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1、Learning objectives:After this lesson, you are expected to master the following writing skills to achieve the necessary effectiveness of your writing.1. Using some advanced words.2. Using some advanced structures.3. Using Some proper connective words1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-i
2、ng形式）.2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用as倒装句)4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) 5. I won the competition because of her help.(用虚拟语气）On his arriving, please give me an e-
3、mail.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.二、怎样使用较丰富的句式二、怎样使用较丰富的句式Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldnt have won the competition but for your help. 6. She walked out of the lab an
4、d many students followed her. (使用过去分词)7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)8.I wont believe what he says. （使用让步状语从句） 9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）10He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)No sooner had he come ba
5、ck from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make rapid progress.三、怎样使用恰当的连接词三、怎样使用恰当的连接词逻辑角度逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇合适的过渡性词汇时间顺序 first, second, then, final
6、ly/at last , soon immediately, suddenly空间顺序here, there, on one sideon the other side,in front of, at the back of, next to 对称顺序for one thing, for the other thing, on one hand,on the other hand转折顺序but, however, while, though, otherwise因果顺序because, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of)条件顺序as long as,
7、so long as, on condition that, if, unless让步顺序though, as, even if/though, whether, who (what,when, where)ever递进顺序whats more, besides, to make the matter worse,whats worse表示总结in a word, altogether, all in all, in general一一.补充句子补充句子 根据中文意思，将下列英文句子补充完整。根据中文意思，将下列英文句子补充完整。1.你给了我许多帮助，也给了我许多鼓舞。总之，没有你我不能成功。
8、 You gave me much help and encouragement. _ _ _, I couldnt have succeeded without you.In a word 三、怎样使用恰当的连接词三、怎样使用恰当的连接词 2.总的说来，你的回答不太令人满意。总的说来，你的回答不太令人满意。 _ _ _, your answer is not so satisfying. 3.一般说来物理比数学难学得多。一般说来物理比数学难学得多。 , physics is much more difficult than mathematics.All in all Generally s
9、peaking 4.令我满意的是，他数学考试得了满分。令我满意的是，他数学考试得了满分。 _ _ _, he got full marks in the mathematics exam. 5.令我惊恐的是，令我惊恐的是， 我看见他从树上摔了下来。我看见他从树上摔了下来。 _ _ _, I saw him fall down from the tree. 6.这辆自行车真的很漂亮，然而我没钱买。这辆自行车真的很漂亮，然而我没钱买。 This bike is really very beautiful. , I have no money to buy it.To my satisfaction
10、 To my horror Nevertheless 7.他首先去了法国，然后又去了美国。他首先去了法国，然后又去了美国。 First, he went to France; _ he went to America. 8.令我高兴的是，令我高兴的是， 我终于说服她改变了主我终于说服她改变了主意。意。 _ _ _ . I finally persuaded her to change her mind.then To my joy 9.一开始他反对我的计划，一开始他反对我的计划， 但最后他支持我的计划了。但最后他支持我的计划了。 At first he was against my plan,
11、 but _ _ _ he was for it. 10.你必须购买一些生活必需品。你必须购买一些生活必需品。 你必须了解一些关于你必须了解一些关于这个国家的信息。总之，这个国家的信息。总之， 你必须为这次旅行做好准备。你必须为这次旅行做好准备。 You should buy some living necessities. You should learn something about this country. _ _ _, you must get everything ready for this journey.In the end In a word 二二. 行文逻辑训练行文逻辑
12、训练 阅读短文，选择适当的过渡性词汇填空阅读短文，选择适当的过渡性词汇填空。first, whats worse/more, besides/in addition, now, in my opinion, As far as Im concerned, in my view, from the point of my view. _1_ many middle school students are fat and there are reasons for it. Some eat too much met and too many snacks. Some sit too long bu
13、t seldom exercise. Getting fat has quite a few disadvantages. _2_, being fat makes it difficult for one to walk or move as others.Now First _3_ , to be fat usually means to be weak, and it is easy for a fat person to suffer from many kinds of diseases. At the same time. A fat person gets tired easil
14、y, which decreases his study efficiency. _4_, to be fat is not a good thing for us middle students. We should try to eat less meat but more vegetables. _ we should try our best to take part in all kinds of sports. If so, we are sure to lose weight and stay healthy.Whats more In my opinion Besides, 三
15、三. . 篇章结构训练篇章结构训练 给下面的书面表达的主题句排序：给下面的书面表达的主题句排序： 你班同学参加了你班同学参加了学生双语报学生双语报组织的组织的一场头论。讨论的主题是：城市内是否一场头论。讨论的主题是：城市内是否可以饲养宠物。请你根据下表所提供的可以饲养宠物。请你根据下表所提供的信息，给该报社写一篇文章，介绍讨论信息，给该报社写一篇文章，介绍讨论情况，并说明自己的观点或建议。用情况，并说明自己的观点或建议。用5个个句子完成文章。句子完成文章。反对养宠物的同学认为反对养宠物的同学认为 支持养宠物的同学认为支持养宠物的同学认为1.造成环境污染造成环境污染2.可能会商人可能会商人1.与
16、孤寡老人做伴与孤寡老人做伴2.人与动物和谐相处，人与动物和谐相处，能增添生活情趣能增添生活情趣 A. Some students are against the idea of keeping pets. B.Some students think its a good idea to keep pets. C.I think we can keep pets at home but we must prevent them from polluting our environment. D.Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether
17、 people should keep pets or not at home in cities. E.In general, opinions differ from people to people.请根据下列表格的内容，阐述一下你对减少城市人口请根据下列表格的内容，阐述一下你对减少城市人口的看法的看法。建议项具体措施目 的1A.晚婚B.一对夫妇一个孩子减少人口自然增长（人口出生率）2严格控制外地人进城务工经商减轻外地人口对城市的压力3A.在郊区，建造生活、商业、文教、卫生、娱乐休闲生活小区B. 在城市的县里建造卫星城吸引城市居民到郊区和卫星城工作和生活。HomeworkThanks for your attending our class!25 结束语结束语