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1、优点英语专题04个人经历与成长（人与自我）2023年高考读后续写话题分类写作技巧与高级词句【读后续写】1（2023福建漳州统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇字数的短文。On a Friday evening in December, two weeks before Christmas, I lost my job. I hadnt seen it coming. I was excited for the weekend, when my daughter, Kristil, then 12, and I planned to get our Chris
2、tmas tree. Then I listened to my voicemail. “Were sorry, but your work assignment has ended as of today.” My heart sank.My paycheck was survival, I did everything I could to give Kristil a good life, but there were some things my love couldnt fix. The next day as we searched for our tree, I struggle
3、d to be cheerful as I eyed the Christmas tree prices. Kristil noticed I was worried and I told her I had lost my job. She wanted to give me the $100 that Grandma gave her, but I refused.Monday morning, I dropped Kristil at school and set off on my money-making pursuits. I headed to the pawnshop (当铺)
4、 with a gold ring my mother had given me, and they gave me $70. Next was the antiques store. I sold six Precious Moments statuettes for $150. I ended the day $220 richer.Over the next week, I furiously (猛烈地) applied for jobs as my bank account grew smaller. I felt as if the world was closing in on m
5、e. On a weekend afternoon, I dropped Kristil in a wealthy gated community for a birthday party. I drove home defeated.Back at home, I glanced out the window. It had been snowing all morning. I noticed a small woman struggling to open her car door against the wind. As she got out, I realized it was m
6、y old professor, Sister Esther. I hadnt seen her since wed met for lunch three months ago. Id first met Sister Esther 10 years earlier, when I was her student at Edgewood College. After I graduated, Sister Esther kept in touch, meeting me for lunch every few months. I had grown to love her like fami
7、ly. I rushed to the front of my building. “What are you doing out in this weather?” I asked as we hugged.注意：(1)续写词数应为150左右;(2)开头已给出。Sister Esther said she called my office and knew I wasnt working there anymore, so she came to see me._When I opened the Christmas card she gave me, I was shocked at an
8、 unexpected gift._【答案】Sister Esther said she called my office and knew I wasnt working there anymore, so she came to see me. I gave her a warm welcome and led her into my room. Upon arriving, she told me urgently, “Hearing the news that you were fired from the work, I felt greatly worried. I know yo
9、u are raising a big family and bearing a large life financial pressure. So I come here and give the gifts for you and Kristil.” She said as she kissed me on the cheek. While saying, she handed me a big package and a Christmas card. (71)When I opened the Christmas card she gave me, I was shocked at a
10、n unexpected gift. Into the package placed a doll and a large envelop. I tore the envelop carefully and hundred-dollar bills poured onto the floor. Tears of gratitude puddled in my eyes as I picked up the precious gift, which could help me get through the tough time and buy the Christmas tree that I
11、 promised to give my daughter. Feeling gratitude, I hugged Sister Esther tightly and thanker her sincerely. (68)【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在圣诞节前丢了工作，接下来的的一周，作者想尽快找到工作挣钱，买下圣诞树。随后的周日下午，作者带着女儿Kristil去一个富裕的封闭式社区参加一个生日聚会，让作者心灵备受打击。回家后，就在作者看着下雪的窗外的时候，看到了曾经的老师Esther。作者匆忙地跑到门口去开门，与老师拥抱的同时问询老师来此的原因。老师说在她得知作者不在原来的地方
12、工作，想到作者可能遇到了困难，于是亲自过来，并给了作者现金帮助作者度过了难关。【详解】1. 段落续写根据第一段首句“Esther 说她打电话到我办公室知道我不在那里工作了，所以她来找我。”可知，接下来的段落可以写我欢迎Esther的到来，同时带她进屋。Esther说她来给我和女儿带来了圣诞贺卡和礼物。根据第二段首句“当我打开她给我的圣诞卡时，我被一份意想不到的礼物吓了一跳。”可知，接下来的段落可以描述打开礼物后我发现了里面的现金，我对Esther的这份“及时雨”表示感激。2. 续写线索拜访进到家里寒暄送出礼物打开礼物震惊感激3. 词汇激活行动类递给：hand/pass养家：raise a fa
13、mily/ support a family/ feed a family承担：bear/shoulder/lift情绪类担忧的：worried/concerned感谢：gratitude/appreciation【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing the news that you were fired from the work, I felt greatly worried. I know you are raising a big family and bearing a large life financial pressure.（运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的同位语从句）【
