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1、看图作文写作技巧看图作文的关键:1.看懂图片,以防跑题。看懂图片,以防跑题。2.确定短文的时态和人称。确定短文的时态和人称。3.审审-译译-改改-誊誊4.适当添加评论等内容适当添加评论等内容第1页/共20页2011年北京高考第2页/共20页第3页/共20页假设你是你是李华,本周你们正在学习Life in the Future单元。白天,你们进行了讨论;夜晚,你梦见乘坐时间飞船到3012年的学校参观。请根据下面五幅图,写一篇日记。第4页/共20页时态和人称人称:一人称时态:本周学习(现在时)对梦中的描述(过去式)第5页/共20页本周正在学习Life in the Future白天进行了讨论We
2、are learning Life in the Future this week.We have learned Life in the Future.We have been learning Life in the Future this week.We had a discussion about it.第6页/共20页本周正在学习Life in the Future白天进行了讨论We learn Life in the Future this week.We learned Life in the Future this week.We have a dicussion about
3、it.同学们存在的问题第7页/共20页晚上,我梦见乘坐时间飞船到3012年的学校参观At night,I dreamed that I visited a school in 3012 by a time craft through the time tunnel.I visited the school and talked with the students at that time.在未来学校中,我参观了学校和学生进行交谈第8页/共20页晚上,我梦见乘坐时间飞船到3012年的学校参观At night,I dreamed that I went to the year 3012.I too
4、k a time craft and throughed a time tunnel.I visited a future school.在未来学校中,我参观了学校和学生进行交谈I visited the school and talked with the students at that time.To my great surprise,there was no classroom in the future school.Students all learn the knowledge by looking at the computers.同学们存在的问题第9页/共20页当我要飞回2
5、012年的时候,我的时间飞船的警报器响了,我感觉非常害怕After the visit,I was on my way back to the year 2012.My alarm on the craft sounded to warn that there was something wrong with the craft.I was shocked.第10页/共20页当我要飞回2012年的时候,我的时间飞船的警报器响了,我感觉非常害怕After visited,I was on my way back to the year 2012.Suddenly,the alarm on the
6、 craft begin ring/shout.It seemed something wrong.That is something wrong.Something seemed to be wrong.There must be something wrong.The time crafted shoked.同学们存在的问题第11页/共20页我吓得一下子惊醒,原来是起床的时候了Just at that time,I woke up.The alarm was still ringing.It was the alarm clock that woke me up.It was time t
7、o get up.第12页/共20页一,简单句与复合句并用,长短句结合 二,简单句合并为复合句 三,把复合句改为简单句把从句改为分词短语把从句改为介词短语 四,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.五,注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。六.适当的联想与发挥。第13页/共20页非谓语动词从句特殊句式注意:不能不用,且不能少用,但也不能滥用。使用高级句式定语从句,状语从句,名词性从句(主、宾、表、同位语从句)倒装句,感叹句,强调句,虚拟语气第14页/共20页We have been learning Life in the Future this
8、week.We had a discussion about it.This week,we have been learning Life in the Future.In this unit,we have not only learned a lot about our future,but we discussed about this topic as well.At night,I dreamed that I visited a school in 3012 by a time craft through the time tunnel.I visited the school
9、and talked with the students at that time.At night,I had an interesting dream in which I travelled through the time tunnel to the year of 3012 by time craft.I visited the school and had a nice talk with the students there.第15页/共20页After the visit,I was on my way back to the year 2012.My alarm on the
10、 craft sounded to warn that there was something wrong with the craft.I was shocked.After the visit,I was on my way back to the year 2012 when my alarm on the craft sounded to warn that there was something wrong with the craft.I was shocked.第16页/共20页Just at that time,I woke up.The alarm was still rin
11、ging.It was the alarm clock that woke me up.It was time to get up.Shocked,I woke up suddenly.However,the alarm in the time craft was still ringing!Looking around,I realized it was the alarm clock that warned that it was time to get up.What a relief!It was only a dream!.that reminded me of the time t
12、o get up.第17页/共20页Sept 21,2012 Friday Fine This week,we have been learning Life in the Future.In this unit,we have not only learned a lot about our future,but we discussed about this topic as well.At night,I had an interesting dream in which I travelled through the time tunnel to the year of 3012 by
13、 time craft.I visited the school and had a nice talk with the students there.After the visit,I was on my way back to the year 2012 when my alarm on the craft sounded to warn that there was something wrong with the craft.Shocked,I woke up suddenly.However,the alarm in the time craft was still ringing!Looking around,I realized it was the alarm clock which reminded me of the time to get up.What a relief!It was only a dream!第18页/共20页总结:1.审题一定要仔细2.要按要求写作(guided writing,directions)3.文章中描写部分要注意“人称,时态”的统一4.长短句结合,合理使用高级句式5.不要盲目套用信件等应用文的模式6.功夫下在平时。夯实基础,注重积累好词好句第19页/共20页感谢您的观看!第20页/共20页