《考点23 写作方法技巧（一）写人叙事-备战2023年中考英语一轮复习考点帮（上海专用）（解析版）.docx》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《考点23 写作方法技巧（一）写人叙事-备战2023年中考英语一轮复习考点帮（上海专用）（解析版）.docx（13页珍藏版）》请在taowenge.com淘文阁网|工程机械CAD图纸|机械工程制图|CAD装配图下载|SolidWorks_CaTia_CAD_UG_PROE_设计图分享下载上搜索。
1、考点23写作方法技巧（一）写人叙事记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容的文章，通常包括六个要索:时间、地点、人物、事件、 原因及结果，写作时各要素要交代清楚，但并不要求全部具备。点重点考向 .考向一：人物描写点拨人物描写类的作文，大多围绕亲情、友情、师生情、榜样力量、人物奋斗等话题展开, 或叙事抒怀，或表明个人对人物所持的情感。此类文章以记叙文居多，也可夹叙夹议。来出 在中学生英语课程标准中，初中阶段的内容与要求中所提到的话题，比如famous people（名 人）、interests and hobbies （兴趣和爱好）等，会涉及到人物描写。人物描写的文章，对人物各方面的描写是必不可少的:外貌描
2、写、语言描写、神态描写、 动作描写、心理描写等等，根据文章的需要，确定写哪些，哪些详写，哪些略写。写人离不 开写事，因为人物的特点总是在具体的事例中表现出来的。文章时态要根据事情发生的频率 而定:经常性的行为多用一般现在时，一次性的行为多用一般过去时，当然，其他时态也可 能会涉及。在写人的时候，我们可以通过以下三部分来写作：1 .简单介绍人物的概况。般包括姓名、性别、年龄、职业、家庭背景等。写作时使用 的语青必须符合英语表达习惯如姓名的书写、年龄的表达、人称或称呼的法取等。2从多方面对人物进行刻面。为了使人物的形象丰满起来，给读者留下深刻印象，我们 可以对人物的外貌、神态、动作等进行描写，并选
3、取简短的事例来说明其品质和个性。在具 体写作时，要正确把握现在时、过去时和将来时的用法。3.对人物进行评价。在文章结尾处要介绍你对人物的评价或谈论你的个人感受，无论是 喜欢还是讨厌，是称赞还是批评，都要明确地表达出来。考向二：写人记叙文万能模板Do you know（引出人物）？ She/He Is（人物身份）She/He is tall and（身材）Her/Hishair is（头友）She/He always wears（表情）and gives us the impression that（每人的印象）is always willing to（性格）She/He is good at（
4、特长） She/He always helps me out whenever ILOnce（弓I 出事歹U） To my surprise,（她/他的做法）【详解】总体分析 题材.：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时“； 提示：要点已给出，根据要点描述自己的经历，不要遗漏自己对于这段经历的感受，适 当增加细节，突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，描述这段经历发生的时间；第二步，按照时间顺序阐述这段经历的具体情况；第三步，表达自己的感受。亮点词汇wake up醒来be late for迟到rush out冲出run into撞倒高分句型 When I woke u
5、p that morning, I realized I would be late for school, （when 引导的时间状语从 句）By the time I got to the bus stop, the bus had already left, （by the time 引导的时间状语从句） Then, when I saw my Chinese exam report, I was very upset because I hadnt passed the exam.（because引导的原因状语从句）5 .每个人都有幸运和不幸运的时候，在你的记忆中，你所经历的最开心或最
6、糟糕的一 天是什么样子？写出你的经历和感受。不少于80词。【答案】例文I still remember the bad day I have experienced was a Tuesday. I woke up late because my clock didnt go off. I was nervous. I would be late for class. When I got to school, my English teacher was having class. As a result, my teacher punished me and I felt sad. At
7、the beginning of the second class, my math teacher asked us to hand in math homework. I found I had left it at home, so I had to explain to him, which made me very afraid. After the lunch, I had a fight with my best friend. My headteacher was so angry that he kicked me off the classroom and sent me
8、home. I realized I let my parents down. That night I thought about these things carefully and decided to make a change and I believed I could be a better boy soon.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；时态：时态为“一般过去时”；提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，需要详细描述最开心或最糟糕的一天是什 么样子，以第一人称为主。写作步骤第一步，首句点题，介绍作者经历过的糟糕的一天是周二；第二步，具体阐述周二这一天，作
9、者经历的一些不开心的事情；第三步，最后作者决定改变，做一个好男孩。亮点词汇go off （电器设备）停止运转ask sb to do sth要求某人做某事make sb adj使某人高分句型I still remember the bad day I have experienced was a Tuesday.（省略 that 的定语从句）I found I had left it at home, so I had to explain to him, which made me very afraid.（found 后是 省略that的宾语从句；which引导非限制性定语从句）My he
10、adteacher was so angry that he kicked me off the classroom and sent me home. （so.that 引导的结果状语从句）6 .法国作家雨果说：“进步是目的，理想是标准工回首两年多的初中时光，你一定取 得了不少的进步，请根据以下思维导图的提示，以“The Progress Ive Made为题写一篇80 词左右的短文，谈谈你在生活和学习方面取得的进步，以及对未来的展望。要求：1 .必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出；2 .意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3 .文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。The Pr
11、ogress Ive MadeLooking back on the past two years, I have made great progress.答案 One possible version:The Progress Pve MadeLooking back on th。past two years, I have made great progress.First of all, I have made many friends. We share our feelings with each other. I am not shy any longer and become a
