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1、考点46读后续写11高频语法的运用(原卷版)【命题解读】我们学习了一些读后续写中常用的词汇如果把一篇完整的续写文章比作一座房子,那么无疑词汇 就是建造这座房子的砖瓦,而我们本篇,要学习的续写高频语法就是建造这所房子所需要的水泥和钢筋。【思维导图】形容词作状语其实是同学们在高一就接触过的语法知识点,其主要功能是表达人物做某个动作的原因、 结果或者伴随状态。表原因1 . Depressed and helpless (又沮丧又无助),Eric burst into tears.2 .Curious to know what was happening inside (很想知道里面在发生什么),Er
2、ic pushed thedoor open and slipped into the house.讲解第1句中,Eric突然大哭是因为沮丧和无助,为了突出这一原因,该句使用了形容词depressed和helpless作原因状语。第2句中,Eric推开门溜进房子的原因是好奇,为了突出这一原因,该句使用了形容词结构curious to do. 作原因状语。表结果1 .Eric finally made it to the top of the mountain, hungry but excited (饥饿但去口 兴奋).2 .Eric was encouraged by the teachef
3、s smile, full of confidence in his plan (对计戈 U 充满 了 信心)讲解第1句中,Eric最后登上山顶时的状态是饥饿但兴奋,为了表达这一结果,该句使用boats lower deck. Their fathers sharp orders frightened her awake: Get out of the boat. Ifs sinking!” Louise pushed her sister into the cold, dark water. The girls were followed by their mother, Petra Rod
4、riguez. Both girls wore life jackets,but the adults did not. Within seconds, the boat capsized, leaving just the tip of its bow in the air.After some time, her father told them he would swim for help. Louise watched him disappear into the darkness. A while later, her mother went still. Then her sist
5、er died, too.Pisano and Strasser, both 25, were going on a fishing expedition. The fbg was so thick that they couldnt even see the stern(月台尾)of the boat. They decided to try one more spot before going home. Late that afternoon, the fog cleared and the sun started shining. On their return voyage, abo
6、ut 11 kilometres away from Catalina Island, Pisano noticed something yellow floating in the water.Strasser steered(驾驶)the boat closer and Pisano jumped into the water. He swam toward the figure and grabbed the life jacket. Fortunately, Louise was saved and quickly sent to hospital. The little girl s
7、oon recovered, but the search fbr Louises father, sister and mother was in vain.Louise was adopted by her aunt and uncle. She attended college, got married in 2013 and gave birth to a son. In her late 20s, Louise began to wonder about her rescuers. She even tried to find them but no luck. One day, L
8、ouise came across a magazine article featuring Pisano talking about the 1986 rescue.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。Realizing Pisano was the very person she was looking for, Louise decided to find him.Louise recognized her rescuer the moment she saw Pisano.模拟题5 (2022福建省福州第一中学三模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续
9、写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Grandfather was a wise and honorable man. His house was not far from ours, and I would visit him often going home after school.No matter how rotten I had been, I could tell Grandpa anything. My secrets were safe. Whenever there was a problem, he gave me the tools to fix it. I knew I
10、would always find the best answer from him. He always understood. He loved me.I reineinber a lime when a bunch of us were playing baseball in the field behind Mrs. Fergusorfs house. I hit one pitch just right and slam! It was a home run that soared high and away, and ended up breaking Old Lady Fergu
11、sons kitchen window! We all ran! Walking home, my best friend, Tom, asked, How will she ever know who did it? Shes blinder than a bat!” He had a point.I was afraid that Mrs. Ferguson would stay mad at me, so I ran. I didnt know what she would do. I tried to calm down. However, my stomach was in knot
12、s. On the way home. I imagined that she was a mean witch (女巫) chasing me, and the further way I ran, the larger she grew. until finally she towered over the whole town, seeing my every move with an evil eye. Thoughts rushed through my mind. Would Mrs. Ferguson stay mad at me?Would she call police? W
