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1、托福写作范文：过去人吃的食物比现在人更健康 为了帮助大家备考托福写作，积累更多的话题素材，下面我给大家带来托福写作范文：过去人吃的食物比现在人更健康，望喜爱！ 独立写作范文：过去人吃的食物比现在人的更健康 Some people claim that the food we eat currently is correspondingly healthy. This argument seems reasonable. For example, a wide range of adults aged 65 years and older live a well-off life in the
2、present society, which was scarce in 50 years earlier. First, the living standards and the purchasing capacities have tremendously improved even for an average Joe. This is mainly because the soaring development of national economy makes it within our reach to own and obtain the categories of good f
3、oodstuff. Second, due to the research and development of science and technology ，there are continuously superior products with different flavors taken to market for us to select according to the strict procedures so that it can meet various demands. For example，the prevalent organic food is well acc
4、epted and eaten in the household. However, although economic development can create the opportunities for people to have healthy food, too much nutrition and high fat will lead to some chronic disease，such as hypertension ，diabetes and obesity. According to a survey made in one high school in Beijin
5、g, more than 40% of students are overweight, which could potentially trigger various kinds of diseases. Furthermore, maybe technology can discover more new type food to benefit our health ，but the supplements in the dietary can be added the chemistry elements which have notoriously side effects to h
6、uman body. In contrast to those who eat the regular intake of a prescribed amount，the people who eat the toxin absolutely has less longevity ,about 10-15 years distance. Also，the food in the past is never polluted, so it is much cleaner. According to a survey made by the specialists，the food in the
7、past is the most purely natural and healthy to us，no pesticides，no carcinogen. In addition，the food production and processing is almost the homemade in family. This is because its the tradition for the last generation to eat at home together when they do not need to eat out. So it is self-evident th
8、at the food we eat in the past is much better than the food now. 托福独立写作范文：现在我们吃的食物比过去要健康 托福写作题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The food weeat today is much healthier than in the past.(我们现在吃的食物比过去更健康。) 托福写作范文： Back in the days, the world suffered from instances of food-related
9、 issuessuch as shortage, sanitation, and nutritional content. Today, with the numerousadvances in related fields of technology, most if not all, of these problems arejust a memory of the past. Many claim, in particular, that the foods we consumetoday are of a much higher quality, thereby making them
10、 healthier to eat. But isthis certainly the case? I dont think so. The last time I checked, there were lots of fast food chains sprawling inour cities and even in some suburban areas. In these places are common sights ofobese children and other unhealthy-looking consumers. It does not stop here. The
11、situation gets worse. Remember the time that the price of staple food like ricewas sky-high because of limited supply? Well, thats not the case now. However,there were news reports showing that most of these food supplies, thoughplentiful, lack the necessary nutritional content. Certain varieties we
12、re evenproven to be harmful instead. Does the term Genetically Modified Organisms (GMO)ring a bell?听起来熟识吗 In spite of our efforts to produce agricultural products withhigher yield, the main concern seems to be this. Are we really eating healthierfood now? Food fuels us.食物给我们力气(加油fuel) Depending on t
13、he quality of food we eat, ourresistance to sickness, fatigue, and overall wellbeing is determined. Then howcome most people now easily get sick or die early? Yes, there are other factorsto consider like air pollution and the likes. However, food forms the largeproportion of our requirements for sur
14、vival and daily accomplishment of ouractivities. This being said, I firmly conclude that the foods we eat today are not ashealthy compared to those in the past. Despite the advances of moderntechnology, certain by-products are inevitable. Thus, it is up to us toeffectively filter what goes into our