12、ctive and confident. With the help of my parents, I have learned to do some housework, such as cleaning my room, cooking and so on. I can take care of myself well now. Thanks to my kind and patient teachers, I have developed good learning habits, and done better in study as well.I will make greater
13、efforts to achieve greater success in the future!【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；时态：时态为“现在完成时”和“一般现在时“；提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点中的“Future”部分，需要自我发挥，描 述自己对未来的展望。写作步骤第一步，开篇点题：回望过去两年，取得的进步很大； 第二步，具体描写自己在生活、学习方面取得的进步； 第三步，描写自己对未来的展望。亮点词汇make great progress取得很大的进步each other互相（3） not. any longer 不再 do some housewo
14、rk 做家务take care of 照顾高分句型With the help of my parents, I have learned to do some housework, such as cleaning my room, cooking and so on. （learn to do sth.学会做某事；such as 表示列举） Thanks to my kind and patient teachers, I have developed good learning habits, and done better in study as well, （and 连接的并列句）题过
15、关题过关7.初中生活即将过去，在过去的三年里总有那么一个人或一件事情让你难以忘记，请你根据下面的提示写一篇英语文章。1 .难以忘怀的是我的英语老师李老师。2.刚进初中第一节英语课，老师叫我自我介绍, 但我性格害羞，胆子小，英语成绩差，沉默不语。3.李老师与我聊天，告诉我要学好英语 一定要多练习。4.英语成绩提高了，还拿到英语演讲比赛的奖次。【答案One possible version:The one person from my junior high school days that I will never forget is Mrs. Li, my English teacher.Wh
16、en I started my first English class in Grade 7, Mrs. Li asked us to introduce ourselves. When it was my turn, I was so shy and nervous that I kept silent for a long time. She just asked me to sit down. After class, she told me that she believed I could make it if I practice more. I was touched and d
17、ecided to make an effort.As a result, I made much progress in English and I even won an English speech contest the next year! I will always be thankful to Mrs. Li for her advice and support.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；时态：时态为“一般过去时”；提示：注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。写作步骤第一步：表明写作
18、意图。内容是根据所给的材料，写一篇英语文章记叙在过去的三年里让你 难以忘记的一个人或一件事情。第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先提出英语老师李老师是我难以忘怀的；其次具体介绍原因;最后介绍结果。第三步：书写结语。表达自己的感激之情。亮点词汇ask sb. to do sth.请某人做某事。kept silent保持沉默make an effort做出努力made much progress取得了很大进展be thankful to 感激高分句型The one person from my junior high school days that I will never forget is Mrs
19、. Li, my English teacher, （that引导的定语从句）When it was my turn, I was so shy and nervous that I kept silent for a long time. （so.that.$0此以至于）After class, she told me that she believed I could make it if I practice more. （if 引导的条件状语 从句）8.即将毕业，请以“My favorite teacher”为题，写一篇英语短文，短文包括以下内容：1 .老师的外貌、性格、所教科目等；2
20、 .以事例描述喜爱的原因；3 .表达对这位老师的感激和祝福。要求：1 .要点齐全，并适当发挥；2 .文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名；3 .卷面整洁，书写美观，课适当加2-3分；4 .词数：80词左右，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。My favorite teacherIts time to graduate from junior high school. Td like to write something about my favorite teacher.【答案】例文My favorite teacherIts time to graduate from junior high schoo
21、l. Td like to write something about my favorite teacher. Of all the teachers, I like my English teacher best. She is a lovely and outgoing girl who loves singing and reading. She is of medium height and has long straight hair.When I was in Grade Seven, I was so shy that I was afraid to take part in
22、the English competition. She encouraged me not to give up any chance to show myself to others. Thanks to her, I changed my attitude and won the first prize.I will never forget the wonderful time we were together. Best wishes to her!【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如graduate from, of all the teachers, o
23、f medium height, so that, be afraid to do, take part in, give up, encourage sb. to do, at the weekends, thanks to sb., the first prize 等。而并列结构 She is of medium height and has long straight hair./1 changed my attitude and won the first prize.和 She is a lovely and outgoing girl who loves singing and r
24、eading./ When I was in Grade Seven, I was so shy that I was afraid to take part in the English competition./1 will never forget the wonderful time we were together.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习 中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也 更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容 经整理后展开思维，考查
