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1、读后续写话题写作读后续写话题写作帮助他人帮助他人（2023秋山东德州高三统考开学考试）KelseyGoldenworksinmediamarketingforaschoolandusuallytakesher5-year-oldson,Barrett,aroundtheneighborhood.Alltoooften,theyofferhelptopeopleinneedandtheboybecomesincreasinglycaringandsympathetic,especiallytothehomeless.OnarainyMondaymorning,Goldenwasworkingon
2、theschoolsannualyearbookonhercomputerathome.ShewastransferringphotosfromherphonetohercomputerwhenBarrettstartedbrowsing(浏览)herphone.Theboylovesthecamerafeatureonherphone.Helikestolookathisreflection,insteadofplayinggamesorengaginginotheractivitiesonherphone.Butthistime,Barrettdidntjuststareathisrefl
3、ection.Hestartedpressingthescreen,swingingitaroundlikehisarmisarollercoaster.Heevenmentionedseeinghisfavoritechainrestaurantsmascotsonline,whichwasreallyunexpected.Then,Goldenreceivedamessagethathertake-awayfoodorderwastakinglongerthanusual-whichwasunusual,becausealthoughshesometimesorderedthefoodfo
4、rhertwoolderchildrenslunchesatschool,thatmorningshehadpackedtheirlunches.TheteacherfurtheredtheconfusionwhenshetoldGoldenthatherchildrenwereindeedeatingtheirpackedlunchesatschool-notake-awayfoodinsight.GoldensconfusionwasdeepenedwhenshewasplayingwithBarrettatthegate.Butinthatmoment,acarpulledin.Gold
5、enfeltmoreconfused-thedeliverydrivergotoutahugechainrestaurantsbagwhichhad31cheeseburgers!Atfirst,Goldenthoughtthedeliverydriverwasatthewronghouse.ThenitoccurredtoherthatBarretthadplayedherphonethatmorning,leavingherphoneunlocked,soshewentbackandlookedatthephone,onlytofindanorderwasplacedatthattimet
6、hathewasplayingwithit.“Thatscrazy!Hereallydidthis.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。SheturnedherheadtoBarrettquestioningly._ThepictureofBarretthandingoutcheeseburgersspreadwidely._（2023秋山东德州高三统考开学考试）KelseyGolden经常和五岁的儿子Barrett帮助一些有需要帮助的人以及无家可归的人。一个雨天，Golden正在工作，儿子Barrett不经意间用她的手机点了31个芝士汉堡。由此母子二人
7、发放汉堡给无家可归的人，并且照片在网上得以疯狂转载，由此引发整个社区共同去帮助那些无家可归之人的故事。SheturnedherheadtoBarrettquestioningly.ThepictureofBarretthandingoutcheeseburgersspreadwidely._母亲疑惑儿子解释和道歉理解和共同发放汉堡传播照片引发共鸣母亲感悟SheturnedherheadtoBarrettquestioningly._ThepictureofBarretthandingoutcheeseburgersspreadwidely._她疑惑地把头转向Barrett。巴雷特分发芝士汉堡的
8、照片广为传播。母亲收到汉堡时的疑惑，以及自己儿子的解释。描写该照片被疯狂转载，引发社会共鸣，导致其他人共同参与来帮助那些无家可归之人。SheturnedherheadtoBarrettquestioningly.Seeingwhatwashappeninginfrontofhim,withhisheaddown,Barrettwalkedovertoherandtimidlysaid,“Mom,Im sorry.I shouldnt have orderedtheseburgers.ButIsawmyfavoritecheeseburgerbrandinthephotoalbumontheph
9、one,andIwanttosharethedeliciousfoodwiththehomelesskids!”Goldenhuggedhersontightlyandsaid,“Iwouldntblameyou.Yourkindactiswarm.Letsgivethemthehamburger!”ThepictureofBarretthandingoutcheeseburgersspreadwidely.Thelocalcommunityjoinedinanddidwhattheycouldtohelphomelesschildrenandthoseinneed.Itwasatthatmo
10、mentthatGoldenrealizedthatasmallactofkindnessfromhersonnotonlymadehimfeelthejoyofhelpingothers,butalsomadehimatrulycaringandcompassionatepersonwhocouldwarmthewholeworld.This“well-intentionedmistake”isreallyworthit.（2023秋江苏南通高三统考期末）AnnaMorrisonwasasinglemotherraisingthreelittlechildren,Joseph,Catheri
