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1、学生：老师，我请假。老师：why?学生：我晕课，尤其是写作课，上作文课我就头疼。Bad sample卷面不整洁;涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得 10分samples of student workprogresswellwidenedare词汇有错误;卷面有涂改;得19分.samples of student workroadsMy hometown is becoming more and more词汇,句型,语法多样化1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用高级的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用句子间的连接成分，使结构紧凑4.书面干净整洁要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？技 巧2.使用较高级的词汇4.使
2、用恰当的连接词词汇是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。生动活泼，语言简洁能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧3.使用较丰富的句式1.漂亮的书写形象面子工程的作用漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面Which composition feels more attractive,why?影响给分的因素之二：文中所采用的语言材料人靠衣装，文靠词装A.词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；1.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.(幸亏)2.Ithinkyoudbetteraskwhatyoudon
3、tunderstand.3.Luxunisnotonlyawriter,butalsoathinker.Thanksto the good weather,ourjourneywascomfortable.I.怎样使用较高级的词汇AsfarasImconcerned,youdbetteraskwhatyoudontunderstand.Thereisnodoubtthat Lu xun is not only a writer,but also a thinker.感情细腻，表现恰当B.句型结构运用灵活多变,增加文章的魅力1)Inordertomyparents,Ishouldmakefull
4、useofeveryminutetostudywhatmyteachertaught.2)我很乐意和你分享我是怎样学英语的ImgladtosharewithyouhowIlearnEnglish.Imgladtosharewithyoutheway_IlearnEnglish*语法，句法高分tipsinwhich 定语从句 In order to make my parents happy 宾语从句E.恰当使用特殊句式，增强语句表现力句，强调句，倒装句型，省略句，感叹句等将下列句子转换：1.IdidntrealizethemistakeuntilIgrowup.(强调句）2.Wecanmake
5、greatachievementsonlybyworkinghard.（倒装句）3.Lastbutnotleast,enjoyingsomeEnglishwebsitesishelpfultous.(it)ItwasnotuntilIgrowupthatIrealizedthemistake OnlybyworkinghardcanwemakegreatachievementsLastbutnotleast,itishelpfultoenjoysomeEnglishwebsites.影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅 上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词and,also,besides,mo
6、rever,whats more furthermore,in addition1.表递进.表转折.表因果.表目的.表总结but,however,on the contrary,on the other hand,in spite of,despite because,since,therefore,so,thus,as a result/consequence,on account of.in order that,so that,for the purpose of.in brief,in short,in a word,in conclusion,on the whole.As far
7、as Im concerned,If you are the teacher 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你的英语学习情况并希望你简单介绍自己家乡，请你根据下列要点写回信。要点:1.我学英语已经六年了，在老师和同学们的帮助下取得了一些进步；2.但是总觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯用法；3.今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语，争取能用流利的英语和你写信；4.我的家乡发生很大的变化，盖起了许多高楼，拓宽了道路，变得越来越漂亮和现代化；5.如果有时间可以到中国来，我会带领你参观我的家乡。最近在武安市高三年级学生中就市政府“拆违”展开了一场讨论，请你就下表提供的信息给市长写一封信，
8、客观地介绍讨论情况。约70的学生认为：1应该拆除违法搭建；2违法建筑占用绿化带并常堵塞交通；3大多数违法建筑陈旧过时，既破坏城市的美，又存在安全隐患。约30的学生认为：1不宜全部拆除；2许多违法建筑系下岗职工所建，以便经营一些小生意以养家糊口；3拆违会使一部分人失去谋生手段。Writing注意：1词数：100左右(不包括已给出部分)；2文章应包括题中所给的主要信息。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头与结尾已为你写好。参考词汇：绿化带：greenbelt 安全隐患：hidden dangerDear Mayor,I m a student of Senior Three.Im writing
9、to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether the city government should demolish illegal buildings.Opinions between us are divided._ Best wishestheillegalbuildingstakenupblockedthetrafficoutofdatebreaksthebeautyofthecityexistssomehiddendangersBrainstorming Support:Notsupport:outofjob runs
10、omesmallbusiness Makealiving/supportonesfamily pulldownthesebuildings影响书面表达得分的因素：“大错误”包括时态错误、句子结构错误、中式英语等，如：1.My hometown had big change,build many houses,2.My hometown has great changes.语言表达出现“大错误”及“小错误”Great changes had taken place in my hometown there.For example,many new houses had been built an