15、mouths lest以免 we suffer from unhealthyfoods effects. 新东方托福写作语料库：过去的饮食比现在更健康 Do you agree or disagree with the statement：The food we ate in the past was healthier than the food today. 作家立场：过去的食物比现在的食物更健康。 【思路拓展】 1. 在过去，人们种植水果，蔬菜，粮食的时候较少运用杀虫剂。 对比的是，现在的食物，许多种植者为了提高产量，大量运用化肥农药，因此，过去的食物比现在的食物更加健康。 2. 在现在
16、，许多的饭店以及酒店的企业经营者为了非法地谋取暴利，运用过期的或者是劣质的食材，因此，许多食品是有害健康的。例如，许多小食店运用地沟油，而现代人工作劳碌，许多人的午饭都要订餐，因此，现代人的饮食很难说健康。 3. 在过去，经济发展不如现在，人们的收入不如现在，一个客观的利好是人们较少有机会去快餐店，烧烤店，海鲜店消费，因此，客观上，人们比较简单保持健康。同时，食品类(例如快餐)广告也不如今日这样普及，因此，人们更多选择更加健康的家庭聚餐。 【薛鹏原创语料库】 1. A is healthier than B 比 更加健康 2. A is more wholesome in comparison
17、 with B 比 更加健康 3. currently = nowadays = at present 现在 4. several decades ago = in the past 过去 5. keep fit = remain healthy 保持健康 6. is physically detrimental = is health-threatening 是有害健康的 7. food containing too much addictives 包含有太好添加剂的食品 8. fake and exaggerated food ads that promote the sales of u
18、nhealthy foods 促进了非健康食品销量的不良广告 9. Being presented with junk food stimulates our desire to consume them. 接触到太多的垃圾食品激发了我们消费的渴望。 10. is low in nutritional value 养分价值低 点评：谈及快餐 ， 罐头食品， 加工食品。 11. People can eat fresh fruits and vegetables that seldom suffer from the invasion of insecticides / pesticides 人
19、们可以吃到很少受到杀虫剂侵蚀的簇新的水果蔬菜。 解析：insect (昆虫) + cid(杀)+e = insecticide 杀虫剂 12. Currently，crops are more likely to expose to the contamination from paper mills and chemical plants. 现在， 庄稼更有可能受到化工厂，造纸厂的污染。 13. improve peoples health index 提高人的健康指数 14. strengthen ones immune system 增加人的免疫力 15. Health enables
20、us to brave career challenges energetically and harmonize family life optimistically. 健康使我们精力充足地应对事业的挑战以及乐观地实现家庭和谐 16. greedy owners of food shops or avaricious bosses of resultants 贪欲的食品店业主或者贪欲的饭店老板 17. desire to reap fabulous profits illegally 渴望去非法谋取暴利 18. use ingredients containing toxic content
21、s 运用含有有毒的成分的食材 解析： ingredients 做饭的原料 19. canned food，take-away food 罐头食品，熟食食品 20. the awareness of health management 健康管理的意识 【托福写作】托福写作怎么得高分建议共享 托福写作中常常会须要举例来让论述更加详实，更加具备劝服力。如何做到支持理由的充分扩展呢?在评分标准的说明中，我们可以清楚地看到 using appropriate and sufficient exemplifications 是做到扩展充分的有力手段。并且在独立写作的题目中，也都明确提出： Provide
22、specific reasons and example to support your essay. 在这些要求之下，如何在独立作文中将例证法用好就成为了将支持理由进行充分扩展的关键。 然而，因为中西教化的差别，中式的争论文中一般 要求学生从理论的层面绽开，而不太重视实际例子在文章中的运用，这样就导致学生例子储备的缺乏以及对例子描述不到位的状况出现。因此，在独立写作中，许多考生认为只要写上 for example 之类的提示词，再简洁 地写两个人名或者进行简洁的介绍就算举好例子了，或者考前背几个典型例子就能应付各种题目。 而事实上，这样的例子考官要不就不知所云，要不就早已经看过多数次，怎么可
23、能会给出高分呢?所以，例子肯定要结合题目，结合论点，结合自身的阅历来联想和编写。当然， 这里要强调，自身阅历总归是有限的，所以须要学会编造贴切的例子，学会描述逻辑真实的例子。 事例可以是许多种类，常见的有： 个人经验、名人事例、引用数据或探讨、时事新闻。 这些例子假如恰如其分地进行运用，可以让文章更加有逻辑的同时，也可以让一部分不会运用其他论述方 式来充溢文章的同学让写作变得更简单一些。个人经验是学生在托福写作中经常运用的例子类型，相对比较简单操作，也简单在较短时间内联想到相关例子。 1. 以下是托福写作中个人事例的几个原则： A. 思索的例子和须要论述的论点(主题段落主题 句)亲密相关，不要
24、偏题。 B. 个人事例并没有深刻或肤浅之分，只要符合题 目要求以及论述过程贴切。 C. 例证并非记叙文，所以不须要事务整个过程和 细微环节都交代，须要有侧重点(也即能证明观点的故事核 心)。 D. 篇幅不肯定，可以 1-2 句简洁陈述一个事实， 也可以 3-5 句具体叙述一个例子。 E. 例子的描述过程中，或者例子结束时须要适当 说明例子蕴含的道理。 2. 个人事例的大致绽开方式(建议)： 1-2 句概述事务的内容，让读者提前了解事务 2-3 句描述例子的侧重点，也就是能够说明道理的部分着重写细微环节 1 句话点名例子蕴含的道理。 2. Sample： Agree or disagree: I
25、t was easier to succeed in the past than it is today. Disagree: 论点 1：Dramatic social progresses have created more equal opportunities for different groups of people to achieve personal growth and success. 个人事例：My own grandmother and my mother. a. 事务概述： When my grandmother was a young woman, our soci
26、ety simply didnt offer the kind of opportunities to women to pursue successes that my mother later fortunately enjoyed. b. 侧重点： Women today, in particular, are provided many more great opportunities comparing with their counterparts half a century ago. So, my mother was able to receive quality educa
27、tion and was expected to actually do something big with her life. She is a very accomplished doctor who works in a large hospital in our city. On the other hand, as talented as my grandmother was, she never gained the same opportunities to chase her dream. Women didnt enjoy the equal rights as they
28、do today and they were expected to become housewives despite their own ambitions or interests. c. 点题 Many more people nowadays are enabled to accomplish their personal ambitions and decide their own fates thanks to the positive developments of our society. 4. 结束语： 生活常事意味着用自己或身边的人来举例，这一 类的事例具备很强的代表性，并且能在肯定程度上唤 起考官的共鸣。 托福写作范文：过去人吃的食物比现在人更健康本文来源：网络收集与整理，如有侵权，请联系作者删除，谢谢！第13页 共13页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页第 13 页 共 13 页