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1、读后续写话题写作读后续写话题写作家庭亲情家庭亲情（2023春江苏常州高三统考开学考试）“Wherestherestofmypaper?”thunderedanangryPapaBear,stormingintothelivingroom.ItdidnttakehimlongtofindBrotherBearandthesportssection.“Ijustborrowedit.“saidBrother.Papasnatcheditupandplumpeddowninhiseasychair.Brotherwanderedintothekitchenlookingforsympathyfrom
2、MamaBear.“Gee,”hesaid,“whatseatinghim?”“Yourfatherlooksforwardtohiseveningpaper,”Mamasaid,“andhehasaperfectrighttobeannoyedwhenhalfofitismissingandfurthermore,thankyounottorefertoyourfatherashim!”Shestompedoutofthekitchen.“Whynot?Hesahim,isnthe?Gosh,”saidBrother,“whatseatingher?”Whatwas“eating”Mamaw
3、asSisterBear.SisterhadbeenonthephonewithLizyBruinforalmostanhour.“ButMama!”sheprotestedwhenshewastoldtosaygood-bye.“DontButMamame!“saidMamaBear.“Thisisnotyourprivatephone.YouvehadalldaytotalktoLizyatschool,andyoullhavealldaytotalktohertomorrow.Sohangupthatphonenow!”Sisterdidasshewastold.“Phew!”breat
4、hedBrotherashefellintotheseatbesideCousinFredontheschoolbus.“Toughmorning?”askedFred.“Youbetterbelieveit!”saidSister,takingtheseatLizzyhadsavedforher.Thefourcomparednotesonthewaytoschool.Thechildrenagreedthatwhiletherewasnodoubtthattheirparentslovedthem,theywerealittledifficulttogetalongwithsometime
5、s.Theynagged(唠叨);theysaidnoalot;andtheyneverwantedkidstohaveanyfun.“Hey,”saidBrotherastheygotoffthebus,“whatarewegoingtodofortheParentsNightTalentShow?”“Dontknow,”saidLizzy.“Letsthinkaboutit”Whenthefoursearchedtheirbrains,Brothersnappedhisfingersandsaid,“Ivegotit!Rememberwhatweweretalkingaboutjustno
6、w?”“Sure,”saidFred.“Weweresayinghowgrownupscanbeabigpain.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“Well,”saidBrother,“letsputonaplayaboutthat,andcallit.”_Despitethedifficultiesinthepreparation,especiallycostumes,theirbigdaycamefinally._（2023春江苏常州高三统考开学考试）熊哥哥和熊妹妹在家里受到熊爸爸和熊妈妈的责备，在上学路上向同学佛瑞德和莉兹抱怨，四人决定把他们的
7、生活搬上舞台，在“家长之夜才艺表演”上进行表演。“Well,”said Brother,“lets put on a play about that,and call it.”Despite the difficulties in the preparation,especially costumes,their big day came finally.确定剧名精心准备表演成功与父母交流开始反思“Well,”said Brother,“lets put on a play about that,and call it.”_Despite the difficulties in the pre
8、paration,especially costumes,their big day came finally._好吧，熊哥哥说，我们就此出个剧吧，叫它尽管筹备过程很困难，尤其是服装，但他们的大日子终于来了。描写四人决定把他们的生活搬上舞台，排练“与大人的麻烦!”的过程。描写他们的表演获得成功和大人们的反应。“Well,”said Brother,“lets put on a play about that,and call it.”“TheTroublewithGrownups!”shoutedalltheothers.“Sensational!”saidSisterastheyslappe
9、dhands,delightedwiththeideaofshowingparentshowharditisbeingcub.Puttingonaplayiseasiersaidthandone.Youhavetowriteit,figureoutwhoisgoingtoplaytheparts,thenmemorizeit.Thenyouhavetoworryaboutcostumesandscenery.Thecubsdidallthat.Itwashard,butitwasfun,andtheydiditallinsecret.Thefourpracticedtheirparts,and
10、beforetheyknewit,itwastimeforthebigParentsNightTalentShow.Despite the difficulties in the preparation,especially costumes,their big day came finally.Theaudienceofparentslaughedandlaughedwhentheysawhowtheyseemedtotheircubs.MamaandPapalaugheduntiltearsrolleddowntheircheeks.Papalaughed,too,butnotasmuch
