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1、专题 09 话题分类+户外探险 目录：1.精选名校最新 2022 年 12 月-2023 年 1 月名校联考、模拟试题 2.读后续写话题分类背诵模板 3.读后续写话题分类写作步骤 4.读后续写话题分类写作热词 5.读后续写话题分类高分佳句 1.（2023 年江苏南通高三统考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Pam Bales left her car and stepped onto the snow-covered Jewell Trail.She planned a six-hour hike through New Hampshires Moun
2、t Washington State Park.The hike up the lower part of Jewell was pleasant.At 8:30 am,still below the tree line,she took the first in a series of on-the-trail selfies.Less than an hour later,she took another photo,after shed climbed into colder air and deeper snows.She made her way across the snow-co
3、vered ridge toward Mount Washington.Then she noticed something:a single set of footprints in the snow ahead of her.Shed been following faint tracks all day and hadnt given them much thought,because so many people climb Jewell Trail.But these,she realized,had been made by a pair of trainers,not suita
4、ble for hiking on snow.By 11 am,Bales was getting cold and decided to abandon her plan.The only thing keeping Bales on Gulfside Trail was the trainer tracks in the sonw.As she fought the wind and heavy sleet(雨夹雪),the tracks made a hard left-hand turn off the trail.Now she alarmed.She was sure the hi
5、ker could get through in the ow visibility and was heading straight toward the challenging trails of the Great Gulf Wilderness.Bales stood there,stunned.The temperature and clouds were in a race to find their lowest point,and darkness was mere hours away.She turned to the left and called out,“Hello!
6、”into the frozen fog.Nothing.She called out again:“Is anybody out there?Do you need help?”The strong westerly winds carried her voice away.She blew into her rescue whistle.For a fleeting moment she thought she heard someone reply,but it was just the wind playing games with her mind.She stood listeni
7、ng,then turned and walked cautiously in the direction of the single set of tracks.Bales followed the tracks cautiously for 20 to 30 meters.She rounded a slight corner and saw a man sitting motionless.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When she approached him and said hello,he did not react._ Aft
8、er waking the man up,Bales recognized that they had to get out of there soon._【答案】When she approached him and said hello,he did not react.Taking a deep breath,Bales got closer,checked his pulse and suddenly realized that the man must have passed out.She knew she had to wake him up immediately or the
9、 dreadful weather could put him in greater danger.Out of her bag,Bales took a carpet to wrap the man,gave some hot water to him,called out repeatedly and shook him hard.Fortunately,it didnt take long before the man came to himself.After waking the man up,Bales recognized that they had to get out of
10、there soon.The wind kept howling with the heavy sleet driving fiercely,and even worse,darkness began to fall.Anxious,Bales struggled to help the man up,supporting his weight and inching along the trail,following the tracks left by her hiking boots.After what seemed like ages,they finally made it to
11、the foot of the mountain.The man was rushed to hospital immediately.Exhausted as she was,Bales felt a wave of happiness welled up inside.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了帕姆巴勒斯计划在新罕布什尔州的华盛顿山州立公园徒步六小时，不到一小时后，她已经爬进了更冷的空气和更深的雪中。她穿过白雪覆盖的山脊，向华盛顿山进发。然后她注意到了一件事：她前面的雪上有一组脚印。她一整天都在跟踪微弱的轨迹，并没有给它们太多的思考，因为有太多人爬珠尔小道。但她意识到，这些鞋是由
12、一双运动鞋制成的，不适合在雪地上徒步旅行。后来，她在一个小角落，看见一个人一动不动地坐着。第一步：段落续写：由第一段首句内容“当她走近他打招呼时，他没有反应。”可知，第一段可描写巴勒斯救助这名已经失去意识的男子的过程。由第二段首句内容“在叫醒那个人后，巴勒斯意识到他们必须尽快离开那里。”可知，第二段可描写巴勒斯和那名男子一起下山，脱离险境的过程。第二步：续写线索：检查拿出物品给男子取暖唤醒男子扶起那名男子一起下山脱离险境感受 第三步：词汇激活：【行为类】检查：check/examine 唤醒：wake up/awaken 努力：struggle to do/make great efforts
13、 to do【情绪类】高兴：happiness/joy 焦急：anxious/worried【点睛】高分句型 1 Taking a deep breath,Bales got closer,checked his pulse and suddenly realized that the man must have passed out.(运用了现在分词作状语和 that 引导的宾语从句)高分句型 2 Anxious,Bales struggled to help the man up,supporting his weight and inching along the trail,follo
