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1、专题18 读后续写：无灵主语升级（解析版）一、无灵主语inanimate subject无灵主语句，是指用无生命的事物做主语，用人或社会团体的行为或动作做谓语，因此这类句子常带有拟人化的修辞色彩。例如：Rome witnessedmany great historic events.(在罗马发生过许多重大历史事件)它的主语Rome 罗马，是无生命的事物，但谓语witness 目击，是人的动作。这种“无灵主语+有灵谓语”的句式，就是无灵主语句。它的亮点在哪？先举个栗子：普通句：She had a good idea.无灵主语句：A good idea came across her mind.同
2、样是表达“她有了个好主意”，比起普通句式中的常见句子，无灵主语句中这种“想法跑到脑中”的拟人化表达，肉眼可见更高级！二、 无灵主语的分类无灵主语的分类01 情感状态类名词02 主语（身体部位/音容笑）+有灵动词+其它03 时间地点景物类名词+ witness/spread across/fill 三、 无灵主语句式与练习句式1：（a burst/wave/feeling of+)表示情感状态的名词+有灵动词+sb1、表示 “某人感到.” 或“一阵/一种.向某人袭来”2、常用于该句式的有灵动词（短语）有：有灵动词（短语）中文意思有灵动词（短语）有灵动词（短语）seize/take hold of
3、 sb“抓住”“控制住”swallow sb“吞噬，淹没”defeat sb“击垮”tear. into pieces“把.撕碎”sweep over sb“袭来”choke ones words“噎住”（说不出话）3、例句(1) A sense of despair defeated me, and I fell sobbing on the doorstep.简爱绝望击垮了我，我倒在门阶上哭泣。(2) Mary felt a wave of anger sweep over her.秘密花园玛丽感到一阵愤怒。“情感状态的抽象名词+谓语动词”的描写还有：Feargrippedthe vill
4、age.(整个村庄笼罩在恐怖之中)Couragedesertedhim.(他失去了勇气)Angerchokedmy words.(我气的说不出话)A wave ofnervousnesswashed overhim.(一阵紧张的情绪涌上他的心头)A chill ofhorrorsuddenlyswept overhim.(他突然感到不寒而栗)Excitementseizedhim.(他好兴奋)练习一：请把下列表示情感的形容词改成名词，做作主语anxious 焦虑的n.guilty内疚的n.panic 惊慌的n.worried担忧的n.despaired 绝望的n.angry生气的n.hopel
5、ess绝望的n.depressed 沮丧的n.horrible恐惧的n.stressful 有压力的n.happy 高兴的n.sad 伤心的n.练习二：请把下面的句子和相应的有灵动词（谓语）匹配。( )1、一阵恐慌向她袭来。A wave of panic_ her.A.choked( )2、我抱着礼物，兴奋得什么话也说不出来。I held the present, and excitement_ my words.B.seized( )3、她的焦虑把她撕成了碎片。（她焦虑不安）Anxiety_her into pieces.C.swept over( )4、那些日子里，一种沮丧攫住了我。A d
6、epression_ me those days.D.tore句式2：主语（身体部位/音容笑）+有灵动词+其它1、这类名词有：face/eye/heart/fingers/tears/smile/voice2、有灵动词有：ones face brighten/light up(露出喜色), tears well up(涌出), spread across(浮现)3、例句:（1） My fingers shook with anger, so that I could not go on sewing.简爱（2） I was relieved when a bright, sweet voice
7、 interrupted us.简爱“身体部位/音容类名词+谓语动词”的描写还有：Smilecrumpledhis face.(他笑得一脸皱纹)Her facebrightenedwhen I gave her the present.(我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩)His wordssentme a quiver through my body.(他的话让我全身不寒而栗)Laughterlingered aroundthe room.(笑声在房间里萦绕)Tearswelled upin Annis eyes.(泪水从安妮的眼中涌出)这些句子简直完胜xx is crying/ laugh
8、ing/ smiling！快把它们记下来，用在续写里头去夺分！练习：根据汉语和提示用无灵主语或有灵动词填空，并背诵。1、 他一看到熟悉的字迹，便热泪盈眶。 The moment he saw the familiar handwriting, _ (主语) _ _(有灵动词） in his eyes.2、 当老人多年后回到家乡时，激动得热泪盈眶。(激动的泪水) When the old man returned to his hometown after so many years, tears of _ (主语)_ _(有灵动词） in his eyes.3、 他注视着那个不寻常地沉默的男孩
9、，一脸惊讶。He stared at the unusually silent boy and a look of surprise_ _ his face.4、 我给她礼物时，她的脸上露出了喜色。 _ _ (主语)_ _(有灵主语) when I gave her the present.句式3：表时间和地点的名词+（有灵动词)witness/ fill/ spread through 等等“时间/地点/场景类名词+谓语动词”的描写有：A hushfell uponthe classroom. (教室一片寂静)Beijinghas witnessedgreat changes in rece
