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1、读后续写话题写作读后续写话题写作户外遇险户外遇险（2023春湖北高三校联考开学考试）WhenAidenaskedmetoaccompanyhimonacampingtriptothemountains,Ienvisionedalogcabinwithacracklingfireplace,hotcocoa,andbunkbeds.Imaginehowmyrustic,yetcomfortableimageofcampingbecameanightmarewhenAidenandhisolderbrother,Lebron,showedupwithatruckfilledwithcampings
2、upplies-tents,rolled-upsleepingbags,andcanteens!Ididpackabackpack,asinstructed,butIhadnoideaweweregoingonsurvivaltraining!Lebron,eversoefficient,hadascheduletokeep,andhehurriedmetogetinsowecouldleavethecityhustleandbustlebehindus.Ahead,themountainsloomedbiggerthanIhadrememberedthem;thetreeswerelarge
3、r,andtheenvironmentwasmuchmoredangerous.Atleasttheweatherwasamazingcotton-candycloudsdottedthedeepbluesky.Atthetrailhead,LebronstrappedasleepingbagontomypackandlecturedAidenandmeabouthikingetiquette.Thefirstpartofthetraillookedmorelikeawoodedroadthatledupthemountainsthanahikingpath.Soon,thepathbecam
4、enarrowerandsteeper,forcingmetofocusonthetaskathandandtotalkless.Aswegainedelevation,wemovedabovethetreeline,andIcouldseethetrailzigzaggingupthemountain.“Itlookscloserthanitis,”Lebronsaid,readingmyfacialcues.“Thisisthemostdifficultpartwatchthetrail,nottheview.Looserocksandtreerootsmakethetraildanger
5、ous,andwehavenoshade.”Finally,wereachedthesummit.Mylegsaching,Idroppedmypackandgroaned.“Notimetorest,”Lebronsaid,lookingupatthesky.Theweatherhadbeenwarmallday,anditfeltgoodtorelaxinthecoolbreeze.“Theweatherupherechangesquickly,andthatcoolairmeansastormisbrewing.Weneedtosetupcamp.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.
6、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Ithoughthewaskidding,butLebronwasquiteserious._Justasquicklyasthestormcamerushingin,itstopped,allowingustoexitthetent._（2023春湖北高三校联考开学考试）作者跟着艾登和他的哥哥勒布朗一起去露营冒险，一路艰辛，最终到达了山顶，就在作者想要放松休息一下时，勒布朗却告诉她冷空气意味着风暴正在酝酿。他们需要马上搭帐篷。I thought he was kidding,but Lebron was quite serious.Just as quic
7、kly as the storm came rushing in,it stopped,allowing us to exit the tent._开始搭帐篷帐篷里躲雨欣赏雨后美景感慨万千 I thought he was kidding,but Lebron was quite serious._Just as quickly as the storm came rushing in,it stopped,allowing us to exit the tent._我以为他在开玩笑，但勒布朗是认真的。就像暴风雨来的一样快，它停了，让我们可以离开帐篷。描写他们开始搭帐篷和暴风雨来临后的事情。描
8、写暴风雨停息后作者所见所想。I thought he was kidding,but Lebron was quite serious.HeandAiden worked expertly,while I stood around and pretended to help,thunderrumblinginthedistance.Wesetupnearaboulderoutcropping,butthewind,thunder,andlightningwererelentless.Asthestormrolledinwitha vengeance,we took cover inside.L
9、ebron,sensing that I was scared,reachedinhisbackpackforsomecrackersandpeanutbutter.Slowly,butmethodically,he spread the peanut butter and told stories about hiscampingadventures.Eachtimelightninglitupthetentandthethunderechoed,Icringed.“Thisisjustatypicalsummerstormtheyreshortlived,butintense,”Lebro
10、nstated.“Thecampsitemightgetabitmuddy,butwhatsthefunincampingifyoucantgetdirty!Atleasttherainwillkeepthebearsaway,”hesaidwithasmile.Just as quickly as the storm came rushing in,it stopped,allowing us to exit the tent.TheviewwasstunningIcouldseeformiles,andtherainleftafreshscentofpineandanearthysmell