14、高分句型2】Tears of gratitude puddled in my eyes as I picked up the precious gift, which could help me get through the tough time and buy the Christmas tree that I promised to give my daughter. （运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句和that引导的定语从句）2（2023广东佛山统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I ran after the train, sh
15、outing, “Hey mister, cant you see me?” It was hopeless, as no conductor is going to slow down for a 60-year-old man who got to the station several minutes late. They absolutely didnt know how important that day, that train ride was to me! I was on my way to an interview for what could have been the
16、opportunity of a lifetime. I threw both my hat and my art case down in depression, and sat down on the nearest chair, wiping (擦掉)the sweat from my face and breathing heavily. I would have to wait a whole day for the next train, and by then my appointment with the gallery owner would have given up on
17、 me. Perhaps it was for the best. It was, after all, the first time in 40 years anyone had shown such an interest in my art. Maybe if the gallery owner had seen all my paintings, he would have changed his mind about offering me space on his walls. Disappointment filled my soul. Should I dial the gal
18、lery and get an interview on a different day? But Pierre Gianni was the owner of the most well-known gallery in New York City. Why would he give a rare second chance to an elderly nobody when he had the newest, coolest young artists to choose from?Come to think of it, perhaps these insecurities were
19、 the very reason I had never been offered a show before. I was too afraid to try. I found countless excuses not to offer my work up to be seen and perhaps criticized. I told myself it would hurt too much if I failed, but the truth was that I had never tried. Finally, I gathered all my courage to dia
20、l the gallery, only to find my antique cell phone had broken down. It was at the very moment that I was in total despair and decided to go home. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Suddenly I felt a touch on my shoulder. _The next morning I got to the gallery on time. _【答案】参考范文Paragraph 1:Suddenl
21、y I felt a touch on my shoulder. I turned around and saw an old man smiling gently at me. He told me that he had noticed the trouble which I was in and offered to lend me his phone. I wanted to express my heartfelt gratitude to him but words got stuck in my throat. Taking the phone he passed to me,
22、I managed to collect myself and plucked up my courage to dial Pierre. After what seemed like an eternity, the phone was picked up. To my great relief, Pierre agreed to postpone the interview. Paragraph 2:The next morning I got to the gallery on time. I was staring at its grandeur when Pierre approac
23、hed and welcomed me warmly. Several minutes later, with trembling hands I opened my art case and showed him my paintings one by one. Pierre fixed his eyes on my works with interest, listening to me attentively. Time ticking by, I grew more and more confident and excited. He loved my works! They were
24、 scheduled to be exhibited one month later! I was never more certain that what seems far beyond is simply a leap away if you dare to give it a try.【导语】本文以故事发展为线索展开，讲述在赶往面试的路上，作者因没赶上火车而沮丧。更让作者失望的是，他不知道画廊老板皮埃尔是否会对他的画感兴趣，给他展出的机会。当作者鼓足勇气给皮埃尔打电话时，却发现手机坏了。这时，一位老人走过来把手机借给作者。让作者欣慰的是，皮埃尔同意推迟面试。在第二天的面试中，皮埃尔表示
25、对作者的画很感兴趣，并计划一个月后让作者展出。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“突然，我感到有人碰了碰我的肩膀。”可知，第一段可描写一位陌生人借给作者手机，作者联系上皮埃尔，皮埃尔同意推迟面试。由第二段首句内容“第二天早上我准时到了画廊。”可知，第二段可描写作者向皮埃尔展示他的作品，皮埃尔表示对作者的画感兴趣，并计划一个月后让作者展出。2.续写线索：陌生人帮助联系上画廊老板同意推迟面试参加面试、取得成功3.词汇激活行为类推迟：postpone/put off到达：get to/reach/arrive at流逝：tick by/pass/go by情绪类感谢：express my gra
26、titude /show my appreciation /be grateful激动的：excited/thrilled【点睛】高分句型1 He told me that he had noticed the trouble which I was in and offered to lend me his phone.（由关系代词which引导的限制性定语从句）高分句型2 Time ticking by, I grew more and more confident and excited.（time ticking by是“主语+现在分词”构成的独立主格）高分句型3 I was neve
27、r more certain that what seems far beyond is simply a leap away if you dare to give it a try.（由what引导的主语从句和if引导的条件状语从句）3（2023春广东高三惠州一中校联考阶段练习）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。An A for Mrs. BI was sitting next to Missy in my ninth-grade world history class when Mrs. Bartlett announced a new project. In