13、orse still, would she tell my parents I couldnt even imagine the disappointment on Mom and Dads face. They were hoping I would act honestly and in a responsible wayI decided to stop by Grandpas. I felt ashamed. I wanted to hide. I wanted to knock my head against a tree a thousand times and make the
14、world just go away -as if punishing myself could undo things.“I would tell everything to Grandpa/5 a voice inside me said.“I was wrong/91 told him, with my head down. He must have known something was up by the expression on my face. He knew we had been warned many times about the dangers of playing
15、where we shouldnt.注意:1 .续写词数应为150左右2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答Para 1: But he just listened while I continued talking.Para 2: Grandpa smiled when he knew I had figured it out.【模拟题6 (2022.山东师范大学附中模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。You know how when big things in your life arent going well, the little
16、things bother you more? Yet one tiny kind act that appears in the path may easily light up your whole life and give you hope again.Like many people during the pandemic, my husband, Paul, had been laid off. I was still working, but my job would likely be ending soon too. I was worried about money, Co
17、vid-19 and our future. Thats when our mailbox really started getting to me.The mailbox, relic from the previous homeowners, had already been in rough shape when we moved in. The paint was faded. The metal pole holding up the box was rusted. It stood at the end of our long driveway, far enough away f
18、rom our house. Every time I saw it, it just reminded me of all the problems in my life. I wish we had a better mailbox, 9,I found myself thinking as I pulled out of the driveway. I probably would have forgotten all about it if it were not for the news we got one morning.Shelly just texted, “Paul sai
19、d. Shelly was a neighbor and a good friend. A girl drove her car right into the mailbox. Completely mowed it down. 9,I sighed, heart almost falling apart. Shelly saw it happen. The driver, just a teenager, wasnt hurt, but she was really upset, “Paul added.As much as I wanted a new mailbox, getting i
20、t would be expensive. That certainly wasnt in the budget, I thought. I guess its true what they say: Be careful what you wish for.I went to work in low spirits. While doing the usual tasks, I received a text from Shelly again, That teenagegirl named Audree came by and repaired your mailbox.”注意:L续写词数
21、应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Upon reaching the driveway, I was totally shocked at what I saw.With the help of the note, we called at Audree s home.了形容词hungry和excited作结果状语。第2句中,Eric被老师微笑鼓舞后的情绪是充满了信心,为了表达这一结果,该句使 用了形容词结构full f confidence.作结果状语。表伴随1. Deep in thought (沉,总),Mary sat still against the door
22、.2.Lost in the forest (迷失在森林之中),Mary lay under a tree, full of fear and despair (充满恐惧和绝望) 讲解第1句中,Mary一动不动地靠门坐着的同时状态是沉思,为了表达这种状态,该句使用了形容词结构de叩in thought作伴随状语。第2句中,Mary躺在树下的原因是在森林中迷路了,为了表达这个原因,该句使用了形容词结构lost in the forest作伴随状语;同时,她躺在树下时内心充满了恐惧和绝望,为了表达这种情绪状态,该句又使用了 形容词结构full of fear and despair作伴随状语非谓语
23、动词 having done非谓语动词having done表示分词动作发生在谓语动词之前,常译为“在.之后;已经.了”表先后1 .Having walked for quite a long time (已经走 了 很长一段时间 了),she found herself lost. 2.Having ailed three times (已经失败了三次),he didn*t want to try again.讲解第1句中,在发现自己迷路之前,她已经走了很长一段时间了,为了表示walked for quite a long time,在 found herself lost之前发生,该句使用
24、了非谓语动词结构having walked第2句中,在不想再尝试之前,他已经失败了三次,为了表示failed three times在didnft want to try again 之前发生,该句使用了非谓语动词结构having failedo、一非谓语动词 doing/done, with 复合结构非谓语动词doing和done作状语时,主要表示原因、结果或伴随状态。doing形式所表达的动作与主 语之间构成逻辑上的主谓关系、done则构成被动关系。此外,还有一种with复合结构也可以表示原因、 结果或伴随状态,本节中也会讲到。非谓语动词doing / done表原因1 .Recogniz