11、ofsoil.Asdarknesssetin,lmarveledatthemultitudeofstarsinthenightsky.IwontlieIwasyearningforahotshowerandasoftbed,butasIgazedupwardattheMilkyWay,IknewthiswasanadventureIwouldneverforget.（2023秋河北邢台高三邢台市第二中学校考期末）OnJune4th,myfamilyandIdecidedtogowhite-waterrafting(激浪漂流)downtheNantahalaRiverinWesternNorth
12、Carolina.Itwasaperfectdaytobeoutonthewater.Myfatherthoughtthatwecouldalldealwithanewsituation,sohedecidedtobringustogowithoutaguideatthisnew,hardcourse.MymomandIwereupsetbymydadsdecision,butmybrotherwaspleasedwithit.So,wehadtoagreewiththem.Wegotlifejackets,ourraftandpaddlesthatwereusedtorowit,andthe
13、ntookabustothedroppointwherewecarriedtherafttotheicycoldwater.Havingfinishedthetraining,wewereonourownwhite-waterrafting.Withinthefirsthour,wegotstuckontworocks.Anotherrafthadtohitourstogetusofftherocks.Afterabouttwohours,wesawahugerockontherightsideoftheriver.Itwascomingoutofthewaterabouttenfeethig
14、handaboutfifteenfeetwide.Somehow,weendedupontopofthisrock.Afteraboutaminute,waterstartedrushinginwheremybrotherwassitting.Whenhestartedfallingintothewater,Itriedtopullhimback.Unfortunately,wefellofftogether.Mymotherjumpedinafterus,butshecouldonlygettomybrotherbecausehewascloserthanIwas.Mydadjumpedou
15、tandranupthebankoftherivertogettotheroad,sohecouldseewhereIwas.Iwaspickedupafterabouttwominutesbyastrangerinanotherraftandwasheadingdowntherivertowardalittlerestingspot.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。IkeptcryingbecauseIwassofrightenedandworriedaboutmyfamily._Oneoftheguidesforanotherrafttoldusthatt
16、herewasanearlierplacewecouldgetout._（2023秋河北邢台高三邢台市第二中学校考期末）作者一家人漂流的经历，因为两兄弟落水而造成了令人害怕的体验，因此作者决定不再漂流。I kept crying because I was so frightened and worried about my family.One of the guides for another raft told us that there was an earlier place we could get out.因担心家人而一直哭家人被救决定继续漂流至终点导游提供一个更近的终点错过了更
17、近的终点最终到达目的地决定以后不再漂流。I kept crying because I was so frightened and worried about my family._One of the guides for another raft told us that there was an earlier place we could get out._我一直在哭，因为我害怕，且担心我的家人。另一个筏上的导游告诉我们，有一个能早点出去的地方。作者的家人被救了，然后决定继续漂流至终点。四个人只有两只桨，因此将会花很长的时间到达终点。导游告诉了我们一个可以早点结束漂流的地方，但我们却错
18、过了，只能硬着头皮继续前进。I kept crying because I was so frightened and worried about my family.Thankfully,they weresavedbyanothertworafts,andeveryonewasfine,just a little frightened and very cold.At the littletestingspot,wehadashortrestandthendecidedtocontinuetherafting.Whenwegotbackinourraft,wehadonlytwopaddl
19、estoleaveforusfourpeople.Weallknewthatitwasgoingtotakeaverylongtimetogettotheend.One of the guides for another raft told us that there was an earlier place we could get out.Soweplannedtogetoutfromtheplace.Butunfortunately,wemissedtheexitandheadeddowntotheendingpoint.Wehadtriedourbesttoavoidfallingin
20、totheriver,andseveraltimeswe narrowly escaped.Anyway,we finally got to theending point.We got out of the water,wet and cold.Iwontraftagainbecauseofthisterribleexperience.Allofthishappenedbecausemydaddidnthireaguide.（2023秋江苏南通高三统考期末）PamBaleslefthercarandsteppedontothesnow-coveredJewellTrail.Sheplanne
