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1、Guidance for a continuation writingLearning processeye noseearmouthneckshoulderheartlung armankle.Can you name some of the body parts?Step Inferring the themeStep Inferring the theme What is the most important part of your body?the principle of continuation writing“The Most Important Body Part”The M
2、ost Important Body Part”Continuation writing for Continuation writing for My mother used to ask me.“What is the most important part of the body?”Through the years I would take a guess at what I thought was the correct Answer.When I was younger,I thought Sound was very important to us as humans,so I
3、said,“My ears,Mommy.”She said:“No.Many people are deaf.But you keep thinking about it and I will ask you again soon.”Several years passed before she asked me again.Since making my first attempt,I had contemplated the correct answer.So this time I told her,“Mommy,sight is very important to everybody,
4、so it must be our eyes.”She looked at me and told me:“You are learning fast,but the answer is not correct because there are many people who are blind.”Stumped again,I continued my quest for knowledge and over the years,Mother asked me a couple more times and always her answer was:“NO.But you are get
5、ting smarter every year,my child.”文本改编自完型填空文本改编自完型填空 Then one year,my grandfather died.Everybody was hurt.Everybody was crying.Even my father cried.I remember that especially because it was only the second time I saw him cry.My Mom looked at me when it was our turn to say our final good-bye to my gr
6、andfather.She asked me:“Do you know the most important body part yet,my dear.?”I was shocked when she asked me this on this occasion.I always thought this was a game between her and me.She saw the confusion on my face and told me:“This question is quite important.How you answer it shows whether you
7、have learned about life and whether you have really lived in your own life.For every body part you gave me in the past,I have told you were wrong and I have given you the reason why.But today is the day you need to learn this important lesson”I looked puzzled.She looked down at me as only a mother c
8、an.“All your previous answers ears,eyes,hands,heartThey are all very important to yourself.But this time I need you to think of something that is important to others.”“So what is it,mom?”I asked her.Paragraph 1:“My dear,the most important body part,”she said,Paragraph 2:“Mom,I understand.I have my s
9、houlder too.”Guiding words for continuation writing:Guiding words for continuation writing:A successful continuation writing should bebased on a thorough understanding of theexisting information.Step Identifying writing style&locating key elementsStep Identifying writing style&locating key elements
10、narrativewhywhenwherehowwhatwhomain characters:what:other characters:my mother and I We had a guessing game.my grandfather,father and other relatives their functions in how the story goesStep Exploring the plot developmentStep Exploring the plot development Mothers question:“What is the most importa
11、nt part of the body?”My attitude:_(Find some sentences to support your answer.)(_)My answersMy reasonsMothers responsesearseyeshands.heartI took it seriously.(I took a guess at what I thought was the correct answer.)(I contemplated the correct answer.)(I continued my quest for knowledge.)Sound was v
12、ery important to humans.Sight is very important to everybody.Many people are deaf.you are learning fast but there are many people who are blind.The writer didnt state his reasons in the story.NO.But you are getting smarter every year,my child.Step Exploring the plot developmentStep Exploring the plo
13、t development What kind of lady is the mother?mild-tempered;gentle;considerate;kindly;reasoningThe personality of the character The personality of the character determines how the plots develop.determines how the plots develop.the development of plotsfocalizing the climaxanalysing the opening senten
14、cesStep Focalizing the Step Focalizing the Stumped again,I continued my quest for knowledge and over the years,Mother asked me a couple more times and always her answer was:“NO.But you are getting smarter every year,my child.”Then one year,my grandfather died.Everybody was hurt.Everybody was crying.
15、Even my father cried.I remember that especially because it was only the second time I saw him cry.My Mom looked at me when it was our turn to say our final good-bye to my grandfather.She asked me:“Do you know the most important body part yet,my dear.?”I was shocked when she asked me this on this occ
16、asion.I always thought this was a game between her and me.She saw the confusion on my face and told me:“This question is quite important.How you answer it shows whether you have learned about life and whether you have really lived in your own life.For every body part you gave me in the past,I have t
17、old you were wrong and I have given you the reason why.But today is the day you need to learn this important lesson”I looked puzzled.She looked down at me as only a mother can.“All your previous answers ears,eyes,hands,heartThey are all very important to yourself.But this time I need you to think of
18、 something that is important to others.”“So what is it,mom?”I asked her.my grandfather diedclimaxStep Focalizing the climaxStep Focalizing the climaxThe death of my grandpa.the feelings of the surrounding peoplean unexpected event sad/in deep sorrow/hurt/pitiful/heartbrokenEverybody was hurt.Everybo
19、dy was crying.Even my father cried.I remember that especially because it was only the second time I saw him cry.Hints for mothers desired answer:“How you answer it shows whether you have learned about life.this time I need you to think of something that is important to others.”Para1:“My dear,the mos
20、t important body part,”she said,Para2:“Mom,I understand.I have my shoulder too.”Mothers hint:“How you answer it shows whether you have learned about life.this time I need you to think of something that is important to others.”these sentences indicate the development of the story(continuation writing
21、)Step Anaylizing the opening sentencesshoulderWhats the most important part?Shoulder.Why is it important?It means a lot to others.On what occasions does it function?When others need help&support.Step Generating the writing ideasQuestions to ponder for the continuation writing:Whats the mothers answe
22、r?What explanation did mother give for her answer?How do I understand the mothers explanation?Did it influence the rest of my life?And how?What do I do after I grow up?Why did the writer describe the scene of his grandfathers death?Whats the relationship between the grandfather and shoulders?Does th
23、e character“grandfather”carry a special meaning in the guessing game?(If possible,list some other questions that show your own reasonable thinking)Step Creating your own story Make a thread of your own story and create your own story.Line Line 1:1:mothermothers s answer answer(shoulder)(shoulder)my
24、my reaction reaction(surprised/puzzled/(surprised/puzzled/confused)confused)the the surrounding surrounding sad sad scenescenemy my understanding understanding of of mothermothers s answeranswerthe function of the shoulderthe function of the shoulderitsits influence on my life journeyrneyLine Line 2
25、:2:mothers mothers answer answer(shoulder)my(shoulder)my doubt(why)mothers doubt(why)mothers explanation(the explanation(the function function of of the the shoulder)mothers shoulder)mothers hope hope for for her her son-my son-my understanding understanding of of mothers mothers wordsmothers wordsm
26、others sadnessoffer sadnessoffer my shoulder to mother my shoulder to mother Line Line 3:3:mothers mothers answer(shoulder)my answer(shoulder)my puzzled puzzled lookmother lookmother didnt didnt give give the the direct direct answershe answershe told told me me the the story story of of grandfather
27、I grandfatherI suddenly suddenly understood understood the the special special meaning meaning that that“shoulder”“shoulder”carriesI carriesI offered my shoulder to the sad mother as an adultoffered my shoulder to the sad mother as an adult.Step Writing a specific scene&polishing your writing eg.how
28、 to describe a persons sadness.sadness(by describing.facial expressions;eyes;tears;actions;conversation;)action-v.cry;weep;sob;whine;burst into tears;break out in a rage of sobs;weep over ones shoulder;weep into handkerchief;bury ones face in ones hands;break ones heartemotional state-n.filled with
29、grief;in deep sorrow;sadness;be well up with tearsvividness-adj.tearful;heartbroken;sorrowful;disheartened;weeping;teary;lament sad;grievedShow Time(1)Finish the first draft of the continuation writing.(2)Cooperate with your partner to polish it and present the revised version the next class.Step Homework