25、ing who the customer was (认出了 这位顾客是谁),the manager was most apologetic and reprimanded the assistant severely.2.Seeing what I did (看至U 了 我的所作所为),my mother frowned as if to ask me to stand up quickly.3.Scolded by the teacher (被老师责骂),he burst into tears.讲解第1句中,经理道歉是因为认出了这位顾客是谁,为了表达这个原因,该句使用非谓语动词结构recog
26、nizing.作原因状语。第2句中,妈妈因为看到“我”的所作所为才皱起眉头,为了表达这个原因,该句使用非谓语动词结构seeing. 作原因状语。第3句中,他因为被老师责骂所以才大哭,为了表达这个原因,该句使用非谓语动词结构scolded.作原因 状语。表结果1 .His father died, leaving him a lot of money (给他留下 了一大笔钱).2 . Everything around him was full of her presence, continually reopening the wound (不断重揭伤疤)详解第1句中,他爸爸死后给他留下了一大
27、笔钱,为了表达这个结果,该句使用非谓语动词结构leaving.作结果状语。第2句中,他周围的一切都有她的影子,带来的结果就是他内心的那道伤口一次次被触痛,为了表达这个 结果,该句使用非谓语动词结构reopening作结果状语。表伴随1 Ayoung man came to the police station, surrounded by a group of journalists (被群记者围着)2.1gnoring her words (忽略她的话),the man walked away quickly.讲解第1句中,年轻人到警察局时的状态是被一群记者围着,为了表达这种伴随状态,该句使
28、用非谓语动词结构surrounded.作伴随状语。第2句中、那个男人走开的同时忽略了她的话,为了表达这种伴随状态,该句使用了非谓语动词结构 ignoring.作伴随状语。with复合结构l.She fell seep with the light burning (灯亮着).2.With all the things bought (东西买齐),they headed for the church.讲解第1句中,她睡着的同时灯亮着,为了表达这种伴随状态,该句使用了 with复合结构with.burning作伴随状语。第2句中,因为东西都买齐了,所以他们朝教堂走去,为了表达这个原因,该句使用了
29、with复合结构with.bought作原因状语。倒装结构倒装是英语中一个重要的语法知识点,用于表示一定的句子结构或强调句子成分。倒装句的使用丰富 了语言表达,让句式更加多样。因此,写作中适当用一些倒装句式会使文章的表达更生动、有力、让阅卷 老师眼前一亮。部分倒装表情绪1. During the exam.so nervous was I (我太紧张)that my mind went blank.2. So excited was he (他太激动 了 ) that he couldnt go to sleep.讲解第1句中。我太紧张了,考试的时候脑子一片空白,为了强调这种情绪,该句使 用了
30、 sothat倒装结构。第2句中,他太兴奋了以至于无法入睡,为了强调这种情绪,该句也同样使用了 so that倒装结构。部分倒装强调动作发生的时间1 .Not until the fire die out did he wake up (他才醒来).2 .Not until he climbed into bed was he free to think about it (他才有空好好想一想).讲解第1句中,直到火灭了他才醒来,为了强调他醒来的时间,该句使用了 not.until倒 装结构。第2句中,他直到爬上了床才有时间来好好想一想,为了强调动作发生的时间,该句 也同样使用了 not.un
31、til倒装结构。全部倒装1. Now comes your tun (现在轮至U你 T)to make a short speech.2. On the top of the mountain sat a giant man (坐着一个巨人).讲解第1句中,现在轮到你来做一个简短的演讲了,为了强调现在轮到你了、该句使用了now引导的全部倒装结构。第2句中,山顶上坐着一个巨人,为了强调地点,该句使用了介词短语。n the top of 引导的全部倒装结构。Such位于句前作表语1. Such was Albert Einstein (这就是阿尔伯特爱因斯坦),a simple man and t
32、he 20th century greatest scientist.2.Such is our home (这就是我们的家)in the future.讲解第1句中,这就是阿尔伯特爱因斯坦,一个朴实的人,也是20世纪最伟大的科学家,为了突出强调Albert Einstein,该句使用了 such引导的全部倒装结构。第2句中,这就是我们未来的家,为了突出强调our home,该句使用了 such引导的全部倒装结构。虚拟语气虚拟语气主要用来表示假设,所陈述的是一个条件,不一定是事实,也有可能与事实完全相反。虚拟 语气通过谓语动词的特殊形式来表示,常用来表达惊异、惋惜、遗憾、理应如此等含义,在写作
33、中可以用 来表达比较强烈的感情。没有的话,某人就Without., sb.would/ But for, sb. would1. Without your advice, I wouldnt have succeeded.2.But for your instruction,! would not have made such great progress. 讲解 第1句中,如果没有你的帮助,我就不会成功,为了突显前后逻辑关系,该句使用了without引导的虚拟语气。第2句中,如果没有你的指导,我就不会取得如此大的进步,为了突显前后逻辑关系,该句使用了 butfor 引导的虚拟语气。希望wis
34、hing.1 .He sat there, wishing he had stayed at home then.2 .He turned over the photo album, wishing that he had joined the party last night 讲解 第1句中,他坐在那里,真希望自己当时待在家里,为了表达这种遗憾的情绪,该句使用了 wishing引导的虚拟语气。第2句中,他翻看相册,真希望自己也参加了昨晚的派对,为了表达这种遗憾的情绪。该句使用了 wishing引导的虚拟语气。但愿;只要;如果就好了 If only1. If only I were as cl
35、ever as you.2. If only I would get the scholarship.讲解第1句中,要是我和你一样聪明就好了,为了表达这种渴望的情绪,该句使用了 if only引导的虚拟语气。第2句中,要是我能拿到奖学金就好了,为了表达这种渴望的情绪,该句使用了 if only引导的虚拟语气。如果再有一次机会,我会 Given one more chance, I would.1 . Given one more chance,! wouldnt let my parents down.2 .Given one more chance,! would definitely ma
36、ke it better.讲解第1句中,如果再给我一次机会,我不会让父母失望,为了表达这种渴望再来、。情绪,该句使用了虚拟语气Given one more chance, I would.o第2句中、如果再给我一次机会,我一定会做得更好,为了表达这种渴望再来的情绪,该句使用了虚拟语气 Given one more chance, I would.3名词性从句名词性从句是在句子中起名词作用的从句,是高中阶段所学的三大从句(定语从句、状语从句、名词 性从句)之一。使用名词性从句可以使表达更加丰富、地道。在读后续写中经常用到的两类名词性从句是 it作形式主语的主语从句以及同位语从句。主语从句 真正的