10、nt years.(北京见证了最近几年的的巨大变化)Duskfoundthe child crying in the street.(黄昏时，孩子在街上哭)That chilly afternoonwitnessedhim trudging in the snow.(那个寒冷的下午，他在雪地里跋涉)Night has fallen overthe country.(夜幕已经笼罩着乡间)上面这些描写，都是将时间和地点拟人化，从它们的视角“看到”事件发生，不用there be 也不用it is xx，完美展现你续写的高水准！例句与仿写：例句1：上海发生了许多重大的历史事件。 Shanghai wi
11、tnessed many great historical events.仿写：下一刻见证了他们做早餐的努力，最终他们做到了。_例句2：(2021年全国I卷)早餐的香味弥漫在厨房的空气中。The smell of breakfast filled the air in the kitchen.仿写：每个人都欣喜若狂，院子里洋溢着喜悦。_翻译巩固：1. 突然之间，双胞胎的脸亮了起来，他们的头坚定地点着。_2. 他站在门边，脸上露出喜色。_3. 一见到他的老朋友，一种幸福的感觉席卷了他。(sweep over)_4. (2022年苏州八校联考)当她看到草莓的时候，她的眼睛闪烁着喜悦和甜蜜。(twi
12、nkle)_5. (2022年苏州八校联考)当她看到草莓的时候,幸福的泪水从她脸颊留下。_6. (2022年苏州八校联考)当她看到草莓的时候，一种幸福和快乐的感觉席卷了她。_7. 当她打开盒子时，她的手激动得发抖。_8. (2021年全国I卷）妈妈试图掩饰自己的情绪，但是那闪闪发光的眼泪却出卖了她。（sth fail sb)_9. 比赛前，她突然失去了信心。（sth fail sb)_10. 她想坚持，但是鼓不起勇气。（sth fail sb)_11. 我一打开盒子，就惊讶地睁大了眼睛。_12. 简脸色苍白，一阵恐惧袭上心头。(seize/take hold of/ sweep over)_1
13、3. 她绝望得心都要被撕碎了。_答案:句式1：（a burst/wave/feeling of+)表示情感状态的名词+有灵动词+sb练习一：请把下列表示情感的形容词改成名词，做作主语anxious 焦虑的n.anxietyguilty内疚的n.guiltpanic 惊慌的n.panicworried担忧的n.worrydespair 绝望的n.despairangry生气的n.angerhopeless绝望的n.hopelessnessdepress 沮丧的n.depressionhorrible恐惧的n.horrorstressful 有压力的n.stresshappy 高兴的n.happi
14、nesssad 伤心的n.sadness练习二：请把下面的句子和相应的有灵动词（谓语）匹配。CADB句式2：主语（身体部位/音容笑）+有灵动词+其它练习：根据汉语和提示用无灵主语或有灵动词天空，并背诵。1、 他一看到熟悉的字迹，便热泪盈眶。 The moment he saw the familiar handwriting, _tears_ (主语) _welled _ _up_(有灵动词） in his eyes.2、 当老人多年后回到家乡时，激动得热泪盈眶。(激动的泪水) When the old man returned to his hometown after so many ye
15、ars, tears of _excitement_ (主语) _welled _ _up_(有灵动词） in his eyes.3、 He stared at the unusually silent boy and a look of surprise_swept_ _over_ his face.4、 我给她礼物时，她的脸上露出了喜色。 Her_ _face_ (主语)_lit_ _up_(有灵主语) when I gave her the present.句式3：表时间和地点的名词+（有灵动词)witness/ fill/ spread through 等等仿写1：The next m
16、oment witnessed their efforts to make the breakfast and they eventually made it.仿写2：)Everyone were overjoyed, delight filled the yard.翻译巩固（每日三题）1. (2021年全国I卷)All of a sudden, the twins face lit up with their head nodding firmly.2. He stood by the door and his face brightened/ lit up with delight/joy
17、.3. At the sight of his old friend, a wave of happiness swept over him.4. (2022年苏州八校联考)When she saw the strawberries, her eyes twinkled /sparkled with joy and sweetness.5. (2022年苏州八校联考)When she saw the strawberries, tears of happiness rolled down/ slid down/ screamed down her cheeks.6. (2022年苏州八校联考)
18、When she saw the strawberries, a wave of happiness and joy swept over her.7. Her hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the box. 8. Mom tried to conceal her emotion, but the glittering tears failed her.9. Before the contest, her confidence suddenly failed her.10. She wanted to hold out,
19、but her courage failed her.11. The moment I opened the box, my eyes widened in great surprise.12. Jane turned pale and a wave of horror seized /took hold of/ swept over her.模拟演练01读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Bobby was gettingcoldsitting out in his backyard in the snow. Bobby didnt wear boots; o
