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1、托福作文写作范文详解题目：As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.What factors contribute to job satisfaction?How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?1 .话题和题型分类工作类2 .题目分析工作满意度的构成；全民皆满意的可能性3 .思路提示A
2、.工作满意度的构成感受到自身价值具有归属感团队合作精神浓厚 获得成就感具有竞争力的薪酬B.可能性每个人很难找到自己适合的工作 知识技能不匹配 与个人性格不匹配Sample AnswerNowadays, many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent doing such jobs is very high. So ones feelings about ones job frequently reflect how an individual feels about his or her life
3、 as a whole. Because of this, job satisfaction is indeed very important for the wellbeing of that person. Factors such as positive feedback, a sense of progression and a sense of belonging contribute to job satisfaction. However, not everyone can achieve such satisfaction.（首段开篇摆明观点:工作满足感非常重要，受工作中的积极
4、反馈、归属感等因素影响，但并不是每个人都能获得这种满足感）Employees gain job satisfaction in a number of ways. Firstly, a person needs to feel that they are doing valued work, so positive feedback from superiors is very important in this respect. A sense of fulfillment is also encouraged if a worker feels the job is worth doing
5、 because it contributes to the society or the economy as a whole. Secondly, when someone feels they are improving or developing their skills through training opportunities, for example, then there is a sense of progression and purpose that rewards a worker. The sense of belonging to a team or a work
6、ing community also contributes to job satisfaction because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives. Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility for and loyalty to a team.（文章第二段，较为全面地阐述了影响工作满足感的因素）Of course not everyone enjoys their work. Hard economic realities mean t
7、hat many people have little choice in the kind of job they can get In some cases an employee is working in a job that suits neither their skills nor their personality. Some jobs are repetitive and boring, and labor relations may be poor and lead to resentment and insecurity rather than to job satisf
8、action.（文章第三段，从观点反面展开，论述更加全面，观点表达更清晰）However, even though it is unlikely that all workers do feel happy in their work, it is not unrealistic to promote more work satisfaction in any job. If the factors identified above are implemented, then any job can be improved and more workers can feel greater d
9、egrees of job satisfaction.（全文总结，强调观点）满分要素剖析：语言表达本文语言简单明了，段内陈述时，使用firstly, secondly使条理非常清 晰，内容一目了然。In some cases an employee is working in a job that suits neither their skills nor their personality.句型In some cases.可用于议论文中举例论证。However, even though it is unlikely that all workers do feel happy in the
10、ir work, it is not unrealistic to promote more work satisfaction in any job.句型It is unlikely that.可用于议论文中陈述观点，论证更显客观。逻辑结构本文是总分总的结构。作者开篇先陈述事实并表达自己的观点，第二段 分析影响因素，第三段从反面表明并非所有人能获得工作满足感，使得 论证更加客观全面。最后一段作者强调自己的观点。题 目：Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Other
11、s, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.1 .话题和题型分类犯罪类2 .题目分析固定刑罚措施的利弊3 .思路提7KA.好处震慑潜在犯罪减少法官的主观臆断简化判决流程B.缺点容易导致误判不利于维护
12、司法公正Sample AnswerThe flexibility of enforcing laws has fallen into contentious topics of discussion especially when criminals are thought to commit evils with good motivations. Naturally, peoples views differ from the circumstance under which people who incur wrongdoings should be taken into account
13、 on an individual basis to the concept of there being fixed laws and no tolerance for any kind of crime. However, before the establishment of equality and justice, fixed punishments are quite necessary.（首段开篇摆明观点:固定的刑罚是必要的）It is a bit understandable that the preference that judges are supposed to mak
14、e room for the circumstance of a crime and its intentions prior to making the sentence prevails among a certain number of people due to the fact that people in extreme circumstances such as drought, flooding or even self-defense commit illegal acts just to survive. However, human beings7 natures pit
15、ifully make it impossible for more freedom to be left to judges to decide on the punishment because human beings are born emotional and often selfish. As a result, without the prerequisite of established justice and equality, the day when a sentence is made in a flexible way may never arrive.（本段是文章第
16、二段，先从反面让步，再切入正面论证，客观辩证地分 析）To be exact, it may be because of the arbitrary law system that fixed punishments do work in many aspects. For one thing, fixed punishments can serve the deferring purpose and especially fills an indispensable role in avoiding resistance or even riots in public. To a large
17、r extent, they are able to frighten or scare off would-be criminals to ensure a safe living environment for the law-abiding citizens and warn those potential wrong-doers into thinking twice before acting. For another, this practice is surely a great consolation to the victims, for quite a few of the
18、m firmly hold that their loss of property or beloved must be compensated by merciless punishments based on fixed laws.（文章第三段，从正面进一步论述观点，固定刑罚是对受害者极大的安 慰）All in all, to ensure that the society can run smoothly before a relatively perfect establishment of equality and justice, an overwhelming majority
19、of cases have to be decided by laws.(全文总结强调观点)满分要素剖析：语言表达本文多处使用连接词，如：naturally, however, for one thing, for another, to a larger extent, as a result, to be exact, 语言流畅连贯。本文先从反 面让步后从正面论述观点，从论证手法上来说，就非常客观和辩证。It is a bit understandable that the preference that judges are supposed to make room for the c
20、ircumstance of a crime and its intentions prior to making the sentence prevails among a certain number of people due to the fact that people in extreme circumstances such as drought, flooding or even self-defense commit illegal acts just to survive.It 是客观论证的句型，不带任何个人感情色彩的有理有据的论 证观点，陈述事实。However, human beings natures pitifully make it impossible for more freedom to be left to judges to decide on the punishment because human beings are born emotional and often selfish.句型make(s) itfor.to可用于表示原因。逻辑结构 本文是总分总的结构。作者开篇先陈述事实并表达自己的观点，第二段 从反面切入，然后转向正面论述，第三段继续正面论述，正反面论述使 得论证更加客观全面。最后一段作者总结全文，强调自己的观点。