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1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习1送给妈妈的礼物题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目再现3续写原文Bobby was getting cold sitting out in his backyard in the snow.Bobby didnt wear boots;or rather,he didnt own any.The thin sneakers he wore had a few holes in them and they did a poor job of keeping out the cold.Bobby had been in his backyard fo
2、r about an hour already.Try as he might,he could not come up with an idea for his mothers Christmas gift.He shook his head as he thought,“This is useless.Even if I do come up with an idea,I dont have any money for a gift.”Wiping tears from his eyes,Bobby started walking down to the street where the
3、shops were.It wasnt easy being six without a father,especially when he needed a man to talk to.Bobby walked from shop to shop,looking into each decorated window.Everything seemed so beautiful but so out of reach.It was starting to get dark and Bobby reluctantly turned to walk home when suddenly his
4、eyes caught the glimmer(微光)of the setting suns rays reflecting on something on the roadside.He reached down and discovered a shiny dime(一角硬币).4续写原文Never before has anyone felt as wealthy as Bobby did at that moment.As he held his newly-found treasure,warmth spread throughout his entire body and he w
5、alked into the first store.His excitement quickly turned cold when salesperson after salesperson told him that he could not buy anything with only a dime.He saw a flower shop and went inside to wait in line.When the shop owner asked if he could help him,Bobby presented the dime and asked if he could
6、 buy one flower for his mothers Christmas gift.The shop owner looked at Bobby and his ten-cent offering.Then he put his hand on Bobbys shoulder,saying,“You just wait here and Ill see what I can do for you.”The sound of the door closing as the last customer left pulled Bobby back to reality.All alone
7、 in the shop,Bobby began to feel alone and afraid.5段首句Paragraph1:Eventually the shop owner came out and moved to the counter.Paragraph2:With the bunch of beautiful roses in his hands,Bobby backed off and then turned and ran.6Part 2题目分析7续写已知内容通过阅读所给文章可知，生活贫苦的鲍比想在圣诞节送母亲礼物，但他没有钱，就在他在街上走时，他捡到了一角硬币，他很开心，
8、当他走进第一家商店，售货员告诉他一角硬币无法买东西，他很失落，之后他去了一家花店，店主让鲍比等着，说“我看看能为你做些什么”。8点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写建议第一段：第一段开头是：最后店主走出来，来到柜台前。本段应该写店主为鲍比准备了一角硬币的礼物，注重写店主对鲍比的帮助，鲍比简直无法相信。第二段：第二段开头是：鲍比手里拿着一束美丽的玫瑰，退后转身跑开了。本段应该写鲍比把花送给妈妈，妈妈很惊讶
9、且开心，之后鲍比把在花店里的经历告诉妈妈，母子俩感受到了冬日的温暖。10Part 3范文呈现11范文呈现Eventually the shop owner came out and moved to the counter.There,before Bobbys eyes,lay twelve red roses,with leaves of green and tiny white flowers all tied together with a big silver tape.Bobbys heart sank as the owner placed them gently into a
10、long white box.That will be ten cents,young man.the shop owner said,reaching out his hand for the dime.Slowly,Bobby moved his hand to give the man his dime.Could this be true?He wondered.12范文呈现With the bunch of beautiful roses in his hands,Bobby backed off and then turned and ran.Within minutes,he w
11、as at home,still breathless.“Look,Mother,what have I got for you?”Bobby called out in the backyard.Mother came out from inside the house.She could hardly believe her eyes upon seeing the beautiful flowers in front of her.“Merry Christmas!”Bobby said and began to tell her everything he had experienced in the flower shop.Tearfully,Mother hugged her son in her arms.Standing in the bitter cold air,they somehow didnt feel cold at all.13Part 4努力方向14高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语15定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）16低头是题海，抬头是前途。终将上岸，阳光万里!祝大家前程似锦!