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1、Unit 3 A day out 第4课时 Writing八年级英语上册同步精品讲义（牛津译林版） 知识精讲游览名胜古迹、亲近大自然对每天都紧张学习的同学们来说有着极大的吸引力。今天我们写作的话题就是如何用英语写出游计划。写出游计划应该包括：1.列出你要参观的名胜古迹；2.写下你在每个地方可以进行的活动；3.弄清出游的方式和价格。还要考虑以下问题：a.时间。包括出发的时间，整个旅行花费的时间、在每个地方停留的时间以及返回的时间；b.就餐，含用餐时间和地点；c.旅行费用。教材中出现的相关句型：1We are planning a day out on. 我们正计划一天外出旅行在2This is
2、the plan for the day. 这是整天的计划。3We will meet at . 我们将在见面。4We will take the underground/bus to. 我们将乘地铁/公汽到5It will take about . minutes/hour(s). 那将花费约分钟/小时。6We will walk to. 我们将步行到其他拓展句型：1We learnt a lot about different cultures.我们了解到许多不同的文化。2There was a lot of traffic on the way and the journey was a
3、 little boring. 路上有很多车辆，行程有点令人厌烦。3The cost is about. per student.费用大约是每个学生4We hope you can join us. 我们希望你能加入我们。能力拓展提示：请根据以下要点用英语写一篇杭州旅游计划。要点：1.杭州是我国最美丽的城市之一，有许多名胜占迹，并以西湖闻名；2.星期九上午8:30在学校门口集合，9:00出发，乘长途汽车，大约两个小时到杭州；3.在杭州游园、划船、爬山等；4.途中要注意安全。注意：1.词数80左右，短文的开头己为你写好，不计入总词数；2.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通
4、顺。Well go on a trip to Hangzhou next Friday._【答案】Well go on a trip to Hangzhou next Friday. Hangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities in China. There are many places of interest in Hangzhou and Hangzhou is famous for the West Lake. Our school will assemble at the school gate at 8:30 a.m. on Frida
5、y and depart at 9:00 a.m. We will go there by coach. It will take us about two hours to get there. We will visit the park, go boating and go mountain climbing. But make sure to pay attention to your safety on the way.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示信息，写一篇杭州旅游计划；注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般将来
6、时。作文要分别介绍杭州，集合和出发的时间、交通方式和要花费的时间，在杭州要做的事情以及路上注意安全。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。分层提分A根据中文大意，以 A trip to Hangzhou为题，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。1、上周六我和我的父母去杭州旅游；一大清早就动身去车站。乘长途汽车花了两个半小时到那儿。2、在第一天,我们游了自然名胜区；忍不住拍了许多照片。在第二天,品尝了当地美食。在第三天，(自拟)。(你们旅游的感受，自拟)3、近几年发生了翻天覆地的变化。以前是一个安静的小镇，出行一般走路或骑车。现在是个现代化城镇，出行可以坐公交和地铁但污染成为问题，希望(自拟)A trip
7、 to Hangzhou_【答案】Last Saturday, my parents and I had a trip to Hangzhou. We left for the station early in the morning. It took us two and a half hours to get there by coach. On the first day, we enjoyed the places of interest. We couldnt stop taking photos. On the second day, we enjoyed some delicio
8、us food. On the third day, we bought some presents for our relatives. We had a good time.Many changes have taken place in Hangzhou. It used to be a quiet town, but now it is a modern city. In the past, people in the city took a bike or walked. Now they can go outside by bus and by subway. But there
9、is much pollution. I hope people will travel green to reduce pollution.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给的要点提示写一篇有关去杭州旅行的短文。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去式和一般现在时。前两段描述去杭州的旅行经历，最后一段描述杭州在过去和现在的变化，并表达自己的希望。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。B 假如你是李伟，去年暑假你和你的家人去了三亚，并被它的美丽所吸引。你准备在某英文论坛上和大家分享你的三亚之旅。请根据下面表格中的要点提示，完成这篇英语短文。Locationin the
10、 south of Hainan IslandSizeAbout 1,919 square kilometresThings you can enjoyCoconut trees, water games, beautiful shells, all kinds of fruitTake a walk along the beach. Your opinionFrom this trip, I learned要求：（1）包含所给提示信息，可适当发挥；（2）条理清楚，语句通顺，行文连贯；（3）不少于100词。My trip to SanYa_【答案】My trip to SanYaIhadawo
11、nderfultriptoSanYawithmy parentslastsummerholiday. Letmetellyou something aboutit.SanYaisinthesouthofHainananditis about1,919 square kilometres. Itshotintheday and cool atnight. Itsfamousforits blueseaand beautifulbeachesthere. There are lots of Coconut trees around the seaside. Therearelotsofthings
