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1、会计学1英语作文写作之英语作文写作之Description描写描写First some Reviewn nThink back to our previous lessons about writing essays.n nIn groups of 3-4 write down a step by step process to writing an essay including different writing suggestions.n nTry to do this without looking at your notes.n nTry to keep the talk in En
2、glish 第1页/共16页Writing Descriptions In the window was a fan.The blades of the rusty window fan clattered and whirled as they blew out a stream of warm,soggy air.第2页/共16页Descriptive Essayn nGoal is to share an experience with the reader appealing to their senses.n nHow does the last sentence about the
3、 fan appeal to the senses?第3页/共16页Descriptive Essayn nMake readers see,taste,hear,smell and feel.Give the reader a mental picture.第4页/共16页Pro essay-Intro Imagine a restaurant where your every whim is catered to,your every want satisfied,your every request granted without hesitation.The people on sta
4、ff live to please you.They hover over you anxiously as you sample your selection,waiting for your judgment.Your pleasure is their delight,your dissatisfaction their dismay.Lous isnt that kind of place.第5页/共16页Question-example 1Does the author have a thesis?Can you picture this perfect restaurant the
5、 author describes?第6页/共16页Pro essay-Body 1 At Lous Kosy Korner Koffee Shop,the mock abuse flows like a cup of spilled Folgers.Customers are yelled at,lectured,blamed,mocked,teased,and ignored.They pay for the privilege of pouring their own coffee and scrambling their own eggs.As in a fond but dysfun
6、ctional family,Lou displays his affection through criticism and insults,and his customers respond in kind.If Lous had a slogan,it might be,“If Im polite to you,ask yourself whats wrong.”第7页/共16页Question-body 1Does the paragraph support the thesis?Do you get a sense of how Lou treats his costumers?第8
7、页/共16页Pro essay-example 3 “Maaaaakeee someone happy Make-make-maaakeeee someone happy,”he croons as he lifts the steaming pot that has infused the room with the rich aroma of freshly brewed coffee.He carries it to the womans table,fills her cup,and drops two single-serving containers of half and hal
8、f nearby.Sight_ Sound_ Taste_ Smell_ Touch_第9页/共16页Assignment#4 Editsn nUnity-Ask the questionn nSupport-If you see a paragraph with three sentences.n nIntro/Conclusion-if you see a paragraph with one or two sentences.第10页/共16页Assignment-Descriptive Essay Write your own descriptive essay using a pla
9、ce familiar to you.a library study area a waiting room at a train station a small shop an internet bar a place in your hometown 第11页/共16页n nRemember:you need a thesis.ie:The train station waiting room was frightening.The exam room was tense.The study room was quiet.Assignment-Descriptive Essay第12页/共
10、16页n nOnce you have a thesis,make a list of as many details as you can to support your general impression.-Tired workers at the counter-Out-of-order neon sign-Silent middle-aged couple-Couldnt see anyone in the kitchen Assignment-Descriptive Essay第13页/共16页n nOrganize your list.-by physical order:mov
11、e from left to right,far to near ect.-Size:Begin with large objects and work down to smaller ones-special order:use an order appropriate to your subject.Assignment-Descriptive Essay第14页/共16页n nDevelop a topic/thesisn nList details supporting thesisn nOrganize details into some logical ordern nBegin 1st draft Assignment-Descriptive Essay第15页/共16页