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1、专题09话题分类+户外探险目录：1 .精选名校最新2022年12月.2023年1月名校联考、模拟试题.读后续写话题分类背诵模板2 .读后续写话题分类写作步骤.读后续写话题分类写作热词3 .读后续写话题分类高分佳句L （2023年江苏南通高三统考） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Pam Bales left her car and stepped onto the snow-covered Jewell Trail. She planned a six-hour hike through New Hampshires Mount Washington
2、State Park. The hike up the lower part of Jewell was pleasant. At 8:30 am, still below the tree line, she took the first in a series of on-the-trail selfies.Less than an hour later, she took another photo, after shed climbed into colder air and deeper snows. She made her way across the snow-covered
3、ridge toward Mount Washington. Then she noticed something: a single set of footprints in the snow ahead of her. Shed been following faint tracks all day and hadnt given them much thought, because so many people climb Jewell Trail. But these, she realized, had been made by a pair of trainers, not sui
4、table for hiking on snow.By 11 am, Bales was getting cold and decided to abandon her plan. The only thing keeping Bales on Gulfside Trail was the trainer tracks in the sonw. As she fought the wind and heavy sleet （雨夹雪）,the tracks made a hard left-hand turn off the trail.Now she alarmed. She was sure
5、 the hiker could get through in the ow visibility and was heading straight toward the challenging trails of the Great Gulf Wilderness. Bales stood there, stunned. The temperature and clouds were in a race to find their lowest point, and darkness was mere hours away. She turned to the left and called
6、 out, uHello!M into the frozen fog.Nothing. She called out again: Is anybody out there? Do you need help?The strong westerly winds carried her voice away. She blew into her rescue whistle. For a fleeting moment she thought she heard someone reply, but it was just the wind playing games with her mind
7、. She stood listening, then turned and walked cautiously in the direction of the single set of tracks. Bales followed the tracks cautiously for 20 to 30 meters. She rounded a slight comer and saw a man sitting motionless.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如卜格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When she approached him and said hello, he
8、 did not react.was calling my name. I was glad that he found me. Soon, a big steamboat sailed to me and they pulled me up to the deck and asked me if I was hurt. I couldnt say a word but cried out in my fathers amis.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在印尼的一次旅游经历，作者一个人去大湖里滑水，但不小 心迷路了，作者感到绝望之际，父亲找到并救了她。第一步：段落续写：由第一段首
9、句内容“我到处滑水，但找不到回去的路。”可知，第一段可描写作者找不到回去的路时担心 害怕的心理变化，最后只能等待救援。由第二段首句内容“在水面上无助、绝望地漂浮了很长一段时间后，我突然听到有人在叫我的名字。可 知，第二段可描写绝望之际父亲找到了作者，作者被救后大哭一场。第二步：续写线索：找不到回去的路担心害怕一等待援救一听到有人叫自己名字父亲救了自己一大哭一场 第三步：词汇激活：【行为类】大叫：shout / yell尽量去做某事：try to do sth. / do ones utmost to do sth.等待：wait for / await【情绪类】害怕的：terrified /
10、frightened高兴的：glad / delighted / pleased【点睛】高分句型 1. I was afraid of dying in a place which my parents didnt know, so I tried to find my way back, but all in vain.（运用了 which引导的限制性定语从句）高分句型 2. Soon. a big steamboat sailed to me and they pulled me up to the deck and asked me if I was hurt. （运用了 if引导的宾语
11、从句）6. （2022年全国高三专题练习） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Brady was a recently retired search and rescue dog. He was not happy and missed his owner Al because Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Als nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on a overnight hike. But sudden
12、ly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning had set the woods on fire. Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox（火绒箱）and the thunderstorm wasnt helping much. It had more wind and lightn
13、ing than rain. Zach pulled Steve arm. Lets go! We can make it back to the river we crossed today. Steve pulled Bradys leash （皮带）and their heads down against the strong fire-wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier. The air was full of smoke, and pine branches broke from burning tre
14、es with a crisp sound. Steve kept his eyes on the route. All they had to do was to make it down to the river.Brady barked a sharp warning. Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the path. Theyd never make it through that. They would have to find another escape route. The dog was pulling a
15、t his leash trying to draw (hem away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It seemed to him they were moving away from (he river.Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind. Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared. The hoys yelled and shouted for hi
16、m, but he didnt come back.They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up aslope (斜坡).He couldnt blame Brady fbr panicking and escaping. He himself wanted to run even though he didnt have a clue which way. They hadnt gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady ca