12、todoinSanYa.Weenjoyedthe seafoodand coconutjuiceandtasted all kinds of fruit. Theywereverydelicious.We also enjoyed water games. It was very interesting. When the sun set, we took a walk along the beach. There were many beautiful shells. I also collected some. From this trip, I learned a lot about t
13、he history of SanYa and its local culture. Ithinkit wasrelaxingtospendmylastholiday. Im looking forward to going there again.【详解】1.题干解读：文章属于材料作文，主要是介绍自己的三亚之旅，内容按照表格中所给的信息描写，也可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：文章主要用一般过去时，人称用第一人称展开描述。主要是介绍三亚的地理情况以及旅行的情况，包括在三亚做了些什么以及从这次旅行中学到了什么以及自己的感受等。写作时语言要简单易懂
14、，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。C假设你是Mrs. Sanders的学生李明，本周末很乐意当她的导游。请你从以下两种出行方案中，选择一种适合她的方案，写一封email推荐给她。Plan APlan BWhere to visitWuma Street Jiangxin Island How to go thereWhat to do1. enjoy Ou Play2. 1. watch traditional buildings2.要求：1.内容必须包括你所选方案对应的表中信息，省略号处根据实际情况自由发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的人名，班级等；3.词数80左右，开头已经给
15、出，不计入总词数。To:Sanders From:Liming123Subject:This Weekends TripDear Mrs. Sanders,Im very glad to be your guide. The place I advise you to visit is_ 【答案】Dear Mrs. Sanders,Im very glad to be your guide. The place I advise you to visit is Jiangxin Island. I think its the best place to learn about Chinese
16、culture that youre interested in. Wed better go there by bus, because its a little far from our school.The moment we get there, we can watch traditional buildings which may be different from those in your country. They are so interesting that youll know a lot about the lifestyle in villages. Then we
17、 can enjoy local food, for example, jiaozi. If you prefer, you can learn to make it in person.How about taking a camera with you so that we can take some photos? Im sure well enjoy ourselves there. Your student,Li Ming【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据表格提示内容，写出建议老师去参观的地方以及原因及在那里可以学到什么，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和
18、短语。2.写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和第二人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时结合，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。D假设你是Lily，有一些英国学生要来常熟，你负责带他们常熟一日游。现在你需要写一封电子邮件告知他们一日游计划。具体计划如下图。要求：1.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名； 3.词数90词左右，电子邮件的开头和结尾己经写好，不计入总词数。Dear friends,Welcome to Changshu! Im Lily, your tour guide in Changshu. Ill show y
19、ou around on November 21th. Here is our travel plan._I hope you will enjoy this trip.Best wishes!Lily【答案】Dear friends,Welcome to Changshu! Im Lily, your tour guide in Changshu. Ill show you around on November 21th. Here is our travel plan.We will meet at the school gate at 8:30 a.m. and get on the b
20、us. It will take us half an hour to get toYushan Park by bus. We will be there for about two hours and a half. Therere lots of interesting things to do there. We can climb the hill and row boats. We can also fly kites and have a picnic on the grass. After that, we will have lunch in Jinjiang Restaur
21、ant. The restaurant is about 5 minutes walk from Yushan Park. After lunch, we will go to Fangta Street by bike. We will arive there at about 1 p.m. It is a busy street with lots of shops. We can buy some presents for our parents and friends. At about 2 p.m., we will walk toJinmen Cinema and enjoy a
22、film there. At last, we will get on the bus in front of the cinema and return to school.I hope you will enjoy this trip.Best wishes!Lily【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据所给图片内容给英国学生介绍常熟一日游的计划，要包含图片所给的主要信息，为电子邮件的格式，开头和结尾已给出。2.写作指导：写作时应以第一人称为主，时态主要为一般将来时。写作时要点要齐全，按照所给图片列出写作要点及每个要点中可能用到的表达，然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句要符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明，条理要清晰。