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1、高考英语写作训练2021年潍坊二模续写I am a proud mother of three children, my last little one being delivered in the middle of this pandemic. She was born in August and her name is Aida.Shortly after having Aida, my mother-in-law Ann showed me something she learned from her friends mother in an art class she attende
2、d weekly. She had showed me how to knit (编织) a scarf. She showed me stitches (针) and gave me her half done project.I spent a lot of time breastfeeding my sweet little girl, so I had some extra time to do something with my hands throughout the day. I enjoyed making the scarf so I purchased tons of ya
3、rn (线) since it was winter. I wanted to make scarves for my three children as Christmas gifts. 背景There was a new family that moved in down the street. The only daughter of the family was Jane, a shy girl, aged 14, the same age of my oldest son David. It seemed that she came from a financially disadv
4、antaged family, for she always wore old clothes. Worse still, in such cold days, she had no more clothes to wear and trembled with cold. 问题Due to the pandemic, society was thrown into crisis mode. Schools were closed, food supplies and deliveries were suspended and children were stuck at home. In su
5、ch discouraging times, however, they became good companions, talking and playing at home or around the houses. 友谊It was dreadfully cold this winter. Every time David came back from outside, with red face, he always cried, “Mum, it is freezing outside!” Then, he came over to see whether I finished th
6、e scarf. I could tell how impatient he was to wear my scarf sooner! I had to speed the project to satisfy his expectation. But David comforted me saying he could wait a few days. What a kind and considerate boy he was! Then my great art project finally was accomplished on the morning ahead of Christ
7、mas.我:三个孩子的母亲 做围巾 proud Jane:邻居家的女儿 穷 冷 shyDavid:我的大儿子 Jane的朋友 kind / considerateAnn:我的岳母 教我织围巾Aida:我的小女儿 刚出生我DavidJaneI wrapped the scarf around Davids neck. His eyes widened with joy and his face lit up like a Christmas tree. 表情 眼神 抽象“Thank you, Mom”, he gave me a big hug and kissed me on the chee
8、k, “This is the best Christmas gift Ive ever received!” 言语 动作 具体Then he couldnt wait to go outside and show off his new scarf. 情节发展I was relieved and satisfied, not just because I finished my project, but because I was truly able to bring happiness to the children in such depressing times. 心理活动+原因 由
9、表及里孩子表现 说话、表情、眼神、肢体动作(禁止写心理活动)母亲心理 心理活动(写作方法)孩子举动 出去Later that day David came back saying Jane also deserved a scarf. He seemed to bear something in mind but was hesitated to speak out, so I encouraged him to share his thought with me. 情节发展“Can I give this scarf to Jane? She really needs it.” he mur
10、mured. 孩子言语I nodded to him and told him I was very proud to have a boy like him who truly cared for others. 我的回应Getting my approval, David excitedly rushed out to find Jane, while I picked up the stitches and yarn again. 孩子举动+我的举动“Three scarves to go,” I thought, feeling a warmth inside. 我的心理活动我Davi
11、d织围巾期待给他戴围巾感谢鼓励他说出来有心事赞同肯定要送别人继续织围巾跑出去送骄傲、温暖全文呈现I wrapped the scarf around Davids neck. His eyes widened with joy and his face lit up like a Christmas tree. “Thank you, Mom”, he gave me a big hug and kissed me on the cheek, “This is the best Christmas gift Ive ever received!” Then he couldnt wait to
12、 go outside and show off his new scarf. I was relieved and satisfied, not just because I finished my project, but because I was truly able to bring happiness to the children in such depressing times. Later that day David came back saying Jane also deserved a scarf. He seemed to bear something in min
13、d but was hesitated to speak out, so I encouraged him to share his thought with me. “Can I give this scarf to Jane? She really needs it.” he murmured. I nodded to him and told him I was very proud to have a boy like him who truly cared for others. Getting my approval, David excitedly rushed out to find Jane, while I picked up the stitches and yarn again. “Three scarves to go,” I thought, feeling a warmth inside.学科网(北京)股份有限公司