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1、 Para 1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more,for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad.My heart raced wildly,not knowing what to do.At this critical moment,Elli grabbed several pieces of

2、 garlic bread and threw them over the fence.It worked!The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread.But it wasnt long before he ate up all the bread and came back again.Para 2:At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.“Thank goodness we are saved!”Elli cried out.Once the helicopter landed,we got

3、 onto it in no time,excited and relieved.When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air,I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind.I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene we were robbed by a polar bear!(153 word

4、s)高中英语读后续写(情节设计|善用原文合理编)手把手教 原文取词 改写&衔接 续写情节设计 Para 1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more,for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad.My heart raced wildly,not knowing what to do.At this

5、critical moment,Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence.It worked!The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread.But it wasnt long before he ate up all the bread and came back again.Para 2:At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.“Thank goodness we are saved!”El

6、li cried out.Once the helicopter landed,we got onto it in no time,excited and relieved.When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air,I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind.I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare

7、scene we were robbed by a polar bear!20202020年年7 7月浙江卷月浙江卷 Para 1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more,for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad.My heart raced wildly,not knowing what to

8、 do.At this critical moment,Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence.It worked!The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread.But it wasnt long before he ate up all the bread and came back again.Para 2:At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.“Thank goodness we a

9、re saved!”Elli cried out.Once the helicopter landed,we got onto it in no time,excited and relieved.When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air,I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind.I quickly took out the camera and photograph

10、ed the rare scene we were robbed by a polar bear!20202020年年7 7月浙江卷月浙江卷 原文词汇!One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research camp outside“the polar bear capital of the world”the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears i

11、s amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe distance.When Im face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner

12、,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.【浙江卷】since 20161.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;续写情节设计 20202020年年7 7月浙江卷月浙江卷 One fall,my wife Elli and I had a

13、 single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research camp outside“the polar bear capital of the world”the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe distance.Wh

14、en Im face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bea

15、r followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.【浙江卷】since 20161.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;续写情节设计 20202020年年7 7月浙江卷月浙江卷 “合理编”续写情节设计原文词汇:修饰、改写、推进 关键词在哪?续写情节设计 关键词在哪?续写情节设计读原文3件事:角色+特点+占比 who 关键词动词形容词人物1人物2所有物体what 关键句P1P2 关键词3w1H情节构思前:读原文,找素材(加入续写每1句中)who 关键词动词形容

16、词人物1续写:延续这些动作;或再做一遍,do it again续写:加在名词前/困难或表达“更加”much+adj.er人物2所有物体what 关键句P1P2 关键词3w1H情节构思前:读原文,找素材(加入续写每1句中)who 关键词动词形容词人物1续写:延续这些动作;或再做一遍,do it again续写:加在名词前/困难或表达“更加”much+adj.er人物2所有物体续写:作为解决问题的方法/工具what 关键句P1P2 关键词3w1H情节构思前:读原文,找素材(加入续写每1句中)who 关键词动词形容词人物1续写:延续这些动作;或再做一遍,do it again续写:加在名词前/困难或

17、表达“更加”much+adj.er人物2所有物体续写:作为解决问题的方法/工具what 关键句 需求;冲突;待做的事P1P2 关键词“the+名词”;转机(定结尾);需求3w1Hwhere/when/why/how 各类描写占比情节构思前:读原文,找素材(加入续写每1句中)Needs(需求)Difficulties(困难、障碍)Solutions(方法)Denouement(结局)续写情节构思:需求法(NSDD)Needs(需求)原文找需求:(首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)Difficulties(困难、障碍)原文找困难:(5w1H+角色特点)内在冲突:人物特点/局限外在冲突:外部障碍Sol

18、utions(方法)1、大转机:多在P1/P2首句;2、小工具:原文出现的事物(多划名词事物)3、其他角色:分工协作Denouement(结局)1、需求被解决;2、呼应首段事件/画面;3、升华感悟续写情节构思:需求法(NSDD)-原文线索 N 需求:_(线索:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:_ (线索:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:_ (线索:P1/P2首+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:_ (线索:需求解决+呼应首段)P1:The man just smiled and started to tell the truth.P2:Then,Sam was lost in t

19、hought and began to talk with the woman.【填入原文线索,只需补2-3句,续写每1句都有原文词】One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research camp outside“the polar bear capital of the world”the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing

20、 but also dangerous.Polar bears like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe distance.When Im face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young

21、male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified,Elli and I tried all the b