11、asMama.Theyboththoughttheplay,whichwasabigsurprisetothem,wasverywelldone.Theyadmittedthatithelpedthemunderstandwhatitwaslikebeingacub.Later,whentheyweregoingbackhome,Papasaid,“Ihaveabetterideahowcubsfeelnow.”Mamaagreed.“Afterall,wewerecubsonceourselves,”saidMama.“Andheresathought:Youllbegrownupssome
12、dayand,eachprobablyhavecubsofyourown.”BrotherandSisterthoughtaboutthatforamoment.Theylookedateachother.Thentheylookedoutintothedistanceandthoughtaboutit.Itwassomethingtothinkabout.（2023江苏泰州泰州中学校考一模）Lucywastheonlychildinherfamily.Shehadaquarrelwithhermotherthatafternoonandsheranoutofthehouseangrily.S
13、hecouldnthelpweepingsorrowfullywhenshethoughtofthescoldingfromhermother.Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.Shestoodbesideastandforawhile,watchingthemiddle-agedsellerbusydoinghisbusiness.However,withnomoneyinhand,shegaveasighandhadtoleave.Thesell
14、erbehindthestandnoticedtheyounggirlandasked,“Hey,girl,youwanttohavethenoodles?”“Oh,yes,butIdonthavemoneyonme,”shereplied.“Thatsnothing.Illtreatyoutoday,”saidtheman.“Comein.”Thesellerbroughtherabowlofnoodles,thesmellsoattractive.Asshewaseating,Lucycriedsilently.“Whatisit?”askedthemankindly.“Nothing.A
15、ctually,Iwasjusttouchedbyyourkindness!”saidLucyasshewipedhertears.”Evenastrangeronthestreetwillgivemeabowlofnoodles,whilemymotherdrovemeoutofthehouse.Sheshowednocareforme.Sheissomercilesscomparedtoastranger!”Hearingthewords,thesellersmiled,“Girl,doyoureallythinkso?Ionlygaveyouabowlofnoodlesandyoutha
16、nkedmealot.Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.Canyounumberthetimesshecookedforyou?Haveyouexpressedyourgratitudetoher?”Lucysatthere,speechlessandnumbwithshock;sherememberedhermothersfamiliarfaceandweatheredhands.“WhydidntIthinkofthat?Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeelgrateful.Whyhav
17、entIthankedmymumforwhatshehasdoneforme?”Onthewayhome,Lucymadeuphermindtomakeanapologytohermotherforherrudenessassoonasshearrivedhome.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Approachingthedoorway,_Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback._（2023江苏泰州泰州中学校考一模）小女孩Lucy和母亲争吵后离家出走，走在街上，觉得饿了，一个卖面条的摊位前停下，摊主人知道情况后，免费请她
18、吃了一碗面并听她倾诉，她很感恩，摊主却告诉她：“我请你吃一碗面，你就感激我，你想想你的妈妈养大你，给你做了多少顿饭呢？”Lucy顿悟，决定回家和妈妈好好沟通。Approaching the doorway,A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.站在家门口敲门妈妈开门承认错误妈妈担心拥抱 Approaching the doorway,_ A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back._离家门口越来越近，头顶的轻轻抚摸把她的思绪拉回来。描写Lucy在走到家门口进门前的心理活动。描写Lucy
19、和妈妈的谈话。Approaching the doorway,Lucy was verynervousandtookadeepbreath.Standinginfrontofthedoor,shewasafraidwhetherhermotherwouldforgiveherforherrudeness.ButwhenShethoughtofhermothersfamiliarfaceandthenoodlesellerskind advice,she decided to knock on the doorbravely.HermotheropenedthedoorbutLucywassoa
20、shamedthatshedidntknowwhattosay.A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.Lucycouldnthelpcryingandsaid“Sorry,mom,IknowIhavemadeabigmistake.Ishouldnthavequarreledwithyou.Ishouldnthaverunawayfromhome.Couldyouforgive me?”Lucys mother was moved,saying“Goodgirl,nevermind,Ialsoshouldmakeanapologytoy
