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1、专题01家庭生活与问题闲暇活动（人与自我）2023年高考读后续写话题分类写作技巧与高级词句【读后续写】1 . （2023春江苏常州高三统考开学考试）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。“Wheres the rest of my paper? thundered an angry Papa Bear, storming into the living room. It didnt take him long to find Brother Bear and the sports section.“I just borrowed it. said Brot
2、her. Papa snatched it up and plumped down in his easy chair. Brother wandered into the kitchen looking for sympathy from Mama Bear. Gee J he said, whats eating him?” Your father looks forward to his evening paper,“ Mama said, “and he has a perfect right to be annoyed when half of it is missing 一 and
3、 furthermore, thank you not to refer to your father as him!She stomped out of the kitchen.“Why not? Hes a him, isnt he? Gosh, said Brother, whats eating her?What was “eating Mama was Sister Bear. Sister had been on the phone with Lizy Bruin for almost an hour.“But Mama!” she protested when she was t
4、old to say good-bye.“Dont But Mama me! said Mama Bear. This is not your private phone. Youve had all day to talk to Lizy at school, and youll have all day to talk to her tomorrow. So hang up that phone now!”Sister did as she was told.“Phew!” breathed Brother as he fell into the seat beside Cousin Fr
5、ed on the school bus.“Tough morning? asked Fred.“You better believe it!” said Sister, taking the seat Lizzy had saved for her.The four compared notes on the way to school. The children agreed that while there was no doubt that their parents loved them, they were a little difficult to get along with
6、sometimes. They nagged （唠叨）；they said no a lot; and they never wanted kids to have any fun.“HeyJ said Brother as they got off the bus, what are we going to do for the Parents Night Talent Show?” “Dont know/ said Lizzy. Lets think about it”With the cake placed on the table, Mum came in.【答案】The Big Cl
7、eaning plan began. Joan collected the clothes from sofa and then put them in the water of a basin. After pouring in some washing liquids, she began to wash them by hand. Realizing the clothes were clean enough, Joan gently squeezed water out and hung them to dry. Meanwhile, Mike was busy mopping the
8、 floor back and forth with all his strength, really aware of what hard work his Mum had at home! They had just finished the cleaning when the express boy came to the door.With the cake placed on the table, Mum came in. Happy birthday, Mum!”, they greeted in chorus. Confused and surprised, Mum stood
9、frozen. When Mum realized what had happened, a warm current rose in her heart. Staring at the clean floor and the washed clothes, she could hardly contain her excitement and hugged them tightly, “It is the best birthday gift I have ever had! Mum said emotionally. Just then Joan took out her smartpho
10、ne and took a happy video named Mums Birthday and sent it to Dad.【导语】本文为一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了 Joan在爸爸的提醒下想起来妈妈的生日，于是和弟弟一起为 妈妈准备了生日惊喜。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“大扫除计划开始了。”可知，第一段可描写Joan和弟弟是如何大扫除的。由第二段首句内容“蛋糕放在桌上，妈妈走了进来。”可知，第二段可描写妈妈看到Joan和弟弟大扫除以 及收到蛋糕后的心理感受。2 .续写线索：Joan和弟弟在周末的早晨熟睡Joan接到爸爸的电话，得知今天是妈妈的生日一一Joan决 定和弟弟一起
11、给妈妈一个惊喜Joan和弟弟将家里进行了大扫除妈妈回来后看到这一切很感动，觉得这是最好的生日礼物.词汇激活行为类 开始：begin/start控制：contain/control完成：finish/complete情绪类困惑的：confused/perplexed惊讶的：surprised/astonished/stunned【点睛】【高分句型 1 J Meanwhile, Mike was busy mopping the floor back and forth with all his strength, really aware of what hard work his Mum ha
12、d at home!（本句运用了 what 引导的宾语从句）【高分句型 2 When Mum realized what had happened, a warm current rose in her heart.（本句运用 了 when 弓I 导的状语从句和what引导的宾语从句）（2022秋山东济南高三统考期中）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I live in a small but lovely neighborhood. Our house is neither large nor luxurious, but it has a fairly big g