22、ear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit pots hard,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help.He tol

23、d me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter(相遇),I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray

24、burns the bears eyes,but doesnt hurt them.So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar(吼叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back toour camp.P2:At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.202

25、02020年年7 7月浙江卷月浙江卷 N 需求:我们/脱险,对抗熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只能用普通物品(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli 行动;喷雾+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.Then we realized that the spray had only angered him eve

26、n more,for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad.My heart raced wildly,not knowing what to do.At this critical moment,Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence.It worked!The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread.But it wasnt l

27、ong before he ate up all the bread and came back again.P2:At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.“Thank goodness we are saved!”Elli cried out.Once the helicopter landed,we got onto it in no time,excited and relieved.When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air,I was amazed to spot that the

28、bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind.I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene we were robbed by a polar bear!who 关键词动词形容词人物1人物2所有物体what 关键句P1P2 关键词3w1H情节构思前:读原文,找素材(加入续写每1句中)who 关键词动词形容词I&Elligoal:to photograph;tried all actions;radioed fo

29、r help;I took some pictures;single goal;safe distance;Terrified;fearedPolar bearpushed the fence;pulled and bit the wire;tear down the fence;ran to;headed back;young male;hungry;angry roar;fierce;wild animals;uninvited guest;kept trying物体(做工具)dinner;garlic bread;fence;camera;loud noises;pepper spray

30、;helicopter;food what 关键句(3w1H)Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous;the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes ofP1P2 关键词that very moment情节构思前:读原文,找素材(加入续写每1句中)【填入原文线索,情节只需补多2-3句话】P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.心理/动作链:(顺着P1首句)Elli 行动 其他喷雾+面包 惊险时刻N

31、 需求:我们/脱险,对抗熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只能用普通物品(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli 行动;喷雾+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)【填入原文线索,情节只需补多2-3句话】P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.心理/动作链:(顺着P1首句)我们更加害怕,熊看起来更凶狠 Elli 行动 其他喷雾+面包 惊险时刻N 需求:我

32、们/脱险,对抗熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只能用普通物品(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli 行动;喷雾+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)【填入原文线索,情节只需补多2-3句话】P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.心理/动作链:(顺着P1首句)我们更加害怕,熊看起来更凶狠 Elli 行动 其他喷雾+面包 惊险时刻N 需求:我们/脱险,

33、对抗熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只能用普通物品(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli 行动;喷雾+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)爬树?【填入原文线索,情节只需补多2-3句话】P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.心理/动作链:(顺着P1首句)我们更加害怕,熊看起来更凶狠 Elli 行动+面包 其他喷雾 惊险时刻N 需求:我们/脱险,对抗

34、熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只能用普通物品(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli 行动;喷雾+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)【填入原文线索,情节只需补多2-3句话】P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.心理/动作链:(顺着P1首句)我们更加害怕,熊看起来更凶狠 Elli 行动+面包(角色互动)熊跑去吃面包,但吃完折回 其他喷雾 惊险时刻

35、N 需求:我们/脱险,对抗熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只能用普通物品(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli 行动;喷雾+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)【填入原文线索,情节只需补多2-3句话】P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.心理/动作链:(顺着P1首句)我们更加害怕,熊看起来更凶狠 Elli 行动+面包(角色互动)熊跑去吃面包,但吃

36、完折回 我紧急拿到辣椒喷雾尝试击退它 惊险时刻N 需求:我们/脱险,对抗熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只能用普通物品(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli 行动;喷雾+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)【填入原文线索,情节只需补多2-3句话】P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.心理/动作链:(顺着P1首句)我们更加害怕,熊看起来更凶狠 El

37、li 行动+面包(角色互动)熊跑去吃面包,但吃完折回 我紧急拿到辣椒喷雾尝试击退它(惊险时刻)Unfortunately as expected,熊更怒了,直接扑过来N 需求:我们/脱险,对抗熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只能用普通物品(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli 行动;喷雾+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)【填入原文线索,情节只需补多2-3句话】P1:A few minutes later,the b

38、ear headed back to our camp.心理/动作链:(顺着P1首句)意识到喷雾无用,因为熊更凶狠更.Elli 行动 其他喷雾+面包(惊险时刻)N 需求:我们/脱险,对抗熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只能用普通物品(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli 行动;喷雾+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)第2种:只写1种方法 【填入原文线索,情节只需补多2-3句话】P1:A few minutes lat

