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1、Bad sample卷面不整洁;涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得1 10 0分samples of student work第1页/共49页progresswellwidenedare词汇有错误;卷面有涂改;得1919分.samples of student workroadsMy hometown is becoming more and more第2页/共49页词汇,句型,语法多样化1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用高级的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用句子间的连接成分，使结构紧凑4.书面干净整洁要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？第3页/共49页技巧2.使用较高级的词汇4.使用恰当的连接词词汇是衡量
2、英语水平的词汇是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。一个重要标志。生动活泼，语言简洁生动活泼，语言简洁能使文章上下衔接自能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧3.使用较丰富的句式1.漂亮的书写形象面子工程的作用形象面子工程的作用第4页/共49页漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面第5页/共49页Which composition feels more attractive,why?第6页/共49页影响给分的因素之二：文中所采用的语言材料人靠衣装，文靠词装A.词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；第7页/共49页1.Becausetheweathe
3、rwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.(幸亏)2.Ithinkyoudbetteraskwhatyoudontunderstand.3.Luxunisnotonlyawriter,butalsoathinker.Thanksto the good weather,ourjourneywascomfortable.I.怎样使用较高级的词汇怎样使用较高级的词汇AsfarasImconcerned,youdbetteraskwhatyoudontunderstand.Thereisnodoubtthat Lu xun is not only a writer,but a
4、lso a thinker.感情细腻，表现恰当第8页/共49页B B.句型句型结构运用灵活多变结构运用灵活多变,增加文增加文章的魅力章的魅力第9页/共49页1)Inordertomyparents,Ishouldmakefulluseofeveryminutetostudywhatmyteachertaught.2)我很乐意和你分享我是怎样学英语的我很乐意和你分享我是怎样学英语的ImgladtosharewithyouhowIlearnEnglish.Imgladtosharewithyoutheway_IlearnEnglish*语法，句法高分tipsinwhich 定语从句 In orde
5、r to make my parents happy 宾语从句第10页/共49页E.恰当使用特殊句式，增强语句表现力句，强调句，倒装句型，省略句，感叹句等将下列句子转换：1.IdidntrealizethemistakeuntilIgrowup.(强调句）2.Wecanmakegreatachievementsonlybyworkinghard.（倒装句）3.Lastbutnotleast,enjoyingsomeEnglishwebsitesishelpfultous.(it)ItwasnotuntilIgrowupthatIrealizedthemistakeOnlybyworkingha
6、rdcanwemakegreatachievementsLastbutnotleast,itishelpfultoenjoysomeEnglishwebsites.第11页/共49页影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅 上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词第12页/共49页and,also,besides,morever,whats more furthermore,in addition 1.1.表递进表递进.表转折表转折.表因果表因果.表目的表目的.表总结表总结but,however,on the contrary,on the other hand,in spite of,despite
7、 because,since,therefore,so,thus,because,since,therefore,so,thus,as a result/consequence,on account of.in order that,so that,for the purpose of.in brief,in short,in a word,in conclusion,on the whole.As far as I m concerned,第13页/共49页第14页/共49页If you are the teacher 假定你是李华假定你是李华,你的英国朋友你的英国朋友PeterPeter来
8、信询问你的来信询问你的英语学习情况并希望你简单介绍自己家乡，请你根据英语学习情况并希望你简单介绍自己家乡，请你根据下列要点写回信。下列要点写回信。要点要点:1.1.我学英语已经六年了，在老师和同学们的帮助下我学英语已经六年了，在老师和同学们的帮助下取得了一些进步；取得了一些进步；2.2.但是总觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯但是总觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯用法；用法；3.3.今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语，争取能用今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语，争取能用流利的英语和你写信；流利的英语和你写信；4.4.我的家乡发生很大的变化，盖起了许多高楼，拓我的家乡发生很大的变化，盖起了许多
9、高楼，拓宽了道路，变得越来越漂亮和现代化；宽了道路，变得越来越漂亮和现代化；5.5.如果有时间可以到中国来，我会带领你参观我的如果有时间可以到中国来，我会带领你参观我的家乡。家乡。第15页/共49页最近在武安市高三年级学生中就市政府“拆违”展开了一场讨论，请你就下表提供的信息给市长写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。约70的学生认为：1应该拆除违法搭建；2违法建筑占用绿化带并常堵塞交通；3大多数违法建筑陈旧过时，既破坏城市的美，又存在安全隐患。约30的学生认为：1不宜全部拆除；2许多违法建筑系下岗职工所建，以便经营一些小生意以养家糊口；3拆违会使一部分人失去谋生手段。WritingWriting第1
10、6页/共49页注意：1词数：100左右(不包括已给出部分)；2文章应包括题中所给的主要信息。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头与结尾已为你写好。参考词汇：绿化带：greenbelt 安全隐患：hidden dangerDear Mayor,I m a student of Senior Three.Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether the city government should demolish illegal buildings.Opinions between us are divi
