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1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习1火中救人题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文At first,Michael Surrell didnt see the black smoke or flames shooting from the windows of his neighbors home.He and his wife had just parked around the corner from their own house in Allentown,Pennsylvania,when they got a call from one of his daug
2、hters:“The house next door is on fire!”He went to investigate.Thats when he saw a woman crying desperately on their porch.“The baby s in there!”the woman cried.Though the fire department had been called,Surrell,then 64,instinctively ran inside.“The baby”was 8-year-oldTiara Roberts,the womans grandda
3、ughter.Entering the burning house was like“running into a bucket of black paint,”Surrell says.The thick smoke caused him to stumble blindly around,burned his eyes,and made it impossible to breathe.The conditions would have been dangerous to anyone,but for Surrell,who has chronic obstructive pulmonar
4、y disease（慢性阻塞性肺病）,they were life-threatening.4续写原文After a few minutes in the smoke-filled house,he retreated outside to catch his breath.Surrell knew he couldnt hold his breath for long.Taking a deep breath,he went in a second time.The darkness was overwhelming.Yet because the house had a similar l
5、ayout（布局）to h is,he found the stairs and made it to the second floor.He turned to the right and was met by intense heat.He was already out of breath.His throat and lungs burned as if hed breathed in fire instead of the smoke and soot in the air.Every blink stung his eyes.All he could hear was the cr
6、ackling and popping of burning wood.Then a soft but distinct moan（呻吟声）emerged.Still unable to see,Surrell fell to his knees on the hot wood floor.He crawled toward the sound,feeling around for any sign of the girl.5段首句Paragraph 1:Finally,he touched something a shoe,then an ankle.Paragraph 2:Surrell
7、woke up in the hospital a couple of days later.6Part 2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写建议第一段：最后，他摸了摸东西一只鞋，然后是一只脚踝。他拉着蒂亚拉向他。她的身体很虚弱，没有呼吸。他把她抱进怀里，站了起来。他感觉到脸颊上火焰的热度。转过身，他在烟雾中挣扎，盲目地跑进了黑暗中。苏雷尔把蒂亚拉放在门廊上。他开始心肺复苏术-这是他第一次这
8、样做。很快，她睁开眼睛，自己吸了一口气。苏雷尔的喉咙闭上了。插9续写建议第二段：几天后，苏雷尔在医院醒来。他的气管和肺部上部严重烧伤。他在医院呆了一个多星期。火灾使苏雷尔的肺部状况恶化，即使在两年后，他仍然感受到了这种影响。结果，他服用了额外的药物来帮助打开他的气道。“这是一个很小的代价，”他说。“我会在心跳中再做一次。不会再考虑了。10Part 3范文呈现11范文呈现Finally,hetouchedsomething-ashoe,thenanankle.HepulledTiaratowardhim.Herbodywasweakandshewasntbreathing.Hehuggedher
9、intohisarmsandstood.Hefelttheheatoftheflamesonhischeeks.Turning,hefoughtthroughthesmokeandranblindlyintotheblackness.SurrellputTiaradownontheporch.HestartedCPR-thefirsttimehedeverdoneso.Soonsheopenedhereyesandtookabreathonherown.Surrelsthroatclosedoff.12范文呈现Surrell woke up in the hospital a couple o
10、f days later.He suffered severeburnstohiswindpipeandtheupperportionofhislungs.Hespentoveraweekinthehospital.ThefireworsenedSurrellspulmonarycondition,andhefeelsthe effects even two years later.As a result,he takes extra medication thathelpsopenhisairways.“Itsasmallpricetopay,”hesays.“Iddoitagaininaheartbeat.Wouldntgiveitasecondthought.”13Part 4努力方向14高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语15定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）16低头是题海，抬头是前途。终将上岸，阳光万里!祝大家前程似锦!