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1、广东省南粤名校高三上学期9月普通高中学科综合素养评价联考英语读后续写题目:阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Caught in a floodMary and her parents were downstairs in the living room. Mary was looking through the windows at the endless rain outside. It had been raining non-stop for three days. She had never seen a storm this bad. It w
2、as making her nervous. The wind roared and the rain beat on the roof and windows. Dad was listening to a weather report on the radio, while Mum was putting their important documents and disaster supplies into a bag,“Mum, Dad,” said Mary suddenly, “I think we should leave here right away!“No,said Dad
3、. “Its too late: The radio says the city has already been flooded.”“We can drive our car through the floodwater Lets us leave! Im really scared!” cried Mary.“We cant do that, honey,” explained Mum, “otherwise the moving water could wash the car away!Mary walked to the door. She was curious to see ho
4、w much water there was outside.“Dont open the door!” shouted Mum and Dad at the same time. “The water may flood in!”Dad moved the dinner table against the door, in case the floodwater forced the door open. Mum waved to Mary to sit on the sofa. “Mary, dont worry. Everythings going to be OK,” she said
5、 softly, trying her best to comfort Mary. Her voice was calm, but Mary could tell she was worried too.Without saying a single word, Dad walked to the sofa, sat down and hugged his wife and daughter. The sudden silence in the house seemed to make the wind and rain more frightening outside. What could
6、 they do?注意:1，续写词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好.All of a sudden, the floodwater forced the door open.Being upstairs, they breathed a sigh of relief.01How to Read_叙事要素1. 角色：Mary; Dad; Mum2. 视角：第三人称3. 时空线：暴雨连下三天时; the living room in their house4. 情节线：被暴雨困在家中Mary建议立即离开家父母劝阻父母安抚Mary（续写）一家人讨论后决定留在家中；雨停了，
7、房子虽然被淹但是人都平安度险。5. 情感线：我：nervous紧张scared惊恐（续写）语言1.句式：使用了陈述句、疑问句、感叹句和祈使句等多种句式等。句式的变化有助于增强故事的紧张感2. 风格：叙事节奏紧凑主题面对暴雨自然灾害时，家庭成员相互支持，团结在一起采取必要的防护措施来保护自己。02How to Write写作提示Writing Tips情节思路：ARE原则（Action、Response、Emotion）The first paragraph 第一段父母决定留在家中想办法度险大雨的状况一家人紧张的心情；The second paragraph 第二段暴雨终于停了Mary一家的反应
8、一家人度过危险的心情。03参考答案After a brief discussion, Mum and Dad decided they should stay in the house.They thought it would be really dangerous to try to walk through the water to get to higher ground.“Mary, well have to goupstairs and wait there,”said Mum.“OK, Mum. If thats what you think is best,” Mary rep
9、lied uncertainly.So they went upstairs and waited. Downstairs, water started flooding into the living room and kitchen. All three of them were nervous, but at least they had disaster supplies, including food and drinking water.Finally, the rain stopped, but Mary and her family could not leave while
10、the house was still flooded.They listened to the radio and learnt that rescue workers in boats were coming to rescue people who were trapped in their homes. They waited for a boat to arrive at their house. Their home had been badly damaged, but they were all happy to be alive.04译文助解被洪水围困玛丽和她的父母在楼下的客
11、厅里。玛丽透过窗户望着外面没完没了的雨。雨连续下了三天。她从未见过如此恶劣的暴风雨。这让她很紧张。风在呼啸，雨打在屋顶和窗户上。爸爸正在听收音机里的天气预报，而妈妈正在把他们的重要文件和救灾物资放进一个袋子里。“妈妈，爸爸，”玛丽突然说，“我想我们应该马上离开这里！”“不，”爸爸说。“太晚了！收音机说城市已经被洪水淹没了。”“我们可以开车穿过洪水！我们走吧！我真的很害怕！”玛丽喊道。“我们不能那样做，亲爱的，”妈妈解释道，“否则流动的水会把车冲走！”玛丽走到门口。她好奇地想看看外面有多少水。“别开门！”妈妈和爸爸同时喊道。“水可能会涌进来！”爸爸把餐桌移到门边，以防洪水把门冲开。妈妈向玛丽挥手
12、让她坐在沙发上。“玛丽，别担心。一切都会好起来的，”她轻声说，尽力安慰玛丽。她的声音很平静，但玛丽看得出她也很担心。爸爸一言不发地走到沙发前，坐下来拥抱妻子和女儿。屋子里突然的寂静似乎使外面的风雨更加可怕。他们能做什么？经过简短的讨论，爸爸和妈妈决定他们应该留在家里。他们认为试图穿过水走到较高的地方会非常危险。“玛丽，我们得上楼等待。”妈妈说道。“好的，妈妈。如果你认为这样最好。”玛丽迟疑地回答道。于是他们上楼等待。楼下，水开始涌入客厅和厨房。一家三口感到紧张，但至少他们备有灾难应急物资，包括食物和饮用水。终于，雨停了，但是当房子仍然被水淹没时，玛丽和她的家人无法离开。他们听收音机得知救援人员
13、正在用船来营救那些被困在家中的人。他们等待着救援船到达他们的房子。他们的屋子被严重损坏了，但他们都很庆幸在灾难中幸存。下水文:All of a sudden, the floodwater forced the door open. Shocked, frightened and extremely scared, Mary saw the floodwaters pouring into the room, leaving the dinner table upside down. She didnt know what to do, trembling , and turned to he
14、r mom for help. An idea occurred to Mom that they had to go upstairs, because they had no choice but to save themselves at that moment, and it would be of great danger to stay in place before rescue came to them. Dad also rushed to the second floor without hesitation, not forgetting to take the bag
15、containing important documents and disaster supplies.Being upstairs, they breathed a sigh of relief. However, the floodwater had flooded into the whole living room downstairs. They were all nervous and scared to see the floodwater rise further. Fortunately, what relieved them a little was that they
16、prepared enough food and water supplies in advance. The rain was still raining non-stop. Mary and Mom became increasingly nervous while Dad kept giving them comfort and encouragement. Later, they learned from the radio that the government was organizing rescue groups to save people caught in their h
17、ome by boat. Thinking they would be saved, they couldnt be more excited. Until then , the easiness and warmth welled up in every corner of the room, seeming to make the floodwater outside less frightening outside.It doesnt matter what you did when you were faced with tough situation , and what matters most is that you made a wise decision and well prepared.学科网（北京）股份有限公司