14、wing the tracks left by her hiking boots.(运用了形容词和现在分词作状语)高分句型 3 Exhausted as she was,Bales felt a wave of happiness welled up inside.(运用了让步状语从句的倒装结构)2.（2022 年湖南郴州统考一模）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。When I was in the eighth grade,I became interested in mountain climbing.Then I climbed my first
15、mountain a fairly gentle 3,900-foot peak near where I live in surrey,British Columbia.I loved the challenge of conquering something bigger than myself.I like climbing more and more.Soon Id climbed nearly l00 peaks.My parents were happy Id finally found a hobby.Two years ago,on December 30,when I was
16、 16,I drove to Oregon to climb 11,240-foot Mount Hood with my friend Mel Olsen.Its safer to start winter climbs at night when theres less risk of the sun melting the snowpack(积雪).That day,we started at 3 a.m.The temperature was about 14 degrees.Along the way,we met two other climbers,and the four of
17、 us continued on together.After about five hours,we reached Devils Kitchen,a plateau at about l0,000 feet.By this point,the wind conditions were nasty(极糟糕的).My exposed skin felt as though it were burning.The trail we followed grew narrower and steeper.At around 9 a.m.,we reached an ice step.I volunt
18、eered to go first.I placed my left foot on it.Confident I was safe,I put my full weight on it.Suddenly,I heard a loud noise,and a whole slab of ice broke off the step,right under my foot.In an instant,I fell backward,rolling down the mountain as if I were a character in a video game.After a few seco
19、nds,I came to a stop on a shallow slope just above the Devils Kitchen.Id fallen 600 feet.My clothes were torn into small pieces,my helmet was broken,and my face was bloodied from cuts and scratches.Fortunately,for the most part,I was fine,except that I was suffering from a sharp,great pain in my lef
20、t leg.注意:l.续写词数应为 l50 左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。I yelled for help._ This accident made me have a deep reflection,but I was back climbing again._【答案】I yelled for help.Hearing my cry for help,Mel made her way down and other climbers came to assist me.A couple of them were trained first aid treatment.They spl
21、inted my leg and called rescue team.Mel stayed by my side while I tried not to cry from the pain.Id been lying on the ice shivering and in agony for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me.They strapped me into a sled and pulled me down the mountain.Then I was loaded into an ambulance and tak
22、en to a hospital,where I stayed for four days.This accident made me have a deep reflection,but I was back climbing again.The fall has made me more cautious.One slip on a mountain can change everything.But the experience also made me grow as a person and helped me mature.Since the accident,Ive climbe
23、d another 60 mountains.Im not going to let one fall and its aftermath keep me from doing my favorite thing in the world.【导语】本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了作者从八年级开始就对爬山有兴趣，并且很快爬了近百座山峰。16 岁时，作者和朋友 Mel Olsen 相约去攀登 11,240 英尺高的胡德山，但在中途过程中，作者意外从山上摔下来的故事。第一步：段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我大声呼救。”可知，第一段可描写作者被得到救助的过程。由第二段首句内容“这次事故让我有了深刻的反思，但
24、我又重新爬了起来。”可知，本段描写作者通过本次经历得到了哪些反思，以及后续又开始爬山。第二步：续写线索：大声呼救被救助过程感悟重新开始爬山 第三步：词汇激活：【行为类】帮助：assist/aid/help 颤抖：shiver/tremble/quiver 阻止某人做某事：keep sb from doing sth/prevent sb from doing sth【情绪类】痛苦：agony/pain/suffering 谨慎的：cautious/careful/prudent【点睛】高分句型 1.Hearing my cry for help,Mel made her way down an
25、d other climbers came to assist me.（运用了现在分词作状语）高分句型 2.Id been lying on the ice shivering and in agony for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me.（运用了 by the time 引导的时间状语从句）高分句型 3.Then I was loaded into an ambulance and taken to a hospital,where I stayed for four days.（运用了where 引导的非限制性定语从句）3.
