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1、【考前技能篇8】读后续写作的解题技巧读后续写的命题形式为：提供一段350词左右的与语言材料，据该材料内容、所给两段段落开头语进 行续写(15()词左右)，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节合理、完整的短文。1 .创造性：即发挥想象力，该题型具有一定的开放性，考生需用自己的语言对故事情节进行内容创造；2 .逻辑性：即根据己提供的关键信息，按照可能的合理的方向续写，使文章逻辑结构完整；3 .丰富性：即语言能力的充分体现，词汇句法的准确与复杂程度，细节描写的生动性等都将让故事更 加立体饱满。一、考情分析1.历年真题一览表ground just fbr us.体裁原文字数话题2021 年新高考全
2、国I卷记叙文306母亲节的礼物浙江卷6月记叙文315暑假打工薪水浙江卷1月记叙文348万圣节南瓜趣事2020 年全新高考全国I卷记叙文325帮助弱者脱困浙江卷7月记叙文330与熊对抗脱险浙江卷1月记叙文350抚慰狗狗心伤2018浙江卷6月记叙文325度假骑马迷路注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为15()左右；.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragrap
3、h 2:We had no idea where we were and it got dark.One possible version:Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. This unexpected appearance frightened my horse, which made it run wildly. I tried my best to control it, but in vain. Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my ba
4、lance to prevent myself from falling off. Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and so did I. At that moment, my dad also came up. Seeing I was OK, he was quite relieved. But it was clear that we got lost.Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it got dark
5、. We didnt know where the farm house was. What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. But it was really difficult for us in such a dark situation. Just as wc were at the point of desperation, we heard a faint voice from the distance. must be Uncle Paul,“ I said. So we cried back
6、 with excitement. Finally, Uncle Paul safely brought us back home. What an amazing ride!2017年11月浙江卷阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。A vacation with my motherI had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forg
7、eHuL One strange family trip vve took when I was eleven tells a lol about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, m
8、y eight-year-oki brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if wed ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipmcnt, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two
9、hours later after wed returned home to get the purse and travelers checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout （放哨）while I go, and Ill stand outside the door and pl
10、ay lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: Honey, where are the kids?” “Whal?! Oh, Gosh. I thought they were being awfully quiet. We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we werent about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a ho
11、tel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didnt wc find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections
12、 （反对）.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:The nex
13、t day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.One possible version:Paragraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Wc decided to camp along the river. The views （h
14、ere were surprisingly beautifulthe warm sunshine, （he fresh air, the clean water. We sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature. However, when Dad was about to put up our tent, he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel. Well, Dad had lo go back to fetch it to continue our ca
15、mping.Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. Every time we got to a new place, Mom would cheer up like a child. She would get off the car excitedly, laughing and dancing around. Together wc enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities, the historical b
16、uildings in the small towns and the amazing scenery in nature. When we came back to the hotel after the tiring but excellent visit. Mom would hug us and kiss us on our faces. How sweet she was! Absrnt-mindcd and forgetful as she was, she never forgot to express her love to us.2017年6月浙江卷阅读下面短文，根据所给情节
17、进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。On a bright, warm July afternoon. Mac Hol Ian, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled （骑行）
18、along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. Man, thats a big dog! he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all, but a wolf
19、, quickly catching up with him.Macs heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Macs relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked
20、 the back of Macs bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追赶).Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that
21、once he hit the hill, hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted
22、 what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, (hey realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：2 .
