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1、专题05个人善行义举机构爱心公益（人与社会）2023年高考读后续写话题分类写作技巧与高级词句【读后续写】1 .（2023秋山东德州高三统考开学考试）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。Kelsey Golden works in media marketing for a school and usually takes her 5-ycar-old son, Barrett, around the neighborhood. All too often, they offer help to people in need and the boy bec
2、omes increasingly caring and sympathetic, especially to the homeless.On a rainy Monday morning, Golden was working on the schooEs annual yearbook on her computer at home. She was transferring photos from her phone to her computer when Barrett started browsing（浏览）her phone.The boy loves the camera fe
3、ature on her phone. He likes to look at his reflection, instead of playing games or engaging in other activities on her phone. But this time, Barrett didnt just stare at his reflection. He started pressing the screen, swinging it around like his arm is a roller coaster.He even mentioned seeing his f
4、avorite chain restaurants mascots （吉祥物）onlinc, which was really unexpected.Then, Golden received a message that her take-away food order was taking longer than usual-which was unusual, because although she sometimes ordered the food fbr her two older childrens lunches at school, that morning she had
5、 packed their lunches. The teacher furthered the confusion when she told Golden that her children were indeed eating their packed lunches at school-no （ake-away food in sight.Goldens confusion was deepened when she was playing with Barrett at the gate. But in that moment, a car pulled in. Golden fel
6、t more confused-the delivery driver got out a huge chain restaurants bag which had 31 cheeseburgers!At first, Golden thought the delivery driver was at the wrong house. Then it occurred to her that Barrett had played her phone that morning, leaving her phone unlocked, so she went back and looked at
7、the phone, only to find an order was placed at that time that he was playing with it Thats crazy!He really did this.”由第一段首句内容“所以有一天，我鼓起勇气，在附近的街道上收集垃圾。”可知，第一段可描写陌生人看 到作者捡垃圾的反应，作者在此过程中的感悟和作者决定鼓励更多的学生在镇上这样做。由第二段首句内容“我想如果有更多的学生参加志愿活动，情况会好得多。”可知，第二段可描写作者怎样 带领着其他人捡垃圾以及由此所带来的改变。2 .续写线索：我捡垃圾别人的不解之后他人赞扬和感谢带动
8、别人捡垃圾带来积极影响 感悟.词汇激活行为类捡垃圾：pick up rubbish/coliect garbage/trash意识到：realize/be aware决定做某事:decide to do sth./determine to do sth./make up ones mind to do sth.情绪类表扬：praise/speak highly of感谢某人：thank sb./express ones gratitude点睛高分句型 1. Some people watched me with a strange look that seemed to say I was c
9、razy.（运用 了 that 引导的定语从句和省略that引导的宾语从句）高分句型 2. The interesting thing was that I was acting just like her!（运用了 that 引导的表语从句）5. （2023山东济南统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整 的短文。It was cool and bright and just right for running. I was in the first few miles of a 10-mile race through some hills. Birds
10、 were singing on （he trees. The soft wind was brushing my cheeks. I felt rested and springy. Despite the hills, I （houghl it was going to be a fine run.Ahead was Blake, a student from Burke High School. He was running easily, too, nioving along efficiently. The pace felt comfortable, so I decided to
11、 stay where he was; why bother concentrating on pace when Blake was such a nice pacesetter for me? 1 would overtake Blake later on when he used up energy.So 1 ran closely behind him. The course headed north for five miles, wandered west fbr a mile, and then turned south again. The race was getting t
12、ougher. With three miles to go, it was beginning to be real hard work. My lungs were on fire, and legs felt like stone.Blake overtook the boy in front of him. Apparently he knew the boy, for they exchanged a few words. Their brief communication worried me. Runners dont chat during a race unless they
13、 feel really good, and Blake plainly was. There was still a noticeable bounce in his steps, but the springiness I had once possessed was gone.Still, I was close enough to overtake Blake if he was tired, so I didnt give up hope completely. We were approaching a hill, a mile from the finish line, so w
14、hatever happened on the hill would almost certainly determine who crossed it first.As I moved up the hill, my attention wandered for a few minutes. When I looked up, Blake was moving away, first five yards, then ten, then more. There was no hope of catching Blake.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
15、。Suddenly Blake slowed and sat onto the ground painfully.A reporter took a picture of this moving scene and posted it online.答案 Suddenly Blake slowed and sat onio (he ground painfully. Then I hurried up and ran up to him, only to find that his leg was cramping. I tried to help him stand and move for
