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1、新题型 【P225】（根据普通高等学校招生全国统一考试说明，读后续写或概要写作两种形式在不同考 次不定期交替使用。）对应学生用书P225读后续写是一种综合考查学生的阅读与写作能力、创新思维与语言表达能力的新题型。 它具有以下特点：1 所给材料以记叙文为主；2 .读写结合。学生要在读懂材料内容、理清情节脉络之后，按试题要求完成续写部分；3 -发挥空间大。学生要通过根据对试题的确切理解，根据故事情节的发展，对文章的 结局有个合理的表达。写作要求：提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据材料内容，所给段落开头语进行续写 （150词左右），将其发展成一篇与所给材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
2、1 所提供的语言材料350词以内，所续写的词数为150左右。2续写部分共两段，每段的开头语已有提示；3 有一种续写题型要求使用五个以上原文中标有下划线的关键词语；而近期又出现无 下划线词语的题型。一般来说，记叙文所呈现的要素有“6w”： when, where, who, what, why, howo那么，学 生阅读时就要注意：1 故事的起因、发展、高潮和结局。原文往往已经将起因和发展交代清楚了，学生要 通读全文，把握文章的脉络和串起其中的关键词，根据所给的两段段首句续写故事的高潮部 分和最后的结局部分；2 在谋篇布局时，必须注意文中事件发生的逻辑性，故事的发展必须符合情节内在的 逻辑。在布
3、局第一段的内容时，要兼顾两段的段首句，因为第二段的段首句决定第一段的走 向；同时也应注意划线词语与主题的关联；3 写作手法上应以叙述为主，同时注意心理活动和动作的描写。（一）有下划线词语要求的写作步骤1 -细读文章、确定文章线索。根据作者的写作思路，找到该篇文章的主线，要么以时 间要么以空间为线索，“顺藤摸瓜”，串连起文章的首尾。2 仔细审题，明确续写要求。一般短文后面的“注意”都有对此短文续写的具体要求， 如词数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示等，做到“心中有数”。3 结合段首的提示语，最终确定续写段落的思路，同时结合文章划线词语提示，确定 续写段落的内容。4在确定了思路和内
4、容之后，最关键的就是结合提示或者文中划线的关键词语拟写提 纲或打好草稿。写作时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连续词 的正确使用，使上下文连贯。5 最后，检查关键词的使用标出自己所用关键词语，并根据情况做出修改。在誉写文 字时，务必做到字迹工整、清晰、美观。（二）无下划线词语要求的写作步骤从某种意义上说，无下划线词要求的读后续写相对容易。由于没有关键词语的限制，考 生的构思更加简便。1 细读原文，明确原文的主旨大意，梳理其主要情节。2透彻理解续写两段落的开头句。3 原文的最末一句也值得思考、分析。4把以上要点串联到一起确定要续写的两个段落的内容。5 最后检查，敲定情节发展
5、是否合理。示例阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续 写的词数应为150左右。Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today, there are times when I remember his face clearly, especially his eyes. As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty. He would have been a stray（流浪的）dog, until he came to me.I
6、 was seven years old. My dad had just got a new job in Nasik. We had moved into a rented house. It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.It was a cold dark night. We had our meal and went to sleep. Somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door. I gathered courage a
7、nd looked out through the window and I was really amused with what I saw outside.There was a small puppy lying on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the door. It was wet and trembling. At first it was difficult to see the little one. It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me reali
8、ze its presence.It was trying to get under the doormat to avoid the cold air outside and it had managed to get in as I could see only its head outside the doormat. Was it sick or injured?I felt pity for the poor soul. I went in and came out with an old towel. I went near the innocent one and held it
9、 in my hand and wiped the puppy till he had bee dry. I took him into my room and made a bed fbr him with a woolen blanket and a small pillow. He seemed very healthy and fbrtable in his new bed as he went to sleep immediately.The next morning, everyone in the family came to know about the unusual gue
10、st. Shall we keep him with us? ” I questioned my mom.Like any other parents would, my parents first totally refused my idea but my sister and I convinced them to keep Spotty.Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.Paragraph 1：Days passed on and one evening when Spotty
11、 returned from his long walk, he appeared very tired.Paragraph 2：Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking答案Paragraph 1:Days passed on and one evening when Spotty returned from his long walk, he appeared very tired. He came to my room and sat near me. It was then that I saw his hind
12、leg was injured and was bleeding. I called out my mother, who quickly treated his wound and gave him food to eat. I was very upset. But the next day, Spotty made a good recovery and began to get a little active. After this incident my relation with Spotty became more intense. I really admired him a
13、lot for his courage.Paragraph 2:Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly. We came out and saw him barking continuously heading somewhere. After some time, Spotty became quiet. I patted him on his back and came inside. The next morning, my heart skipped a beat when I did
14、nt see Spotty. I searched for him in each and every corner but he was nowhere. I cried for one long week. What would have happened to Spotty? Would he have died? These were the only questions in my mind, but they remained unanswered forever.试题分析1 原文主要情节：(l)We had moved into a newly rented house in N
15、asik as my dad had got a new job there.(2)On a cold dark night a stray puppy came lying on an old doormat outside of my house.(3)1 held him in my arms and took good care of him, named Spotty.(4)My parents at first refused my idea and then allowed Spotty to be kept by my sister and me.(5)Slowly Spott
16、y was getting on well with everyone and became one of the family members.2 续文情节推理：是“我”发现、收留并照顾了 Spotty，使他成了 “我”家的一员。(2)作为“我”家的一员，Spotty的日子怎么过的呢？从Paragraph 1给出的开头来看， 随着时间的推移Spotty要有日常活动，于是有一个晚上他远行之后又折了回来，疲惫不堪。 Spotty腿受伤，流着血，作者给他包扎，治疗。第二天得到恢复，他又活跃了起来。接着 Paragraph 2 的开头句，是“一年之后”的事情了，Spotty “barked brea
17、thlessly”， 最后他走了，之后再无声迹。最后两个问句，表达“我”的不舍和沉痛的心情。全文描述了 “我”和Spotty从结识、相处到分离的全过程。课堂作文1阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Two years ago I, together with my family, moved to another city. The day we left, my best friend and I cried together in my empty bedroom for hours. I was miserable and homesick during the
