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1、中考英语作文复习中考英语作文复习怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，在中考中获取高分呢？一、写作要点“一审”即审题。“二写”即列纲。“三连”即连句成文。“四改”即修改润色全文。审题：做到三审做到三审体裁体裁看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么时态、人称时态、人称如果是日记和故事，宜采如果是日记和故事，宜采用过去时态；如是简介之类的，宜采用现用过去时态；如是简介之类的，宜采用现在时态。在时态。列纲：做到三思三思词汇词汇短语短语句式句式列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就
2、易。遇到想不起的词、句时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。连句成文根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的句子，划分必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合句要搭配运用。文章分文章分3段：段：综述：综述：概括性强，最多概括性强，最多2句话引入主题句话引入主题正文正文主要内容主要内容：层次性强，一定要有：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方个方面，每个方面最多面最多2句话句话结尾结尾：紧扣主题，：
3、紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华句话内结束，尽量升华修改润色全文做到三查三查要点、拼写、语法是否连贯要点、拼写、语法是否连贯看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包括有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。开头用语：A.Justaseverycoinhastwosides,carshavebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesB.Comparedtoletters,e-ma
4、ilsaremoreconvenient.C.Opinionsaredividedontheadvantagesanddisadvantagesoflivinginthecityandinthecountryside.D.Asweallknow,computershaveplayedanimportantrole/partinourdailylife.E.Whydoyougotouniversity?Differentpeoplehavedifferentpointsofview.FWiththedevelopmentofinternetmoreandmorepopularG.Asastude
5、ntK.Asanoldsayinggoes.句式：句式：1.too.to.He is very young.he cant go to school.He is too young to go to school.2.so.that.He is very clever.He can work out the problem.He is so clever that he can work it out the problem.He is clever enough to work out the problem.3.not only.but also.4.It has many advanta
6、ges.First,Besides,5.However,every coin has two sides.It also brings us bad influences.On the one hand,On the other hand,连词：连贯句子1)表层次 first,firstly,second,secondly,third,thirdly,to begin with,to start with,what is more,last,also,and then,next,besides At first;at last;in the end then/next/after that w
7、hen/while/as soon as/not until in addtion finally On one hand.on the other hand，each/one coin has two sides，连词：连贯句子2)表转折；but,however,though,although,after all,in spite of，fortunately，unfortunately，at the same time3)表递近：in addition,besides,moreover,whats more4)因果 because,so,because of,thanks to,due t
8、o,for,since,owing to,as a result(of),hence,thus5)例证 for example,for instance,such as 连词：连贯句子6)表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.;be harmful to sb.;do harm to sb.;have great/much influence on sb.;sth.benefit sb.;sb benefit from sth.;affect;have an effect on sb.;表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy;be fond of;be interested i
9、n;show great interest in;lose oneself in;put ones heart into;7)总结 As I see,As for me，As we all know,in general,generally speaking,I think.,in fact,in a word,in brief,in conclusion,in short,in summary,to sum up,二、各类作文常用框架二、各类作文常用框架1、话题作文，演讲 总-分-总 Its adj for us to.On the one hand,On the other hand,Wh
10、ats more,In a word,/In short,.2、讨论报告，列举不同观点 总-A方-B方-我方-总 Recently,we have a discussion about.Different people have different opinions.A thinks.B thinks differently.As for me,/In my opinion,.All roads lead to Rome,we can choose the way we like to.3、写信，建议 总-分-总 Im adj to hear that you Here is some adv
11、ice for you.Firstly,.Secondly,.Finally,.In a word,If you,you will习作点评Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it.Tell the magazine readers.What exactly your hobby is;When and how you became interested in this hobby;Why you enjoy your hobby;About your hopes and pl
12、ans for the future.写作要求：1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。3.词数60-80.学生习作AMyhobbyisreadbooks.WhenIwassevenyearsold.Ibecameinterestedinreadingbooks.Ilikereadingbooksbecausetherearealotofusefulthingsinbooks.Icanlearnalotofknowledgefrombooks.Booksalsocanteachmehowtobeagoodperson.Bo
13、oksevencansolvemanyproblemsforme.Iwillreadmoregoodbookstoimprovemyself.改为readingbooks，动词作表语时应该用动名词。also的位置应放在can之后。12点评：档次9-11分。要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。有少量错误。学生习作BMyhobbyisreading.Readingbooksisveryenjoyable.WhenIwasyoung,mymotherusedtotellmeastorybefore.Iwent
14、tobedeverynight.ThestoriesweresointerestingthatIalwaysfelttheywerentenough.SoIbegantoreadbooksbymyself.LittlebylittleIbecameinterestedinreading.Icanlearnmuchknowledgeandmanyinterestingthingsallovertheworld.WhenIreadbooks,Icanenjoythebeautifulsentences.AtthesametimeIcanimprovemywriting.Iwanttobeawrit
