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1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习1鬼屋题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文Its a perfect family summer seaside holiday.Occasionally,some white clouds floated across the blue sky.The sandy beach was soft and comfortable.The water was glistening in the morning sunlight and the surf was cool on their feet as Krin and Paula le
2、isurely walked along the water edge.The brother and sister began to make some sandcastles.Not far away,mother sat under a big umbrella,reading a book with a bottle of lemonade in her hand.Father was busy exchanging a few words of greetings with the strangers he met on the beach.Suddenly,Krin spotted
3、 some pieces of seashells lying scattered on the picturesque beach and small holes stretching along it where the crabs had hidden.He immediately invited Paula to collect shells and search the holes together with him.They were having a ball exploring what appeared to be a never-ending beach.After a w
4、hile,they stopped and looked back.Their parents and the umbrellas,beach chairs and crowds were a long way off.But just ahead,hidden among sea grape trees stood run-down house that seemed to be out of repair for years.It appeared to be unoccupied.Curious,they went to investigate.4续写原文 The front steps
5、 to the doorway of the house creaked(嘎吱作响)as they carefully climbed up them,so did the porch when they stepped onto it.The dusty windows and porch railing(门廊栏杆)were badly weathered and broken.The front door was half open so they squeezed through and cautiously entered.The place was in a total mess,c
6、overed with dust,sand,dead leaves,and overturned furniture.Theyd taken but a few steps when the door unexpectedly slammed shut behind them.Scared,Krin and Paula were frozen to the spot.But before they could even utter something like“Oh-oh,”the windows abruptly closed,too.And if this wasnt scary enou
7、gh,the stairs to the second floor creaked loudly.When a light in the back bedroom flickered(摇曳),that was absolutely the final straw.5续写段首语Paragraph1:Lets get out of here,Paula!screamed Krin.Paragraph2:Out they ran,all the way back to those wonderful umbrellas,beach chairs,and crowds.6Part 2题目分析7点1：位
8、于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写建议第1段：“让我们离开这里，宝拉！”克林尖叫道。1.但宝拉似乎什么都没听到。2.令他惊恐的是，克林发现他的妹妹站在那里，她惊恐的眼睛盯着摇摆的灯光和吱吱作响的楼梯。3.一时间，绝望而可怕的寂静传遍了整个房子。4.克林看到周围发生的事情时，几乎感觉自己的血液冻结在胸口。5.过了很久，他的思绪又开始狂跳起来，试图思考他们如何才能破门而入，逃脱。6.他立刻抓住妹妹的手，冲到前门，
9、同时发出一声喊叫，“来吧，宝拉.”7.但可怜的克林运气不好，在他们走出鬼屋之前，他绊倒了。9续写建议第2段：他们跑了出去，一直跑回那些美妙的雨伞，沙滩椅和人群。1.就像进入了另一个世界。回头一看，他们发现房子 在海滩上不见了。2.最终，他们松了一口气，但他们继续奔跑，直到他们完全平静下来。3.当他们回到父母住的地方的那一刻，宝拉迫不及待地告诉发生了什么事。4.“我和你父亲以前从未听说过这样的房子！从来没有！“母亲的下巴掉了下来。“怎么可能？”5.无论克林和宝拉如何描述“想象”的世界，他们只是拥抱他们，不会相信。6.这是一次多么难以置信和神奇的经历！7.但在内心深处，他们知道，他们一生都不会忘记
10、这样一个惊心动魄的夏日海滨假期。10Part 3范文呈现11范文呈现Paragraph1:Letsgetoutofhere,Paula!screamedKrin.1.ButitseemedthatPauladidnthearanything.2.Muchtohishorror,Krinspottedhissisterstandingthere,withherfrightenedeyesstaringattheswinginglightandthecreakingstairs.3.Foramoment,adesperateandterriblesilencespreadthroughthehou
11、se.4.Krinalmostfelthisbloodfreezeinhischestashesawwhatwashappeningaround.5.Afterseeminglyalongtime,hismindbegantoraceagain,tryingtothinkhowtheycouldbreakdownthecloseddoorandescape.6.Immediately,hegrabbedholdofhissistershand,dashedtothefrontdoor,andinthemeanwhileletoutacry,“Comeon,Paula.”7.Butbadluck
12、forpoorKrin,hetrippedandfellbeforetheygotoutofthehauntedhouse.12范文呈现Paragraph2:Outtheyran,allthewaybacktothosewonderfulumbrellas,beachchairs,andcrowds.1.Itwaslikeenteringanotherworld.Lookingback,theyfoundthatthehouseonthebeachwasnowheretobeseen.2.Eventually,theybreathedasighofrelief,buttheycontinued
13、toruntilltheycalmeddowncompletely.3.Theinstanttheygotbacktowheretheirparentsstayed,Paulawasimpatienttotellwhathadhappened.4.“NeverhaveyourfatherandIheardofsuchahousebefore!Never!”mothersjawdropped.“Howcouldithappen?”5.NomatterhowKrinandPauladescribedthe“imagined”world,theyjusthuggedthemandwouldnotbelieveit.6.Whatanunbelievableandmagicalexperienceitwas!7.Butdowndeepintheirhearts,theyknewthattheydneverforgetsuchathrillingsummerseasideholidayintheirwholelife.13Part 4努力方向14高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语15定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）16低头是题海，抬头是前途。终将上岸，阳光万里!祝大家前程似锦!