17、me running toward him.Paragraph1：“Whereve you been? Steve cried.Paragraph 2：Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.【答案】“Whereve you been?” Steve cried. Brady stopped directly in front of him and started pushing him back toward the slope theyd just climbed. When Steve still didnt get i
18、t, Brady grabbed the boys jeans and pulled harder. The message was clear, but Steve hesitated. Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, hut that had been a long time ago. Was he still sharp enough to get them through this? Brady pulled again, urgently. 4lOK, big g
19、uy,“ Steve decided.Brady led them back clown the slope and into the trees. Several times the big dog stopped to get his escape route. Often he changed direction. How long theyd walked Steve had no idea. He just held onto Bradys leash with one hand and kept putting one foot in front of the other. He
20、was almost numb when he heard the wonderful sound of rushing water. The river! With a yell the boys ran unsteadily forward until they jumped in cool, running water. Brady, you did it!”【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 Brady是一只最近退休的搜救犬，这天它主人的侄子Sieve带着 Brady和他的朋友Zach去远足过夜。结果闪电把树林点着了，森林起了大火，最后多亏了 Brady的帮助， 他们才找到了河流并且
21、获救。第一步：段落续写：由第一段首句内容“你哪儿去了？ Steve哭喊道。”可知，第一段可描写Brady找到Sieve他们后的行为， Brady开始示意Steve和自己走。由第二段首句内容“Brady领着他们下了坡，进入树林。”可知，第二段可描写Brady带领Steve他们找到 了河流并且得救的经过。第二步：续写线索：Brady回来Brady拉扯男孩的牛仔裤男孩跟着Brady走找到河流跳进河里得救第三步：词汇激活：【行为类】明白：get i（/understand 想起：remember/ recall J爪住：hold onto/ grabbed/ grasp 【情绪类】美妙：wonderf
22、ul /amazing 急切：urgently / eagerly【点睛】高分句型 1. When Steve still didnt get it, Brady grabbed the boys jeans and pulled harder.（运用 了 when 引导 时间状语从句）高分句型 2. Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago.（运用了 what引导宾语从句）7. （2022年河北邢台联考阶段测试）
23、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I often go climbing with my friend Mel Olsen, whom Id met in a Face-book group. Two years ago, on December 30, when I was 16, she and I drove to Oregon to tackle 11,240-foot Mount Hood. My parents were happy Id finally found a hobby.Its safer to start winter climbs at n
24、ight when theres less risk of the sun melting the snowpack. That day, we started at 3 a. m, following the paths alongside the ski runs. The temperature was about 14 degrees. Along the way, we met two other climbers, and the four of us continued on together.After about five hours, we reached Devils K
25、itchen, a plateau at about 10. 000 feet, just before the final push to （he top. By （his point, the wind was violent. My exposed skin felt as （hough it were burning. The other climbers decided to turn back, but Mel and I went ahead. We had ice axes, helmets, and crampons （冰爪）.We were prepared for the
26、 climb.The trail we followed grew narrower and steeper. Suddenly, I heard a crack, and a whole block of ice broke off the ice step, right under my foot.In an instant, I fell backward. I could hear Mel calling my name as I rolled down the mountain as if I were a character in a video game. I stuck out
27、 my arms and legs, grabbing at anything. My clothes were tom into pieces, my helmet was broken, and my face was bloodied from cuts and scratches. Then I took a survey of my body to see where I was hurt, starling with my head, （hen my neck and arms. For the most part, I was fine, except that I was su
28、ffering from a sharp pain in my left leg.As Mel made her way down, I shouted tor help, and other climbers came to assist me. A couple of them were trained EMTs. They fixed my leg and called Portland Mountain Rescue. Mel stayed by my side while I tried not to cry from （he pain.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.
29、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Id been lying on the ice shaking and aching for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me.The fall on a mountain can change everything.【答案】I,d been lying on the ice shaking and aching for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me. They gave me first aid quickly and pulled
30、 me down the mountain. I screamed with each move, but still I had a pretty high pain tolerance. Step by step, with my teeth clenched ,we finally arrived at the bottom of Mount Hood where I was loaded into an ambulance and taken to a hospital. I stayed therefor four days. The doctors told me it would
31、 be a year before I could climb again, but I was determined to go back climbing as soon as I could.The fall on a mountain can change eveiything. But the experience also made me grow as a person. There was a lot of media attention following the accident. Some said I should go back (o India. I think h
32、andling all that at such a young age helped me grow up.Since the accident, Tve climbed another 60 mountains. Im not going to let one fall and its aftereffect keep me from doing my favorite thing in the world. I loved the challenge of conquering something bigger than myself. (I68w)【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作
33、者和好友梅尔奥尔森爬山时突发意外，严重受伤，康复后仍坚 持爬山的故事。第一步：段落续写：由第一段首句内容“救援人员赶到我身边时，我已经躺在冰上发抖疼痛了四个小时。”可知，第一段可描 写作者最终获救并入院接受治疗。由第二段首句内容“从山上摔下来会改变一切。”可知，第二段可描写这次意外事故引起的关注、作者坚 持爬山以及感悟。第二步：续写线索：最终获救入院接受治疗媒体关注坚持爬山感悟第三步：词汇激活：【行为类】尖叫、大喊：scrcam/shout .到达：arrive at /get to.回至lj ： go back to/return to【情绪类】.咬紧牙关(克服困难)：with my tee