28、groups, we were to create a newspaper around the culture we were studying.On a piece of paper, we wrote the names of three friends we wanted in our group. After collecting all the requests, Mrs. Binformed us that she would take into consideration the names we chose and would let us know the results
29、the next day. I had no doubt I would get the group of my choice. Only a few people behaved normally in the class, and Missy was one of them. I knew we had chosen each other.The next day, I anxiously waited for the class. After the bell rang, Missy and I stopped talking as Mrs. B called for our atten
30、tion. She started to call out names. When she reached group three, Missys name was called. So, Im in group three,I thought. The second, third and fourth members of the group were called. My name was not included. There had to be some mistake!Then I heard it. The last group: “Mauro, Juliette, Rachel,
31、 Karina.” I could feel the tears well in my eyes. How could I face being in that groupthe boy who rarely spoke English, the one girl who was always covered by skirts that went down to her ankles, and the other girl who wore weird clothes. Oh, how badly I wanted to be with my friends.I fought back te
32、ars as I walked up to Mrs. BShe looked at me and knew what I was there for. I was determined to convince her I should be in the “good” group. “Why. . . ?” I started.She gently placed a hand on my shoulder. “I know what you want, Karina,” she said, “but your group needs you. I need you to help them g
33、et a passing grade on this assignment. Only you can help them.”I was stunned. I was confused. I was amazed. She had seen something in me I hadnt seen.“Will you help them?” she asked.I stood straighter. “Yes,” I replied. I couldnt believe it came out of my mouth, but it did. I had committed. 注意：1. 续写
34、词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para1: I bravely walked to where the others in my group sat. _Para2: In the end, Mrs. B gave us an A on that assignment._【答案】Possible version 1:I bravely walked to where the others in my group sat. Encouraged by their big smiles, I sat down and led the project. Accordi
35、ng to personal interests and what they were good at, I assigned them with different columns of the newspaper. Halfway through it, I felt myself enjoying the company of these three people. Gradually, I learned that Mauro had few friends because he was struggling with the English language; Juliette wo
36、re long skirts or dresses every day because of her religion; Rachel had a burning desire to be a fashion designer so she had a whole barrel of unique ideas. Finally, with our cooperation, our assignment was successfully finished.In the end, Mrs. B gave us an A on that assignment. She announced to th
37、e whole class that the newspaper designed by our group was elaborately laid out and carefully edited, with rich cultural knowledge. Our joy and happiness were beyond description. After that semester ended, I always received a friendly hello from my group. Many years later, I didnt recall anything ab
38、out the newspaper, but I did feel fortunate to be given the opportunity to see in myself a potential that inspired my actions. It is Mrs Bs insight, vision and thoughtfulness that bring out the potential in four of her students. She is the one who truly deserves the grade A. Possible version 2:I bra
39、vely walked to where the others in my group sat. Resilient student as I was, I knew that in all my academic years, this seminar got to be the hardest nut to crack. Even so, I felt relieved when I saw them beaming with delight at me. The very natural and heart-warming smiles could hardly be ignored.
40、Following a few greetings, we plunged right into the task at hand. Some were brainstorming a string of brilliant ideas while others were investigating cultures on the Internet in an energy-draining yet worthwhile manner. Teaming up with one another, everyone shared their passion and wisdom individually and collectively.In the end, Mrs B gave us an A on that assignment. It was thrilling to see our painstaking efforts finally paid off. We hugged tightly, sheer excitement radiating from our lightened cheeks. Th