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1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习1爬山的努力题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文Sometimes things may seem beyond our effort,but keep on and you will find beautiful views in front of you.I was on my second outdoor experience rip that every student had to go on.That year,we had a choice of what difficulty level we wanted:one t
2、hrough five.My friends and 1 had agreed that one would make us seem lazy and that challenging ourselves would make for a good story.In choosing level two,we believed that it would still be a fun experience.We were quickly proven wrong.The further we drove into the White Mountains,the higher the wall
3、s on either side of the winding highway grew.I was still in awe of the mountains I had seen so many times before,but I couldnt help feeling my heart shaking with anxiety.Soon I would have to leave the school bus that brought 50 students out into the wilderness like every year before.4续写原文My group co
4、nsisted of my friends,Riley and Ann,and six extremely athletic boys.We arrived at base camp lodge(k)first.Aner putting things aside and rearranging our bags.we made our way out into the wilderness.The three of us girls were questioning if this was really a level two.The path was unbelievably steep a
5、nd rocky toward the top of the mountain where the first hut was located.We were practically jogging in an attempt to keep up with the boys ahead of us.Before the trip,we were told to take breaks as often as we needed to drink water,but that wasnt helping our pounding hearts and heavy breathing as mu
6、ch as it should have.Then,30 minutes into the most difficult hike the three of us had ever done,Riley slipped and landed on her knee.After a few moments,we turned back down the mountain as it was decided that Riley could not make the trip with us.We sat on the grass outside the lodge where we had st
7、arted while Riley was brought inside to join the level one group.Ann and I exchanged breathless glances,our cheeks red and wet with sweat.5续写段首语Paragraph 1:Do you think we should ask if we could join the level one group too?I asked Ann.Paragraph 2:The next days,although extremely exhausted,we kept o
8、n.6Part 2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写建议“你觉得我们应该问问我们是否也可以加入一级小组吗？”我问安，“我知道你不会，”她呼出一口气。“我不会！”我看着远处的壮丽山脉对自己说。然后我们又开始了陡峭而崎岖的小路，试图跟上男孩们的步伐。我们的行李感觉更重;腿被烧伤;背部受伤;泪水威胁着要溢出我们满是汗水的眼睛。我只想回头离开。但是，我不能;我不想成为一个轻易放弃的人。9续写建议接下
9、来的几天，虽然非常疲惫，但我们还是坚持了下来。安和我仍然发现自己落后于男孩们。我没有感到尴尬，反而觉得自己从这次旅行中收获了比任何人都多。男孩们跑着跑着，安和我退后休息，喝着水，从高处欣赏深绿色的山谷。第二层也很有趣。最终我们到达了目的地。面对眼前美丽的景色，我和安交换了一个眼神，我们俩都笑容满面。10Part 3范文呈现11范文呈现Doyouthinkweshouldaskifwecouldjointhelevelonegrouptoo?IaskedAnn.I know you wont,she breathed out.I wont!I said to myself,looking at
10、theawesome mountains inthedistance.Thenwestarted upthesteep androckypathagain,attemptingtokeepupwiththeboys.Ourbagsfeltheavier;legsburned;backshurt;tearsthreatenedtospilloveroursweat-coveredeyes.Iwantednothingmorethantoturnbackandleaverightthenandthere.But,Icouldnt;Ididntwanttobesomeonewhogaveupeasi
11、ly.12范文呈现The next days,although extremely exhausted,we kept on.Ann and I still foundourselves lagging behind the boys.Instead of embarrassment,I felt as though I wasgainingmoreoutofthetripthananyoneelse.Astheboysran,AnnandIhungbackandtookbreaks,drinkingwaterandadmiringthedeepgreenvalleysfromhighabove.Leveltwowasfun,too.Andeventuallywemadeittothedestination.Facingthebeautifulviewsinfrontofus,IexchangedaglancewithAnn,bothofusbeaming.13Part 4努力方向14高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语15定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）16低头是题海，抬头是前途。终将上岸，阳光万里!祝大家前程似锦!