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1、全国高考书面表达的评分标准：全国高考书面表达的评分标准：覆盖所有主要内容；应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；达到了预期的写作目的。第五档（很好）（第五档（很好）（2125分）：分）：增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧 技技 巧巧1.使用较高级的词汇使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章
2、上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式三、怎样使用恰当的连接词三、怎样使用恰当的连接词逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇时间顺序first,second,then,finally/atlast,soonimmediately,suddenly空间顺序here,there,ononesideontheotherside,infrontof,atthebackof,nextto对称顺序foronething,fortheotherthing,ononehand,ontheotherhand转折顺序but,however,while,though,
3、otherwise因果顺序because,since,as,thanksto,asaresult(of)条件顺序aslongas,solongas,onconditionthat,if,unless让步顺序though,as,evenif/though,whether,who(what,when,where)ever递进顺序whatsmore,besides,tomakethematterworse,whatsworse过渡性插入语Ithink,Imafraid,youknow,AsweallknowOn one side oftheroadthereisanewclassroombuildi
4、ng.On the other side,wheretheplaygroundusedtobenowstandsanothernewbuildingourlibrary.(NMET1999范文)As far as I know,everyoneishappyaboutthisnewarrangementofthings.(NMET2001范文)Whats more,Icangotobedearlier.(NMET2001范文)三、怎样使用恰当的连接词三、怎样使用恰当的连接词联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大
5、小：近100户人家，约500口人。2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：100-120之间。书面表达：书面表达：Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopl
6、eherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgen
7、tlemen,Welcometoourschool!Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Thisvillageisa small one with/which hasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.However,ithaschange
8、dalotsince1978 and has been developing very fast.Peopleherelive a much better lifethanbefore.书面表达书面表达：Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere
9、.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmalland most children couldnt afford to go to school.Butnowithasbeenrebuiltand which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one inthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Whats more,theyenjoyfreeeducation.May you enjoy your stay
10、 herethenewlybuiltteachingbuilding/May you have a pleasant time here!Thankyou.Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!Thisvillageisa small one with/which hasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.However,ithaschangedalotsince1978and has been developing very fast.Peopleherelive a much be
11、tter lifethanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmalland most children couldnt afford to go to school.Butnowithasbeenrebuiltandthenewlybuiltteachingbuildingwhich has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one inthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Whats more,theyenjoyfr
12、eeeducation.May you enjoy your stay here/May you have a pleasant time here!Thankyou.请根据下列表格的内容，阐述一下你对减少城市人口的看法。建议项具体措施目的1A.晚婚B.一对夫妇一个孩子减少人口自然增长（人口出生率）2严格控制外地人进城务工经商减轻外地人口对城市的压力3A.在郊区，建造生活、商业、文教、卫生、娱乐休闲生活小区B.在城市的县里建造卫星城吸引城市居民到郊区和卫星城工作和生活。(B)Our modern city is too crowded,and to solve the problem,I ha
13、ve three suggestions.First of all,practise the policy of“Late Marriage”and“One Couple,One child”so as to reduce the birth rate.Secondly,the city government must have a tight control of people entering cities to engage in trade or do various physical jobs in order to reduce the pressure on the city c
14、aused by the increasing population.Finally,more and more people suggest that living blocks with shopping centers,school,hospital as well as cinemas and theatres or even satellite towns should be built in the city suburbs or the countries round the cities.In this way city citizens will be encouraged to move there.If these three suggestions are well carried out,the city population will be greatly reduced.THANK YOU!THANK YOU!GOODBYE !GOODBYE !