13、arden. My father loves his garden. He planted some seeds in it and took good care of the plants, watering them, applying fertilizer, weeding and getting rid of bugs. He was never tired of doing all that stuff. But at that time, I didnt understand why working in the dirt excited him so much.Unfortuna
14、tely, in the summer vacation before senior high school, my father was seriously injured in an accident. He had to stay in bed for a while. My mother had several business trips, so she couldnt take care of the garden. I didnt want my father to worry. I said that I would take care of his garden until
15、he recovered. I assumed that the little plants would continue to grow as long as they had water, and luckily it rained fairly often, so I didnt think much about the garden.One Saturday morning, my father said to mg Christine, the vegetables should be about ready to be picked. Lefs have a salad today
16、!” I went out to the garden and was upset to see that many of the lettuce （生菜）leaves and carrots had been half eaten by bugs. There were hundreds of bugs all over them!1 panicked for a moment but then I quietly went to the nearest supermarket to buy some vegetables. When 1 was making the salad, my m
17、other came home and saw the bag from the supermarket in the kitchen. I wasembarrassed and admitted, Dad would like a salad, but the garden is a disaster. I dont want to disappoint him, so I went to the store and bought some vegetables.My mother smiled, saying, “Honey, you know what is the right thin
18、g to do.” Paragraph 1My father seemed very pleased when I took the salad to him.Paragraph 2Feeling guilty, I decided to do the right thing.【答案】One possible version:My father seemed very pleased when I took the salad to him. It looks so good. Your salad makes my mouth water/ Dad couldnt wait to try i
19、t. He forked a piece into his mouth and chewed slowly, his face spreading in a satisfied smile. Giving me a thumbs-up, he said, Little did I know you are so good at gardening. You are a man of your word. My father kept praising me, which made my ears burning. Feeling bad about what I had done, I for
20、ced a bitter smile. How could I cheat my father?Feeling guilty, 1 decided to do the right thing. With tears welling up in my eyes, I told my father I didnt live up to his expectations and that the garden was a mess. To my surprise, instead of scolding me, my father patted me on the shoulder gently a
21、nd told me to turn to him if I needed any help. Under his guidance, I learned to apply fertilizer, weed and remove bugs. The vegetables became better and better day by day, and so did my father. I began to enjoy taking care of vegetables and I finally understood my father pleasure of working in the
22、dirt.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者爸爸一直悉心照料着花园，可有一天受伤之后就交给作者来 照料，但作者却没有花心思去做好，结果花园里的蔬菜都被虫糟蹋了。有一天作者父亲想吃自己蔬菜做出 的沙拉，作者怕爸爸伤心，于是偷偷去商店买了蔬菜，后来被妈妈发现了。【详解】1 .段落续写：由续写第一段首句“当我把沙拉递给父亲时，父亲似乎很高兴”可以预测续写第一段主要内容：爸爸品尝沙 拉并表扬“我”将菜园照顾地很好，而“我”却非常尴尬和羞愧。（学生也有可能在第一段续写父亲发现了端倪, 揭穿了“我“，这样第二段的right thing就是“我”决定将功补过，在菜园辛勤劳作，只要能自圆其说也可以。）
23、由第二段首句“感到内疚，我决定做正确的事。”可以预测：“我”向爸爸坦白了一切，而爸爸鼓励“我”将功 补过。“我”学着父亲的样子在菜园劳作，同时也在这次经历中获得成长。2 .续写线索：作者父亲品尝沙拉觉得沙拉很好并表扬作者作者内心挣扎告诉父亲真相原谅 作者并为作者提供帮助爱上照顾花园中蔬菜.词汇激活行为类.表扬：praise/speak highly of .强颜欢笑：forced a bitter smile /force a smiling face.欺骗：cheat / deceive/trick情绪类.满意的：satisfied /pleased/ content .让我惊讶：to my
24、 surprise/to my amazement/to my astonishment【点睛】高分句型 lMy father kept praising me, which made my ears burning.（运用了 which 弓 |导的非限制 性定语从句）高分句型 2Feeling bad about what I had done, I forced a bitter smile.（运用 了 what 引导的宾语从句）6. （2023秋河北石家庄高三校联考期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。Late one evening, my
