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1、高考英语写作训练2021年潍坊二模续写I am a proud mother of three children, my last little one being delivered in the middle of this pandemic. She was born in August and her name is Aida.Shortly after having Aida, my mother-in-law Ann showed me something she learned from her friend5s“Can I give this scarf to Jane? Sh
2、e really needs it. he murmured.孩子言语I nodded to him and told him I was very proud to have a boy like him who truly cared for others. 我的回应 Getting my approval, David excitedly rushed out to find Jane, while I picked up the stitches and yarn again.孩子举动+我的举动“Three scarves to go, I thought, feeling a war
3、mthinside.我的心、理活动我David织围巾期待给他戴围巾感谢鼓励他说出来有心事赞同肯定要送别人继续织围巾跑出去送骄傲、温暖全文呈现I wrapped the scarf around Davids neck. His eyes widened with joy and his face lit up like a Christmas tree. uThank you, Mom，he gave me a big hug and kissed me on the cheek, This is the best Christmas gift l5ve ever received!,J Th
4、en he couldnt wait to go outside and show off his new scarf. I was relieved and satisfied, not just because I finished my project, but because I was truly able to bring happiness to the children in such depressing times.Later that day David came back saying Jane also deserved a scarf. He seemed to b
5、ear something in mind but was hesitated to speak out, so I encouraged him to share his thought with me. Can I give this scarf to Jane? She really needs it. he murmured. I nodded to him and told him I was very proud to have a boy like him who truly cared for others. Getting my approval, David excited
6、ly rushed out to find Jane, while I picked up the stitches and yarn again. uThree scarves to go, I thought, feeling a warmth inside.mother in an art class she attended weekly. She had showed me how to knit （编织）a scarf. She showed me stitches （针）and gave me her half done project.I spent a lot of time
7、 breastfeeding my sweet little girl, so I had some extra time to do something with my hands throughout the day. I enjoyed making the scarf so I purchased tons of yarn （线）since it was winter. I wanted to make scarves for my three children asChristmas gifts.背景There was a new family that moved in down
8、the street. The only daughter of the family was Jane, a shy girl, aged 14, the same age of my oldest son David. It seemed that she came from a financially disadvantaged family, for she always wore old clothes. Worse still, in such cold days, she had no more clothes to wear and trembled with cold.问题D
9、ue to the pandemic, society was thrown into crisis mode. Schools were closed, food supplies and deliveries were suspended and children were stuck at home. In such discouraging times, however, they became good companions, talking and playing at home or around the houses. 友谊It was dreadfully cold this
10、 winter. Every time David came back from outside, with red face, he always cried, uMum, it is freezing outside!” Then, he came over to see whether I finished the scarf. I could tell how impatient he was to wear my scarf sooner! I had to speed the project to satisfy his expectation. But David comfort
11、ed me saying he could wait a few days. What a kind and considerate boy he was! Then my great art project finally was accomplished on the morning ahead of Christmas.我：三个孩子的母亲 做围巾proudJane:邻居家的女儿穷冷shyDavid:我的大儿子 Jane 的朋友 kind / considerate我DavidJaneI wrapped the scarf around David5s neck.His eyes wide
12、ned with joy and his face lit up like a Christmas tree.表情眼神一抽象“Thank you, Mom”, he gave me a big hug and kissed me on the cheek, “This is the best Christmas gift Tve ever received!J,言语 动作一具体Then he couldnt wait to go outside and show off his new scarf.情节发展I was relieved and satisfied, not just becau
13、se I finished my project, but because I was truly able to bring happiness to the children in such depressing times.心理活动+原因 由表及里孩子表现一说话、表情、眼神、肢体动作（禁止写心 理活动）母亲心理一心理活动（写作方法） 孩子举动一出去Later that day David came back saying Jane also deserved a scarf.He seemed to bear somethinq in mind but was hesitated to speak out so I encouraged him to share his thought with me.情节发展