21、ouforscoldingatyouangrily.Iamveryworriedaboutyou.”Tears rolled down from both of their faces and theyhuggedeachothertightly.（2023秋山东潍坊高三统考期末）Itwasanearlywintermorning.Joanwassleepingsoundlywhenthephoneranginthelivingroom.Sherolledoverandglancedattheclockonthewallitwasalreadynineoclock.Everyweekendmo
22、rning,hermotherhadtoworkpart-timeinthecafe.AlthoughJoanwasstillsleepy,sheknewshehadtogetup.Afterall,shedidntexpectherbrotherMike,whowassleepinglikealog,tohearthephone.Shequietlywentovertothelivingroom.Whenshepickedupthereceiver,ontheotherendcamethewarmheartedgreetings,“Goodmorning,myDear!”Recognizin
23、gthevoicefromherfather,Joanwasimmediatelysurroundedbyasenseofjoyandthesleepinesssweptaway.Joansfatherwasaseaman,whorarelycameback.Workingontheseawasreallyhard.Borninanot-richfamily,JoanandMikefeltthestressoflifebuttheywerehappytoenjoythefamilyatmosphere.Atschool,theywerestraight-Astudentsthroughoutt
24、heacademiccareerandactivelyinvolvedinschoolactivities.Theybecametheprideoftheschoolandtheenvyofthestudents.“Goodmorning,Dad,whatsup?”Joansaidinaneasytone.“Ihavebeenverynicerecently,mybaby.Todayisyourmothersbirthday,andIhaveorderedheracakeonlineanditshouldcometothehouseinoneandhalfanhour.Dorememberto
25、takethecake.”Hearingherfatherswords,Joanfeltalittleashamed.HowshecouldforgetMumsbirthday!Shetookaglanceatthedirtyclothespiledonthesofaandtheoilyfloorthathadntbeenmopped(拖地)forafewdaysTherewastwohoursbeforehermothercameback.ShecalculatedtheyhadenoughtimetoprepareasurpriseforMum.Thinkingofthis,shefelt
26、fullofexcitement.“Well,Dad,nowImgoingtowakeMikeup.WewillgiveMumasurprise!”JoanhungupthephonewithDad,andhurriedlywenttoMikesroomtosharehimherBigCleaningplan.AfterlisteningtoJoan,Mikereadilyacceptedheridea.注意：(1)续写词数应为150左右;(2)开头已给出。TheBigCleaningplanbegan._Withthecakeplacedonthetable,Mumcamein._（2023
27、秋山东潍坊高三统考期末）Joan在爸爸的提醒下想起来妈妈的生日，于是和弟弟一起为妈妈准备了生日惊喜。The Big Cleaning plan began.With the cake placed on the table,Mum came in.Joan和弟弟在周末的早晨熟睡Joan接到爸爸的电话，得知今天是妈妈的生日Joan决定和弟弟一起给妈妈一个惊喜Joan和弟弟将家里进行了大扫除妈妈回来后看到这一切很感动，觉得这是最好的生日礼物 The Big Cleaning plan began._With the cake placed on the table,Mum came in._大扫除
28、计划开始了。蛋糕放在桌上，妈妈走了进来。描写Joan和弟弟是如何大扫除的。描写妈妈看到Joan和弟弟大扫除以及收到蛋糕后的心理感受。The Big Cleaning plan began.Joancollectedtheclothesfromsofaandthenputtheminthewaterofabasin.Afterpouringinsomewashingliquids,shebegantowashthembyhand.Realizingtheclotheswerecleanenough,Joangentlysqueezedwateroutandhungthemtodry.Meanwh
29、ile,Mikewasbusymoppingthefloorbackandforthwithallhisstrength,reallyawareofwhathardworkhisMumhadathome!Theyhadjustfinishedthecleaningwhentheexpressboycametothedoor.With the cake placed on the table,Mum came in.“Happybirthday,Mum!”,theygreetedinchorus.Confusedandsurprised,Mumstoodfrozen.WhenMumrealize
30、dwhathadhappened,awarmcurrentroseinherheart.Staringatthecleanfloorandthewashedclothes,shecouldhardlycontainherexcitementandhuggedthemtightly,“ItisthebestbirthdaygiftIhaveeverhad!”Mumsaidemotionally.JustthenJoantookouthersmartphoneandtookahappyvideonamedMumsBirthdayandsentittoDad.（2023春广东江门高三校联考开学考试）
