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1、LOGOGroup 6 Numbers:何珊何珊 钟蓓蕾钟蓓蕾 梅佳梅佳子子Faculty Adviser:Mr.ZhangEXERCISES X on page 27 XI on page 281/28/20231LOGOGroup 6 Numbers:何珊何珊 钟蓓蕾钟蓓蕾 梅佳子梅佳子 X Each of the following sentences may be made more compact by proper subordination.Rewrite them,using subordinate clauses,appositives,prepositional or ve
2、rbal phrase.1.The British army had lost all its equipment at Dunkirk,and there was only a single armored division left to protect the home island.*After the British army had lost all its equipment at Dunkirk,there was only a single armored division left to protect the home island.2.The dry prairie l
3、and will drift away in dust storms,but it is still being ploughed for profitless wheat farming.*Although the dry prairie land will drift away in dust storms,it is still being plowed for profitless wheat farming.1/28/20232LOGOGroup 6 Numbers:何珊何珊 钟蓓蕾钟蓓蕾 梅佳子梅佳子3.The educational program may succeed,but
4、 it has to have more than mere financial support from the government.*If the educational program is to succeed,it has to have more than mere financial support from the government.4.They have wasted their natural resources,but they should protect and conserved them.*They have wasted their natural res
5、ources,which they should have protected and conserved.5.The caldwell family opened the first rough trail and soon other settlers were coming.*Soon other settlers were coming in over the first rough trail which the Caldwell family had opened.1/28/20233LOGOGroup 6 Numbers:何珊何珊 钟蓓蕾钟蓓蕾 梅佳子梅佳子6.The Smith
6、sonian Institution is constantly working for a better understanding of nature for mans benefit,and it gets little or no publicity.*The Smithsonian Institute is constantly working,with little or no publicity,for a better understanding of nature for mans benefit.7.Queen Marry was easily shaken by pass
7、ions.They were both passions of love and passion of hatred and revenge.*Queen Mary was easily shaken by passions-passions of love and of hatred and revenge.8.I dreaded opening the door of his office,but it was only for few days.*For a few days I dreaded opening the door of his office.1/28/20234LOGOG
8、roup 6 Numbers:何珊何珊 钟蓓蕾钟蓓蕾 梅佳子梅佳子9.It was early morning and there was a fog and so I crawled out and made my way to the beach.*Concealed by the fog of early dawn,I crawled out and made my way to the beach.10.I locked the door of the safe unlocked and took the leather bag of coins and walked down the
9、 street toward the bank.*Leaving the door of the safe unlocked and taking the leather bag of coins,I walked down the street toward the bank.1/28/20235LOGOGroup 6 Numbers:何珊何珊 钟蓓蕾钟蓓蕾 梅佳子梅佳子XI Read the following paragraphs and then answer the questions:1)What is the topic sentence?2)Has the writer suc
10、ceed in achieving unity?Give your reasons.Please look at your text book on page 28.Reference answers:1.Topic:Life on the farm is an eternal battle against nature is the topic sentence.2.This paragraph lacks unity.It is a bad piece of writing.The writer of this paragraph has completely forgotten what
11、 he had started out to say.Instead of being an eternal battle,life in this paragraph be-comes a pleasant and exciting experience-which it probably is,but that is not what the writer set out to prove.1/28/20236LOGOGroup 6 Numbers:何珊何珊 钟蓓蕾钟蓓蕾 梅佳子梅佳子XI Read the following paragraphs and then answer the
12、questions:1)What is the topic sentence?2)Has the writer succeed in achieving unity?Give your reasons.Please look at your text book on page 28.Reference answers:2.There are three reasons why I like Japanese food is the topic sentence.This paragraph lacks unity because the writer introduces facts and
13、ideas irrelevant to the topic stated in his opening sentence,e.g.However,most Japanese love rice.One of my Japanese friends has at least two bowls of rice at every meal.and Also,from the male point of view,Japanese restaurants are attractive for another reason-the beautiful little doll-like waitresses,who bow and smile shyly as they serve your food.1/28/20237LOGOThank you！1/28/20238