11、ded._ Best wishes第17页/共49页theillegalbuildingstakenupblockedthetrafficoutofdatebreaksthebeautyofthecityexistssomehiddendangersBrainstormingSupport:Notsupport:outofjobrunsomesmallbusinessMakealiving/supportonesfamilypulldownthesebuildings第18页/共49页影响书面表达得分的因素：影响书面表达得分的因素：“大错误大错误”包括时态错误、句子结构错误、中包括时态错误、句
12、子结构错误、中式英语等，如：式英语等，如：1.My hometown had big change,build many houses,2.My hometown has great changes.语言表达出现“大错误”及“小错误”Great changes had taken place in my hometown there.For example,many new houses had been built and roads had been widened.第19页/共49页3.If you get to China that have time,me with you look
13、 my hometown.4.I will welcome to you.“小错误小错误”主要是反应在个别单词拼写错误、主要是反应在个别单词拼写错误、冠词介词使用不准确等方面冠词介词使用不准确等方面,如：如：Under my teacher and classmates all help to me,.I hope youl l get a chance to come to China and Ill show you around my hometown if you are free.Welcome to China.With the help of my teachers and cl
14、assmates,第20页/共49页没有使用高级词汇和复杂句1.I will visit my hometown with you.2.If you have time,I will take you to travel around my hometown.I will show you around my hometown if you are free.第21页/共49页书写是否工整清晰也会影响答卷得分。卷面不整洁，涂改多；大小写;标点符号;书写不清，得分会很低！第22页/共49页 审题不认真，要点有所遗漏1.1.彻底理解题意，看准答题要求（包括字数要求）。2.2.把内容要点在稿纸上列成
15、提纲。3.3.连词成句，连句成文。4.4.成文后认真检查，确信无一遗漏。注意：第23页/共49页 完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构和词汇方面有些错误，但语法结构和词汇方面有些错误，但 为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。使全文结构紧凑。书面表达评分最高标准书面表达评分最高标准（第五档（第五档 21-2521-25分
16、）分）第24页/共49页Onepossibleversion:June8,2008DearPeter,Imverygladtoreceiveyourletter.IwilltellyousomethingaboutmyEnglishstudyandhometown.ItissixyearssinceIbegantolearnEnglish.Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,IhavemadesomeprogressinEnglish.HoweverIstillfindEnglishhardtolearn,suchassomedifficultidioms
17、whichmademeconfused.Nomatterhowharditis,Ihavemadeupmymindtomasterthisusefullanguagebymyhardwork.第25页/共49页NotlongagoIreturnedtomyhometownandfoundgreatchangeshadtakenplacethere.Manynewhouseshadbeenbuiltandroadshadbeenwidened.Myhometownisgettingmodernandmoreandmorebeautiful.Ihopeifyouhaveachancetocomet
18、oChinaandIllshowyouaroundmyhometownwhenyouareonleave.Bestwishes,LiHua第26页/共49页My Suggestions:1.beautiful words and expressions2.proper sentence structures3.connections between sentences4.proper complex sentences5.writing models第27页/共49页Six steps for writing(写作六步骤）1.Cross-question(审题)Main idea Style
19、Verb tense Person2.Seize the major points/key words(抓要点)3.Arrangement(布局)！4.Sentences connection(连句)Words/phrases Sentences6.Error correcting (查错改错)5.Express your opinion(发表观点）Conjunctions/conjunctive adverbssentencespassage第28页/共49页Dear SmithLi HuaYours2222 I was so pleased to hear from you and am
20、writing to tell you something about my school.Youre right.Quite a few changes have taken place in our school.On one side of the road is a new teaching building;On the other side,where the playground used to be,stands another new building-our library.The playground is now in front of the school.We ha
21、ve also planted a lot of trees in and round the school.I hope that you will be able to return and see the changes for yourself someday.Best wishes,第29页/共49页 注意：1.1.词数100100左右；2.2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.3.开头语已为你写好。June 8,2008 Dear Peter,Im very glad to receive your letter.I will tell you something about my
22、 English study and hometown.第30页/共49页字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。samples of student work第31页/共49页read and writefind it hard fluent English to write Great changes roads had taken place in my hometownbuildingswidenedIt will be wonderful when you come to China if you are freeshow you aroundI will be glad to语言不
