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1、Those Who Tell Stories Rule The World 新高考英语读后续写写作备考专题Extended Narrative Writing 一 Structure 续写结构及思路 Plotting 情节+情绪主线 (视频轨+音频轨道)第1与2段: Conflict冲突 Solution1(第1段) Solution2(第2段)Succeeded成功解决Express Gratitude/Refection 达感谢/感悟Happy Ending结尾升华 1. Conflict冲突Solutions解决方案（冲突=结局）Happy Ending正能量结局2. Solutions
2、(解决方案) 1(Failed失败) & Solutions(解决方案) 2 (Succeeded成功)二 Conflicts冲突分类1. 与自己（也可以是别人的）：loneliness孤独、low self-esteem自卑、failure失败、伤心sadness、poverty贫困、disability残疾 . 2. 与他人：quarrel争吵、hurt伤害、misunderstanding误解、betrayal背叛 .3. 与环境：lost迷路了、trapped困住了、 in danger遇险了(遇到各种动物) .三 Solution1解决方案1 (注定失败)本能反应 (Without
3、thinking twice.) “啊.拿命来！吃俺老孙一棒.” (通常情况下都是打不死的，需搬救兵去) 如遇到狼了：“啊.狼来了！快跑.” (通常情况下都是跑不过狼的，需想其他办法)四 Solution2解决方案2(一定成功)1. 靠自己：courage勇气、effort努力、calmness冷静、have an inspiration灵机一动 .2. 靠别人：help帮助、encouragement鼓励、kindness善良、love爱.3. 靠环境：sun太阳、stars星星、rain雨. (自然环境)/ 工具类、科技类.(社会环境)五Emotions情绪主线(音频轨) 音频轨 ：情节对
4、应情绪(两条线一一对应) 失败：诅丧、难过、愤怒.成功：兴奋、解脱、感动、自豪.情绪：动作、表情等 (总结分类：好情绪与坏情绪)Ending结尾 (视频轨+音频轨道) 第一段的末尾承上启下，提出solution2(解决方案2)，终结矛盾。/ 表达感谢！在第二段最后要有升华，夹叙夹议，是时候散发一波正能量了+感悟+传递！六结尾：1.感叹：What a/an形容词1 and形容词2 experience!狼口脱险 *，真是一次又刺激又有趣/难忘的经历啊!2.回忆：After all these years, the 形容词+scenes(场景) are still vivid in my mind
5、. 历历在目3.感悟：0nly then did I realize that.注意：读后续写之不讲武德，放飞自我！阅读三打白骨精这个故事，然后根据原文的故事内容，续写这个故事，要求是150个字。而你却这样写道：“孙悟空打死了白骨精，唐三藏欣慰地看着徒弟额头流下的汗水，赞扬了他的忠诚和武艺高强。”真题实战对于有划线词的读后续写来说，其实相对是比较简单的，因为通过划线词你可以明确自己文章的大致方向，从而减少在内容上纠结的时间，大体可以分为五个步骤。 一. 根据已给提示词，写出文章主旨和发展(故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置变化、人物情感)全在出卷人的提示词中。已给提示词汇:dad，Uncle
6、Paul，farm house，river，feed，sheep，late，track, get lost, sight这一步最重要的就是你要读懂文章的主旨，出现人物之间的人物关系，故事内容的时间线及逻辑发展，有了这些，你就有了编故事的基础。二符合情节有起伏，有曲折 (创新力和想象力)1. 情节都是动词，情感都是形容词，对动词和形容词本身文中含义取反。feed no foodDont be late be latekeep to the track tracks are goneDont get lost be lostsightnothing is in sight.(see nothing
7、)2. 剩下名词归类备用。(Dad, uncle, sheep ; farm house, river)曲折是读后续写体现创新力和想象力最重要的一步，有反转的电影情节才吸引人，同样的，有曲折的读后续写才更容易拿高分。3. 找开头语新信息;已给开头语:Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse._.Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark._.仔细读开头语！仔细读开头语！仔细读开头语！重要的事情说_遍，尤其是开头
8、语中包含的新信息能很好地指引你续写文章的方向，同时也能让你知道应该怎么设置内容的转折。两段开头句都有提到新信息。首段结束句要呼应(链接)第二段首句。一切都是最好的安排:曲折其实是磨练，冥冥中，自有安排。开头句1： a/an+名词(新信息)。 The+名词(顶针) 首次尝试 (尝试未果) .开头句2： a/an+名词(新信息) 。The+名词(顶针) (是来雪上加霜的) 出现转机 结尾升华! .4. 开始合理想象第一段: rabbit chase be lost nothing is in sight cannot go back to farm house nervous (负面情绪)第二段:
9、 no idea / dark tracks are gone no food breakdown(负面情绪) find river made it Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it. After a while, we were completely lost in the forest. There was nothing left in our sight but the trees. We
10、 may not be able to make it back to the farm house in time for supper. I thought to myself. After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt nervous and tired.We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. The darkness stuck us in the forest. Since we didnt feed ourselves for t
11、he whole afternoon,the hunger and tiredness pushed us to the edge of breaking down.Whats worse, an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain. But my father encouraged me, Dont worry, my son. I remember there
12、is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home.” Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it. Needless to say, we ate a late dinner. I am proud of overcoming the challenges that confronted me.【技能篇】读后续写十大核心句式: 1. 非限制性定语从句: S主+V谓, which made/forced/allowed s
13、b to do/ 情绪（形容词） Jane had to stay alone in the forest for another cold night, which made her frightened and regretted.2. 主语从句：1：It is +adj for sb that 2：What I could do/say/ is to 3. What (counts/matters/impress me)most is that .= it is important that What we could do was to go back along the previo
14、us track.3. 状语从句: 1:表原因：since/as/for, 2：表结果：in order that 3：表时间：just as/ when/ while/ the moment Just as we were at the point of desperation, we heard a faint voice from the distance.4. 非谓语动词: 1: Doing , S主+V谓. 2: S主+V谓, doing . Hearing his brothers words, she rushed back to the shop to find the boy
15、 but time never waits for anyone.5. 形容词做状语 Puzzled and exhausted, we keep searching the way home at the point of desperation.6. 介词短语：To ones great+(surprise/delight.)情感名词. 7. with复合结构：with+情感名词 We cried to Uncle Paul with excitement.8. 感叹句: 1.What +adj. +n. 2. How + adj +the + n. What an amazing experience!9. 倒装句：1.Only+状语（从句）+助动词. 2. Not only+助动词+主., but also. Only in this way can we finish the job.10. 强调句：it is +强调的部分that. It was Uncle Pauls arrival in time that saved us from danger.11. 虚拟语气：Without,I would.;if引导的虚拟条件句 Without your help, I wouldnt have succeeded.6学科网（北京）股份有限公司