26、（2023 年全国高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Surviving Mount Rainier Bad luck and poor timing left Kart and three climbers stuck on Mount Rainier for several long days.They faced mountain climbings toughest tests.One man suffered altitude sickness;ice and rockfall rained down at night;cold n
27、ights in a tent that got torn left them hypothermic(体温过低的).Calm confidence,skill and the courage to continue up the route,despite illness and injury,likely saved their lives.The climbers set out on a Friday,camping low on the route the first night because they were concerned about rockfall after a c
28、limber had recently died in an accident at the routes typical high camp.On Saturday,at about 10,500 feet,one of the climbers became sick from the altitude,which began to slow them down.They needed to keep moving,so they put him in the lead so he could move at a pace he was comfortable with.By Sunday
29、 evening,the ill climber was exhausted,and they had to make an unplanned camp on steep snow.They were in a bad placeon a platform about the size of a table under an ice cliff.The wind got stronger during the night,ripping the tent and snapping the poles.They tried to secure it by placing their packs
30、 and rocks around the edges.Finally,they just stuck their feet between the rocks and held the tent with their bodies.It was a cold night.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;Paragraph 1:On Monday,they managed to call 911 but forgot to ask how to communicate with the rangers(护林员)before losin
31、g signal._ Paragraph 2 On Wednesday,they gathered everything and decided to carry on with their climb._【答案】On Monday,they managed to call 911 but forgot to ask how to communicate with the rangers(护林员)before losing signal.They set up what was left of the tent as best they could and stayed where they
32、were,praying for the early arrival of their salvation.But for several days,they watched beyond all hope as high winds prevented the rangers attempts at a helicopter rescue.Their food was running out and they shared a single bottle of snow melt each day.Then an icefall buried their tent platform and
33、squeezed them together.It was impossible to climb down.On Wednesday,they gathered everything and decided to carry on with their climb.They climbed up slowly and carefully,resting when they were weak.It didnt take long until the wind froze them in place.That was the scariest moment.Their spirits bega
34、n to sink and they started to doubt if they could continue.Kart thought of all the people who loved him,and it really hit him they must be worried.As he tried to climb again and again,he just kept yelling out to his friends,“We have to get there.”However,as they got onto the final slope to the summi
35、t,the weather cleared.Suddenly,a helicopter appeared out of nowhere.They were rescued.【导语】本篇书面表达是读后续写，文章讲述了 Kart 和三位被困雷尼尔山登山者的遭遇。故事按照时间顺序展开。他们在周五出发，周六，一位队员的高原反应减缓他们的速度，让他们在周日不得不更换临时扎营地点在冰崖下一个桌子那么大的平台上。糟糕的帐篷的选址以及恶劣的天气使他们帐篷严重受损，让他们度过寒冷的一晚上。周一他们联系上 911，但是恶劣天气让救援无法到达，食物要耗尽，此时也无法下山。因此，周三他们聚集所有物品决定继续向上攀登上
36、山，历经艰辛与危险，终于爬到山顶，天气放晴，他们得救了。第一步：段落续写：由第一段首句内容“周一，他们设法拨打了 911，但在失去信号之前忘记询问如何与护林员沟通。”可知，第一段可描写他们只能在原地等待救援，但是恶劣的天气让救援人员和直升飞机过不来，食品也要耗尽，冰崩让他们本来就很小的地方无法立足，也无法下山。由第二段首句内容“星期三，他们收集了所有东西，并决定继续攀登。”可知，第二段可描写他们向上攀登，虽然中途遇到困难，仍然坚持到最后，爬上山顶，得救了。第二步：续写线索：等待救援希望落空决定继续攀登困难重重克服困难爬到山顶得救 第三步：词汇激活：【行为类】期盼：pray for/expect
37、/hope for 尽最大努力做某事：try to do/spare no effort to do 大声喊：yell out/shout out/speak in a loud voice【情绪类】失去信心：lose heart/their spirits begin to sink 积极：positive attitude/act positively 害怕：scared/frightened 【点睛】【高分句型1】They set up what was left of the tent as best they could and stayed where they were,pray
38、ing for the early arrival of their salvation.(由 what 引导宾语从句、where 引导的地点状语从句和非谓语动词作做伴随状语)【高分句型 2】It didnt take long until the wind froze them in place.(until 引导的时间状语从句)【高分句型 3】It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally.(由 It was.that 结构引导的强调句型)4.（2022 年山东
