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1、试题原题第二节读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。As I was driving to the airport last week the odometer（里程表）on my truck rotated to 100,000 kilometers. This led me to pause and think about selling the truck and buying a new one, but it also made me think about all the life Id lived in this truc
2、k, and how my bulldog had accompanied me in it, leaving me hesitating about selling it.When I returned to Canada after nine years overseas, what better way could I fit in with and immerse in rural culture than by buying a pickup?The day I rolled out of the dealer（经销商）and hit the first gravel road（碎石
3、马路）in my Toyota Tacoma was exciting, until I got very nervous as rocks hit my new purchase. But all that quickly evaporated when I received my first call through the trucks Bluetooth phone. It was the doctor, to say that my Dad was hospitalized in a remote location. I immediately followed the trucks
4、 GPS and got there quickly and safely. I was with Dad for his last two days. And so the first memories of my truck are images carved in my heart.As the kilometers of my life rolled on, Lyon, my bulldog who came back to Canada with me from France, claimed the back seat as an area belonging only to he
5、r. It didnt matter how short or long the trip was, she stared at me in the review mirror all the time. Most often, I would arrive at our destination and Lyon would stay in the back seat, bathed in the sun with the door open, knowing I would return. There was an overwhelming sense of comfort between
6、us in that truck.In the early days of truck ownership, I panicked at how dirty it became and any dent（凹痕）it put on. I soon realized, though, that it was part of the trucks character. Now I look at every dent and recall the story or adventure that put them there. I began to see it as character-buildi
7、ng, much like wrinkles appearing on my face. The truck was simply aging gracefully and began, like humans, to display its experience and wisdom.Paragraph 1: I dont think a vehicle is just for travelling from place to place. _Paragraph 2: But as I approached the car dealer, I stopped. _试题分析写作分析1.人物（角
8、色）：I：一名货车司机the truck：Toyota Tacoma，已行驶10万公里2.主题：人与自我（社会）本文以货车里程达到10万公里后是否要卖出为主题展开，讲述了作者跟货车的一段段历历在目的往事，特别是第一次通过汽车蓝牙接到爸爸病危的消息，两天后爸爸去世；每次出车都会带上狗Lyon，她都会坐在后排，享受一段段的车程以及对车的爱护（开始时，看到车身脏了或者有凹痕都会很心疼，后来也就慢慢接受了车跟人一样也会慢慢优雅地“变老”等等。3.续写情节安排： 第一段：I dont think a vehicle is just for travelling from place to place.（
9、与开头句衔接）多年的相处让我们成了形影不离的朋友（对前一句进行承接表达）回忆曾经的往事（快乐的时光，痛苦的时刻都可以提一下）（与下文开头句衔接）然而，因为旧了老了，所以不得不痛苦地告别第二段：But as I approached the car dealer, I stopped.（与开头句衔接）回忆再次袭来货车养活了一家人，Lyon让每次出行都很平安最终让它们（货车+Lyon）继续陪伴我的人生之路下水作文 I dont think a vehicle is just for travelling from place to place. So many years of getting a
10、long well with each other has made us dependable friends, sharing great moments as well as awful memories. Weve witnessed peoples happiness on their face after getting what they needed. Weve had tiring but splendid time after the long travelling, enjoying the wonderful scenery along the road and kin
11、d-hearted local people helping us. We wont forget how we got through the hardship when hit by the snowstorm. However, it might be the time for us to say goodbye though painful! (86 words) But as I approached the car dealer, I stopped. A really hard decision! Memories with them flooded in once again!
12、 It was the truck that gave me the possibility to support a huge family. It was Lyon that made me concentrate on each long-time travelling. But the fact was that they were aging and I had to accept it patiently. Just as usual, I turned and looked at the back seat. So peaceful was it that Lyon was ha
13、ving a sound sleep, which drew me back to the reality, letting them accompany me more kilometers of life. (88 words)参考范文 I dont think a vehicle is just for travelling from place to place. Ive always envisioned a vehicle as going from life event to event. My truck navigated me to more funerals, weddi
14、ngs, through snowstorms, and quickly home from Florida when the government called everyone back to Canada because of COVID-19. Unfortunately, this summer Lyon had a stroke. My knees weakened as I lifted Lyon out of our truck into the vets office wrapped in her blanket, which still remains on the bac
15、k seat to this day. This was a hard time. I didnt know if I could bear to live with the memories, so I drove it to the dealer. (98 words) But as I approached the car dealer, I stopped. The warm memories with Lyon came flooding back. As the kilometers continued to roll on, Lyon could no longer jump i
16、nto the back seat and had to be lifted in and out. Although it saddened me to see that the inevitable was coming, it warmed my heart to see her comfortable in the back seat. Thinking of these, my eyes blurred and tears started to flow. I took a deep breath. This truck possessedso much of the scar tissue of my life, so I did a U-turn. Once again, Im putting my heart back into the truck and letting it navigate to accumulate more kilometers and memories on the highway of life. (113 words)学科网（北京）股份有限公司