34、th clenched / set my teeth .热爱：love/ be keen on【点睛】高分句型 1. Step by step, with my teeth clenched ,ve finally arrived at the bottom of Mount Hood where I was loaded into an ambulance and taken to a hospital.（运用 T with 的复合结构以及 where 引导的定语从句） 高分句型 2. I think handling all that at such a young age helped
35、me grow up.（运用了动名词作主语）8. （2022年全国高三测试）We moved on into the jungle- a forest where large numbers of tall trees and plants grow very close together. Old Mali went in front and I followed close behind him. We stopped for the night about an hour before it began to get dark.Old Mali lit a fire. When it w
36、as bright he showed me how to make a bed with moss（青苔，苔群）.It was soft and comfortable.一Mali, how did you learn to make such a bed? I asked.一I learned to make beds like that, Mali replied, by watching and listening to others. That is the real way to learn anything.Will you let me watch you always? 1
37、asked Old Mali. I want to learn all the things you know about the jungle.When we had finished our supper, Old Mali got onto his bed and lay down. It was now completely dark. In the fire light. Old Mali seemed to be fast asleep on his bed. I suddenly felt alone and afraid.All day in the jungle, while
38、 we had been walking, I had heard noises of animals. Now they seemed to be much nearer. The jungle was now a wall of blackness in the light of the fire.I felt frightened and suddenly my mouth went dry. I wanted to scream. I felt my mouth opening wide, ready to scream as loud as possible.But I did no
39、t scream. I saw Old Malis face in the firelight. This made me feel ashamed. I held my teeth tightly together to stop myself from screaming. I lay down and closed my eyes.As soon as I closed iny eyes. I heard a thousand noises. The whole jungle became alive with animals moving quietly and carefully a
40、ll around me. Suddenly Old Mali took a deep breath and made a noise. I was hearing so many imaginary noise and the real noise made by Old Mali gave me a terrible fright.I opened my eyes and jumped out of bed. I pulled my knife out and held it above my head.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键
41、词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好：4 .续写完成后，请用卜划线标出你所使用的关键词。I was going to see if there was a wild animal beside the fire.Old Malis quiet calm voice made me feel better.【答案】I was going to see if there was a wild animal beside the fire. Through the burning fire, I believed 1 saw its sharp teeth and cruel red
42、 eyes. Its craws would insert into my flesh without mercy as soon as I came into its sight. I couldnt help trembling and screaming loudly at the thought of it. Then a soft voice came from the dark, “Arc you Okay? It was Old Mali who was now lying on his side with his eyes wide open.Old Malis quiet c
43、alm voice made me feel better. Adjusting breath quickly and obsen ing carefully, I found the animal“ was just the shade of trees. I laughed in relief and told Old Mali what had happened just now. Having known the whole story, Mali gave me an understanding smile and told me his former experiences in
44、jungle. With these stories, I got back to my bed and lay down. Exhausted, I closed my eyes, and knowing Old Mali was watching, I soon fell fast asleep. That night was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.【导语】本篇书面表达是读后续写，本文讲述了作者跟随Old Mali进入了丛林的一次难忘的经历。夜色降 临，吃完晚饭作者和Old Mali各自休息，但作者
45、一闭上眼睛就听到各种动物的声音，让作者感到非常害怕。 吓得睡不着觉，作者起床去看火边有没有野兽，透过篝火，作者感觉野兽马上就要扑过来，被吓得尖叫， 这时OldMali醒来，他温和的嗓音让作者镇定卜.来，听着他的故事，作者进入了梦乡。第一步：段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我去看看火边有没有野兽。”可知笫一段可描写作者所误认为的“野兽”以及当时作者 的心理活动。由第二段首句内容“Old Mali平静的声音让作者感觉好多了。”可知第一段后部分可以描写Old Mali已经醒来，询问作者的状态。由第二段首句内容“Old Mali平静的声音让作者感觉好多了。”可知，第二段可描写Old Mali告诉了作者 所
46、谓的“野兽”就是树的影子，并与作者讲起了以前的从林经历，作者听了这些故事，很快入睡，那晚是作 者最难忘的经历。第二步：续写线索：感觉自己看到野兽感到害怕Old Mali醒来，不再害怕听Old Mali讲述以前的经历很快入 唾。第三步：词汇激活：【行为类】大声喊：scream loudly/ycll out /shout out/speak in a loud voice调整呼吸：adjust breath/recover breath给我讲他的经历：tell me his experiences/share his experiences with me【情绪类】害怕：canl help tr
47、embling/ shake with fear /be frightened 如释重负:laugh in relief /smile with a sense of relief【点睛】【高分句型1】Its craws would insert into my flesh without mercy as soon as I came into its sight.（运用了 as soon as引导的状语从句）【高分句型 2lt was Old Mali who was now lying on his side with his eyes wide open.（运用 了强调句型和 with
48、复合结构）【高分句型 3】Adjusting breath quickly and observing carefully, I found the animal was just the shade of trees.（运用了非谓语动词作状语）After waking the man up, Bales recognized that they had to get out of there soon.【答案】When she approached him and said hello, he did not react. Taking a deep breath. Bales got closer, checked his pulse and suddenly realized that the man must have passed out. She knew she had to wake him up immediately or the dreadful weather could put him in greater danger. Out of her bag. Bales took a carpet to wrap the man, gave some hot water