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1、考点36读后续写01情绪描写突破（解析版）秘诀（一）：情感似人“尹秘诀（五）：情感似光线秘诀（六）：情感似重担秘诀（七）：情感似液体秘诀（二）：情感似对手秘诀（三）：情感似压迫者秘诀（四）：情感似动物情感似人“手”人们常被情感掌控，受其制约。而中文中的“掌控”就是来源于“手掌”。于是，情感就可以比喻成一双 无形的手，也就非常贴切了。我们发现：用于手的一些动作可以直接应用于某种情感。这类动作有：表示“抓住”类的动词：seize, grasp, grip , take hold of表示“覆盖：cover表示“撕成碎片：tear into pieces我们来看下面几个例句：（1） Fear gri
2、pped her heart.她心中充满恐惧。（grip 抓住）（2） Jealousy seized her.她妒火中烧。（seize 抓住）（3） A wild joy took hold of her.她十分快乐。（4） A feeling of panic seized her.她突然惊慌失措。（5） Anxiety tore her into pieces.她焦虑不安身心憔悴。（tore是tear的过去式，表撕扯”）（6） Anger and bitterness covered upon me for weeks.我好几周都沉浸在愤怒和痛苦中。（bitterness 是 bitte
3、r”痛苦的”名词形式）者忐忑地向自己的学校请假，令作者出乎意料的是居然被批准了，作者订好了机票，想要给姐姐一个惊 喜。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我开始策划。”可知，第一段可描写作者的计划。由第二段首句内容“我躲在大箱子里，听见邮递员按我姐姐的门铃。”可知，第二段可描写作者的姐姐看 到作者时的反应。2 .续写线索：想到好主意联系邮件公司打开箱子感想3 .词汇激活行为类想到： occur to sb./strike sb.偶然遇见：come across/run into打开：open/unfold突然哭起来：burst into tears/burst out crying情绪类
4、疯狂地：frantically/insanely【点睛】高分句型 1I knew if I pulled this off, my grand arrival would be the best Christmas present I could ever give my sister.（由关系代词that引导的定语从句，省略了 that）高分句型 2It was such a gift to be able to attend my sisters graduation to show her my love, and it was a memory that both of us woul
5、d cherish forever.（由关系代词 that 引导的定语从句）【模拟题31 （2022.福建福州.模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was my twelfth birthday, and what I really wanted most was a new bicycle. But I knew that my family couldnt afford one, so I settled for a bedside table with lockable drawers, a safe place to keep my
6、 private stuff.We went to the charity shop where we found an old dark one. It didnt look too cool, but I thought that I would paint it to make it look better.After we took it home, I was getting ready to paint it. When I pulled the drawers out. I felt something stuck to the back. I reached in all th
7、e way, and guess what? A sealed bag with some papers in it.When I opened the bag, I realized that the papers were official documents. And, wrapped in them were a bunch of ten and twenty dollar bills! Talk about finding a treasure! And on my birthday!“Is this some kind of joke?” I said aloud. I went
8、ahead and read the papers, and it turned out to be a will.Some old lady was leaving her savings for her son and grandchildren.My mind was going crazy. Was I the luckiest twelve-year-old ever? With this money I could buy the coolest bicycle. Who knows?I began counting. When I reached a thousand dolla
9、rs, my mother was knocking on my bedroom door. I quickly closed the drawer with the money in it.“Do you want some help? Is everything all right?” she asked.No, everything was not right. Actually, my stomach was growling （彳氐吼）.Tm okay, I lied.When my mother left my room, I lay on my bed, starting thi
10、nking. What a dilemma （窘境）！ I wished there were some one I could talk with. Could I keep it and get all kinds of stuff fbr me and my family? It wouldnt be too bad fbr me to keep it, if I shared it.right? Thoughts ran through my mind. But I really didnt need someone else to give me the answer. 注意：1 .