25、运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点, 要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。(3)She/He is and I hope(表达愿望).模板内容要点引出人物详细介绍人物做出评价，表达感想模板内客可根据题日要求和具体情况取舍。你身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义。请以“My special”为题用英语写一篇短文, 描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。要求：1 .在题目空格处填入你要描述的对象，如grandma,teacher或friend等；2 .文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.80词左右。My s
26、pecial万能模板套用分析首先，点明要叙述的人物其次，对要叙述的人物进行详细的介绍。最后，发表感受满分范文My special friendDo you know Mr.Smith? He is my English teacher.He is special to me because he treats me as a good friend.He always wears a smile and gives me the impression that he can help me out whenever I am in difficulty.He has a good sense
27、of humor and likes making friendsHis classes are very interesting. After class, he often helps me with my English. He never smokes.He likes playing football.He likes China so much that he is planning to live in China in the future.（长短句结合原则，前面是简 单句，此句是sothat引导的结果状语从句。）He is my special friend who 1 li
28、ke very much,and I hope I can keep in touch with him.（句式 多变原则，此句为复合句，who又引导定语从句。）你也可以这样表达Treating me as a good friend,he is special to me.He is humorous and likes making friends.He has so much deep love for China that he is planning to live in China in the future考向三：叙事写法点拨在写记事文章的时候，我们可以分成以下三部分来写：1事情
29、的开端。交代时间，地点、人物和事情的起因等。在这部分的写作中，不用详细 地展开，只需简单交代，并可使用“设置悬念”等写作手法。2事情的经过和高潮。详细描写事情是怎么开始，发展、并达到高潮的。这部分是文章 的中心，所以一定要具体、详细地描写出事情发展全过程的细节，要尽量地真实、引人人胜。3.事情的结尾。这部分简单地进行描写就行，还可在这部分加上一些自己获得的启发和 教训，但无须详细展开，用一两句话带过就行。考向四：叙事记叙文万能模板leant（事件）without（人物）。I remember clearly when I（事件），I felt（感想）。My parents（做法）。They t
30、old me thatand what I should do was.1 was touched andmade up my mind To（决心）.It is（人物）that.模板内容要点开篇点题具体叙述事情呼应主题注：模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍O回顾三年的初中生活，父母的教诲与支持始终伴你成长，使你进步。那些发生在你与父 母之间的故事，看似平淡却值得回味与珍藏。请以“The Story of My Progress”为题，写一 篇文章。要求：1.讲述一件发生在你与父母之间的事情，可适度发挥。2.词数80字左右，文中不得出现真实的姓名与学校名称。The Story of My P
31、rogress万能模板套用分析首先，引出话题，点明写作目的。其次，叙述具体的故事。最后，再次点明主题。满分范文The Story of My ProgressI cant make any progress without my parents* help.I remember clearly when I didnt pass an exam and made my parents disappointed, I felt so sorry and sad andeven did not want to go home.（句式多变原则，when引导时间状语从句，从句和主句中and分 别连接两
32、个谓语。）My parents found me at school and tried to comfort me.They told me that one time of failure did not determine my whole life and what I should do was to overcome every difficulty and try to get a higher score in the next exam. I was touched and made up my mind （短 语优先原则。）to study even harder.It i
33、s my parents that help me make great progress.你也可以这样表达I must say that my progress has connected with my parents closely.Hearing what they said,I decided to try my best and study even harder.Thanks to my parents,! have made great progress.1 .父母是我们的第一个老师，很多方面都离不开父母，但是父母又和自己有代沟，因此和父母友好相处，需要互相理解。以“和父母友好
34、相处”作为主题写一篇演讲稿。提示：(1) Why should you get along well with your parents?(2) What are your suggestions about how to do it?注意：1.发言稿中包含所有要点，适当发挥；.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；2 .词数80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Since we were born, it was our parents who brought us into this world and gave us life.【答案】例文：Since we were born, it w
35、as our parents who brought us into this world and gave us life. Everyone cant grow up without the careful care of their parents. Parents are our friends and our teachers. As we grow up, we find it difficult to communicate with our parents. Sometimes, we even argue with them. How can we get on well w
36、ith our parents?Here are some of my suggestions. First, we should understand and respect our parents. They are strict with us because they want us to have a bright future. Sometimes, we will get lost in our life and parents help us find the way. We are supposed to listen to them. Second, we should o