21、dasix-hourhikethroughNewHampshiresMountWashingtonStatePark.ThehikeupthelowerpartofJewellwaspleasant.At8:30am,stillbelowthetreeline,shetookthefirstinaseriesofon-the-trailselfies.Lessthananhourlater,shetookanotherphoto,aftershedclimbedintocolderairanddeepersnows.Shemadeherwayacrossthesnow-coveredridge
22、towardMountWashington.Thenshenoticedsomething:asinglesetoffootprintsinthesnowaheadofher.Shedbeenfollowingfainttracksalldayandhadntgiventhemmuchthought,becausesomanypeopleclimbJewellTrail.Butthese,sherealized,hadbeenmadebyapairoftrainers,notsuitableforhikingonsnow.By11am,Baleswasgettingcoldanddecided
23、toabandonherplan.TheonlythingkeepingBalesonGulfsideTrailwasthetrainertracksinthesonw.Asshefoughtthewindandheavysleet(雨夹雪),thetracksmadeahardleft-handturnoffthetrail.Nowshealarmed.ShewassurethehikercouldgetthroughintheowvisibilityandwasheadingstraighttowardthechallengingtrailsoftheGreatGulfWilderness
24、.Balesstoodthere,stunned.Thetemperatureandcloudswereinaracetofindtheirlowestpoint,anddarknesswasmerehoursaway.Sheturnedtotheleftandcalledout,“Hello!”intothefrozenfog.Nothing.Shecalledoutagain:“Isanybodyoutthere?Doyouneedhelp?”Thestrongwesterlywindscarriedhervoiceaway.Sheblewintoherrescuewhistle.Fora
25、fleetingmomentshethoughtsheheardsomeonereply,butitwasjustthewindplayinggameswithhermind.Shestoodlistening,thenturnedandwalkedcautiouslyinthedirectionofthesinglesetoftracks.Balesfollowedthetrackscautiouslyfor20to30meters.Sheroundedaslightcornerandsawamansittingmotionless.注意：(1)续写词数应为150左右;(2)开头已给出。Wh
26、ensheapproachedhimandsaidhello,hedidnotreact._Afterwakingthemanup,Balesrecognizedthattheyhadtogetoutoftheresoon._（2023秋江苏南通高三统考期末）帕姆巴勒斯计划在新罕布什尔州的华盛顿山州立公园徒步六小时，不到一小时后，她已经爬进了更冷的空气和更深的雪中。她穿过白雪覆盖的山脊，向华盛顿山进发。然后她注意到了一件事：她前面的雪上有一组脚印。When she approached him and said hello,he did not react.After waking the m
27、an up,Bales recognized that they had to get out of there soon.检查拿出物品给男子取暖唤醒男子扶起那名男子一起下山脱离险境感受 When she approached him and said hello,he did not react._After waking the man up,Bales recognized that they had to get out of there soon._当她走近他打招呼时，他没有反应。在叫醒那个人后，巴勒斯意识到他们必须尽快离开那里。描写巴勒斯救助这名已经失去意识的男子的过程。描写巴勒斯
28、和那名男子一起下山，脱离险境的过程。When she approached him and said hello,he did not react.Takingadeepbreath,Balesgotcloser,checkedhispulseandsuddenlyrealizedthatthemanmusthavepassedout.Sheknewshehadtowakehimupimmediatelyorthedreadfulweathercouldputhimingreaterdanger.Outofherbag,Balestookacarpettowraptheman,gavesome
29、hotwatertohim,calledoutrepeatedlyandshookhimhard.Fortunately,itdidnttakelongbeforethemancametohimself.After waking the man up,Bales recognized that they had to get out of there soon.Thewindkepthowlingwiththeheavysleetdrivingfiercely,andevenworse,darknessbegantofall.Anxious,Balesstruggledtohelptheman
30、up,supportinghisweightandinchingalongthetrail,followingthetracksleftbyherhikingboots.Afterwhatseemedlikeages,theyfinallymadeittothefootofthemountain.Themanwasrushedtohospitalimmediately.Exhaustedasshewas,Balesfeltawaveofhappinesswelledupinside.（2023年1月江苏无锡高三期末）Livinginacompetitiveanddishonestcommuni