23、续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Paragraph 2:A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.One possible version:Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Becky got out of the car immediately to give help. But
24、 with the bare hands, they didnt dare to fight with the wolf. However, they still approached to the wolf bravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, shouting loudly at Paul and Becky. Mac then jumped off the bicycle and was ready to fight against the wolf. That re
25、ached deadlock.Paragraph 2:A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf. Macs friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf. More and more cars slopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the
26、cars, and some took out (he knives, even the guns towards the wolf. Just at that time, the wolf might feel the threats from the people, starting to withdraw. Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance.2016年10月浙江卷One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hou
27、rs to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on (he way an unpleasant subject came up and they started (o quarrel. By the time ihey reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. Im going to find a better spot fbr us to camp and walked away.With no path to follow. Jane jus
28、t walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.Tom! she cried. “Help!”No reply. If only she had not le
29、ft her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold
30、 him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling （滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great ioy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had
31、 she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a hclicoptcr.Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few
32、minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语，2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：Bui no more helicopters came and
33、it was gelling dark again.Paragraph 2:it 卬as daybreak when Jane woke up.One possible version:Paragraph 1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane had to stay alone in the forest for another cold night. Although she felt a little sad, she didnt get fearful. She thought about T
34、om. He must have called fbr those helicopters. Maybe he was in one of them and will come back again! I have to guide him tomorrow.n She fell asleep and dreamed of seeing Tom.Paragraph 2:It was day break when Jane woke up. She ate some berries and then walked along the stream, hoping to find a suitab
35、le place to guide the helicopter. Fortunately, she saw a huge flat rock in an open area al a distance. She rushed to the rock, climbed onto it and waited. To her great ioy. the helicopter appeared again. The nearer it got, the more she flagged the yellow blouse. Luckily, the helicopter didnt miss Ja
36、ne this time and it landed near the big rock slowly. Tom jumped off the helicopter and ran towards Jane. She broke down and burst into tears.实验省份考试说明样题A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank, he heard the so
37、und of someone trying to start a car. He tried again and again but couldift get the car moving. Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked, looks like youve got a problem,M Arthur said.Tm afraid so. Tin in a big hurry and I cant start my c
38、ar.”“Is there something I can do to hclp?, Arthur asked. The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said, “ Thanks. If youre sure it wouldnt be too much trouble, you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”“No trouble at all. Id be glad to help.”The young man got out
39、and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turned to get the other one. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the long loud noise of an alaim.It was from the bank. There had been a robbery （抢劫）!Park Avenue had been quiet a
40、 moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions. Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other, 4What happened?” But everyone had a di fferent answer.Arthur, still carrying the su
41、itcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.She looked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. 11 Why is she looking at me like that? He thought. t4Thc suitcase! She thinks Iin the bank thief!Arthur looked around at Ihe crowd of people. He
42、became frightened, and without another thought, he started to run.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, Stop, stop!Paragraph 2：The taxi stopped in front of the Police Stat
43、ion and Arthur.One possible version:Paragraph 1：As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!” But Arthur ran even faster. Just then, a taxi came along. Arthur stopped it and threw himself into the back seat and asked （he driver to go to the Police Station.Paragraph 2：T
44、he taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur ran into it, shouting, “Theres a bank robbery and I know ihe bank ihief.” Quickly alter Arthur told his story, the policemen started fbr the bank without delay. When they arrived at the spot, they were surprised to find that the people who ga
45、thered before the bank were now crowding around ihe young man, who seemed quite worried. Finally, Arthur realized that he had made a mistake. The loud noise of the alarm was incorrectly made by the banks system and nothing happened to the bank, but the young man was worried that someone had robbed h
46、is suitcase.2017浙江卷6月记叙文348骑行途中偶遇狼浙江卷11月记叙文343健忘妈妈趣事2016浙江卷10月记叙文335吵架出走迷路从上面表格中我们能够看出，读后续写通常是记叙文为主，所考察的主题为人与自然，人与动物或者 人与自我。这要求，我们在复习备考时，需要有针对地复习和训练。2.读后续写的评分标准1 .本题总分为25分，按七个档次进行评分。2 .评分时，主要从内容、语言表达和篇章结构三个方面考查，具体为：（1）续写内容的质量、续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。（2）所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。（3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。3 .评分时，应先根据作答
47、的整体情况确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调 整档次，最后给分。4 .评分时还应注意：（1）词数少于120的，酌情扣分；（2）单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英、美 拼写及词汇用法均可接受；（3）书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分。b.评分档次C.评分解读档次得分评分标准第七档22-25一创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高：使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不 影响理解：自然有效地使用了段落间、句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义 连贯。第六档18-21一创造了比
48、较丰富、合理的内容，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整，与原文情境 融洽度较高：一使用了比较多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达比较流畅，有个别错误，但 不影响理解：比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。第五档15-17一创造了基本合理的内容，有一定的逻辑性，续写基本完整，与原文情境相关： 使用了比较恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达方式不够多样性，表达有些许错误， 但基本不影响理解：使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。第四档11-14创造了基本完整的故事内容，但有的情节不够合理或逻辑性不强，与原文情 境基本相关：-使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有部分语言错误和不恰当之处，个别部分影 响理解：尚有语句衔接的意识，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。第三档6-10一内容和逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文有一定程度脱节：所用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多且比较低级，影响理解： 一未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义欠连贯。第二档1