11、ne,andTomaloneafterherhusbandpassedaway.AndAnnadidnthavemuchmoneyasacleaner.BeforeToms6thbirthday,Annasavedsomemoney.Sheknewitwasntmuch,butshecouldatleasttreatherchildrentoonepropermealonthespecialday.SoonTomsbirthday,Annatookherchildrentoalocalcaf.Afterreadingthemenu,sherealizedshecouldonlyaffordon
12、edish.Thewaitresshadalreadybroughtthemwaterandwaswaitingfortheirorder,andAnnawastooshytoleave.Soshedecidedtobuysomethingwithinherbudget.Finally,shesettledonaplateofnoodlesandmeatballs.Whenthedinnerarrived,Tomcried,“Mom,onedishisntenoughforthefourofus.AndIwantadrinkwithmyfood，”“Yes,Mommy!”Catherinean
13、dJosephcriedtogether.“Imsorry，”Annaapologized.“Forthetimebeing,letshavethis.Ipromisetodobetteronyournextbirthday.”Shethendividedthefoodsamongherchildren.Asthekidsfinishedtheirfood,Catherinesaid,“Mommy,Imstillhungry.Canwegetsomethingelse?”Tomadded,“Howaboutacake?Wecantcelebrateabirthdaywithoutacake!P
14、lease,Mom!Illwashmyhandsandberightback!Thenwecanorderit!”Withthat,Tomrushedtothewashroom;CatherineandJosephfollowed.Asthechildrenleft,Annamurmuredintears,“HowdoItellthemIdonthaveanymoneyonme?”Suddenly,shesawanoldladylimped(一瘸一拐)towardsher.Thiswomanwasdiningnearby.ShehadheardAnnatalkingtothekids.注意：1
15、.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。ThiswomanwasSandra.“Itsallright，”shetoldAnna._SeeingSandrahadbadlegs,Annadecidedtorepayherkindness._（2023秋江苏南通高三统考期末）单身妈妈Anna省吃俭用为了带孩子去餐厅过生日，但是并不能点足够的菜，后来一位邻桌的老太太帮助了他们，Anna感激老太太的帮助，决定报答她。ThiswomanwasSandra.“Itsallright，”shetoldAnna.SeeingSandrahadbadlegs,Annadecidedtorep
16、ayherkindness.AnnaAnna省吃俭用，想为孩子过个像样的生日省吃俭用，想为孩子过个像样的生日AnnaAnna母子只能点了母子只能点了一盘面条和肉丸子一盘面条和肉丸子孩子们吃不饱，希望点个蛋糕，孩子们吃不饱，希望点个蛋糕，AnnaAnna很无很无助助SandraSandra看到这一幕，前来帮助看到这一幕，前来帮助AnnaAnnaAnnaAnna决定回报决定回报SandraSandraThiswomanwasSandra.“Itsallright，”shetoldAnna._SeeingSandrahadbadlegs,Annadecidedtorepayherkindness._
17、这个女人就是Sandra。“没关系，”她告诉Anna。看到Sandra的腿不好，Anna决定报答她的好意。描写Sandra如何帮助了Anna。描写Anna是如何报答Sandra的。ThiswomanwasSandra.“Itsallright，”shetoldAnna.Sandraputa$100billonAnnastableandencouragedhertoordersomeextrafood.Annaorderedacakeandsomejuiceforherkids.TearswelledupinAnnaseyesasshewatchedthekidseathappily.“Than
18、kyousomuch,Madam,andIwillreturnyouthemoney,”sobbedAnna.Sandrapattedhershoulder,“Youdonthaveto.Ilivealonenext door,and I have a pension.”Then Sandralimpedoutofthecaf.SeeingSandrahadbadlegs,Annadecidedto repay her kindness.She visited SandraregularlyandcleanedSandrashouse,mowedthe grass and removed we
19、eds.With timepassing by,Sandra and Anna became closer,andAnnaalongwithherkidsoftendroppedbytheoldladyshousetohelpherandkeephercompany.Thetwofamiliescheeredeachotherupbyenjoyingfriendlinesstogether.（2023年重庆统考模拟预测）IwaspackinglunchformytwochildrenandmyselfwhenIsuddenlybegantodoubtwhetherthiswasnecessar
20、y.Itwassoearlyinthedayitwasstilldarkoutside,andIwasmakingsandwiches.Ithoughtaboutjustsendinglunchmoneyandgettinganextrahalfhourofsleep.Beingasinglemom,Ineededalltheshut-eyeIcouldget.SowhywasIaddingthisstresstomylife?Itsallbecauseofgenetics(遗传).Iremembermygrandmothertellingmehow,manyyearsago,shepacke