31、WhenIwasachild,mymothertoldmysister,whohada10-inchveryobviousscar(伤疤)onherarm,“Nancy,ifyouignorethescar,otherpeoplewillignoreit.Itdoesnotmeantheywillnotnoticeit,butitmeansitwillnotmattertothemifitdoesntmattertoyou.”Itneveroccurredtomethatsomethinglikethiswouldhappentomysonyearslater.Sendingachildoff
32、tocollegecancertainlybestressfulforconcernedparents.Itwas2018thatmysonwentofftocollege.Herarelycontactedus.Icouldnthelpaskingaboutotheraspects,whichsometimesmadehimcomplainthatIdidnttreathimasanadult.Tobehonest,mysonisexcellent.Someofmyfriendsalwaystellmethattheyadmiremysonscharactersandtheyhopethei
33、rsonscouldhavesomeofthem.Unexpectedly,itwas4oclockinthemorningin2020,whenIreceivedthephonecall.“Thisistheemergencyroomcallingandyoursonwasjustbroughtinwithsevereburnsonhisface,neckandarms.WehavecalledforanaircraftandaregoingtoflyhimtotheburnunitinSeattle.”Seattlewas350milesfromhiscollege,soweknewimm
34、ediatelythiswasserious.Thedoctordescribedthereason,whichcausedtheburns.At6am,mysonandhisfriendsdecidedtobarbecuehamburgersinthecourtyardoftheirapartment.Whentheylitthecharcoal,itburstintoflamesbecausetheyhadsprayedtoomuchgasoline.Theflamescaughtmysonsshirttailandshotfromhiswaisttowelloverhishead.For
35、tunately,oneoftheboyswhowasquick-mindedgraspedmysonandrolledhimonthegrass.Whileitsavedhislife,itwasnotinshapetosavehimfromsevereburnsandtheterriblescars.Afterherecoveredfromthetreatments,thedoctorstoldhimtheywouldnotdoplasticsurgeryfor6monthsbecauseittakesthatlongfortheskintostopshrinkingandwrinklin
36、g.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thedoctorssuggestedhereturntocollegewithscarsofsevereburnstemporarily._SoItoldhimaboutNancyschildhood._（2023春广东江门高三校联考开学考试）作者小时候听到母亲告诉妹妹南希要以乐观的态度去面对自己的伤疤，而作者儿子也经历烧伤事故而留下伤疤，作者把妹妹的经历告诉自己的儿子鼓励他勇敢面对。The doctors suggested he return to college with scars of severe bu
37、rns temporarily.So I told him about Nancys childhood.难过考验安慰鼓励改变感悟The doctors suggested he return to college with scars of severe burns temporarily._So I told him about Nancys childhood._医生建议他暂时带着严重烧伤的伤疤回到大学。于是我告诉他南希的童年。描写作者想到自己的儿子要承受别人异样眼光的描写作者想到自己的儿子要承受别人异样眼光的难过的心理活动以及对儿子的鼓励的做法。难过的心理活动以及对儿子的鼓励的做法。描
38、写作者为了帮助儿子告诉他妹妹南希的经历之后，他儿子的转变。The doctors suggested he return to college with scars of severe burns temporarily.AlthoughIknewthatthereweregoingtobestormsinlife,itwashardformetoimaginethatahandsomeandsunnyboywouldreturntohisclassmateswithscars.Ireallydidntknowhowtocomforthim.Afterall,thescarswereonhim
39、.Notallofuscouldbeabletoturnthatparticularpagesuccessfully.ItwasatthistimethatIrememberedwhatmymothersaidtomysister.Itwasthosewordsthatenabledhertoovercomeherpsychologicalbarriersandleadasmoothlife.So I told him about Nancys childhood.Ipassedthewisdomontomyson.Realizingmycomplexfeelings,hesmiledandc
40、omfortedmeinstead.Hetookmyadvicetoheartandreturnedtoschoolwithhisheadheldhigh.Bytheendofthesix-monthwaitingperiod,hedecidedthatthescarsdidnotmatter.Sohemadethedecisiontogiveupanyplasticsurgery.Weallhave“scars”thatwebelievewillkeeppeopleawayfromus.Putyourimperfectionsoutofyourmindandconcentrateonwhatyouvaluewithinyourself,andyourbeautywillshinethrough.感感谢谢观观看看