25、constant yawns（呵欠）convinced me to retire for the night. I put on a comfortable cotton gown, turned the lights low, and crawled into bed between the cool but comfortable sheets. To ensure a good nighfs rest, I called out towards the kitchen to my smart speaker, Alexa, play sounds to sleep by. As I ga
26、thered my cozy sheet up under my chin, T felt at peace with my cat Bella snuggled up（依偎）to me.During the night, a heavy object landed on my stomach, causing me to scream and sit up, only to discover that it was Bella. She had a habit of waking me up to get her a snack, but the hands on the clock sai
27、d 3:00 am, and I was annoyed that she had interrupted a happy dream. I fell back against the pillow and promised Id feed her in the morning. That wasnt acceptable to her, so she continued to walk on top of me while pressing her paws into my body.Because that proved to be unsuccessful, she jumped ove
28、r to the bedside table and deliberately used her paw to knock things on the floor, one at a time, to keep me from going back to sleep. Her efforts paid off as I looked over in the dark room and knew the smug（沾沾自喜的）look on her face conveyed a serious demand. Get up, human. Im ready for my nightly tre
29、at.Knowing she would keep disturbing me until she got her snack, I took a few minutes to focus my eyes and heard what sounded like running water or someone pressure-washing a wall. I couldnt imagine our apartment staff doing maintenance in the middle of the night, so I assumed T had turned off the w
30、ater tap. I would regret the large water bill it would bring about, so I unwillingly got up and went into the kitchen. I found nothing out of the ordinary so I continued to search with Bella following me. T checked the bathroom, where I found no running water. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。S
31、ince the sound was still evident, I realized the seriousness of the situation.I didnt see water on the wall, so I thought it wasnt an emergency.【答案】参考范文：Since the sound was still evident,! realized the seriousness of the situation. I thought it necessary to solve the mystery. I returned to the kitch
32、en, where the disturbance was more obvious and stood like a statue trying to identify the sound. Despite Bellas loud yowl, I was still able to hear the strange noise, which seemed to come from inside the wall between my apartment and the unit next door. I could feel my muscles tense up and my hands
33、shake because I was now convinced a pipe had burst, and water could be flooding the neighboring apartment.I didnt see water on the wall, so I thought it wasnt an emergency. However, one thing I had done was drag someone out of bed in the middle of the night. I walked to the end of the kitchen bar cl
34、osest to the wall in question,picked up my phone, and placed my fumbling fingers on the keypad. Instantly, the reality of what was happening became clear to me, and I joyfully identified the source of the mysterious noise. All I had to do to settle the entire mystery was to say angrily, Alexa, shut
35、up!”【导语】这是一篇记叙文。本文以人物角色生活细节展开，描述了作者在睡梦中被自家的猫惊醒，本想继 续入睡，但几次三番又被它吵醒，只能起身为它喂食。就在这时，作者听到了奇怪的响动，但是转了一圈 也没找到声音是哪儿传出来的。最后经过细致“勘察现场”，终于发现是自己设定的智能扬声器发出的声音。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“因为那个声音仍然很明显，我意识到了情况的严重性。”可知，第一段可描写作者认真 搜寻响声处的行动。由第二段首句内容“我没有看到水溅到墙上，所以判断应该不是紧急事件。可知，第二段可以描写作者发 现某个非紧急状况的故障问题后，继续细致分析调查响声的源头。2 .续写线索：重
36、视情况返回厨房发现水管爆裂分析情况调查找到声源.词汇激活 行为类.找到;发现：identify/spot.相信：be convinced/believe/figure .放置：place/put/rest 情绪类.生气地:angrily/wildly.兴奋地:joyfully/excitedly【点睛】高分句型 1 . I returned to the kitchen, where the disturbance was more obvious and stood like a statue trying to identify the sound.（由where引导的非限定性定语从句）高
37、分句型 2. Despite Bellas loud yowl, I was still able to hear the strange noise, which seemed to come from inside the wall between my apartment and the unit next door.（由 which 引导的非限定性定语从句） 高分句型 3. Instantly, the reality of what was happening became clear to me, and I identified the source of the mysteri