18、five-hour car ride to my new house.When we finally arrived at the new house, I ran to the phone to tell my best friend my address and phone number. We talked for a little while, but I had to hang up because the longdistance call was expensive. Both of us agreed to keep in touch with each other forev
19、er.On the first day of school, I called her to tell her how everything went. Then, on Halloween, I sent her a letter and a picture of my new friends and me.Finally, she wrote me a letter. It wasnt even a letter, just a bunch of pieces of paper saying, “ Best friends forever.vWhen I finally got her e
20、- mail address, I e- mailed her the longest letter I had ever written. I didnt receive an e-mail, and by the third e- mail with no response, my messages grew shorter and shorter. With each passing day, I got angrier and angrier. I never received a reply from her.Mom said that I could contact my othe
21、r friends, and that I didn*t need to always contact her. Give up my best friend?Paragraph 1:My first answer was automatic, “ No way !Paragraph 2:Aftertwoyearsofdisappointment,答案Paragraph 1:My first answer was automatic, “No way! ” But after five more e- mails, three more phone calls and two more let
22、ters, I started to consider what my mom had said. Every night fbr about a week, I started up in bed thinking what I should do. Should Igive up or should I keep trying ? If I was her best friend, she would spend a minute pushing a few buttons on the phone, or typing a short message on the puter.Parag
23、raph 2:After two years of disappointment, I finally received a phone call from my best friend. She told me how sorry she was fbr not replying, and how busy she had been. I forgave her. I came to realize that true friends would never really lose their special connection. Even after two years, it felt
24、 as if we had just talked yesterday. Now she and I contact each other regularly.试题分析通过阅读所给文章可知，作者在去新家后，多次主动与她的好朋友联系，但朋友只草草 回信说“永远的好朋友”，后来甚至是没有任何回应。基于这种情况，作者的妈妈建议她不 再和朋友联系。根据要求，续写分为两段。第一段开头是：我的第一回答是不假思索地“不可能”， 所以此段应该接着描写她再次主动与朋友联系，却还是没有得到回应。第二段的开头是：经 历两年的失望后，所以此段应该描写功夫不负有心人，朋友终于和她联系，作者与朋友 之间的误会解开。续写时
25、要求使用5个及以上的关键词给写作增加了难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词，在恰 当的时间加以运用。最后还要注意续写的作文词数应为150左右；续写完后，用下划线标出 所使用的关键词。按要求完成写作。2阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Jenny was the only child in her family. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn*t help weeping sorrowfully（悲伤地）when s
26、he thought of the_scolding_fh）m_her_mother. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a stand（货摊）for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she gave a sigh a
27、nd had to leave. The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles? ” “Oh, yes, but I dont have money on me / she replied.“ That*s nothing. Ell treat you todaysaid the man. e in. The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, the smell so attractive. A
28、s she was eating, Jenny cried silently. What is it? ” asked the man kindly. u Nothing. Actually I was just touched by your kindness ! ” said Jenny as she wiped her tears. Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for m
29、e. She is so merciless（无情的）pared to a stranger! ” Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you? Have you exp
30、ressed your gratitude（感激）to her ? ” Jenny sat there, speechless and numb（麻木的）with shock; she remembered her mothers fhmiliar fhce and weathered（变形）hands. Why didnt I think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel indebted（感激的）.Why havent I thanked my mum fbr what she has done for me ?
31、 ” On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother fbr her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Approachingthedoorway,Paragraph 2:A gentle touch on her hair called her mind
32、back.答案Paragraph 1:Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. Tired and sad, she sat down in front of the house. Where might my mother be? ” she wondered. Is she really so angry with me that she doesn*t want to show any care fbr me ? ” Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind. Sh
33、e remembered her rudeness to her mother, and she just realized that all the_scolding_f?om_her_mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her. Terrs rolled down her cheeks.Paragraph 2:A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. She raised her head to see the familiar fhc
34、e and the worried eyes. Here you e! Pve been looking for youcame the tired voice. Jenny couldnt help but throw herself into her mothers arms. Pm sorry and thank you for all you have done for me She expressed the sincere apology and the great gratitude. Then she felt the hug tightened.试题分析1 把握短文核心内容。
35、仔细阅读所给短文，把握短文核心内容是完成续写的前提。本 文讲的是一个故事。Jenny和妈妈吵架，跑出去，没有钱吃饭。一个陌生人请她吃了 一碗面 条，她感激万分。陌生人提醒她，为什么对陌生人的一碗面条感激不已，却从没有想过自己 的妈妈为自己做了多少事情。2 预测故事发展。根据已知人物、事件及续写段落首段进行预测。3 罗列写作要点。结合文本中划线词语和预测，展开想象，罗列出故事情节的发展。4连词成篇。结合罗列的要点，恰当地使用衔接词。避免重复使用同一个单词或短语， 避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等，但一 定要与原文保持风格一致。5 认真检查。检查行文是否流畅、合逻辑，时态、人称是否一致，句子结构是否清晰， 短语使用、单词拼写是否正确等。