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1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习1野外迷路题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文A boulder(巨石),as big as a house.Thats how the guidebook described Giant Rock.Dad said it arrived here millions of years ago.I was finally going to see it,in snowshoes,with my two older cousins,my dad,and my uncle Don.Id been snowshoeing before,and
2、 I liked the adventure of hiking through deep snow.At the parking area,after putting on our snowshoes,we studied the map.Due to the geographical location,electrical devices were inaccessible here.The map was our only guide.We start here,Dad said,on the red trail(小路).Then we turn left onto the purple
3、 road.Thats where Giant Rock is.Remember to stick together and dont wander off,guys,Uncle Don said.The trail ran uphill alongside a stone wall.It was easy to follow because red markers were nailed to the trees and the snow had been packed down by other hikers.At the top of the hill,we turned onto th
4、e purple trail.We settled into a pattern,with Dad and everyone else in front and me in the back,crunching(嘎吱嘎吱地踩)through the snow.I saw lots of animal tracksmostly deer,squirrel,and rabbit prints.As the trail wound down,my cousin Andrew said what Id been thinking:Will we ever reach Giant Rock?My cou
5、sin Aiden smiled and turned to me,Luke,do you think your dad invented this idea just to get us away from the TV for a while?I laughed.You never know.4续写原文Finally,we climbed a hill and saw the massive boulder sitting alone in the forest.It really is as big as a house!My cousins and I high-fived each
6、other and jogged until we stood at the base,breathless.Standing in the boulders broad shadow,I noticed the sun had sunk lower.Lets head back,Dad said after a few minutes.There will be several crossroads on the way back.Guys,keep up with the team.Soon we were crunch-crunch-crunching our way home.I wa
7、s a little behind the group when we approached a crossroads.And I noticed a set of animal tracks I hadnt recognized before,so I followed them for a closer look.5续写段首语Paragraph 1:I looked up when I suddenly realized how quiet it had gotten.Paragraph 2:As going worriedly,I heard voices,someone calling
8、 far away.6Part 2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写建议我抬起头，突然意识到它变得多么安静。“大家在哪里？”我喊道。无。他们不可能走得太远。如果我快点，我会追上来的。走了一小段路后，我来到了十字路口，在那里我可以左转或直行，但两条小径都有红色标记。我转向左边，看起来很熟悉。我大步走着，越来越安静。我担心我走开了。很快天就太暗了，我无法分辨标记是什么颜色。我没有手电筒，也没有电
9、话。如果我找不到回去的路怎么办？9续写建议就在担心的时候，我听到了声音，有人在很远的地方呼唤。然后我注意到了石墙，沿着它延伸的小径。这一定是对的。我迈着大步冲下山坡。然后，有史以来最好的景点：停车区和我的家人！我一边喊着，一边朝他们跑去。“卢克？你还好吗？爸爸的声音很急。他用手电筒照着我的方向。我只迷路了几分钟，但感觉就像很长的时间。现在我想要的只是爸爸的熊抱，为家做路。10Part 3范文呈现11范文呈现IlookedupwhenIsuddenlyrealizedhowquietithadgotten.Whereiseveryone?Ishouted.Nothing.Theycouldnth
10、avegonefar.IwouldcatchupifIhurried.Afterashortwalk,IcametothecrossroadswhereIcouldturnleftorgostraight,butbothtrailshadredmarkers.Iturnedtotheleftwhichlookedfamiliar.AsIstrode,itgotquieterandquieter.IworriedIwanderedoff.Soonitmightbetoodarkformetotellwhatcolorthemarkerswere.Ihadnoflashlightandnophon
11、e.WhatifIcouldntfindmywayback?12范文呈现Asgoingworriedly,Iheardvoices,someonecallingfaraway.ThenInoticedthestonewall,thetrailrunningalongsideit.Thishadtoberight.Irusheddownhillwithbigsteps.Then,thebestsightever:theparkingareaandmyfamily!IshoutedasIrantowardthem.Luke?AreyouOK?ThevoiceofDadwasurgent.Heshinedaflashlightinmydirection.Idonlybeenlostforminutes,butithadfeltlikeaverylongtime.NowallIwantedwasabearhugfromDadandtomaketracksforhome.13Part 4努力方向14高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语15定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）16低头是题海，抬头是前途。终将上岸，阳光万里!祝大家前程似锦!