23、地道;中文式思维;语言错误较多，得分1313分samples of student work第32页/共49页learnof the teachers and myprogressread and writeit hard to learnhard work.write letters in fluent Englishfoundhad becomeWelcome to China if you have timeshow you around 语言素质 较好;基本功不差;语句仍有毛病；得15分.samples of student work第33页/共49页PracticeFind some
24、 similar words or phrases of the followings1.good2.think3.clever perfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent in ones opinion/viewhold the view that it is widely shared that wise bright smart intelligent cute第34页/共49页III.常用的常用的连接词连接词1.表示递进表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有：2.表示
25、转折关系表示转折关系但是，然而，相反：whats more;besides;also;moreover;in addition but;however;yet;instead;on the other hand;on the contrary.第35页/共49页3.表示因果关系表示因果关系因为，因此，所以:4.表示条件关系表示条件关系如果，只要:除非:否则:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;as a result;if;on condition(that);as long asunless or else第36页/共49页5.表示时间关系表示时间关系
26、当的时候:when;while在之后:after在之前:before直到:until直到才:notuntil一就:assoonas后来，然后:later;afterwards不久:soon近来:lately;recently自从:since从那时起:fromthenon第37页/共49页6.表示特定的顺序关系表示特定的顺序关系首先:firstly最主要的:aboveall其次:secondly然后:then;next最后:finally;intheend7.换一种方法表述换一种方法表述换句话说:inotherwords;thatistosay;第38页/共49页8.进行举例说明进行举例说明例如
27、，比如:9.用于陈述事实用于陈述事实for instance;for example;like;such as that is to say,namely,actually,and so on,believe it or not,to tell you the truth,for this reason实际上:in fact;actually;as a matter of fact跟你说实话:to tell you the truth第39页/共49页10.对一个话题进行总结对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总的来说:on the whole;in short;all in all;in gener
28、al;in a word,finally,in conclusion,generally speaking,as you know,in the end,其它常用到的副词 therefore;otherwise;finally;furthermore;thus;namely;although;afterwards;personally;第40页/共49页12.表示结果：thus,therefore,so,asaresult,seeingthat,luckily,unfortunately13.表示强调：aboveall,indeed,surely,certainly,ofcourse,afte
29、rall,withoutanydelay,atleast,atmost,mostimportant,undoubtedly第41页/共49页6.表示特定的顺序关系表示特定的顺序关系首先:firstly最主要的:aboveall其次:secondly然后:then;next最后:finally;intheend7.换一种方法表述换一种方法表述换句话说:inotherwords;thatistosay;第42页/共49页II.II.丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter!Itwasth
30、isyoungboywhohelpedtheoldgranny.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.1.感叹句2.强调句3.倒装句4.省略句第43页/共49页I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.Lets come to the main teaching building,at the back of which stands the school library.Thats
31、what I should do.Time passed quickly before we knew it.5、with短语6、定语从句7、各种名词性从句8、各种状语从句第44页/共49页联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：100-120之间。Pract
32、iceLadiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemos
33、tbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.第45页/共49页Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peo
34、pleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Thisvillageisa small one with/which hasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.However,ithaschangedalotsince1978 and has been developing very fast.Peopleherelive a much better lifethanbefore.书面表达：书面表达：Nowitistakingonanewlook.第46页/共49页I
35、nthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmalland most children couldnt afford to go to school.Butnowithasbeenrebuiltand which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful oneinthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Whats more,theyenjoyfreeeducation.May you enjoy your stay herethenewlybuiltteachingbuilding/May you have a pleasant time here!Thankyou.第47页/共49页第48页/共49页感谢您的观看！第49页/共49页