21、dleftovers(剩饭)formygrandfatherslunch.Helovedthembutalwaysseemedtocomehomehungry.Finallyaftermuchquestioning,headmittedhehadbeengivingawayhalfhislunchtoaco-workerwhohadnoneofhisown.Fromthatdayforward,mygrandmotheralwayssentextrajustincase.Withfivekidsinschoolatthesametime,mymomdidnthavetimetopacklunc
22、hes.Weatecafeteriafood,whichwasfinewithus.Intheworldofourprimaryschool,itwasnotcooltobringyourlunchfromhome.Therewasanexceptiontotheno-packrule,however.Asapunishment,wewereforcedtobringourownlunchforhowevermanydaysmymomchosetokeepus.Mytimeofsufferingcameinthirdgrade.Ihadbrokentherules.Forfourdays,my
23、noontimedinnerconsistedofacheeseandmustardsandwich,abagofchipsandonelonelycookie.ByFridaymymomchangedhermind.AndalthoughIstillbroughtmylunchfromhome,shepackeditforme.ThatafternoonIopenedmylunchboxtofindmyfavoriteeggsaladsandwich,achoiceappleandawholegiantcakewithanotetapedontop:“Justincaseyouwanttos
24、hare.”Tomy10-year-oldeyes,thatcakelookedbigenoughtofeedtheworld.IwasinheavenasIofferedpieceafterpiecetomyfriends.Itwasthebestlunchofmylife.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。AsIcontinuedpackinglunchformykids,Ithoughtaboutmygrandmotherandmother.Iemptiedmyownpackedlunchonthetableanddivideditbetweent
25、hechildren,thenmadetwomoresandwiches.（2023年重庆统考模拟预测）作者是位单亲妈妈，尽管每天都很忙碌，她还是坚持给两个孩子准备午餐，她把这种行为归因于遗传。作者回忆了自己的祖母和母亲，在过去经济大萧条和经济条件不佳的情况下，不仅坚持给自己的丈夫和孩子准备午餐，还会多备一些分享给有需要的同事和同学，作者也因此而倍感自豪和幸福。逐渐地，这种善举成为了作者家中的优良传统，孩子们也学会了分享，得到了快乐。AsIcontinuedpackinglunchformykids,Ithoughtaboutmygrandmotherandmother.Iemptiedmyo
26、wnpackedlunchonthetableanddivideditbetweenthechildren,thenmadetwomoresandwiches.想起祖母和母亲祖母和母亲是如何分享食物的作者是如何实施这种传统的作者将这一善举传承给孩子孩子们学会分享AsIcontinuedpackinglunchformykids,Ithoughtaboutmygrandmotherandmother._Iemptiedmyownpackedlunchonthetableanddivideditbetweenthechildren,thenmadetwomoresandwiches._当我继续为孩
27、子们准备午餐时，我想起了我的祖母和母亲。我把自己打包的午餐倒在桌子上，分给孩子们，然后又做了两个三明治。作者的祖母和母亲当年是如何尽力帮助困难的朋友，与他们分享食物的。如何传承了祖母和母亲的善举，并传递给了自己的孩子，使孩子们也学会了分享。AsIcontinuedpackinglunchformykids,Ithoughtaboutmygrandmotherandmother.IneverforgotthesacrificeittookformygrandparentstosharewhatlittlefoodtheyhadduringtheDepression.Andthatmymother
28、continuestodothesame.Tothisday,Thanksgivingatherhomealwaysincludesatleasttwoguestswhoare“downontheirluck”.Nonehaveleftherhomewithoutafewbucksintheirpocketsandagrocerybagfullofleftoversjustincasetheywanttoshare.Iemptiedmyownpackedlunchonthetableanddivideditbetweenthechildren,thenmadetwomoresandwiches
29、.Althoughourgrocerybudgetwastightandtherewaslittleroomforextras,Iknewbecauseofmygrandmotherandmomtherewereotherswhohadmuch,muchless.Bysharingthelittlewehad,Iwascarryingonatraditionthatstartedmorethan70yearsagoalessonofkindnessthatIcouldpassontomyownkids.AsIdroppedapackageofnoodlesintomypurseformynew
30、,nodmeal,mysonanddaughterskiddedintothekitchen,grabbedtheirlunchesandheadedforthedoor.“Ipackedextratoday,”Icalledout.“Justincase.”（2023河北唐山统考一模）Throughoutlife,wecomeacrossmanypeoplewhoimpactusinaway.Theirimpactcanbeforadayorforalifetime.Itscommonnottorecognizetheimpactsomeonehasleftonyouuntilacertai
