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1、高三第三次适应性考试英语读后续写题目：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。读后续写原文Oh no. Coach Cafferty just said my name. For that event. The two-hundred-metre breaststroke for the coming meet! Not the backstroke I had wished and practiced for so long!中文噢不。Cafferty教练刚刚喊了我的名字。这个比赛项目是200米蛙泳，而不是我长期以来一直希望和练习的仰泳！Beads of s
2、weat popped out over my upper lip.(积累这个句式)Morgan pressed her elbow into my side, trying to offer memoral support.But it didnt help.My stomach sank to my knees like a brick in water.Morgan tried to convince me it would be fine. Maybe Coach has more confidence in you than you think. Or maybe Coach Caf
3、ferty just wants to give the rest a laugh when I sink to the bottom of the pool, I thought desperately. I walked towards Coach Cafferty and told her about my inability and my desire to quit this event. She frowned and asked if it was what I really wanted. I hesitated. Placing her hand on my shoulder
4、, she started smiling and encouraged me to push myself outside of my comfort zone.汗珠从我的上唇冒出来。Morgan胳膊肘顶着我的腰，试图给我精神鼓励。但这没有帮助。我的胃像砖块一样下沉到了我的膝盖处。Morgan试图说服我一切都会好的。“也许教练对你的信心比你想象得更多。”“或者Cafferty教练只是想让其他人在我沉到池底时发笑，”我绝望地想到。我走向Cafferty教练，告诉她我的无能和想要退出这个比赛项目的愿望。她皱起眉头问我是否真的这么想。我犹豫了。她把手放在我的肩上，开始微笑并鼓励我突破自己的舒适区。
5、The first practice was a disaster. I lost rhythm on my strokes. I messed up my turns. I even had to stop and catch my breath a few times. I felt everyone was laughing at me andmy stomach twisted.How could I make it within just two weeks? But once I dragged myself out of the water, exhausted and frus
6、trated, Coach Cafferty thumbed up to me, saying I did really well and just needed more confidence in myself and more time to practice.第一次练习是一场灾难。我的划水节奏不对，转弯出现了问题。我甚至不得不停下来喘口气。我感觉每个人都在笑我，我的胃直扭曲。在仅有两周的时间内如何完成？但是当我筋疲力尽，沮丧地从水中爬出来时，Cafferty教练竖起大拇指，说我做得很好，只需要更多自信和练习的时间。On the way back home, Morgan comfort
7、ed me, Dear, just ignore others. Race against yourself. Count your own strokes. Prove to yourself that you can do it. With these words said to me almost every day, before or after each practice, something gradually changed: both how I swam the breaststroke and how I felt about the event as well as m
8、yself.在回家的路上，Morgan安慰我说，“亲爱的，别在乎别人，与你自己比赛，计算自己的划水次数，向自己证明你能做到。”她几乎每天在练习前后说这些话给我听，渐渐地，一些事情发生了改变：我的蛙泳成绩以及我对比赛和我对自己的看法。The meet finally came. I arrived at the pool hall, still a little bit worried.As each event clicked closer to mine, my knees shook.I bit my lip and looked out over the other swimmers.M
9、organ leaned forward. Just swim your race. Remember, you can!比赛终于来了。我来到游泳馆，仍有点担心。随着每个比赛项目逐渐接近，我的膝盖不停地颤抖。我咬着嘴唇看着其他游泳者。Morgan倾身对我说道：只需游好自己的比赛。你要知道，你行的！续写第一段：Then the two-hundred-meter breaststroke was announced.然后宣布了200米蛙泳的比赛项目。续写第二段：There was only 50 meters to go.只剩下50米了。主旨：克服挑战，突破自己。故事线：主人公因为教练改变她的比
10、赛项目而感到沮丧，但是在教练和朋友的鼓励下，她开始克服困难和不安，最终在比赛中取得了成功。发展线：一是主人公在练习蛙泳的过程中，遇到了很多困难和挫折，但通过不断努力和教练的指导，逐渐提高了自己的技能和信心；二是主人公内心的变化，从最初的焦虑和自我怀疑，到最后的自信和勇气。试水作文：续写第一段 :Then the two-hundred-milestone breaststroke was announced.My heart sank as I took my place at the starting block, surrounded by experienced swimmers who
11、 had been practicing for months. The whistle blew and we were off, the water churning around me as I plunged forward.For the first half of the race,I struggled to keep up with the others.Suddenly,IsawMorgansiitinginthespectatorseatingarea,andIrememberedherwords: Just swim your race. I focused on my
12、own strokes, counting each one as I pulled myself through the water.续写第二段:(没写主人公赢得比赛，而是写成战胜了自己，打破了自己的最好成绩。）There was only 50 meters to go.My arms and legs burned with exhaustion, but I refused to give up. I pushed myself harder than ever before, counting my strokes and focusing on my technique. As I
13、 approached the finish line, I gave one final burst of energy and touched the wall. I looked up at the scoreboard, and my heart leaped with joy. I had done it! I had not only completed the race but had also beaten my personal best time. Tears of happiness streamed down my face as I hugged my family
14、and friends. I had proven to myself that I was capable of anything if I just believed in myself and pushed myself outside of my comfort zone.范文：Then the two-hundred-mile stone breaststroke was announced.Calmness gradually seizing me, I continued to practise and gradually made progress in the followi
15、ng practices. Finally, Wednesday came and I arrived at the pool hall nervously. Soon it was my turn and to my surprise, I had a good beginning.As I plunged into the water, I could feel my body moving smoothly through the pool. My strokes were strong and steady, and I felt like I was making good prog