11、续写词数应为15。左右；2 .请按格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I finally made a decision and called my parents into my bedroom.Though surprised, the shop owner helped find the familys telephone number.参考答案：I finally made a decision and called my parents into my bedroom. When my parents saw what I had found in the drawer they were
12、wide-eyed and speechless! Then, they read the papers carefully and were moved to tears. When they asked, “What should we do? I said, Lets take it back to the store and find her family. My father nodded with a smile on his face and my mother hugged me warmly, saying “You are my pride, dear?91 felt ve
13、ry happy because I already knew right from wrong. We collected all the money and papers at once, putting them in the drawer. We rushed to the charity shop with the drawer in the hope to find the owner as soon as possible.Though surprised, the shop owner helped find the familys telephone number. With
14、in a few minutes, the family all came over. When I showed them what I had found in the drawer, they couldnt believe their eyes. The parents had tears in their eyes. They were still sad about the ladys death and the father had just lost his job. It was easy to see that my act of honesty gave them hop
15、e. They showed me sincere gratitude from the bottom of their hearts. In fact, I had never felt better before. No new bicycle could have made me felt as good about myself as I felt that day because I passed a very important test-a lost and found test of my own character.【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在12岁生日
16、时，父母给他买了一个二手的床头柜作为生日礼物，作 者发现在床头柜里有以前主人的遗书和很多现金，经过一番思想斗争之后，作者和家人一起把钱还给了 去世老人的家人们。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我终于做了决定，把父母叫到我的卧室。”可知，第一段可描写作者与父母分享这件 事后，他们做出归还东西的经过。由第二段首句内容“店主虽然很惊讶，但还是帮他找到了这家人的电话号码。”可知，第二段可描写作者 与那一家人见面的经过以及个人的深切感受。2 .续写线索：做出决定父母的表扬寻找失主失主的感激个人感悟3 .词汇激活 行为类着急去：rush to/ hurry to归还：take sth. back
17、/ return sth.拥抱：embrace/hold in ones arms 情绪类感动落泪：be moved to tears/ be touched to tears感谢：show sincere gratitude/ /be grateful【点睛】高分句型 1 When my parents saw what I had found in the drawer they were wide-eyed and speechless!（由 when引导的时间状语从句和what引导的宾语从句）高分句型 2| We collected all the money and papers a
18、t once, putting them in the drawer.（使用现在分词作伴随 状语）高分句型 3 It was easy to see that my act of honesty gave them hope.（由 that 引导的主语从句）【模拟题4 （2022福建龙岩一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Its a beautiful sunny day. The Bonds boarded their boat for a carefree day trip to Dove Island for some fishing as a
19、 family custom. Thomas Bond, a 30-year-old construction worker, loved the sport, especially catching bass （妒鱼）and had impressed on his oldest daughter, Lizzy, a love of the outdoors, teaching her how to bait （下 诱饵）a hook and cast a line and brave the waves.The family spent the day fishing in the vas
20、t ocean, and then left the island in the early evening. Upon setting off from the shore, they found thick fog rolling in. Lizzy fell into a light sleep beside her five-year-old sister, Molly, at a table on the boats lower deck （甲板）.Their father sharp orders woke her up: Get out of the boat. The boat
21、s sinking!” Lizzy pushed her sister into the cold, dark water. Both girls wore life jackets. The adults did not. The girls were followed by their mother, Petra Bond, who was expecting a baby at that time. Within seconds, the boat was damaged and was left just the tip of its bow in the air.Looking in
22、to the faces of her father, mother, and sister, Lizzy wasnt frightened. After some time, her father told them he would swim for help. Til be back,“ he said before disappearing into the darkness.“Dad is like the superhero to me. I believe he will get help to rescue us J Lizzy said to herself. After s
23、ome time, her mother became quiet and stopped swimming. Lizzy wrapped a rope around her mothers chest and tied her to the boat so she wouldnt float away. Then her sister fell quiet too and she stayed beside her.To keep herself awake, Lizzy daydreamed about what they would do after they were rescued.