31、nmoment.Thepersonwholeftagreatimpactonmeismydad.Threemonthsafterturningfourteen,mylifewasgreat.Iwasgettingsettledintoahighschool;mygradeswerealreadystartingoffgreatlyandIwasmakingfriends.OnedayasIcamehomefromschool,Iwalkedintothelivingroom,findingmymomanddadtalking.Myparentsturnedtomeandtoldmetositd
32、ownbecausetherewassomethingimportanttheyhadtotellme.Isoonfoundoutthatmydadsliverwasfailingandheneededanimmediatetransplant.Iwasshockedandconfusedbecausemydadseemedfine.Hewasworkingandneverlookedsick.Myparentstoldmenottoworrybecauseeverythingwouldbefine.Fourmonthshadpassedandmydadstillhadnotreceiveda
33、newliver;hewasprogressivelygettingworse.Hisbodyseemedtobegettingweaker,butheconstantlysaidhewasfine.Itwasgettinghardformyfamilyandme.Mydadhadtoquithisjobleavingmymomtobetheonlyprovider.Ihadtotakeontheresponsibilityofcleaningthehouse,cookingmealsandcheckingonmydadwhilemymomwasatwork.Ihadtocutbackonha
34、ngingwithmyfriendsbecausemydadwasbeginningtogoinandoutofthehospital.Myfocusforschoolwasstartingtoslip.Soweremygrades.Twonightsbeforemyschoolspringbreak,mymomreceivedacallfromthehospitalthatmydadhadbeeninacaraccidentandthathewasinhospital.Surprisingly,mydadhadntreceivedascratchonhim.Thennextnightmymo
35、mreceivedacallfromthedoctorstatingthattherewasaliverthatmatchedmydadsbodyandthatheneededtogettothehospitalimmediately.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡得相应位置做答。MyparentsandIrushedtothehospital._Ihadtotakeonsomanyresponsibilitiesathome._（2023河北唐山统考一模）作者得知父亲生病，与母亲一起承担起家庭的重担，帮助父亲治病、最终痊愈的故事并以优异的成绩毕业的故事。整个过程中
36、，父亲的一句“亲爱的，一切都会好的”成为了作者和母亲的精神支柱，深深地影响着作者的成长过程。MyparentsandIrushedtothehospital.Ihadtotakeonsomanyresponsibilitiesathome.去医院等待手术成功回家疗养承担重任照顾父亲毕业感想MyparentsandIrushedtothehospital._Ihadtotakeonsomanyresponsibilitiesathome._我爸妈和我快速赶往医院。我不得不在家里承担如此重担。父亲在医院接受手术、作者和母亲焦急等待但父亲的一句话成父亲在医院接受手术、作者和母亲焦急等待但父亲的一句话
37、成了作者和妈妈的精神支柱的过程。了作者和妈妈的精神支柱的过程。作者在家里既要做家务，又要照顾爸爸，同时还要复习功课，但父亲的那句话让作者鼓起了勇气，成功地帮助父亲恢复健康，同时还以优异的成绩毕业。MyparentsandIrushedtothehospital.Aftervariousexaminations,myfatherwasrushedintotheoperatingroom,leavingmymotherandmeabigsmilefromwhichwereadthewordFINE.Threehourswaitingseemedlikealifetimeduringwhichmym
38、otherkeptcomfortingmebysaying“Yourdadsaideverythingwillbejustfine!”Thetimewhenthedooropenedandoutcameasmilingdoctorwhoinformedusthegoodnews,mymotherburstintotears.Threeweekslatermyfatherwasabletobeoutofthehospitalbuthestillneededspecialcareathomewhichwasaresponsibilityofmebecausemymotherhadtoworkall
39、dayoutside.I had to take on so many responsibilities athome.Houseworkandthecareformyfathertookupmostoftheday,leavinglittletimeformystudy.But everyday my father told me the same thing“Honey,everythingwillbejustfine!”Sixmonthslater,myfatherwasfullyrecoveredandfouryearslaterIgraduatedasatopstudent.Timetookawaysomany happy moments of my family but left ussomethingmostimportant“Honey,everythingwillbejustfine!”感感谢谢观观看看