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1、采用续写点的思路来训练读后续写，一个好处是，每个点都可以拆分，将繁重的写作任务化为轻量化的小练习。在练习的初期，不用全文写完一篇，还可用很多篇尝试一个续写点。这就是Practice。今天具体讲一下第一个续写点：如何衔接段首句必修3第3单元的ComeandEatHereThenextmorning,WangPengopenedhisrestaurantearlierandputtheabovesignoutdoors.(1)采用流程式的句子：段首句：The next morning,Wang Peng opened his restaurant earlier and put the above
2、signoutdoors.With a discount andthe new sign, he won some customers back from Yong Huis slimming restaurant.Not surprisingly, with a discount andthe new sign, most people in the immediate areacame to his restaurant.The new signdrove many new customers inside. Because ofthe new sign, many peoplewalke
3、d into his restaurant.(2)采用矩阵式的句子：段首句：The next morning,Wang Pengopened his restaurant earlier and put the abovesignoutdoors.Hesmiled when he thought of his restaurant having plenty of customers. He evenimagined that customers might praise his food and promise that they would come to his restaurant n
4、ext time.Heprepared his menu of mutton, pork, beef and fried rice hopefully and confidently.Wang Pengsaw a number of customers enter his restaurant, feeling relieved.Hewas confident of having more customers than Yong Hui.(3)采用流程式+矩阵式的句子：段首句：The next morning,Wang Pengopened his restaurant earlier and
5、 put the abovesignoutdoors.Staring atthis new sign,hepictured that his restaurant was full of customers again.在和学生的实际操练中，有的段落硬采用以上方式有点怪怪的。我的解释是，即使用不上，能想到这些连接点，就很到位了。再强调一下：1.第一段所给首句，与你紧接着写的一句的连接点；2.你写的第一段最后一句和第二段所给首句之间的连接点；3.第二段所给首句，与你紧接着写的一句的连接点。续写点入手还要强调一件事：关键情节，关键词和点题等，都是在原文中找的！找原文，既是读后续写的根本，也是你的破
6、题口。It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a new trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reachedAlbuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dads friend, picked us up from the
7、airportand drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. Mydad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs andwaterrolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up t
8、o havebreakfast.The day starts at dawn on my farm,he said. After breakfast, I went to helpAunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out tograze(吃草).I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked reallycool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncl
9、e Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as longas my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dadand I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards themountains.Dont be late for supper,”Uncle Paul cried,andkeep to the tra
10、ck so that youdont get lost!OK! my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house wereout of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep greenpipe trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautifulwoven(编织的) bl
11、anket spread out upon the ground just for us.Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it got dark.Model：Suddenlya little rabbitjumped out in front of my horse.Itwas so cute,like a spirit in the forest, that I cannot help chasin
12、g it. Dad followed me close. My heart wasswelled with excitement when I approached the rabbit,closer and closer. But we neglected thatwed already left away from the track. Whats worse, the rabbit disappeared, all of a sudden.When we realized that we couldntgo back to the farm house for supper, every
13、thing was toolate.Wehad no idea where we were and it got dark.Isobbed,Dad, what shallwe do now? He smiled bitterly,Uncle Paul would try to find us. Time passed like a leakingtap. Hungry and tired, I had a terribledesire for a steaming cup of tea and a piece of pizza.Then Dad said,Do you hear the riv
14、er nearby? We can go back along it.Luckily, we reachedthe farm house safe and sound. How wise my dad was! Keep calm no matter what happenedand then you can overcome everything. Thats what I learned from during the special summervacation.迷路后如何找到路？-顺溪而行（有原文信息）- Uncle Paul来找我们了（比较合理，也有原文铺垫）-先前掉了帽子在路上，找到了帽子（自己创作，要注意逻辑且易懂）高频/可复现词：track，supper，river结尾：点题式-遇事不慌，就会想到办法。学科网（北京）股份有限公司