24、 They would stay in a hotel, order room service, and lie comfortably under the blankets in bed, cozy and warm.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。After several hours, Lizzy heard her name called in the distance.On the coast, an ambulance was waiting for them.参考答案：After several hours, Lizzy heard
25、her name called in the distance, dad.” Lizzy called out and began to shake her sleepy mother and sister. Mother opened her eyes and squeezed out a faint smile and fell asleep again.Through the thick fbg, a white small boat sliding close. Lizzy cried out, “Dad, here”, with tears rolling down her face
26、. Finally, Dad got three of them into the boat where Lizzy finally closed her eyes, exhausted and relieved. She knew they were rescued.On the coast, an ambulance was waiting for them. With the help of the nurses, they all got in. Wrapped in a warm blanket, Lizzy sit beside her family, looking at her
27、 mom on the bed. Suddenly, Lizzy turned to her father and said, I knew you would be back, Dad.“ I knew you would keep mother and sister saW, her father hugged her. Tears rolled down their faces.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 Lizzy和妹妹跟随爸爸妈妈出海钓鱼，遭遇沉船落水，爸爸留下Lizzy照 顾妈妈和妹妹，自己游去寻求救援，妈妈的妹妹体力不支快失去意识，只有Lizzy坚持着保护着她们
28、，等 待爸爸归来。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“几个小时后，利奇听到远处有人叫她的名字。”可知，第一段可描写爸爸归来，三人 获救。由第二段首句内容“在海岸上，一辆救护车正等着他们“可知，第二段可描写获救后利齐与爸爸的对话。2 .续写线索：爸爸归来三人获救得到救助父女对话3 .词汇激活行为类大喊：cry out/yell/scream营救：rescue/save在的帮助下：with the help of/with the aid of情绪类疲倦的：exhausted/tired【点睛】高分句型 1 Finally, Dad got three of them into the bo
29、at where Lizzy finally closed her eyes, exhausted and relieved.（运用了 where引导定语从句和形容词作状语）高分句型2 She knew they were rescued.（运用了省略连词的宾语从句）高分句型 3 Wrapped in a warm blanket, Lizzy sit beside her family, looking at her mom on the bed.（运用 了 过去 分词和现在分词作状语）【模拟题5 （2022福建厦门二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
30、文。Shrieking Toad and Dancing AntKids got nicknames at a summer camp, and mine is Shrieking Toad （尖叫的蛤蟆）.I guess it was my fault that I couldnt get a cool one.A bunch of us campers were on our first nature walk. When we broke for lunch, we sat down on logs. I was on my nuts when a tree frog dropped o
31、nto my shirt from the branches above. T shrieked. It was totally unconscious and I didnt even know I could make a sound like that. Most kids forgot about it except Stan. Whenever I walked by, he*d shout, Shrieking Toad, show us how you can hop!” I corrected him that it had been an eastern gray tree
32、frog, not a toad, but that just made things worse.Three days later, Counselor Matt announced we would be paired for a treasure hunt. Excited whispers spread through the camp. But when he read Jay and Stan as a team, my nerves got completely fried. Stan shouted, Great! Shrieking Toad! Then he called
33、to the group, and I went red at what came out of his mouth. Guys, if mosquitoes are bugging you, ask Shrieking Toad to eat them. Toads love bugs!” Kids roared with laughter.After all the teams wandered off, Stan and I were alone. Then I had a great idea, surprising myself that I hadn*t thought of it
34、 earlier. I suggested we split up so as to have a better chance of finding treasures. uYeah, Fd better do what Pm toad （told）.“ Stan laughed and set off.Ten minutes later, I heard something that reminded me of myself a few days ago. I ran toward the sound. I never would have believed it if I hadnt s
35、een it with my own eyes. Stan was jumping around near a mud pool like a monkey, shrieking and yelling something that sounded jumping around near a mud pool like a monkey, shrieking and yelling something that sounded like “Dance! Dance! Seeing him scratching at his body and hitting at his clothes mad
36、e me realize what he was really saying: “Ants! Ants!” 注意：L续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I rushed towards Stan and tried to help him.That night, we all routinely sat around the campfire and I saw Stans worry as clear as daylight.参考答案：Para 1:I rushed Sowards Stan and tried to help him. He was hitti
37、ng his clothes violently. I did what must be done. I pulled him into a mud pool. He was shocked at first, and then he must have realized why I did it. The ants went away. Since Stan and I were both covered in mud, we decided to head back. I guess youre going to have a pretty good stoiy for everyone,
38、“ Stan said awkwardly. Yeah, I guess so. Youll probably be known as Dancing Ant from now on.”Para 2:That night, we all routinely sat around the campfire and I saw Stans worry as clear as daylight. I knew how it felt to be teased; it wasnt fun. I could see Stans worry which then turned into surprise.
