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1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习1给妈妈的生日礼物题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文It was the old ladys birthday.She got up early to be ready for the postman.Today she was sure there would be something.Myra wouldnt forget her mothers birthday,even if she seldom wrote at other times.Of course Myra was busy.Her husband had bee
2、n made Mayor,and Myra herself had got a medal for her work for the aged.The old lady was proud of Myra,but Enid was the daughter she loved.Enid had never married,but had seemed pleased to live with her mother,and worked in a primary school around the corner.One evening,however,Enid said,“Ive arrange
3、d for Mrs.Morrison to look after you for a few days,Mother.Tomorrow I have to go into hospitaljust a minor operation,Ill soon be home.”In the morning she went,but never came backshe died on the operating table.Myra came to the funeral(葬礼),and in her efficient way arranged for Mrs.Morrison to come in
4、 and light the fire and give the old lady her breakfast.That was two years ago,and since then Myra had been to see her mother three times,but her husband never.4续写原文The old lady was eighty today.She had put on her best dress.Perhapsperhaps Myra might come.After all,eighty was a special birthday.Even
5、 if Myra did not come,she would send a present,for example something like a parcel.The old lady was sure of that.Two spots of color brightened her cheeks.She was excitedlike a child.She would enjoy her day.Yesterday Mrs.Morrison had given the flat an extra clean,and today she had brought a card and
6、a bunch of marigolds when she came to do the breakfast.The neighbor downstairs had made a cake for her.The little boy upstairs,Johnnie,had been up with a packet of mints(薄荷糖),saying he wouldnt go out to play until the post had come.“I guess youll get lots and lots of lovely presents,”he added,“I did
7、 last week when I was six.”5段首句Paragraph 1:She stood by the window,watching.Paragraph 2:Almost reluctantly she tore the envelope open.6Part 2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写建议第一段：她站在窗边，望着。金色的阳光在她的白发上舞动，约翰尼的笑声飘荡在空
8、中。她凝视着路的尽头，希望邮递员早点来，仿佛她已经在那儿站了一个世纪。突然，她看到了邮递员，她眼中闪烁着喜悦的光芒。紧接着传来了敲门声。但当邮递员只给了她一个信封时，她的喜悦很快就消失了。“没有包裹？或者其他什么？”“没有，夫人。祝你度过美好的一天！再见。”她脸上逐渐露出失望的神色。第二段：她几乎不情愿地撕开了信封。一张薄纸掉了下来，上面只有一行字：“妈妈，下楼来，我有一个生日礼物送给你。”又困惑又期待，她下了楼。当她看到她可爱的女儿迈拉正站在花园里对她微笑时，她的目光里充满了喜悦。当迈拉跑向她并紧紧抱住她时，她的泪水流了下来。“妈妈，你喜欢你的礼物吗？”“当然，我爱你。”她回答道，带着又满足
9、又甜蜜的笑容。9Part 3范文呈现10范文呈现She stood by the window,watching.Golden sunlight danced in her white hair and Johnnies laughter floated in the air.She stared at the end of the road,hoping the postman would come earlier.It seemed as if she had been standing there for a century.Suddenly,a spark of delight gli
10、ttered in her eyes when she caught sight of the postman.Then came the knock.But soon her delight faded away when the postman only gave her an envelope.“No parcel?Or anything else?”“No,madam.Have a nice day!Bye.”Disappointment gradually covered her face.11范文呈现Almost reluctantly she tore the envelope
11、open.A thin paper fell down and there was only a single line,“Mom,go downstairs.I have a birthday gift for you.”With a mixture of confusion and expectation,she went downstairs.Her eyes lit up with pleasure the moment she saw in her garden stood her lovely daughter,Myra,smiling at her.Tears rolled down when Myra ran towards her and hugged her tightly.“Mum,do you love your present?”“Of course,I love you.”she replied with a satisfied and sweet smile.12Part 4努力方向13高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语14定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）15低头是题海，抬头是前途。终将上岸，阳光万里!祝大家前程似锦!