31、tywasnotalwayseasy.Peoplekeptwalkinginandout,wearingartificialsmiles.Allselfishsouls!Finally,myparentsdecidedtohaveabreathoffreshair.Wewereonvacation,havingdriventoNewHampshire.Wewouldntseefriendsonfamilyitwouldbejustme,myparents,andmylittlebrother,Wyatt,outforanice,sociallydistancedweekaway.Wehadhi
32、kedabouthalfamiletoapopularspotcalledDiannasBaths,wherethewaterfallsofaseriesofflatstonesonthemountainside.Thebathswerefulloffamilies,sowemadeourwaytooneoftheupperlevelsofrocktokeepourdistance.Bothwherewesatanddownbelow,thewalerpouredandfellintosmallpools,wherekidsinswimsuitsweresplashingaround.Weco
33、uldnthelprushingtojointhem.Someparentsnervouslydrovetheirkidsawayfromtherocksedges,whilemyparentsweregratefulthattheywereoutofthatstage,sowetwo,atsixteenandeight,couldkeepourphysicalspacewithmoreconfidence.Dontgetmewrong:Momwassillterrifiedasshesawusjumpbetweentheslipperyrocks,“Norunning,”shesaidaga
34、inandagain.“Stayawayfromallthoseedges.”Butshesoonrelaxed,andwewereallhavingfun,splashinginthepools.Then,secondslater,thingschanged.IturnedandsawmyWyattsittingdownbetweentwostonesinafast-movingstream.Iyelledathimtogetout.HeyelledbacksomethingthatIcouldnthear,andthenhedisappearedovertheedge.itwasabout
35、12feetfromthetopofthewaterfalltothepoolbelow,wherethereweremanyhugerocks.AllIrememberfromthemomentismothersscreaming,overandover,likeaprayer,“Somebodyhelpsmyson!”Myfatherwasalreadydashingdowntherocks,whenIheardanotherwomanscream.“Thatchildjustwentoverthewaterfall!”sheshoutedatherhusband.“Hurryup!Let
36、sgivethemahelpinghand!”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Whileeveryoneelselookedonfromadistance.thisyoungwomandidnthesitate._Theambulancecame,takingWyattoutoftheparkonastretcher._（2023年1月江苏无锡高三期末）作者的父母生活在充满竞争的社区里，很不容易。因此带着孩子们一起去新罕布什尔州度假，放松,但是弟弟Wyatt贪玩坐到了激流中的一块石头上，来不及喊他下来，他已经不小心掉入瀑布中。妈妈着急呼救，爸爸跳下石头
37、救人。While everyone else looked on from a distance.this young woman didnt hesitate.The ambulance came,taking Wyatt out of the park on a stretcher.去度假在Diannas Baths玩得很开心弟弟不慎掉入瀑布女士和爸爸一起下水救人获救感悟While everyone else looked on from a distance.this young woman didnt hesitate._The ambulance came,taking Wyatt
38、out of the park on a stretcher._当其他人都在远处观望时，这位年轻女子毫不犹豫。救护车来了，用担架把Wyatt带出了公园。在这位女子的帮助下，弟弟在这位女子的帮助下，弟弟WyattWyatt获救。获救。去医院后的诊断等情况，以及作者对这件事的感悟。While everyone else looked on from a distance.this young woman didnt hesitate.Sherushedoutandsprinteddowntherocks.SeeingmyfatherhadpulledWyattoutofthewater,shega
39、vehimastripedtoweltoputunderhishead.“Keephimstillandonhisbackincasehehadinjuredhisspine.”Sheorderedseriously.Shetoldusthatshewasanurseandhadalreadyhadherhusbandcallfortheambulance.“Willhesurvive?”Iaskedinatremblingvoice.Shenoddedfirmly.The ambulance came,taking Wyatt out of the park on a stretcher.S
40、oon,Wyatt was rushed to hospital.Thereweretestsandscans.Wyatthadthreebrokenribsinjuriesthatsoundedhorrificbuthadbeenundercontrol.AsIknewthatWyattwouldbeOK,mythoughtsfelltothekindwoman.Shewastheonewhowenttowardtheunthinkable instead of turning away.The competitivesocietywasforcingustokeepacertainsocialdistance,butitwouldntstopusfromreceivingahelpinghand.感感谢谢观观看看