11、d roads had been widened.3.If you get to China that have time,me with you look my hometown.4.I will welcome to you.“小错误”主要是反应在个别单词拼写错误、冠词介词使用不准确等方面,如：Under my teacher and classmates all help to me,.I hope youl l get a chance to come to China and Ill show you around my hometown if you are free.Welcom
12、e to China.With the help of my teachers and classmates,没有使用高级词汇和复杂句1.I will visit my hometown with you.2.If you have time,I will take you to travel around my hometown.I will show you around my hometown if you are free.书写是否工整清晰也会影响答卷得分。卷面不整洁，涂改多；大小写;标点符号;书写不清，得分会很低！审题不认真，要点有所遗漏1.彻底理解题意，看准答题要求（包括字数要求）
13、。2.把内容要点在稿纸上列成提纲。3.连词成句，连句成文。4.成文后认真检查，确信无一遗漏。注意：完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构和词汇方面有些错误，但 为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。书面表达评分最高标准（第五档 21-25分）Onepossibleversion:June8,2008DearPeter,Imverygladtoreceiveyourletter.IwilltellyousomethingaboutmyEnglishstudyandhometown.It
14、issixyearssinceIbegantolearnEnglish.Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,IhavemadesomeprogressinEnglish.HoweverIstillfindEnglishhardtolearn,suchassomedifficultidiomswhichmademeconfused.Nomatterhowharditis,Ihavemadeupmymindtomasterthisusefullanguagebymyhardwork.NotlongagoIreturnedtomyhometownandfound
15、greatchangeshadtakenplacethere.Manynewhouseshadbeenbuiltandroadshadbeenwidened.Myhometownisgettingmodernandmoreandmorebeautiful.IhopeifyouhaveachancetocometoChinaandIllshowyouaroundmyhometownwhenyouareonleave.Bestwishes,LiHuaMy Suggestions:1.beautiful words and expressions 2.proper sentence structur
16、es 3.connections between sentences 4.proper complex sentences 5.writing modelsSix steps for writing(写作六步骤）1.Cross-question(审题)Main idea Style Verb tense Person2.Seize the major points/key words(抓要点)3.Arrangement(布局)！4.Sentences connection(连句)Words/phrases Sentences6.Error correcting(查错改错)5.Express y
17、our opinion(发表观点）Conjunctions/conjunctive adverbssentencespassageDear SmithLi HuaYours22 I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school.Youre right.Quite a few changes have taken place in our school.On one side of the road is a new teaching building;On the oth
18、er side,where the playground used to be,stands another new building-our library.The playground is now in front of the school.We have also planted a lot of trees in and round the school.I hope that you will be able to return and see the changes for yourself someday.Best wishes,注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，
19、以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。June 8,2008 Dear Peter,Im very glad to receive your letter.I will tell you something about my English study and hometown.字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。samples of student workread and writefind it hard fluent English to write Great changes roads had taken place in my hometownbuildingswidened
20、It will be wonderful when you come to China if you are freeshow you aroundI will be glad to语言不地道;中文式思维;语言错误较多，得分13分samples of student worklearnof the teachers and myprogressread and writeit hard to learnhard work.write letters in fluent Englishfoundhad becomeWelcome to China if you have timeshow you
21、 around 语言素质 较好;基本功不差;语句仍有毛病；得15分.samples of student workPracticeFind some similar words or phrases of the followings1.good2.think3.clever perfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent in ones opinion/viewhold the view that it is widely shared that wise bright smart intelligent cuteIII.常用的连接词1.表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有：2.表示转折关系但是，然而，相反：whats more;besides;also;moreover;in addition but;however;yet;instead;on the other hand;on the contrary.3.表示因果关系因为，因此，所以:4.表示条件关系如果，只要:除非:否则:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;as a result;if;on condition(that);as long asunless or else