39、er,the bear headed back to our camp.心理/动作链:(顺着P1首句)意识到喷雾无用,因为熊更凶狠更.Elli 行动+面包 (惊险时刻)N 需求:我们/脱险,对抗熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只能用普通物品(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli 行动;喷雾+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)第2种:只写1种方法 【填入原文线索,情节只需补多2-3句话】P1:A few minutes

40、 later,the bear headed back to our camp.心理/动作链:(顺着P1首句)意识到喷雾无用,因为熊更凶狠更.Elli 行动+面包 (角色互动)熊跑去吃面包,但吃完折回 (惊险时刻)N 需求:我们/脱险,对抗熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只能用普通物品(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli 行动;喷雾+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)第2种:只写1种方法 【填入原文线索,情节只需补

41、多2-3句话】P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.心理/动作链:(顺着P1首句)意识到喷雾无用,因为熊更凶狠更.Elli 行动+面包(角色互动)熊跑去吃面包,但吃完折回(惊险时刻)N 需求:我们/脱险,对抗熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只能用普通物品(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli 行动;喷雾+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)第2种

42、:只写1种方法 【填入原文线索,情节只需补多2-3句话】P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.心理/动作链:(顺着P1首句)意识到喷雾无用,因为熊更凶狠更.(环境/动作/心理?看原文占比)Elli 行动+面包(角色互动)熊跑去吃面包,但吃完折回(惊险时刻)N 需求:我们/脱险,对抗熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只能用普通物品(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli 行动;喷雾+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:

43、登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)第2种:只写1种方法 【填入原文线索,情节只需补多2-3句话】P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.心理/动作链:(顺着P1首句)意识到喷雾无用,因为熊更凶狠更.(角色分工)我害怕,不知咋办 Elli 行动+面包(角色互动)熊跑去吃面包,但吃完折回(惊险时刻)N 需求:我们/脱险,对抗熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只能用普通物品(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli 行动;喷雾

44、+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)第2种:只写1种方法 【填入原文线索,情节只需补多2-3句话】P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.心理/动作链:(顺着P1首句)意识到喷雾无用,因为熊更凶狠更.(角色分工)我害怕,不知咋办 Elli 行动+面包(角色互动)熊跑去吃面包(惊险时刻)但熊吃完折回N 需求:我们/脱险,对抗熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只能用普通物品

45、(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli 行动;喷雾+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)第2种:只写1种方法 P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.意识到喷雾无用,熊更凶狠 我害怕,不知咋办 Elli 行动,扔面包 熊跑去吃面包 但熊吃完折回【填入原文线索,情节只需补多2-3句话】N 需求:我们/脱险,对抗熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只能用普

46、通物品(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli 行动;喷雾+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.意识到喷雾无用,熊更凶狠 我害怕,不知咋办 Elli 行动,扔面包 行动有用,熊跑去吃面包 不幸运的是,熊吃完又折回【填入原文线索,情节只需补多2-3句话】N 需求:我们/脱险,对抗熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只

47、能用普通物品(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli 行动;喷雾+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)P2:At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.心理+动作链 登直升机脱险(动作+心理)熊吃食物 我拍照【填入原文线索,情节只需补多2-3句话】N 需求:我们/脱险,对抗熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只能用普通物品(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli

48、行动;喷雾+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.意识到喷雾无用,熊更凶狠 我害怕,不知咋办 Elli 行动,扔面包 行动有用,熊跑去吃面包 不幸运的是,熊吃完又折回 P2:At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.我们开心,得救(心理+语言)登直升机脱险(动作+心理)熊吃食物 我拍照,【填入原文线索,情节只需补多2-3句话】N 需求:我们/

49、脱险,对抗熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只能用普通物品(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli 行动;喷雾+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.意识到喷雾无用,熊更凶狠 我害怕,不知咋办 Elli 行动,扔面包 行动有用,熊跑去吃面包 不幸运的是,熊吃完又折回 P2:At that very moment,t

50、he helicopter arrived.我们开心,得救(心理+语言)登直升机脱险(动作+心理)(环境/动作/心理?看原文占比)熊吃食物 我拍照【填入原文线索,情节只需补多2-3句话】N 需求:我们/脱险,对抗熊0.5h;熊/吃食物(线索在:首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)D 困难:熊凶猛;武器只能用普通物品(线索在:5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在)S 方法:Elli 行动;喷雾+面包;直升机到(线索在:P1/P2首句+原文工具+其他角色)D 结局:登直升机脱险-熊冲破栅栏吃食物-我拍照(线索在:需求解决+呼应首段)P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed

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