20、r rather, he didnt own any. The thin sneakers he wore had a few holes in them and they had a poor job of keeping out the cold. Bobby hand been in his backyard for about an hour already. Try as he might, he could not come up with an idea for his mothers Christmasgift. This is useless, even if I do ha
21、ve anidea, I dont have money for a gift. Wipingtearsfrom his eyes, Bobby started walking down to the street where the shops were. It wasnt easy being six without a father, particularly when he needed a man to talk to. Bobby walked from shop to shop, looking into each decorated window. Everything see
22、med so beautiful and so out of reach. It was starting to get dark and Bobby reluctantly turned to walk home when his eyes caught the gimmer(微光) of the setting suns ray reflecting on something on the roadside. He reached down and discovered a shinnydime(十分钱硬币). Never before had anyone felt sowealthya
23、s Bobby felt at that moment. As he held his newly-found treasure, warmth spread throughout his entire body and he walked into the first store. His excitement quickly turned cold when salesperson after salesperson told him that he could not buy anything with only a dime. He saw a flower shop and went
24、 inside it towaitin line. When theshop ownerasked if he could help him. Bobby presented the dime and asked if he could buy one flower for his mother as a Christmas gift. The shop owner looked at Bobby and his dime offering. Then he puthis hand on Bobbys shoulder, saying You just wait here and Ill se
25、e what I can do for you. As Bobby waited, he looked at the beautifulflowersand even though he was a boy, he could see why mothers and girls loved flowers.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段开头已经给出；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the shop owner came out.
26、_Paragraph 2: With the bunch of roses in his hands, Bobby walked out of the door and broke into a run._翻译小练习：1. 他手里拿着一打玫瑰，这使鲍比很吃惊。_2. 当店主轻轻地把玫瑰递给他时，鲍比犹豫了一下，愣住了一下，问道：“这么多花，一毛钱就够了吗？”_3. 店主眨着眼皮，朝他咧嘴一笑：“当然！”鲍比一听到这个回答，脸上就闪过一阵狂喜。_4. “谢谢你！圣诞快乐！”鲍比接过玫瑰回答说。_5. 他紧紧地抓住手中的玫瑰，生怕那是幻觉。_6. 考虑到天气变化无常，店主提议给他一把雨伞，鲍比礼貌
27、地拒绝了。_7. 他被大雪淋湿了，只是尽可能快地飞奔，因为他不能再等了。_8. 不久之后，在他的视线里出现了他的家。_9. 他气喘吁吁地站在门前，深深地吸了一口气，走了进去。_10. 他一进去就大叫：“妈妈！”但是在房子周围只有他的声音在回响。_11. 一阵阵忧虑使他不知所措。只是这时，他耳边传来熟悉的脚步声。_12. 鲍比转过身来，看见他妈妈提着一双他很久以来就想要的靴子。_13. 他把礼物送给她，低声说：“妈妈，圣诞快乐！”_14. “谢谢，亲爱的！”她紧紧地拥抱着他，在他的脸上轻轻地吻了一下，幸福的泪水顺着脸颊汩汩流淌。_参考答案：1. 他手里拿着一打玫瑰，这使鲍比很吃惊。In his
28、hands was a dozen of roses, which astonished Bobby a lot.2. 当店主轻轻地把玫瑰递给他时，鲍比犹豫了一下，愣住了一下，问道：“这么多花，一毛钱就够了吗？”Whenthe shop ownerhanded the roses to him softly, Bobby stunned for an instant, with hesitation, and queried, Could only adimecover the costs of so manyflowers?3. 店主眨着眼皮，朝他咧嘴一笑：“当然！”鲍比一听到这个回答，脸上