39、临沂高三统考开学考试）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，续写词数应为 150 左右。Malachi Bradley doesnt show signs of being panicked or worried when he talks about how he spent 29 hours lost in a rough area of the High Uintas.“I didnt really feel scared.I was just trying to get back to my family,”the 10-year-old said
40、Tuesday in a quiet,almost matter-of-fact way just one day after he was rescued.When asked what happened to him,he simply replied:“A lot of things.I hiked a long way.”Malachi confidently believes he could have survived two or three weeks on his own,dressed in only his jeans and his shoes,and with no
41、food,tent or blankets.But the look in the eyes of Malachis father,Danny Bradley,told a different story,one of much deeper concern,when he realized his son was missing.“Its a horrible feeling,just knowing how vast the Uinta Mountains are,”he said,“I quickly felt how severe the situation was.”Malachi
42、recalled his great adventure Tuesday.He showed no signs of going without food for a day or sleeping between rocks for an hour at night to block the cold wind.But he admitted when he got home to his own bed on Monday night that he was asleep within a minute of his head hitting his pillow and stayed t
43、here for 12 hours.His adventure began Sunday when Malachi,his father,two siblings(兄弟姐妹),and a family friend were about to leave their campsite near Paul Lake to go home.“We were just going to cook up a fish he caught and head out,and,”Danny Bradley paused,“it ended up being a lot longer.”Malachi sai
44、d he went to look for mushrooms about 10:30 a.m.He had just walked a long way when he encountered a snake.He was so frightened that he decided to get back but he could no longer see the lake where his campsite was set up.He knew he was lost.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Malachi didnt have h
45、is whistle with him that he normally carries in case he gets lost when exploring._ But on Monday afternoon,Malachi took off his shoes to take a break in an open area and heard another helicopter nearby._【答案】Malachi didnt have his whistle with him that he normally carries in case he gets lost when ex
46、ploring.He didnt know what to do but to walk along the road and call out his families while walking.However,nobody answered him.Not knowing how long he had walked for,he suddenly heard a helicopter nearby.He began to shout as loudly as he could so that he could be heard.Unfortunately,the helicopter
47、flied away for it was too dark to see him.Feeling a little bit depressed,he tried his best to follow the helicopter though he lost it very quickly.Not until the sun rose did Malachi realize that he had walked for the whole night,hungry,tired and cold.But on Monday afternoon,Malachi took off his shoe
48、s to take a break in an open area and heard another helicopter nearby.He tried to yell for help again with his clothes waving in his hand.To his disappointment,the helicopter began to fly away too.He thought he was about to stay here for another night when the helicopter turned back.【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章以倒
49、叙的手法讲述了主人公 Malachi 在山上走丢的故事。10 岁的 Malachi在走失了 29 个小时后终于被找到了，他云淡风轻的讲述了自己走丢这段时间的经历，但从他父亲的反应来看，事情远非如此简单。Malachi 在周日上午和家人一起露营的时候不小心走失，一直到周二才被找到。回忆起自己这两天的经历，Malachi 虽然没有表现得很惊慌，但回到家后却倒头就睡，并且一睡就睡了 12个小时。第一步：段落续写：由第一段首句内容“Malachi 没有带他的哨子，他通常会带着哨子以防在探险时迷路。”可知，第一段可描写 Malachi 走失后的经历及心里想法。由第二段首句内容“但在周一下午，Malach
50、i 脱下鞋子，在一个开阔的地方休息，听到附近有另一架直升机。”可知，第二段可描写 Malachi 遇到直升机后的反应。第二步：续写线索：走失但没带哨子不知所措只能大喊家人的名字遇到一架直升机但未被救第二天下午再次遇到直升机有幸被救 第三步：词汇激活：【行为类】呼救：shout for help/call for help/cry for help 返回：turn back/come back/fly back【情绪类】感到有点沮丧：feel a little bit depressed/feel a little bit frustrated 令某人失望：to ones disappointm