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1、读后续写练习写作指导讲义读后续写（浙江省Z20名校联盟2023届高三第二次联考英语试题） 试题原题第二节（满分25分）第二节：续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Cathy, my mom, whose pet phrase （ 口 头禅）was “Never give up, was our familys beacon of positivity. It was not a title she earned without concerted （致的）effort, however. When she was only thirty years o
2、ld, her husband was killed in a car accident and she was left to raise me alone.My mom could have lived under a black cloud. Instead, she challenged herself to find joy every day. Leading by example, Mom taught me just how much one could accomplish with a positive attitude. She has taken the same ap
3、proach in her relationship with her grandchildren Max and Charley.One hot summer afternoon, my mom and her two grandsons, having spent two hours building sandcastles and collecting sea shells on the beach, sank into their beach chairs to have a rest. How they longed for delicious ice cream to cool t
4、hemselves, especially the two kids!Suddenly, my mom heard the familiar loud clang （叮当声）of the ice-cream man bell from her beach chair. She turned quickly and saw him briefly, spotting his distinctive green shirt and catching the gleam of his waving bell before he turned and disappeared over the dune
5、s （沙丘）.Happily, the ice-cream mans visit was a daily occurrence at the beach, although the lag time between the sound of his bell and the departure of his truck was not long. One must be quick enough to catch him to buy the ice cream.Max and Charley were in great disappointment when they didn/t catc
6、hhim in time that day because they really wanted to have a taste of those cool ice-creams. That was until my moms eyes sparkled and she said to the kids, “Never give up!” She explained to the kids that the truck might be gone, but they should be able to catch him up at its next stop. And the kids ag
7、reed immediately.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:So Max and Charley, accompanied by my mom, began their mission.Paragraph 2:Max and Charley, encouraged by my mom, walked another three blocks.试题分析写作分析L人物：my mom Max and Charley: my two kids2 .主题：人与社会，人与自我.续写情节安排： 第一段： So Max and Charl
8、ey, accompanied by my mom, began theirmission.（与开头句衔接）Max和Charley的表现怎样？一直没追到，他们的表现又将会是怎样？（与下文开头句衔接）作者的妈妈怎么鼓励他们？第二段： Max and Charley, encouraged by my mom, walked another three blocks.（与开头句衔接）在作者的妈妈的鼓励下，两个孩子一直追赶，直 到好运来临。坚持的结果得到了怎样的奖赏？（主题升华）妈妈的口头禅激励着一家人。下水作文So Max and Charley, accompanied by my mom, b
9、egan their mission. So anxious were they to get the delicious ice-cream that they flew like arrows to chase after the man, leaving my mom far behind. The flaming sun seemed to have no idea to weaken their passion. The truck wound around the neighborhoods with my two kids hot on their heels. What mad
10、e them frustrated was that the truck was nowhere to find, only the bells heard. Following the truck along three blocks brought them to the edge of giving up. Then came my moms pet phrase, saying sweet taste came from persistence. （90 words）Max and Charley, encouraged by my mom, walked another three
11、blocks. It was just the Never give up that inspired them to keep the track of the ice-cream. Good luck always came unexpectedly. Just around the corner suddenly came the bell of the truck. Overjoyed, they gathered their last strength and dashed forward. When knowing the fact, the ice-cream man not o
12、nly charged them no money but present each one more. They eventually tasted the pleasure of success and better understand the meaning of persistence. And Moms pet phrase Never give up inspired us to overcome difficulties in our later Iife. (90 words)参考范文 Para. 1： So Max and Charley, accompanied by m
13、y mom, began their mission.Driven by the prospect of having delicious ice-cream, the two kids scampered ahead so fast that my mom could hardly follow. Not knowing which direction the truck had taken, they had to inquire passers-by on the way. Having walked three blocks, my kids felt their tiny legs
14、as heavy as lead and their faith in the mission began to waver. We should give up. They wondered out loud, “We have been walking pretty far and still cant see the truck yet. Never give up! The truck should be around here， my mom said determinedly. So, they walked on, chanting Moms pet phrase. ( 102
15、words)Para. 2：Max and Charley, encouraged by my mom, walked another three blocks. Suddenly, my mom seemed to hear the familiar clang of the bell. Listen, the ice-mans bell! shouted my mom excitedly. They immediately rushed to where the sound came from. Sure enough, the moment they turned around the
16、corner, the ice-cream mans truck came into view. They quickly caught up and bought the ice-creams. Licking the ice-cream cones, the two kids finally tasted the joy of success. At that moment, my mom had done for my kids what she had done for me countless times. Simple though it was, that phrase has become our battle cry for the challenges we face. (100 words)