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1、托福作文写作范文详解Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.1 .题目翻译：人们有时要做自己开喜欢的事。同意不否?2 .审题关键词:Agree or disagree; Sometimes; Do not enjoy doing; Reasons;Examples3 .论证分析:正：So
2、metimes people do not enjoy do one thing because it is challenging, but by stepping out of the comfort zone can enhance one to a level beyond expectation.正:Sometimes we need to do unenjoyable but necessary things.正：Some unenjoyable, even painful experiences in our lives at the time become valuable l
3、essons for the future.范文: I agree that people should sometimes do things that they dont enjoy doing. This is a basic part of being an adult. Plus, some things that arent fun are still good for us in the long run.此段结构本段是一个总分的结构。首先第一句话即点明了主旨。后面第二句话对 主旨速行了简要分析。第三句话对此通行了补充。此段功能本段是文章的首段，第一句话即作者的论点，点出了下文主
4、要内容。Take personal tasks for example. Who enjoys going to the dentist? Very few people enjoy having their annual check-up with the doctor. Not a lot of people enjoy changing the oil in their car or moving their lawns. These are all things we do because we have to, not because we want to. We realize t
5、hat taking care of our physical health is the sensible thing to do; we know that if we dont change the oil in our cars, our cars wont run. We understand that grass grows and if we dont mow it, our lawns will look like tropical forests.此段结构 本段是一个总分的结构。首先第一句话即点明了主旨，即本段讨论的是 个人任务的问题。后面对主旨通行了简要分析。段中井了一个医
6、生的例 子帮助佐证观点。此段功能本段是文章的第二段，也就是正文第一段，写了支持作者立场的第一个 分论点。Professional jobs are another part of the same equation. No one likes to be stuck with a boring assignment or to be told we have to work with someone no one else gets along with. Sometimes we have to put up with unfair criticism from a supervisor o
7、r resentment from those we supervise. If were in management, we may have had the unpleasant task of having to fire someone. None of these are fun things. Unfortunately, theyre all part of earning a living, something the majority of adults have to do.此段结构本段是一个总分的结构。首先第一句话即点明了主旨，即本段讨论的是 与家工作的问题。此段功能本段
8、是文章的第三段，也就是正文第二段，写了支持作者立场的第二个 分论点。On the other hand, sometimes doing something we dont enjoy can lead to enjoyment Simply by trying it again, we may decide we like doing it. For instance, we may have convinced ourselves we hate to dance. We agree to go to a club only to please someone else. Yet, for
9、 some reason, this time we enjoy dancing. Weve been cheating ourselves out of enjoyment without even knowing it. The same can be said about trying new foods or a new type of museum. Doing what we dont enjoy doesnt always have to be a bother, does it? It!s just part of life.此段结构本段是一个总分的结构。首先第一句话即点明了主
10、旨，即本段讨论的是 即使不做喜欢的工作也可能带来享受的问题。并用for instance引出 了一个跳舞的例子。最后对文章整体做了一个总结，即Doing what we dont enjoy doesnt always have to be a bother, does it? Itfs just part of life.此段功能 本段是文章的第四段，也就是正文第三段，写了支持作者立场的第三个 分论点。并重申本文主论点。满分因素剖析一、语言表达文章句子比较短小精悍，没有太难的词汇，简单易懂，错误较少。在句 子方面，作者使用了疑问句，反问句，被动语态等结构，句子虽短但变 化多端，包含语气态度。
11、在用词方面，作者十分下功夫，使用了很多固 定搭配的动词短语，使得表达准确而地道。同时，作者使用了很多高难 词汇，让考官眼前一亮。美句鉴赏Professional jobs are another part of the same equation.这句话的意思是职业工作也是如此。而作者用了一种全新的表达,sth is another part of the same equation ,直译就是是等式的另一部 分，也满足这个等式。这种表达方法在从语义上可以吸引读者，让看 惯了 and , also的读者眼球一亮。2. Sometimes we have to put up with unfai
12、r criticism from a supervisor or resentment from those we supervise.止匕句中,动词短 语put up with的意思是经受，忍受，后面跟名词戒动词的ing形 式，同样的表达还有stand, tolerate。此句中还用到两个高级词汇 supervise和resentment。Supervise 作动词的意思是监督，名 词supervisor的意思是“监督者。名词resentment的意思是怨恨”, 同义词是匕nger,可以成为这种土鳖用法的替代。3. Yet, for some reason, this time we enj
13、oy dancing. Weve been cheating ourselves out of enjoyment without even knowing it.止匕 句中出现固定搭配cheat sb out of sth ,意思是剥夺某人某物。同 样的用法还有deprive sb of sth。在托福考试中，固定搭配的使用会 使得文章的语言显得很地道，更容易引起考官的共鸣，为文章添彩。二、逻辑结构文章采用正正正的大正型支持形式,简单易懂，结构清晰。文章的三个 段落是层速式，最后一个段落写的非常有深意。没有继续平淡地分析原 因，而是告诉我们即使做开喜欢的事情也可能得到乐趣，速一步增强了 本文的说理性。