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1、托福作文写作范文详解Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.1 .题目翻译：一个人永进不要单独做出重要决策，同意与否？2 .审题关键词：Make an important decision alone; Dependent/Independent;Ability3 .论证分析：正:Part of the
2、 joy of making a decision alone is the sense of self-approval.正：Making a decision alone also save us a lot of time.正:Finally, making a decision alone makes the plan more suitable to ourselves and the exact situations.范文: A person should never make an important decision alone. Important decisions sho
3、uld be well thought out and with the consultation of close and trusted friends and family who know you well and know what is best for you. People close to you can give you good advice, give you a different perspective, or share their own experiences.此段结构本段是一个总分的结构。首先第一句话即点明了主旨，点明作者观点。 后面对主旨进行了简要分析，提
4、出good advice , different perspective zshare their own experiences 三个分论点，弓 I出下文。此段功能本段是文章首段，引出要讨论内容，帮助作者陈述观点，摆明立场，引 出论证部分。When I had difficulty deciding which classes to take in college, I talked to my teachers and advisors. They had the knowledge and expertise to help me determine which classes were
5、 the best ones to take for my future career. Without their advice, I might have chosen unsuitable courses. In college, I had convinced myself that I was not good enough to act in the school play. Therefore, I decided not to audition even though drama had always been my passion. The day of the auditi
6、ons, a friend of mine asked me whyI wasnt auditioning. When I told her I didnt feel I was good enough, she was shocked. She was able to provide me with another perspective on myself and my talents. I rethought my decision and tried out. and got a lead in the play.此段结构本段作者举了自己的两个例子。第一个层次就是作者在大学里面选择未
7、来职业的时候非常犹豫开决，经过了别人的帮忙才得以决定。第二个部 分是说作者在大学里面演话剧的时候，别人给予他的建议和帮助使他取 得成功。这两个例子都很好地从正面证了本文的听取别人意见的重要性。此段功能本段是文章的第二段，也就是正文第一段，写了支持作者立场的两个亲 身例子。Last year when I was trying to decide whether or not I should study overseas, I talked to my friend.This was the best thing I could have done. This was a big decisi
8、on for me because I had never been overseas on my own and I wasnt sure I could do it. She had studied overseas the previous year. She told me about the challenges and opportunities I might encounter and helped me make the right decision. I finally decided to go abroad and it was amazing!此段结构本段还是一个作者
9、的例子，有关作者决定自己是否要出国读书，同样证 明了本文主观点。此段功能本段是文章的第三段，也就是正文第二段，写了支持作者立场的其他例 子。Whenever I am faced with an important decision, I seek advice from others so that I am well-informed and have the benefit of their perspective and experience.此段结构本段只有一句话，承接上文，重申论点，即应该听取他人意见。结构非 常简单。此段功能本段是文章的尾段，承接上文，重申论点。满分因素剖析:一语
10、言表达本文的诧言使用非常优美，句式富于多变，长短句搭配合理，运用了大 量从句和非谓语动词结构，使考官眼前一亮。而在用词上，文中词汇运 用十分地道，表达生动，凸显了作者的很优秀的诧言功底。这些都使得 文章更加吸引考官的眼球。Important decisions should be well thought out and with the consultation of close and trusted friends and family who know you well and know what is best for you.本句是一个由被动语态和多个从句嵌套的复合句结构。本段的主
11、语句中, who know you well 是一个定语从句 修饰 friends and familyo what is best for you是一个由what引导的宾诧从句，做及物动词know 的宾诧。When facing the difficulty to decide which classes to take in college, it is the teachers and advisors that help me make my decisions.本句是一个非谓语从句加强调句的形式。When后面接非谓语动词, 做时间状语。在托福和GRE作文写作中，当用到when或者wh
12、ile引 导时间状语时，不妨模仿这种形式。后半句话是一个强调句型。强调句 结构为“it is +被强调部分+that +句子后半部分。被强调部分可以 句中使除谓语以外的各种结构。判断强调句是否正确的一个标准是去掉 句中的It is和that,如果剩下部分还可以构成一个完整的句子，则强 调句诧法正确。3. Whenever I am faced with an important decision, I seek advice from others so that I am well-informed and have the benefit of their perspective and
13、experience.本句中,whenever引导让步状诧从句,意识为“无论何时，同样的用 法还有not matterwhen0 be faced with是一个托福作文中的常见 短诧,意思是面临着类似的表达还有come across, be encountered witho well-informed是一个常用的复合词，做形容词, 表示有见识的。so that连在一起意思是以便，引导目的状诧从 句,同样的用法还有in order thato二逻辑结构本篇采用标准的五段论结构，开头表明观点，引出分论点。中间论证部 分采用正正正的三段大正论证结构。结尾承接上文，收束全文，再次阐 明观点。文章的结构很标准，逻辑顺序很清晰，观点呈现一目了然。