: Following our stay in their home, a beauti
9、ful tradition began(1)解释“传统”是什么？(2)角色调换(3)总结：台风让我懂得了 “给予”和“接受”的含义四、教师下水文短语1 .辗转反侧2 .不安3 .随着时间推移4 .适应某事5 .与某人的关系更紧密6 .热情好客7香气n.8 .共同地9 .在某人帮助下10 .习惯某事11 .校园生活12 .不知疲倦地13 .帮助某人做某事14 .修复n.15,流逝16 .迅速地17 .接受款待18 .时间彷佛回到了19 .在于20 .相反的21 .提前22 .欢迎.的到来23 .最佳的24 .使某人了解某事参考答案：tossed and turneduneasinessAs th
10、e days progressed, .adapted to sthshare a closer bond with sbhospitalityaromajointlywith the assistance of sbget accustomed tocampus lifetirelesslyaid sb in (doing) sthrestorationroll byswiftlyreceive a treatIt was as if time had returned to + 时间lie inreverse/rrv3:s/in advance welcome the arrival of
11、 optimalenlighten sb about sth 原创文：Paral: Our two-week stay at Flores s home started. We tossed and turned all night on the first day, with uneasiness overwhleming us for accepting such a big help from strangers. As the days progressed, nevertheless, we adapted to the new life and shared a closer bo
12、nd day by day with the Flores owing to their hospitality.Every morning, the aroma of breakfast, which was prepared by Mom and Mrs. Flores jointly, woke us up.At school, with the assistance of me and my other friends, Rosica got accustomed to the our campus life as well. Meanwhile, Mr.Flores worked t
13、irelessly to aid Dad in reparing our ruined house.The two weeks rolled by swiftly like flowing water.After the restoration work was done, we moved back with heartfelt gratitude.Para2: Following our stay in their home, a beautiful tradition began. Every year, on the day when that tornado happened, th
14、e Florcs would be invited to our house to receive a treat.lt was as if time had returned to the two weeks we had lived together. Nevertheless, the difference lied in that the roles of our two families had been reversed. My family would prepare everything in advance to welcome the arrival of the Flores, which was the way we showed our “give” as well as an optimal opportunity for the Flores to show take ” . The tornado ruined our house, but unexpectedly connected our hearts and the Flores s and enlighten me about the true meaning of “give and “take” .