38、ous noise.（由what引导的宾语从句）7. （2022秋重庆高三重庆巴蜀中学校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Jordi! Wake up! Dads voice calls from the hallway, and I sit up quickly. Today is the day! The day that I will finally be a casteller -a castle builder.My city is hosting todays competition. Never before have I
39、been part of the tower. It is so high. And it sometimes falls. I was hesitant to be up there. Today, for the first time in a competition, I will help build the tower !In town, I see that the center of the square is already packed with people. While I wait for our turn to compete, my friend Tomeu com
40、es to stand with me.What if Im not ready for this, Tomeu?” I ask. Tomeus dark eyes sparkle as he smiles at me. We are never ready, Jordi. None of us who compete knows for sure how it will go. He gestures toward the tower going up in front of us. Just like these people,you must have faith in the othe
41、rs. You must trust those below who lift you up, and you must trust yourself. Tomeu pats me on the shoulder. Have focus. Have fhith.I nod to show that I understand. I will do my best to follow his suggestions. Soon,too soon,it is our turn.Dad and several strongest men make the base for our tower. Fou
42、r smaller men create a strong second level. Our tower is growing taller and taller. I watch as Mom climbs nimbly（敏捷士也）up. She and my aunt form the fifth level.“Then suddenly it is my turn. Tomeu and I will make up the sixth level. Each of the castellers wears a waist belt, and I grip the belts with
43、my bare toes as I climb up. I pass the first two levels without difficulty,but as I go higher,the tower feels less steady. By the time I reach the fifth level,nerves make my hands sweat and my knees tremble,for I am very high off the ground.注意:1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I place my foot into
44、 Moms waist belt and try to stand, but it slips off.Tomeu and I grasp each others arms, and our tower is complete.【答案】I place my foot into Moms waist belt and try to stand, but it slips off. Fortunately, Mom grasps me by the wrist before I lose my balance and tumble backwards. My heart leaps into my
45、 throat. Panic is rippling through me so fiercely that my whole body shivers. Tranquil. Easy. Mom whispers soothingly. I take a deep breath to calm myself. I cannot let my team down. Meanwhile, Tomeu9s words echo in my mind: Have focus. Have faith.I again place my foot into Moms belt. This time, my
46、toes grip firmly. Slowly but steadily, I step up and onto her shoulders. Opposite me, Tomeu has also made it to the top.Tomeu and I grasp each others arms, and our tower is complete. I breathe a sigh of relief. It is not until this moment that I truly feel the charm of castle building. I am no longe
47、r frightened. Beneath me, the base feels strong, and my heart beats steady in my chest. Far below, I can hear the crowds cheering. I smile across at Tomeu. Whether or not we win this competition, I know we have done what we set out to do. Our team has worked together. With faith in each other and wi
48、th focus on the task, we have built our castle. Today, I am a casteller!【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，文章讲述了作者和他的家人、朋友一起参加他们所在的城市举办的建塔 比赛，凭着对彼此的信任和对任务的专注，经过一系列紧张刺激的过程，有惊无险地，他们成功了。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我把脚放进妈妈的腰带里，想站起来，但腰带滑脱了。”可知，第一段内容可描写在出 现状况之后，因为母亲的帮助和鼓励，作者重新调整了心态，最后爬了上去。由第二段首句内容“Tomeu和我互相拥抱，我们的塔完成了。”可知，第二段可描写完成建塔之后，作者 内心的情感和由这个活动而引发的感悟。2 .续写线索：陪走路一帮助一感谢一陪回家一拒绝一感悟.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）行为类滑落：slip off/ slide off深吸一 口气：take a deep breath / draw a deep breath情绪类不再害怕：no longer frightened / no longer afraid跳进喉咙，紧张：leap into my throat/feel nervous/feel uptight【点睛】高分句型 1 Tt is not until this moment that I