37、主语在that后1. It suddenly occurred to him that the family inside was in danger.1.1 t hit me all of a sudden that I had forgotten her birthday.讲解每第1句中、他突然想到里面那家人有危险,为了避免头重脚轻,该句使用了 it作形式主语的名词性从句,真正的主语为the family inside was in dangero第2句中,我突然想到我忘了她的生日,为了避免头重脚轻,该句使用了 it作形式主语的名词性从句,真 正的主语为 I had forgotten h
38、er birthday o同位语从句对前面的抽象名词进行解释说明l.The fact that she didnt like me really hurt me.2. They were shocked at the news that their hometown had been flooded.讲解第1句中,她不喜欢我这个事实真的伤害了我,为了解释说明the fact,该句使用了同位语从句 that she didnt like me。第2句中,他们对家乡闹洪灾的消息感到震惊,为了解释说明the news,该句使用了同位语从句that their hometown had been fl
39、ooded o模拟检现:【模拟题11(2022.江苏南京.模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Flora and her dad were going to move to a new house. Friday, a truck would come for the furniture. Then the next week, workers would dig up the yard. Where Flora and Papi had grown flowers, the workers would put in a parking lot.
40、“Our poor flowers J Flora sighed to herself, looking at the bright purple blooms and soft and green weed coming out of the soil. She sat outside, selling things she didnt want to take to the new house. Beside her hung a sign that said “Yard Sale”. Her yard sale was the first one of the year on Apple
41、 Street, and several of her neighbors had come over to have a look.Papi came out. He held a dish piled high with nuts. “Heres a snack for everyone J he said. Floras dad loved sharing things. Most of all he loved sharing jokes. He smiled when he saw Floras sign and winked (日乏眼)at the customers gather
42、ed around.“Yard sale? What are you selling yards of? Or meters of?” he asked. Ribbons? Carpet? Cloth? Wheres your ruler?”“Not that kind of yard,joked Mrs. Ciro. It must be this nice grassy yard were standing on thafs for sale“How much for the weed by your sign? asked Mr. Johnson, joking.Flora gave n
43、o response. She didnt think their jokes were funny. She felt extremely in low spirits at the thought that the lovely yard was already sold, and soon their poor flowers and weed would be ruined. Deader than a doorknob/ Papis papi would say”, she thought to herself bitterly, Whafs worse, the new house
44、 doesnt have any flowers at all.”With a sigh, Flora dug her heels deep into the grass. But when she felt the soft earth move under her heels, she knew what she could do.She whispered her clever plan to Papi. He nodded, smiling, and sat down in her seat instead.注意:1 .续写词数应为150左右;2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
45、Flora fetched old flowerpots and found a trowel (园艺铲)to dig with.Now she was ready for selling the yard and joking with customers.【模拟题2】(2022.重庆一中模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Rivaldo was playing football from the age of 4. When he was 7, he joined a local football club. He attended the
46、training regularly but never got a chance to play in matches. But the coach had faith in him. He told Rivaldo that he should focus on hi training, and one day he would get the chance. Rivaldo had no other option but to continue training in the club. He was training very hard and focused on improving
47、 himself.Even after two years in the club, he never played in a match. He was not even allowed to travel along with the team. One day their club had a charity match, where a famous footballer was a chief guest. While the team was planning to travel, one of the support staff who used to take care of
48、kits got ill. So, they needed someone for this.The coach thought this should be an opportunity for Rivaldo. So, he told him to travel with the team and take care of the kits. Other support staff objected to it, but he convinced them.The team reached the stadium. There were a lot of crowds to witness the celebrity footballer. For Rivaldo, this is his first-time experience in the stadium. He was helping th