29、就闪过一阵狂喜。With his eyelids flickering swiftly, the shop owner grinned at him, Of course! Scarcely had Bobby heard this answer when a flood of ecstasy flashed across his face.4. “谢谢你！圣诞快乐！”鲍比接过玫瑰回答说。Thank you! Merry Christmas! replied Bobby, taking over the roses.5. 他紧紧地抓住手中的玫瑰，生怕那是幻觉。He seized the ros
30、es in hands firmly, for fear that it could be an illusion.6. 考虑到天气变化无常，店主提议给他一把雨伞，鲍比礼貌地拒绝了。Considering the awful and erratic weather, the shop owner offered to provide him an umbrella, while Bobby abnegated it politely.7. 他被大雪淋湿了，只是尽可能快地飞奔，因为他不能再等了。Drentched by the snow, he just darted as rapidly as
31、 possible, for he couldnt wait anymore.8. 不久之后，在他的视线里出现了他的家。Soon after, in his vision emerged his home.9. 他气喘吁吁地站在门前，深深地吸了一口气，走了进去。Standing ahead of the door in gasp, he took a deep breath and stepped in.10. 他一进去就大叫：“妈妈！”但是在房子周围只有他的声音在回响。The instant he was in he exclaimed, Mom!, but around the house
32、 echoed only his voice.11. 一阵阵忧虑使他不知所措。只是这时，他耳边传来熟悉的脚步声。Gripped by a gust of worry, he was quite at a loss. Just at this moment, in his ears came the familiar clumps.12. 鲍比转过身来，看见他妈妈提着一双他很久以来就想要的靴子。Turnning around, Bobby saw his mother carrying with a pair of boots which he had desired for since lon
33、g.13. 他把礼物送给她，低声说：“妈妈，圣诞快乐！”He presented thegiftto her and whispered Mom, merry Christmas!14. “谢谢，亲爱的！”她紧紧地拥抱着他，在他的脸上轻轻地吻了一下，幸福的泪水顺着脸颊汩汩流淌。Thanks, my dear!, she embraced him tightly and planted a tender kiss on his face, tearsof happiness gurgling down her cheeks.参考范文：A few minutes later, the shop o
34、wner came out. In his hands was a dozen of roses, which astonished Bobby a lot. Whenthe shop ownerhanded the roses to him softly, Bobby stunned for an instant, with hesitation, and queried, Could only adimecover the costs of so manyflowers? With his eyelids flickering swiftly, the shop owner grinned
35、 at him, Of course! Scarcely had Bobby heard this answer when a flood of ecstasy flashed across his face. Thank you! Merry Christmas! replied Bobby, taking over the roses. He seized the roses in hands firmly, for fear that it could be an illusion. Considering the awful and erratic weather, the shop
36、owner offered to provide him an umbrella, while Bobby abnegated it politely.With the bunch of roses in his hands, Bobby walked out of the door and then broke into a run. Drentched by the snow, he just darted as rapidly as possible, for he couldnt wait anymore. Soon after, in his vision emerged his h
37、ome. Standing ahead of the door in gasp, he took a deep breath and stepped in. The instant he was in he exclaimed, Mom!, but around the house echoed only his voice. Gripped by a gust of worry, he was quite at a loss. Just at this moment, in his ears came the familiar clumps. Turnning around, Bobby saw his mother carrying with a pair of boots which he had desired for since long. He presented thegiftto her and whispered Mom, merry Christmas! Thanks, my dear!, she embraced him tightly and planted a tender kiss on his face, tearsof happiness gurgling down her cheeks.学科网（北京）股份有限公司