37、ften talk with them. If we share with them what makes us happy, they will sure feel happy for us. When we have problems in life, they will give us advice immediately. Even if we have different opinions, patient talk will make the communication effective.Finally, we should learn to communcate well wi
38、th our parents and get on well with them.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：按照导语部分引出话题，根据所给提示划分段落，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作 重点。写作步骤第一步，根据导语部分以及提示的第一个要点进行阐述，为后面具体的建议做法进行铺垫； 第二步，根据提示提出和父母友好相处的一些合理化建议，注意关联词的使用以及句型的变 换；第三步，书写结语，希望我们和父母沟通得当，友好相处。亮点词汇（Dgrow up 成长communicate with 交流argue with争吵get on well with
39、友好相处be strict with对严格要求get lost 迷失be supposed to理应做某事talk with和某人交谈share with和某人分享高分句型As we grow up, we find it difficult to communicate with our parents. （as 弓I 导时间状语从句）If we share with them what makes us happy, they will sure feel happy for us. （if 弓 I 导条件状语 从句）When we have problems in life, they
40、will give us advice immediately, （when 弓| 导时IKI状语从 句）Even if we have different opinions, patient talk will make the communication effective, （even if 引导让步状语从句）2.在北京2022冬奥会上，谷爱凌获得了两枚金牌，创造了新的历史，而她成为新一代 的年轻人的偶像。请你用英语写一篇短文简单介绍一下你所知道的谷爱凌的事情。要求：1.词数80左右。2 .可根据自己所知道的关于谷爱凌的事情自由适当发挥。3 .文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。开头和结尾已给
41、出，不计入词数。名字English name: Eileen Gu Chinese name: 谷爱凌有关她的出生Time: Sep. 3, 2003 Place: in America有关她的父母her father: American her mother: Chinese国籍choose to become a Chinese citizen in 2019职业freestyle skier成就win the gold medal in the 2022 Winter Olympics in Beijing喜欢她的原因 My favourite sportswomanEileen Gu【
42、答案】例文：My favourite sportswoman-Eileen GuMy favourite sportswoman is Eileen Gu. This is her English name and her Chinese name is Gu Ailing. She was bom in America on Sep. 3, 2003. Her father is American and her mother is Chinese. She is a beautiful girl. Eileen started skiing when she was only three
43、years old. In 2019, she chose to become a Chinese citizen. Now she is a Chinese freestyle skier. She won the gold medal in the 2022 Winter Olympics in Beijing. We are proud of her. I like her because she encouraged girls and teenagers to take part in skiing.【详解】1 .题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求根据表格中的内容提示以“My favo
44、urite sportswoman-Eileen Gu”为题介绍谷爱凌。必须要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文应该主要使用第三人称来叙述，表达自己的感受和观点时采用第一人称； 时态主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时；文章题目已给出，正文可分为三个部分：先介绍谷 爱凌的个人信息，再介绍她的成长经历和取得的成就，最后写喜欢她的原因；文中一定要包 含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的 准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。3.周末是我们生活中重要的一部分，如何使周末生活丰富多彩，更有意义请以“How to Spend a Mea
45、ningful Weekend”为题，写一篇英语短文。写作要点：（1）帮助父母做家务，如：洗碗、扫地等；（2）锻炼身体，如：跑步球类运动等；（3）发展特长或提升自己，如：阅读、绘画等；（4）适当放松自己，如：听音乐、看电影等。要求：1、不要出现你的班级，姓名，学校等信息。2、写出80个词左右。How to Spend a Meaningful Weekend【答案】例文How to Spend a Meaningful WeekendLife on weekends is an important part of our daily life. How to spend a meaningfu
46、l weekend? Here are some suggestions.First, we can help our parents do housework, such as washing dishes and sweeping the floor. On the weekend, doing housework can also let us experience the hard work. Second, we can exercise. For example, we can play ball games with our friends. Also, ifs a good w
47、ay to relax ourselves by running and swimming. Third, we can improve ourselves by painting or reading. Finally, do the things you like, such as listening to music or watching an enjoyable movie.Hope these suggestions can help you.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏写作要点中的信息，写
48、短文介绍如何使周末 生活丰富多彩。写作步骤第一步，点明主题，引出建议；第二步，具体给出使周末生活丰富多彩的建议；第三步，收尾。亮点词汇daily life日常生活such as/for example 例如on the weekend在周末高分句型Here are some suggestions. （Here be 句型）Also, ifs a good way to relax ourselves by running and swimming, （it 固定句式）在模拟检测4.生活当中总是充满意外，每个人都有各种各样的经历：倒霉的、开心的、尴尬的、 幸运的、难过的请你根据下面提示以“An unlucky da