16、ward, but he refused. He asked me to run after (he others so that I could get the first place. I thought for a second and decided to accompany him for a rest .Then wc ran slowly forward together. Although wc ran slowly and were overtaken by others, I felt relaxed and wc finally crossed the finish li
17、ne together.A reporter took a picture of this moving scene and posted it online. During the time, the photo got a lot of likes.Many strangers sent the emails to praise me about the incident. In fact, I was a little hesitant at the beginning, but the moment 1 decided to help Blake, I felt calm and re
18、laxed. Im happy that I did the right thing.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者参加跑步赛跑，开始跑的很轻松，后来遇到Blake,决定和 他一起跑，但是后来作者想超过他，所以作者紧紧地跟在他后面跑，但是越跑越困难，但是作者仍然没有 放弃希望，继续追赶他。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“突然，布莱克慢了下来，痛苦地坐在地上。”可知，第一段可描写Blake腿抽筋，我决 定帮助他和他一起跑向终点。由第二段首句内容“一位记者拍下了这动人的一幕，并把它传到了网上。”可知，第二段可描写作者受到很 多人的赞扬，非常开心自己做了一件正确的事情。2 .续写线
19、索：帮助陪着一起走一到达终点一受到赞扬感悟.词汇激活行为类.加快：hurry up/ hasten .跑向:run up to /run to.追赶：run after /catch up with情绪类.感到轻松：feel relaxed/ feel comfortable .平静的：calm / peaceful【点睛】高分句型1Then I hurried up and ran up to him, only to find that his leg was cramping.（不定式作结果状语和 that 引导的宾 语从句作find的宾语） 高分句型2Although we ran s
20、lowly and were overtaken by others, I felt relaxed and we finally crossed the finish line together. （由although引导的让步状语从句）6.（2022秋广东佛山高三顺德一中校考阶段练习）阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两 段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I need to do something in my community （社区）in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate fro
21、m high school. Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a soup kitchen, so I did, too. It seemed like a good thing to do.I thought that we would just be passing our dinners to those in need, but I found out we would be doing everything from preparing to serving the dinner. We began preparin
22、g the food, from mixing salad dressing to separating frozen meat. Much still needed to be done before dinner was served, but already outside the building many homeless people were gathering. It wasnt until a couple of hours later that we opened the doors and began serving dinner.As the line of peopl
23、e came toward me, I got a little scared. Td come face to face with the homeless: How should I act? How would they treat me? Would they hate me for having more than they did? While some of the people looked very friendly, some of them looked so dangerous, I didnt have too much time to worry about it.
24、 I was assigned (分配)to serve the salad with the lady next to me. She smiled at me and said if I needed help, shed be right there, which I found quite comforting.I had never seen so many people wanting food. They were of all ages and nationalities. Most of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty.
25、Some looked like (hey had totally given up on life, while others seemed to be making the best of (he situation, smiling and joking. Some were better off than others, but they all needed a good meal and a warm place to eat. It saddened me to think of how many people there were who didnt have a place
26、to call home and the only food they got came from a soup kitchen.注意:1 .续写词数应为150左右;.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile.1 was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way.【答案】参考范文As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and h
27、appiest smile. Nervous as I felt, I did my best to keep myself calm and packed bread, salad and meat to those in need. Upon noticing my hurried and trembling hands, the lady next to me smilingly told me that I should first organize these people to queue up and then hand out salad one by one. I immed
28、iately sprang into action and the passing time witnessed the smooth process of this event. Every one of them including those who looked very dangerous inurmured in a cheering voice “Thank you“ and bowed to me sincerely, which brought warmth straight into my heart. It was not until the night wiped ou
29、t the last ray of sun that we finished our community service for the homeless.I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. I was aware that my time spent at the soup kitchen was really a rewarding, enriching and life-changing experience. Not only did I clear my previous prejudice a
30、gainst those who deserved compassion and support, but also I served the people who were less fortunate than me. In the meanwhile, I suddenly came to realize that not everyone was blessed with fortune and bom to be wealthy, and therefore, we should always keep grateful fbr what life blessed us with.
