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1、43 日记 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）相关话题写作素材储备日记写作注意事项日记主要用来记录。天所经历的主要事情和过程，并表达自己的感受天文日记的写作，要注意以下三个方面:1.格式要正确。在写日记正文之前，要依次有日期、星期及当天的天气情况。2.表达要清楚、准确、连贯。判断的标准就是通过阅读你的日记，看能否用简洁明了的英语把一天之中发生的事情以及你的感受准确无误地表达出来。日记记录的事情通常是已经发生了的，故常用一般过去时。3.文体要口语化。因为日记是写给自己看的，其内容多是记述自己亲身经历和亲眼看到的事或抒发自己的感情等，所以用第一人称写， 把该写的东西写清楚即可。写
2、作样例与常用句式:日期，星期 天气事件背景与话题:1 enjoyed myself today because.我今天很尽兴， 因为.I took part in.我参加了.On my way to.,I saw.在路上， 我看见了.It is an unforgettable day today.今 天是难忘的一天。How time flies!时光 飞逝!记叙事件、描写经过，适当穿插体会:Early this morning今天早些时候. I set off for.启程.It took me an hour to get there.我到那儿花了一个小时。When I got to.当我
3、到.After that.在这之后. 1 spent 30 minutes visiting.我花了 30分钟参观.At the end of the day.在一 天结束时，结尾(感受与态度):Though I was tired, I felt.尽管很累， 我感到.I felt . than ever before我觉得比以往任何时.I am convinced that.我确信.I am determined to .我决.心.It is my duty to. .是我的职贵:必备词汇月份必备词汇月份January一月February二月March三月April四月May五月June六月
4、July七月August八月September九月October十月November十一月December十二月天气情况sunny晴朗的cool凉爽的cold寒冷的rainy下雨的windy大风的cloudy多云的snowy下雪的foggy多雾的描述心情joyful欢喜的excited激动的delighted高兴的pleased开心的satisfied满意的comfortable舒适的bright明亮的terrible糟糕的horrible恐惧的frightened害怕的必备句型开头部分(1) It was the first day of our winter holiday. 这是我们寒假
5、的第一天。(2) One of my father' s friends invited me to have a picnic today.今天，我爸爸的一个朋友邀请我去野餐。(3) On this weekend, my brother and I decided to help my mother with the housework.这个周末，我弟弟和我决定去帮助我妈妈做家务活。(4 ) Today, I realized that time was a very cruel thing.今天，我意识到时间是非常残忍的一样东西。(5) Today, our school had
6、 an opening ceremony in the school auditorium.今天，我们学校在学校礼堂举办了开学典礼。中间部分(1 ) It seemed to be an easy task for us, but later we had a hard time finishing it.它看起来像是一项容易的任务，但之后我们经历一段艰苦的时期才完成它(2) I spent the whole day sweeping the floor and washing the clothes.我花了一整天来扫地、洗衣服。(3 ) Those red buildings and th
7、ose green trees formed a beautiful picture.那些红色的建筑物和绿色的树木构成了一幅美丽的图画。(4) The night view was so beautiful that we all didn't want to go home.夜景是如此漂亮，我们都不想回家了结束部分(1) I will be more diligent in this semester.这个学期我准备更加勤奋地学习。(2) We will treasure it at the bottom of our hearts.我们会把它珍藏在我们的内心深处。(3) What
8、a nice day! 多么美好的.天!(4) I was so moved by his speech.我被他的演讲深深感动了。(5) I did enjoy that game.我非常喜欢那个游戏。相关话题写作示例指导写作示例（一）题目请根据下面的内容提示，写一篇不少于80词的英文日记，文章必须包括所有提示要点，可以适当扩充细节。内容提示: 1. 5月2日，星期天，你和几位同学去参观动物园。2. 你们坐了半小时的公共汽车才抵达那里。3.天气很好，游客很多。4.你们喜欢那里的大象。5. 碰到了几位外国朋友，聊了一会儿。6. 中午才回家。思路导航第1步:例文审题主体人称题目要求以日记形式描述“
9、我”和朋友去动物园的经过，故主体人称应为第一人称"I”。主体时态由于题目里要求描述的事情是已经发生了的，故主体时态用一般过去时。写作贴士题目里列出了6个要点，写作时要囊括所有要点，并进行适当扩充，以使文章逻辑连贯;注意文章词数要求，不得少于80词。第2步:列提纲(1)开篇点题，概述整体情况;(2)描述在动物园游玩的经过;(3)表达你的心情和感受。第3步:参考词句( 1 ) visit the zoo; classmate; by bus.(2) be full of; crowded; pavement; interesting; be interested in; talk wit
10、h; get home.(3) have a wonderful time.第4步:连句成篇May 2, Sunday FineToday I visited the z00 with several classmates. It took us half an hour to get there by bus.When we got there, the Zoo was already full of people. It was very crowded on the pavements. There were many animals in the zoo. They were very
11、 interesting, and we were especially interested in elephants. They were very big,so they moved clumsily. We also talked with some foreign tourists in English.When we got home, it was time for lunch.I really had a wonderful time today.参考译文5月2号，星期天 天气晴朗今天我和几个同学去了动物园。我们坐了半个小时的公交车才到达那里。当我们到达那里的时候，公园里已经有
12、很多人了。人行道上非常拥挤。动物园里有很多动物。它们非常有趣，我们尤其对大象感兴趣。它们很大，所以它们移动时很笨拙。我们也和一些外国人用英语交谈了一下。当我们回家时，已经是午饭时间了。我今天真的过得很愉快。写作示例（二）题目根据下列提示信息，用英语写一篇不少于80词的日记。提示：1.著名教授Mr. Robert今天（6月5日，星期五，晴）上午来你校作了一场报告；2.其报告内容包括：1).如何与同学友好相处；2).如何与家长、老师有效沟通；3).如何控制不良情绪。3.这场报告对你今后的学习和生活都很重要。要求：1.日记中必须包括提示中的所有要点；2.不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；3.必须用第一人称写
13、作；4.条理清晰，书写规范；5.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；6.日记的开头已经写好，不计入总次数。参考词汇：effectively有效地 professor教授范文及解析Friday, June 5th SundayThis morning, Mr. Robert, a famous professor, came to our school to give us a useful report.He asked us how we can get along well with our classmates. He told us that honesty is the best
14、policy. He also taught us how to communicate with our parents and teachers. When he talked about how we can control ourselves, he said, “Count to ten when you get angry.”I learned an important lesson from Mr. Robert. Im sure his report will help us study better and live a happier life in future. 审题本
15、文属于一篇日记，根据英文日记书写要求，通篇要用第一人称；为对经历的纪录，时态为一般过去去时。再根据提示，写清要点。首先写教授来做报告，包括：how to get along with classmates, how to communicate with parents and teachers efficiently和how to control ourselves；然后阐明自己的感受（an important lesson; help us study better, live a happier life）。写作思维(1).开篇点题：This morning, Mr. Robert, a
16、 famous professor, came to our school(2).报告内容：He told us He also asked us At last, he(3).阐明感受：I learned I think his report 写作亮点(1).重点短语a). give a report作报告b). get along well with和相处融洽c). communicate with与沟通/交流d). learn from从学到(2).高级句型a). He also taught us how to communicate with our parents and teachers.他还教我们如何跟父母和老师沟通。b). Im sure his report will help us study better and live a happier life in future.我相信他的报告对我们的未来更好地学习和生活有一定帮助。