15、erinthefuture,soImuststudyhardandreadmorebookssothatmydreamcancometrue.开门见山、点题。真情流露，理由充分。文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、巧妙使用句型以表决心。点评：档次13-14分。清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。高分突破文体：记叙文。要点：whatwhenhowwhyhopeandplanforthefuture.时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。三、提高写作的方法三、提高写作的方
16、法1、造句、造句Let life be beautiful like summer flowers and death like autumn leaves.使生如夏花之绚烂，死如秋叶之静美使生如夏花之绚烂，死如秋叶之静美2、摘录好句、积累名言谚语、摘录好句、积累名言谚语学习学习Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的开端是成功的一半。Agoodbookisagoodfriend.好书如挚友。AllroadsleadtoRome.条条大路通罗马。Allthingsaredifficultbeforetheyareeasy.凡事总是由难而易。Allworkandnoplaymak
17、esJackadullboy.只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。Anhourinthemorningisworthtwointheevening.一日之计在于晨。Confidenceinyourselfisthefirststepontheroadtosuccess.自信是走向成功的第一步。Doingisbetterthansaying.与其挂在嘴上，不如落实在行动上。Dontputofftilltomorrowwhatshouldbedonetoday.今日事，今日毕。Everyminutecounts.分秒必争。Easiersaidthandone.说得容易，做得难。Failureisthe
18、motherofsuccess.失败是成功之母。Greathopesmakegreatman.伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。Knowledgeispower.知识就是力量。Itisnevertoooldtolearn.活到老，学到老。Neversaydie.永不言败。Nopains,nogains.没有付出就没有收获。Nothingintheworldisdifficultforonewhosetshismindtoit.世上无难事，只怕有心人。Onecannotputbacktheclock.时钟不能倒转。Onehourtodayisworthtwotomorrow.争分夺秒效率高。Practi
19、cemakesperfect.熟能生巧。Readingenrichesthemind.开卷有益。Romeisnotbuiltinaday.冰冻三尺，非一日之寒。Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.早起的鸟儿有虫吃。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。健康健康Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一苹果，不用请医生。Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.早睡早起身体好。Healthisbetterthanwealth.健康胜过财富。Healt
20、hishappiness.健康就是幸福。议论文议论文Everycoinhastwosides.事物有两面性DoastheRomansdo.入乡随俗。Moneyisnteverything.钱不是万能的。Manyheadsarebetterthanone.三个臭皮匠，赛过诸葛亮。Youcannoteatyourcakeandhaveit.鱼与熊掌，不可得兼。Unityisstrength.团结就是力量。Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.三思而后行。句型转换，句式多样性Tomisastudent.Heis16yearsold.HelikesrunningTom,a16-year-olds
21、tudent,likesrunning.多使用短语多使用短语Igotupquickly.Igotupasquicklyaspossible.HestudiesEnglishwell.HeisgoodatEnglish.HedoeswellinEnglish.Thegirllikesreading.Theprettygirllikesreadingnovels.Theprettygirllikesreadingnovelscarefully.TheprettygirlwhoItalkedtojustnowlikesreadingnovelscarefully.扩写句子的衔接词句子的衔接词 并列关
22、系：and，or，either.or，both.and，not only.but also.as well as转折关系：but，however，yet，although条件关系：if,whether，unless时间关系：when，as，before，after，while，until，since，as soon as因果关系：because，as，since，for，so（一）表示“起”的词/词组：用于开篇引出扩展句。atfirstatpresentfirst（ly）ingeneralinthebeginningonetheonehand（ontheotherhand）tobeginwit
23、hfirstofallgenerallyspeakinginthefirstplaceonthewhole（二）有关“承”的常用词语：用来承接上文。after/afterthat/bythistimeafterafewdayscertainlyafterawhilethereforealso/tooforexample/forinstanceatthesametimeBesides/whatsmorefromnowoninadditionsecond/secondlyinfactsimilarlyinotherwordssoinparticularsooninthesamewaystillth
24、enthird/thirdlymeanwhilemoreoverforanothernodoubtsuchasobviouslylaterofcoursetrulyParticularlyunlikewhatismore（三）有关（三）有关“转转”的常用词语：用来表示不同或相反的的常用词语：用来表示不同或相反的意见。意见。afterallfortunatelyallthesamehoweveranywayinspiteofatthesametimeLuckilybutbythistimethough/althoughnodoubtonthecontraryeventhoughotherwise
25、stillunfortunatelyinfactunlikeasamatteroffactyetespecially（四）有关（四）有关“合合”的常用词语：用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容。的常用词语：用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容。aboveallasaresultinsumashasbeennotedinsummaryasIhavesaidonthewholeatlastthereforeThuseventuallysurelyfinallytoconcludeinbriefnodoubtinconclusionundoubtedlyinshorttrulyinawordsocertainl
26、yobviouslyallinallInmylife,Iwillthankmymotherforever.Mymotherisbusyeveryday.shedoeshouseworkandworkshardinthefactory.Iamintrouble,shealwaysencouragesmetoovercomedifficulties.Iamill,shelooksaftermecarefully.Iwillthankmymotherforgivingmelife.Iwillthankherforhelpingme.Ilovemymotherverymuch.Inmylife,Iwi
27、llthankmymotherforever.Mymotherisbusyeveryday.(But)shedoeshouseworkandworkshardinthefactory.(When)Iamintrouble,shealwaysencouragesmetoovercomedifficulties.(When)Iamill,shelooksaftermecarefully.(Inaword),Iwill(notonly)thankmymotherforgivingmelife,(butalso)thankherforhelpingme.(So)Ilovemymotherverymuch.卷面、书写卷面、书写