39、 The next day when I was picked for a basketball team, someone called, Unfair! Shrieking Toads a natural jumper! Stan shouted, Knock it off, guys. His name is Jay. I wouldnt have minded being given a cool nickname. But being known as plain “Jay”, and Stans friend, turned out to be cool too.【解析】【导语】本
40、文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者参加夏令营时，被掉在身上的树蛙吓得惊叫，一块露营的Stan给作 者取外号“尖叫的蛤蟆”，而且作者每次经过他身边时，他总是拿此取笑作者。几天后他被蚂蚁吓得手忙脚 乱，大声呼叫，正好被作者遇到了。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我冲向Stan,试图帮助他。”可知，第一段可描写Stan被蚂蚁吓到后的场面以及作 者是如何帮助Stan的。由第二段首句内容“那天晚上，我们照例围坐在营火旁，我清楚地看到Stan的担忧。”可知，第二段可 描写作者没有嘲笑Stan,以及解释作者这样做的原因。2 .续写线索：作者帮助StanStan吃惊Stan担忧被嘲笑Stan维护作者作者
41、感悟3 .词汇激活 行为类 拍打：hit/pat 决定：decide to/ determine to 嘲笑：tease/laugh at情绪类吃惊：shocked /surprised尴尬：awkwardly / embarrassedly【点睛】高分句型 1 Since Stan and I were both covered in mud, we decided to head back.（运用 了 since 弓| 导原因状语 从句）高分句型 2 But being known as plain Jay, and Stans friend, turned out to be cool
42、too.（运用 了动名词作主 语）【模拟题6 （2022.广东汕头.一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。After a very meaningful conversation with my dad about the old days, we came up with an object that we both remembered clearly. It was my very first bicycle. My mind told me I got it when I was seven, who was cheated to ride i
43、t for fifty yards alone the first time I tried!My dad put together all the small pieces of the bicycle from a beautiful material that he called, Your own car. Of course I knew he had some magical ability, but I didnt think he could make such an awesome object. He added the seat and the pedals （踏板）so
44、 that I would not have any problems. My dad recalled the bicycle was the smallest he could find while I remember how huge it was. I was so afraid of it and there was no way that I was going to control that monster-sized material. The bicycle was left in my backyard as a decoration for a month becaus
45、e I refused to ride it. Honestly, I was scared to try it.After a month, my dad gave me a lecture to teach me what being a man was all about. I was finally determined to try it. My dad was proud of me and I felt very manly. He and I went to the park to see what we could do there.The park was empty wh
46、en we arrived. I had no doubt that my dad told everybody not to be there because we had to use it. I felt sorry for other people, but I was proud to have such an omnipotent （全能的）person as my dad.We found a smooth and open space. My dad was holding the back part of the seat to make sure I didnt fell.
47、 He promised me that 1 was not going to fall because he would be running right behind, holding the bicycle. 注意：L续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I turned around and found my dad was not behind.I started to pedal and the bicycle moved.参考答案：I turned around and found my dad was not behind. I was so scar
48、ed I felt like I was going to fall at any moment. Sure enough, after shaking my body several times, I fell to the ground. I was very angry with my father why let go of my hand and let me ride alone. My father smiled and said to me: Its OK, stick to it for a while. Then he started to teach me how to keep my center of gravity in balance. I learned the skills my father taught me, and repeated the practice several times.I started