16、ress. The first few laps went by quickly, and I was surprised at how well I was doing. However, as I approached the halfway mark, my body started to feel the strain. My legs began to ache, and my arms were starting to tire. Despite the pain, I kept pushing myself forward, determined to finish the ra
17、ce.There was only 50 meters to go.My legs were pillars of lead. I kicked, but it felt like I was moving through cement. My arms were on fire, and my lungs were bursting. I slapped it with what little energy I had left. There was no one else left in the pool. I had finished last. After the meet, Morg
18、an found me, exhausted, collapsing in a chair. “Im so proud of you,” he said. “I lost.” “Yeah.” She nodded. “But you did it, right?” I bit my lip. “Yeah. I guess I did.”I didnt come close to placing, but I had given everything I had to finish. “I swam my race. And I think I won.” Race is not only to
19、 beat your competitors but also to race against yourself.这篇读后续写文本和湖南省永州市2023届高三上学期第二次适应性测试（二模）英语试题读后续写以及2023年浙江省温州市龙湾区、洞头区中考一模英语试题的完形填空来源同一文本。但是本篇读后续写的最大区别在于“Coach Cafferty” 和 “Morgan” 角色的不同，在永州二模卷里，“Morgan”变成了“Mom”，Coach的“鼓励”角色被弱化，在中考模拟卷里只有Coach的角色，而温州三模是将“鼓励”的角色一分为二，分别给与了Coach和Morgan，所以对于人物处理来说，本篇
20、的读后续写难度更大。附上永州二模的读后续写：湖南省永州市 2023 届高三上学期第二次适应性测试 (二模) 英语试题读后续写“JAMIE EVANS”Oh no. Please tell me that Coach Cafferty did NOT just say my name. Not for the one-hundred-meter breaststroke (睡泳).Except all eves were turned to me when she announced it, and her eves met mine over the clipboard that held t
21、he list of events and swimmers for the Plain Township Aquatic Center meet. The PTAC meet was the first of the season, and l was not ready.“Remember, the meet is on Wednesday night. Be here at four thirty for and the race kicks off at six. Ill see you atpractice tomorrow” Coach Cafferty added. The cr
22、owd cleared quickly and l headed back home, feeling desperate.“ Did you find out your events for Wednesday? Mom asked as she slid the pizza box across the table to me.-“Yeah. One-hundred breaststroke, finally said, not meeting her eyes. “I dont know why Coach didnt give me backstroke (仰泳). She knows
23、 its my best.I cant swim breaststroke!”“Maybe she sees something you dont. Mom said. Or maybe l should just quit the swim team. Mom frowned. “Is thatwhat you want?”I sighed.“No. took a bite of my pizza. Im terrible at breaststroke. What happens when l show up on Wednesday andrace, and I sink to the
24、bottom of the pool? Or even worse, come in last?”“Someone has to be last” Mom pointed out.But I dont even know ifl can swim breaststroke for one-hundred meters!I set my pizza down. “She had submittedthe names, but theres no way l can do this.“You could. But how will you know unless you try?” Mom per
25、suaded.“Yeah, but if I try, I could fail. ln front of everyone. I pictured the entire crowd watching as finished last, pointing and laughing.My belly squeezed.Mom set her pizza down and gave me her Im-saying-something-important-so-listen face “Dont worry about other people. Just race against yoursel
26、f. Forget about anything else except doing your best and swimming your own race. Prove toyourself that you can do it.”Somehow, there seemed a mysterious power in her words comforting my unsettling heart and I decided to have a try. The next day, I was at practice as required.Paragraph 1:-The first p
27、ractice was a disaster.-Paragraph 2:Then everything crashed in the last 5 meters of the race.范文：Paragraph 1:The first practice was a disaster. I didnt swim breaststroke for one-hundred meters and sank to the bottom of the pool.could fee people surrounding were a pointing and laughing, What a shame.
28、Face blushing, was about to give up again when moms words resounded in my mind.Dont worry about other people. Just race against yourself” Calmness gradually seized me, I continued to practise and gradually made progress in the following practices. Finally, Wednesday came and l arrived at the pool ha
29、ll nervously. Soon it was my turn and to my surprise, l had a good beginning.Paragraph 2:Then everything crashed in the last 5 meters of the race. My legs were pillars of lead.1 kicked, but it felt like I was moving through cement. My arms were on fire, and my lungs were bursting. slapped it with wh
30、at little energy l had left. There was no one else left in the pool. had finished last. After the meet, Mom found me, exhausted, collapsing in a chair. m so proud of you, she said.“l lost”Yeah She nodded. But you did it, right? I bit my lip. Yeah.l guess I did. I didnt come close to placing, but I had given everything had to finish. “ swam my race. And i think i won Race is not only beat your competitors but also to race against yourself.学科网（北京）股份有限公司