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1、 reasons for reading English textbooksto learn Englishto open our mindsto make our life more colourfulthings youve learned in English textbooksWonderful things in the worldCultures around the worldyour favourite famous person or place in English textbooks,and the reasons亲爱的同学，初中三年的英语学习中，牛津初中英语教材给我们提
2、供了大量寓教于乐、生动活泼的阅读素材，伴随我们成长。请以“English Textbooks are Good Friends”为题写一篇短文参加学校的英语作文竞赛。(2019年盐城市英语中考题)注意事项：1.100词左右（文章的开头已给出不计入总词数）；表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯;2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3.文章必须包括表格中所提供的注要信息，并作适当发挥。English Textbooks are Good FriendsEnglish textbooks play an important part in our study of English._ Version 1
3、:English textbooks play an important part in our study of English.They can help us learn English well.It can also help open our minds and make our school life colorful.Weve learned many wonderful things in the world in our textbooks.We also learnt a lot about cultures around the world.My favorite pe
4、rson is Spud Webb.Ive learned a lot from him.评分标准：A.2018分 涵盖所有内容要点，结构清晰，内容连贯，运用多种句式和语法结构，基本无语法错误。B.1714分 涵盖大部分要点，内容基本连贯，语言少量错误。C.139分 只能运用简单句表达，语言有较多错误，但尚能答意。D.48分 能写出几个要点，但语言错误较多，影响了意思表达。E.03分 白卷或文不对题，错误百出，不知所云。评分：等级_理由_评分人_ Version 2:English textbooks play an important part in our study of English
5、.They are good materials for us to learn English well.They can not only open our minds but also make our school life colourful.Weve learned many wonderful things in the world in our textbooks,which help us get a better understanding of differentcultures around the world and grow into an excellent pe
6、rson.Some famous people weve learned affect us a lot.My favorite one is Audrey Hepburn,a great American successful actress,who devoted much of her time and money to charity.Ive learned a lot from her.评分：等级_理由_评分人_enough contentgoodorganizationfinelanguage1.Analyze the article2.Make an outline3.Use l
7、inking words4.Express in different waysThinking:What makes a good composition?reasons for reading English textbooksto learn Englishto open our mindsto make our life more colourfulthings youve learned in English textbooksWonderful things in the worldCultures around the worldyour favourite famous pers
8、on or place in English textbooks,and the reasons亲爱的同学，初中三年的英语学习中，牛津初中英语教材给我们提供了大量寓教于乐、生动活泼的阅读素材，伴随我们成长。请以“English Textbooks are Good Friends”为题写一篇短文参加学校的英语作文竞赛。(2018年盐城市英语中考题)注意事项：1.100词左右（文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数）；表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3.文章必须包括表格中所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。English Textbooks are Good Frien
9、dsEnglish textbooks play an important part in our study of English._1.Analyze the articleWhat can you learn from them?English Textbooks are Good Friendsreasons for reading English textbooksthings youve learned in English textbooksP1：P2：P3:P4：your favourite famous person or place in English textbooks
10、,and the reasons2.Make an outline 原因 so,because 时间 at first,then,later,in the end,at last 转折 on the other hand(另一方面),but,however 总结 in a word（总之）,in all（总之）递进 not onlybut(also)选择 or,and,bothand 举例 such as,and so on，for example 表示顺序:firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,finally,in the end 表示强调:also,b
11、esides,whats more(除此以外),in fact3.Use linking wordsDaniel is creative.He creates a programme.Daniel is so creative that he creates a programme.We should help each other.It is important to help each other.They can help us open our minds and make our school life colorful.They can not only open our mind
12、s but also make our school life colourful.Standard of gradingtravelling,listening to music,sleeping(2015年中考题)【审题指导】认真阅读题目所给的文字，提取信息：按照要求，从饮食、锻炼、阅读等方面讲述健康的生活方式。写作时：1.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校的名称。2.至少要不能遗漏要点，可以适当发挥。3.首句已给出，不计入总词数。词数100左右。【写作指导】这是一篇提纲式的实用性强的文章。写好本篇文章一方面注意所给的提纲内容不要遗漏要点。另一方面注意不要逐条翻译，要段落清楚。其次就是文章中要出现
13、一些过渡表达，如：besides等会使文章更顺畅。同时最重要是要写出“亮点”的短语和高级句式，如固定短语、定语从句和非谓语的使用。最后就是结束语。【注意事项】（1）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；（2）内容连贯，并进行合理拓展；（3）100词左右；（4）题目已写好，不计入总词数。“风在水上写诗，云在天空写诗，灯在书上写诗”，老师，在黑板上写诗。用热烈的青春写诗，用经验积淀的深厚，用岁月酿造的爱。如果，我们没有使学习变成劳作而成为一种欢乐；如果，我们让一个人明白自身的价值；如果，我们帮助一个孩子发现了自己的专长，而且把事情做得更好；如果，我们帮一个迷茫者驱走对不理解事物的恐惧，并说服他去透彻地理解它
14、们我们应该欣慰自己成为一个能够被信赖的人，一个值得被求助的人。“风在水上写诗，云在天空写诗，灯在书上写诗”，老师，在黑板上写诗。用热烈的青春写诗，用经验积淀的深厚，用岁月酿造的爱。如果，我们没有使学习变成劳作而成为一种欢乐；如果，我们让一个人明白自身的价值；如果，我们帮助一个孩子发现了自己的专长，而且把事情做得更好；如果，我们帮一个迷茫者驱走对不理解事物的恐惧，并说服他去透彻地理解它们我们应该欣慰自己成为一个能够被信赖的人，一个值得被求助的人。Living a healthy life.Its important for us to live a healthy life.(1 分）First
15、ly,we need to form good eating habits（2分）.Wed better eat more fruits and vegetables instead of junk food（2分）.Meanwhile,its necessary to play different sports（2分）because we can keep fit only if we exercise more（2分）.Then reading is a good way to relax（1分）,which also opens up our eyes（2分）because there
16、is always something new to learn in books（1分）.Besides,we should focus our attention on sleeping habbits which will possibly affect our mental lives.（4分）In a word,no matter what a small effeort on lifestyle we make,it does make us healthier and happier.（2分）语言表达的准确性、连贯性、得体性（1分）书面表达评分标准分析 conclusionIntroductionWriting articles is just like building houses.Learn to write through writing!Homework After class,the students who get less than 18 points go on finishing the writing material,check your own articles and make some changes if necessary,then hand them in tomorrow.