31、I now felt it a duty to do what I could for them. Since that day, I have spared more lime in offering my service opportunity in dining halls, in the streets, in front of grocery stores.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者为了完成高中毕业所需的社区服务时间，需要在所在的社区 做点什么，作者去了施粥所，作者发现要做的事情很多，作者看到无家可归的人靠近时心里有点害怕，但 是却忙得没有时间去担心这些，想到有那么多人
32、无家可归，他们唯得到的食物来自施粥所，作者感到很 难过。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“当他们朝我走来的时候，我露出了最灿烂、最幸福的笑容”可知，第一段可描写作者是 如何为无家可归的人施粥。由第二段首句内容“我很高兴我用这种方式够得了我的服务时间”可知，第二段可描写作者对这次社区服务 的感悟。2 .续写线索：作者施粥一无家可归的人感激感悟继续这样的行为.词汇激活 行为类 放在：put/place/lay意识到：rcalize/be aware采取行动：spring into action/take action情绪类感激的：grateful/thankful/appreciative高
33、兴的：h叩py/delighled紧张的：nervous/tense【点睛】高分句型 I Upon noticing my hurried and trembling hands, the lady next to me smilingly told me that I should first organize these people to queue up and then hand out salad one by one.（由 that 弓| 导的宾语从句）高分右J 型 2 It was not until the night wiped out the last ray of su
34、n that we finished our community service for the homeless.（运用了强调句型）（2022湖南湖南师大附中校考模拟预测）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的 故事。I was a volunteer for an organisation at the beginning of this year. The organisation is aimed at helping children who suffer from cancer. One day, we were asked to raise money for c
35、ancer research and programme funding at an event.Since my friend Lisa was also a volunteer for the organisation, I went to the event with her. There were many people at the event. After seeing our poster, sonic people came to us and talked with us. But few people donated money. It was a bit hot that
36、 day. Both Lisa and I got really upset.Half an hour later, Lisa started complaining, dont think we can raise much money today?“Dont worry. The event lasts fbr three hours. There is still a lot of time left/ I said, though I also thought poorly of our plan to raise much money that day.While Lisa and
37、I were talking, a litUe boy of about eight years old came to us. He stood in front of our poster and started reading.After a while, he asked, “What is cancer?1 explained what cancer is. Then 1 said, Many people around the world arc suffering from cancer. It can be really dangerous. More research is
38、needed to learn about it so that people with it can suffer less. Thats why wcrc collecting money fbr it.”“Do children suffer from cancer, too? asked the boy.“Yes. Many children suffer from cancer. Some of them may die. They need help,* Lisa said and I nodded.Hearing that, the boy became sad. Then th
39、e boy asked, How much money have you collected?”Both Lisa and I were embarrassed to tell him that we didnt raise much money. At last, we said, “Not much.”The boy looked into our donation container and only saw a few one-dollar and five-dollar bills. The boy said nothing after seeing that and left. T
40、hen some girls came to us and we started talking with them. Neither Lisa nor I thought the boy would return. However, about twenty minutes later, the boy did return.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph I:The boy happily ran to us and ask
41、ed, “Would you take a donation from children?”Paragraph 2:Both Lisa and I were deeply touched.答案 The boy happily ran to us and asked, t4Would you take a donation from children? Lisa and I looked at each other. We couldn,t believe such a little boy would care. Though we didnt believe it, we said “yes
42、”. The boy put his hand in his pocket and took out some five-dollar bills. He said, “1 just asked fbr them from my mother. I really want to help the children suffering from cancer.”Both Lisa and I were deeply touched. We thanked the boy, but he left soon. Looking at his back, both Lisa and I were gr
43、eatly encouraged. We wanted to try harder to raise money. So instead of just standing there, we went to people and told them about our programme. At the end of the day, we raised over three thousand dollars, a lot more than Lisa and I had expected in the beginning.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了今年年初，我是一个组织的志愿者。该
44、组织旨在帮助患有癌症的 儿童。有一天，我们在一个活动中被要求为癌症研究和项目筹资。我没有筹到太多钱，一个男孩过来问了 很多问题，然后走了。我们都认为男孩不会回来。然而，大约二十分钟后，男孩确实回来了的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“男孩高兴地跑过来问我们：“你们愿意接受孩子们的捐赠吗?”“可知，第一段可描写男 孩想通过捐赠帮助患癌症的孩子们。由第二段首句内容“丽莎和我都深受感动。”可知，第二段可描写作者和丽莎深受鼓舞，筹集了更多的资金。2 .续写线索：怀疑一捐赠感动一鼓舞.词汇激活行为类.取出：take out/extract.帮助：help/assisl.离开：leave/de
45、pari情绪类.感谢：thank/show our gratitudc/bc grateful .深受感动：be encouraged/ be moved【点睛】高分句型1. I really want to help the children suffering from cancer.（运用了现在分词作后置定语） 高分句型 2. Looking at his back, both Lisa and I were greatly encouraged.（运用 了现在分词作状语）8. （2022广东肇庆统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整 的短文。I w
46、as sitting at my desk surrounded by New Year gifts, feeling happy that I had managed （o buy some hard to find items. These were for Kids Need More, a charitable organization offering services to socially disadvantaged children. One of its most popular events is the Holiday Cheer Bus. The organizatio
47、n always fills the buses with donated gifts for the families on the Cheer Bus routes. Each bus is manned by a team of volunteers. My family had been volunteers for years. I had a list of the families on our route.Just as I was packing up the items with my husband and my son, I received a call from t
48、he director of the organization. She asked if I could add a family to my route here was a young mother, Leanne, and her son.I called Leanne and told her that a Holiday Cheer Bus would be visiting her family. Leanne seemed really excited and began to cry. I comforted her, “The Holiday Cheer Bus is re
49、ally going to come. Is there something special that your child would like?“My son is three. AU he wants is a pair of Spider-Man snow boots so that he can play outside in the snow. ”I asked about her sons shoe size. She told me the size and I promised I would have Spider-Man snow boots in size 9 for her son.Af