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1、托福作文写作范文详解题目:Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.To what extent do you agree or disagree?话题和题型分类 媒体类；同不同意题型 题目分析 广告能否提高产品销量 思路提示A.同意广告提高产品知名度 名人代言，激发购买欲 密集的广告宣传攻势B.不同意需考虑可支配收入 与个人的消费习惯有关Sample A
2、nswerNowadays, there are lots of advertisements on television or on the streets. Some people think that the advertising boosts the sales of goods and it encourages people to buy things unnecessarily. This argument may be true. Around the world, many advertising companies produce advertisements with
3、famous and popular actors or singers. People, especially youngsters, buy goods that their favourite idols advertise, even if they do not really need the products.（首段开篇摆明观点：广告可以影响人们消费这一观点可能是正确的）For one thing, on the television screen a product may look gorgeous and of solid quality. As a result of th
4、is, people often buy goods without enough consideration. Consumers may not actually need them but they buy goods impulsively soon after they watch the advertisement. Furthermore, as many customers buy a particular product due to its advertising campaign, other people may be affected by the trend, ev
5、en if the product is not essential to the society.（文章第二段从正面论述作者观点）On the other hand, there are various aspects against this argument. In particular, it is the peoples choice to make a decision to buy goods. Advertising may not even be a major cause of customers1 buying activities as individuals have
6、 their own spending habits. If they have got enough disposable income, then the right to make a decision is given to them. No one can actually judge whether the goods sold are really necessities of the society or not. In addition, as there tends to be a limited amount of disposable income consumers
7、are able to spend, people try to allocate their budgets. They cannot be swayed simply by those advertisements.（文章第三段从反面论述作者观点：消费者购物不会单纯受广告影响）In conclusion, as customers have their own strong opinions and standards of high quality products, it is better to leave them to make their own decisions in bu
8、ying goods. It is implausible to claim that everyone is swayed by advertising and buy goods impulsively.（全文总结，突出作者观点）满分要素剖析:语言表达本文的语言简洁明了，观点清晰。同时本文分别从正反两面论述观点, 结尾处突出作者观点，结构完整，论证客观、全面。本文中一系列的连 接词使得文章更加连贯：for one thing, furthermore, on the other hand, in addition, in conclusionoOn the other hand, ther
9、e are various aspects against this argument.此句型可用于在议论文中提出反面论据。逻辑结构本文是总分总结构的议论文。开篇先陈述事实并表达观点，第二段从反 面切入后转向正面论述，第三段从正面进一步论述，使得论证更加客观 严谨。第四段对全文进行总结，并重申自己的观点。题目:Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work.How do you think
10、children should spend their free time?话题和题型分类抽象类；说明类考题 题目分析先天因素vs后天经验 思路提示A.先天因素研究表明先天因素对人的影响非常重要环境决定了最终性格能不能形成后天经验的不可预测性B.后天经验性格是父母遗传和后天经验交互影响形成的如果这个结论不成立，我们就可以断定人的性格在出生那一刻就已经被 决定Sample AnswerThe issue of whether children are given too much free time, in my opinion, does not rely on how much time t
11、hey are given, but on what kinds of activities they do to utilise period of time.Taking full advantages of the free time out of school can benefit children a lot.（首段开篇摆明观点:利用好课余时间对孩子们大有益处）Apparently, to promote children s intellectual, emotional, and physical development, there are a variety of ways
12、, which are not merely restricted to formal educational approaches. For instance, social activities can effectively enhance children, s sense of team spirit and their abilities to cooperate and communicate, which are even more significant than IQ in their future careers. They should be encouraged to
13、 participate in voluntary activities and sports, which can benefit them both physically and mentally.（第二段分析孩子们如何利用课外时间以及课外活动带来的好处）Besides, children who have interests in arts can have an abundance of time to foster their special talents, by which they will not necessarily have to grow up to be piani
14、sts or painters, etc., but they might benefit from these useful resources psychologically, i.e. these kinds of leisure activities can help them ease their minds, overcome their loneliness and acquire a sounding wellbeing, especially when they are confronted with adversities when they become adults i
15、n the competitive modern society. What s more, without the direct supervision of a parent or a teacher, they have to learn the abilities of time management, and hence the awareness of that one should take responsibility of oneself will be elevated.（第三段从有充足时间培养特长和学会管理自己的时间分析课外时间 以及课外活动带来的好处）In conclu
16、sion, no matter in what respects, children should be encouraged to spend more time out of school, rather than focus only on studies, since activities in free time can help them promote their development, foster their special talents and learn the abilities of time management.（总结全文重申观点）满分要素剖析语言表达本文多出
17、现长句、复合句，作者利用连词等句子各部分紧密连接，逻辑 性强，行文流畅，语言表达清晰，准确表达作者观点。For instance, social activities can effectively enhance children, s sense of team spirit and their abilities to cooperate and communicate, which are even more significant than IQ in their future careers.For instance用于举例说明；which引导的非限定性定语从句解释在未来职业生涯中
18、，合作与交流的能力甚至比智商更重要。Besides, children who have interests in arts can have an abundance of time to foster their special talents, by which they will not necessarily have to grow up to be pianists or painters, etc., but they might benefit from these useful resources psychologically, i.e. these kinds of l
19、eisure activities can help them ease their minds, overcome their loneliness and acquire a sounding wellbeing, especially when they are confronted with adversities when they become adults in the competitive modern society.Besides开头表明是另一论据；who对children做了限定，是指对 艺术有兴趣的孩子；by which表明通过利用这些才能他们能做什么; ie用于举例说明。逻辑结构本文是总分总的结构。开头一段作者表明观点，二、三两段从不同的角 度论述孩子在课余时间参加何种活动以及由此而带来的影响，结尾一段 总结全文，重申观点。